Ishra:writing challenge on OS,TS based on Idea

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Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Lovely update rida .

It was too emotional yet beautifully written .

I don't have words .

Felt bad for ishita but raman POV is missing .

Waiting for Raman to come and stop her .

I want raman to roar of iyers for trying to take away ishita without his consent .

Update soonish

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Emotional...so Raman has not fogotten shagun...waiting to see his reaction

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Ishra2015

@Ishra2015

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Awesome

Don't make is short

Make it a ss or ff

I will love it

Update soon

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Sarthi Sharda

@sharda_123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Very nice update dear

Continue soon

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aishwarya

@angeliash

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#155

amazing story di... emotional update... contact marriage... hope raman jaldi aajaye and ishu ko rok le ...too...emotional part u made me cry di...loved this update...

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varala

@varala

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#156

It's emotional 😭

How can he do this to her???? Contract marriage to get two children and that's it ...no feeling 😲she is a human being

I hope raman too fell for her and bring back to his life

Poor Adi and ruhi😭

Continue soon😊

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Mad4Divz

@Mad4Divz

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Awesome awesome just loved it
Loved ur wrttng style
Grt strt Cntn sooonnn plz
Thanks4pm

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divz9769

@divz9769

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#158

very emotional update

I cried while reading this

ishita wokeup and saw raman and adi hugging her from both sides she was so happy seeing her family but than reality hit her raman forced her to marry for 4 yrs so he can get kids because he thought iyers were responsible for shagun accident in which he lost his wife and unborn baby Ishita accepted for her parents treatment

ishita is in so much pain she don't want to leave raman and her kids her talk with adi was painful

hope raman will bring ishita back and confess her

pls update soon and pm me