Ishra ff_Galti se mistake [updated part 6 on page 52 on 23rd sep] - Page 19

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Awesome updt dear

Loved Ishra cute lift moments

They shared chocolate

That was cute

Ishra became friends

They exchanged number too

Falling for each other

Lovely

Ishita already their bhabhi

Hahaha

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Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

awesome update dear

filled with over cuteness dear

ishra scene in lift was fabulous dear

love their cute fight

happy to see them together now they are friends too good

raman help her wipe the chocolate near ishu lips was amazing dear

ishu talking like anything raman admire her beauty was fabulous dear

ishu asked him to smile always because his dimple is cute amazing ever dear

raman ask her not to call him cute because he is hot

raman make her sleep on his shoulder without disturbing her cheeks make her sleep was so cute dear

ishu is straight forward

vandu is too much

both ishra think about each other behave mad in love

poor mihir he fear that bhai will beat him but raman kiss him was amazing dear

raman declared his love to their friends wow wow

raman gang was in shock

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awesome update

Originally posted by: rufana10

awesome update

ishita is cute...she became so happy

when raman offered her chocolate...

ishra became friends...

ishita was non stop talking and raman

was lost in her...

dey came out from d lift and went to their

respective house...both were thinking about

each other...

poor mihir😆...raman is in love wid ishita...

his friends r shocked hearing this...

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Originally posted by: boran

amazing story
today I finally got the time to read your story and read whole in a go
oh Teri ishra had a major fight in the first meeting only
waise raman babu was ghoorofying ishu cute face magar maharaj be couple pe comment kya kiya ishu toh offend ho gayi
and a party night becomes fight night
next meeting burg came to meet same person but bad luck he was not available
raman forgot his key and ishita got them and went to loo
raman came back in. building to find his key and ishu ask him to request her politely or she will not return his key
inke pagalpan main dono lift mai stuck ho gaye go bhi morning tak
start toh buri rahi magar lift me bana di jodi
and when they came out of lift toh Dino he much alag feeling me sath ghar gaye
ishu informs vandu and mihika about lift incident air raman ki tareef bhi ki
raman too reach home and told his friends that he is in love with jkr
aww hunny Bunny so cute raman
his friends ate feeling ki unhone ghost dekh liya after hearing raman
will wait to read next part update soonish 😊

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Part 4

Raman went to his room and settled in bed with a dreamy smile on his face ... His thoughts were fully occupied by ishita... He dialed her number without thinking twice...

Ishita was busy freshening up in her room,.. Vandu saw the phone continously ringing... She picked the call

Vandu : hello... Kaun...

Raman : ishita, itz me raman...

Vandu : kaun raman, aur ishita is freshening up... I am her akka speaking ..

Raman : Oh hai vandu akka... Ishita ne aapke bare mein kaha...

Vandu : hello Mr.. Mein koi teri akka nahi hoon... Call me vandita...

Raman : yeh ishita ki akka itne khadoos kyun hai... He murmured for himself...
Haan.. Haan.. Please let ishita know regarding the call mein rakta hoon .. Saying so he cut the cal...

Vandu : how cheap this fellow is... Koi baat karte hue aise call cut karta hai kya... Manners naam ki koi cheez hi nahi hai... She was cursing him under breath..

That's when ishita entered freshly showered ..

Ishita : kaun akka, kya hua...
Vandu : koi raman ka phone aaya... He cut the call while I speaking to him ishu... All men are same cheapsters...

Ishita : akka chodo na... Give me the phone...

Vandu : yeh lo... Ishu par ladkon se dhoor hi rehna... If you give them little space... They will try to control us completely and rule over...She lectured her views to her sister and left the room...

Ishita : raman ne call kiya... Par kyun.. Abhi abhi aaye na ghar.. Let me call him back... She dialed his number... He picked in jiffy at a single ring...

Raman : hello ishita...

Ishita : phone ke upar hi baite hue ho kya... Ek hi ring mein phone utaliya she said laughing at him...

Raman : nah.. Nahi woh I was playing a game in my phone that is why I picked up in a jiffy...

Ishita : Oh teekhe... Aur call kyun kiya... Akka told me that you called me...

Raman : haan .. Aur you free today?...

Ishita : haan.. Par Kyun?..

Raman : just like that let's hang out... Wat say... He was waiting for her to say yes...

Ishita : hmm.. Ya sure.. Par mujhe thoda kaam hai il finish that and meet you.. It that ok...

Raman : that's more than ok... Then I will be waiting for you .. Be on time...

Ishita : sure raman bye...

Raman : bye...

...

He was all ready and waiting for her impatiently for the past half an hour ...

Raman : Oh god yeh ladki bhi na... Timings naam ki koi cheez hai nahi hai... She told she will be on time... Par dekho pagal ki tarah am waiting here from past half an hour... Cursing her under breath... He dialed her number..

Raman : ishita kahan ho yaar... He asked fully irritated...

Ishita : tere peeche she came in front of him wearing a ultra short skirt and a crop top and settled opposite to him..

He was just looking her top to bottom...
He was not very comfortable with her dress..

Raman : how long to wait yaar... He said irritated...

Ishita : sorry raman you know... My dance partner abhi... Mujhe chod hi nahi raha tha... It was al because of him... Sorry she said holding her ears...

Raman : he smiled at her... That's ok...
Next time late hua toh call karlena...

Ishita : teekhe... order something na...

Raman : hmm... Mere liye veg burger aur cold drink...

Ishita : kya veg burger... She said making a dirty face...

Raman : haan kyun...

Ishita : tum sach mein punjabi ho... Punjabi aur veg... Kaise...

Raman : arey I am pure vegetarian mujhe non veg ki smell se hi nafrat hai... He said making a dirty face... Aur tum kya order karoge...

Ishita : hmm... Mere liye double chicken burger... Chicken nuggets aur cold drink...

He was completely shocked at her order...

Raman : kya... Chicken... Tum iyer ho na...

Ishita : haan toh kya hai... Mujhe non veg bohot pasand hai... I can't survive without it even for a single day... She said in full on attitude making him look at her confused...

They placed their order and relishing their meal...

Ishita : are you sure you don't wanna taste nuggets...

Raman : no am good.. He said making faces...

After having they left from there...

Ishita : raman mere saath casino chaloge kya...

Raman : casino... She gave him another shock...

Ishita : haan... Come na... Bohot maza ayega... Betting karna.. Aur paisa loot na... She said dreamily...

Raman : ishita, tum betting aur casino games me bhi interested ho...

Ishita : haan raman... Aaj tum mere saath aao... I will show you the real fun...
Saying so... She took him to a well sophisticated casino...

Raman (St): kaise ladki hai yaar... Itna paise betting aur casino mein uda rahe hai... Yeh teekh hoga ki nahi... He was in deep thoughts... Ishita was playing like a pro... Winning lots if money with continues bets... She was enjoying totally leaving a confused raman behind...

Ishita : raman tum bhi kelo na..

Raman : no... Ishita mujhe pata nahi kaise kelna...

Ishita : I am there na... She put her hands in his pocket and took out bundle of cash out and started playing with his cash too... She won little and lost lots of money too... But she did not care for that...

Ishita : ooops it happens raman... Chalo chate hain... She said with a carefree attitude...

Raman was totally dumbstruck by her behavior...

Then they went to nearby theme park... And enjoyed a lot.. Ishita was behaving like a little kid jumping around... And going on all rides pulling raman along with her...

He was totally enjoying this side of ishita... He has never been this happy In his life he thought...

ishita : raman, am hungry kuch lao na mere kiye... She said sitting on a bench fully tired..

Raman : ishita, just now you had so much... Aur abhi hungry.. He said sitting next to her...

Ishita : toh kya hai... Am hungry again... Tum mere liye kuch laogi ya nahi...

Raman : am going meri maa... Ruk... Bhukkad.. He smiled at her went to buy something for her to eat...

He came back with 2 ice creams in his hand...

Ishita : wow raman... Ice-cream she said excited like a little kid... Sirf dho... Tere liye nahi lay ho...

Raman : arey bhukkad 1 for me and 1 for you...

Ishita : Oh I thought both for me... She said making a puppy face...

Raman : le ye bhi kao... He gave his ice cream also to her making faces... She relished the ice-creams happily laughing at him seeing his reactions...

Ishita : raman waha dekho... She shouted suddenly...

Raman : ab kya hogaya... He said fully exhausted roaming around the huge theme park..

Ishita : dekho na,lets go in that Long roler coaster ride na... She said pulling him...
His head started spinning seeing that ride itself... He was scared of all these kinds of rides... But he dint want to confess it to her...

Raman : woh... Woh... Ishita my head is aching yaar... Aur mein takh gaya hoon... Some other day haan.. He said trying to escape from her...

Ishita found out from his expressions that he is scared...

Ishita : kyun dar lag raha hai... She said teasing him...

Raman : kya dar aur mein.. Punjab da sher hoon mein... Aur yeh sab bachon wala games mein nahi kelta...

Ishita : Oh ho... Darpok kahika... Dar lag rahe toh bol do na... Seedhe seedhe...

Raman : mein nahi dartha... Come lets go he pulled her with full on attitude... And sat on the seats... Fastening the seat belt... He started to shiver even before the ride could start...

Ishita was just enjoying his expressions...

Raman (St): hey matarani... Aaj tere iss bechara bakt ko bacha lena... Iss jkr ke saamne mere besthi mat karna... Mujhe zinda wapas le aana... He sent silent prayers... Holding the seats tightly...

As the ride started... He closed his eyes tightly... Ishita was shouting loudly in excitement...

Ishita : ohhh... Raman kitna maza aa raha hai na...

As the ride picked up speed... Raman was not able to take it anymore... He held ishita's hands tightly...

Raman : ahhh... Matarani... Mujhe bachalo... He started shouting almost crying... Making ishita laugh at him...

Raman : ahhh... Mamma... Mujhe neeche utarna hai... Please stop the ride... Ahhh... He was shouting making all funny noise...

Ishita : raman... Kuch nahi hoga... Mein hoon na tere paas... Dekho open the eyes... Raman... She called him suppressing her laughter...

Raman : sab kuch tere wajah se hua... Khooni ho tum Khooni... Marna chahte ho na mujhe... Ahh... Matarani... Bachao...

Ishita : raman... Raman calm down... Kuch Kuch nahi hoga... She was not able to control her laughter seeing his funny reactions...

Raman : chodo mujhe... Dakka mat mar dena waha se... Ahhh... Mamma...

Ishita was laughing uncontrollably holding her stomach...

Finally as the ride stopped...

She helped him to get up and sit in the bench... He was not able to open his eyes... He puked out not able to control... He settled on the bench like a lifeless body...

Though ishita was laughing... She was concerned for him... She was feeling very restless seeing him like dat...

She pulled out his jacket and opened few buttons of his shirt... Letting air pass and... And gave some water... Helping him in sipping the water...

Ishita : raman... You are alright look at me... She called him... He slowly opened his eyes.. Kuch nahi hua hai she said holding his face ...

She gave him some energy drink to sip... After few minutes he was completely back to normal...

Ishita : itna dar hai toh phir kyun aay ho uss ride mein...

Raman : oye.. Mujhe koi dar warr nahi hai... Itz all because of you... Tere saath milkar itna kaya meine.. Isiliye chakkar aaya aur ulti karna pada.. He said with full on attitude...

Ishita laughed whole heartedly seeing his cuteness...

Ishita : tum na ek dam cute ho raman.. She said pecking his cheeks casually...
Raman just freezed touching his cheeks... Feeling her lips on his cheeks...

Ishita : kya hua... She shook him making him come back to reality...

Raman : kuch.. Kuch nahi hua.. He said flashing his dimpled smile at her...

It was almost evening...

Ishita : bas ab chalo... Enough of rides... Lets go...

Raman : ab kahan... Aur nahi hoga mujhse I am tired..

Ishita : hmm... I wanted to introduce you to my friends... Aur mera dance studio bhi dikhana hai tujhe... She said with a sad face...

Raman : chalo koi problem nahi... Lets go..

Ishita : sachi raman par you are tired na...

Raman : arey its just a small meeting with your friends na... Issme badi baat kya hai... Come let's go..

Ishita : thank you raman... You are the best... My best friend she said taking him in a side hug...

Ishra reached ishita's dance studio... And Was welcomed by mani... He came with a funky clothes and yellow colored hair with lots of braids...

Mani : hey ishu... Why soo late man... He said hugging her... And lifting her ground...

Raman's blood boiled in anger seeing that...

Ishita : hey mani drop me down man... She said laughing at him...

Meet my friend raman,.. Raman this is mani my dance partner come friend... She said clinging on him...

Mani :hello dude wassup... He tried to give him a hug...

Raman just slightly pushed him and gave him a firm handshake... Giving a fake smile at him...

Ishita : hey abhi you know it was such a fun filled day today... Me and raman enjoyed to the core... Haina raman... For which he just gave a smile...

Mani : waise dude... What do you do...

Raman : I am an animation artist...

Mani : ha ha cartoons banate hoo... Tom and Jerry, doremon... How funny he said laughing at him...

Raman (St):beta Hasso mat tera matam toh jaldi banonga mein...

Seeing no reaction from raman...

Mani: chill man... I was just kidding... Ha ha ha you know mera sense of humour itne ache hai... Right ishu... He said laughing like a fool...

Ishita : haan raman mani is sooo good at it...

Raman(St) : Oh god am not able to stand him... Iska mooh todne ka mann kar raha hai mujhe...

Mani: ishu... Tere friend ho hasna nahi aata hai kya... Kyun aise mooh bana hua hai...

Ishita : arey chodo na mani.. He is tired... He is so sweet you know..

There came group of boys... Shouting aloud making all funny noise...

Ishita : hey guys... She said giving each and everyone one of them a tight hug...

Raman's eyes widened by shock... Seeing her very casual worth everyone...

Mani : ishu come lets have a small dance... Aaj tum practice bhi nahi aay ho... Come on girl he said pulling her and playing the music...

As the music started mani held ishita by waist and pulled her tightly towards him... She crashed on his body... As the steps were too cozy he was touching her all over the body... He lifted her an swirled her in air... Finally as the music stoped they parted giving a tight hug to eachother...

Raman was totally shocked seeing the dance moves... He just wanted to punch mani on his face... Pull her towards him... And hide her in him... His blood started boiling in anger folding his fist and was all set to punch him... That's when the music stopped... Ishita Came running towards him...

Ishita : raman, kaisa tha hamara dance... You know everyone one tell we are the best... You would have known by our moves and chemistry we share...

Raman : yeh dance tha... He said in a sarcastic way...

Ishita : yeah raman... Itz salsa... Tumhe dance ke baare mein kuch nahi pata hai kya... That's ok il teach you later... Tum bhi classes join karlena...

He was not able speak to her or listen to her talks... All he wanted was to leave the place immediately...

Raman : ishita... Am tired mujhe jaana hai... Am sorry..

Ishita : no worries raman... Tum jao... Let's catch up another day... Bye she said hugging him...

That's when abhi came in between them parting then away... Earning a glare from raman...

Mani: hey guys... Wanna go on a night party... He asked both...

Ishita : Oh god wow mani... Am In... Kya maza aayega party mein... Lets go... Par sorry raman can't come he is too tired...

Raman : Nahi... Am coming...
(St) Is kamine ke saath mein tumhe akele nahi chodungi...

Ishita : par raman...

Raman : its ok ishita... I want to come with u you for party .. Don't you want to take me along...

Ishita : I would love to Raman... Chalo...

All her friends along with ishra reached a beach house... We're party was going on full swing...

Everyone stared drinking, dancing and enjoying the party on full swing...

Abhi came and asked ishita for a dance...

Raman (St): phirse dance... Mein yeh hone nahi doonga...

Arey mani udhar dekho woh ladki tumhe bula rahi hai...

Mani : hey sexy girl here I come... He said following the girl like a puppy...

Ishita was enjoying full on dancing around but raman was totally exhausted as it was a long day for him...

He sat on the corner and his eyes dozed off...

After a long time he woke up to see still the party going on full swing all dancing around... Ishita was laughing loudly enjoying with her friends ...

But the difference was it was early morning...

Raman : Oh god ... Subha hogai... Shit yaar... Abhi tak yeh log ka masthi katam nahi hua kya... Chee kaise log hai...
Ishita why are you like this yaar...
I want you... But... He said looking at her fully confused... Seeing raman awake ishita came to him and settled beside..

Ishita : hey raman... Ut gai tum... You were tired na... That is why I did not wake you up... Chalo lets join them...

Raman : again... Nooo... Ishita i need to go home and freashnup..

Ishita : teekhe phir, tum kaise jaoge...

Raman (St): I can't let her alone with these stupid people...

Ishita my car is parked in your dance studio... I you don't mind kya tum mujhe waha drop kardoge...

Ishita : sure raman chalo... Wait il bid bye to my friends and be back...

Raman(St) : phirse un logon se chipke gi... No ways..

Raman :Ishita please chalo na.. Am tired...

Ishita : ok ok... Lets go...

The drive was a silent affair... Raman was all lost in thoughts... Ishita's friends, her carefree attitude... Her stupid dance partner...And She did not disturb him thinking he might be tired ..

Ishita : raman we reached... Uto... She shook him slightly breaking his trance...

Raman : haan... Thank you... Par what about you... Tum phir guest house chaloge kya...

Ishita : no raman... Itz already morning I will go home and rest for a while...

Raman : thank god... He said happily...

Ishita : kya...

Raman : I mean thank you... For the wonderful time we spent together... I loved it...

Ishita : same here raman... Bye...

Both parted and drove towards eachothers home...

lol double chkn burger...poor guy ...she's a out an out party girl...

Amazing update..
Ishita is totally carefree.. She loves dancing and partying..
Raman and ishita enjoyed full fun filled day together..
But Raman is not comfortable with her chipku friends and her chipakna to friends.. 😆
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Lovely update viji di

Awesome update
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