Ishq Mera Kaamil - IshRa OS

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Author's note

So, this one is really very, very special to me.

It is my 50^th OS on this forum, in fact the first time I have written 50 OS's at all, since I have never written as extensively on any show or couple as much as I have written on IshRa. Its all down to the sheer beauty of Divyanka and Karan, these two who make me want to watch this show no matter how pathetic it becomes or stays.

I don't know what to make of it - it says they're amazing as much as it says, I'm hopeless.

The inspiration for this OS came from the beautiful title track that is creating all the waves these days from Ae Dil Hai Muskhil.

The title literally means - My love is complete.

And somehow it seemed befitting though the entire content is inspired by the couplet I have posted as my epigraph.

This one is dedicated to my wonderful friends here on this forum, the readers who have always encouraged and motivated me and to DivAn, and their brilliance.

As always,

Not Proofread.

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@EkPahelii

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Bhuvana

@manishwari2014

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

An os from Aani is always a treat to read. Fantastic. No words. Loved it.

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

WOW Aani... this is impeccable, beautiful, emotional and palpable and so much more 😳 I can't put it in words... I could almost imagine this happen in front of my eyes. How beautiful a moment it would be if IshRa could experience the beauty of this moment in their life, which they couldn't so far.

You've written their love making so well, highlighting it with love but not making it less obvious that they are as physically attracted as emotionally dependent.

Their conversation though was what touched me the most, telling readers subtly of how everything is well now, with all 3 kids happy with them... They're living a perfect blissful life they deserve.

Ishita is pregnant and them discussing of their future... of managing the little one, all the chores that come along and most importantly emphasizing that they shall raise the child in the best way possible, with all the love and by doing everything right. Something that could not happen all this while because of one reason or the other with all their kids.

My most favorite bit has to be them talking about what qualities of either the kid would have. Raman's confession of his anger, acceptance of his mistakes and Ishita's reassurance was moving... And their tears and overwhelming emotions describe how much this all meant for them. For them to have reconciled and to have formed the deep understanding again...to have their kids, and now experience one more coming to life.

This has to be one of the best stories I have read in a while... And I AM SO SO SORRY I have read it a bit late, but I am glad I read it today. When I was upset and needed something to make me feel good... nothing could have been better 😳

Edited by -Anku- - 8 years ago

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

I have absolutely no words to say...it was just Fabulous

Loveeeddd ittt

Tooo goooddd

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arreddy

@arreddy

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

awesome os... u r stories are always unique and beautiful...

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

This is so so beautiful..
Loved it
U r an awsm writer!!

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats on ur 50th OS 👏

Awesome os

Loved it

It was just brilliant

What a brilliant writer u are

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Shravs

@shravsss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

It was an treat to read this as a yhm fan... Ishra fan... How I wish to see something like this in the show... Great OS Aani... Beautifully presented...