ISHRA SS || TWO LOVERS SEPARATED BY THE FATE ||PART 3 AT PG 21

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Priyag28

@Priyag28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Nice.
Ishita is shatered with
raman betrayal.
What step she take which seprate them.
Update soon

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Wow...awesome start

Loved it

Loved how Simmi supported Ishita

Waiting to see what's up next

Continue soon

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divz9769

@divz9769

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Nice update

Ishitas reaction was too good

Pls update soon

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Jinal_999

@Jinal_999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

superb yaar..
kya topic chheda hai..

awesome start dear
n i loved prolouge nd part 1
it was superb

ishita heard their talk..sahi kaha..raman aur subbu mein koi fark nahi hai.
he break her trust by doing this..
raman ke aisa karne se ishita par se banjh ka lable thodi na hatt ne wala hai.

u knw show mein bhi is topic ko lekar propper justice nhi dikhaya..ulta isme bhi fault ishita ka hi nikla tha ke vo ye accept kyu nahi kar rahi..
isme bhi sahi raman hi tha..

so plz iss TS ko ekdm perfect banana..not like yhm.
i so want see isme kya hota hai..m super excited for this..
gud luck for this..
cont soon dear

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sririt

@sririt

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Such a wonderful Prologue

Part 1 is overwhelming

Beautiful portrayal of emotions

Genuine reactions

Apt descriptions

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Shivangi Agarwal

@shivangi838

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Fabulous start zoha... continue soon 😊⭐️👏

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Twinkle Solanki

@Twinklesolanki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Amazing part 1
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Part 1

A brilliant start!!!
You have written this beautifully!!!
You have used all the words, all the expressions, feelings, emotions that Ishita would have actually felt on the show but was not allowed to show - but you have shown it all in this story and I am so happy that you have chosen to write this TS!!!

I am hoping that they have not done the proceedure as yet as I do not want Pihu in this but I want to see Raman genuinely accepting that Ishita is happy with Adi and Ruhi and instead he supports her wholeheartedly through her loss of her own baby and Ishra to help each other to overcome their loss!!!

Eventually Ishita can maybe become pregnant and for Raman to realise the difference between having a baby through surrogacy and Ishita being pregnant herself!!!
I am so sorry I am rambling but you just made me very excited with this TS and I am sure you will do a great job because you have made an amazing start!!!

An excellent update and now I cannot wait for the next update soon please and also thank you so much for the pm!!!