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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: pammi108

interesting prologue iupdate soon


thnxx dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sam-aqua

Wowww nice prologue

Do continue soon
He left not before knowing her name


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Interesting prologue

Continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angeliash

wo interesting prologue ...sounds cool...plz update first part soonish


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayraa

Very interesting prologue

Loved it
Continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue...
Plz continue soon...waiting eagerly...
Congratulations for the new story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niveditha.giri

Interesting prologue...
Plz continue soon...waiting eagerly...
Congratulations for the new story


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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Hello darlings

Back with an update earlier than planned as many seemed excited for this story

Here goes the first part I hope you enjoy reading and be frank telling me what you don't like in the concept typed in a hurry so please ignore the errors

SHOT 1

It was another hectic day for ishita in her clinic she had a lot of appointments today and she had to handle two really cranky notorious patients too adding up to her tiredness Ishita iyer is a paediatric dentist who lives in Mumbai while her parents live in Chennai her father is on the verge of retirement from his job in the ministry of health and public welfare and her parents plan to live with her in Mumbai after her appa's retirement while her elder sister vandita is settled in Bangalore with her husband bala and son sharavn

She unlocked her flat and slumped on the couch tired and leaned her head on the headrest trying to get a little rest when she smelled the moist soil which clearly indicated it was pouring outside and she being a rain lover couldn't help going out forgetting all her tiredness she felt the falling droplets with her hand and then jumped into the rain opening her arms for the shower letting it hug her as if gods were showering all their blessings on her in the form of the rains

he was running on the road in the heavy rain holding his wounded arm which was bleeding as he had got shot by them

he was looking back and busy cursing ashok and his men so didn't saw a girl (ishita) dancing in the rain and bumped into her
she saw him in pain n tried to touch his wound but he pulled back glaring at her n himself hid behind a tree

she was amused at his behaviour and was about to go to him when a group of men who seemed goons came to her asking if she saw him showing his pic

she lied that she saw him going out of the colony and they ran after him
making sure they were gone she pulled him out of his hiding place n dragged him to her house

''listen I don't need your help'' he said in a dangerously scary voice which failed to scare her

''but I want to help you I am a doctor n I can't leave someone in pain'' she took out the bullet with a knife and bandaged his wound

he closed his eyes feeling relieved and she handed him a towel before she made coffee for them

''why you lied to them n saved me'' he asked now a little calmer than before

''because you were hurt n those guys seemed goons''

''and what if I am also one of them?'' he couldn't help ask her

''it would have been unfair to hand an injured guy to six goons'' she replied without looking at him as she was busy dressing his wound relieving him of his pain

he just kept mum n left the place after taking the prescription from her feeling good that someone had cared for him selflessly after years just like his mother used to before she ended up taking her own life that horrid night

he came out n glancing at the name plate which read Dr.Ishita Iyer left from there noting that name in his memory

he entered his mansion and threw away some things on the way making him wince touching his wound as it did hurt him and the moment his hands brushed the bandage she had tied on his arm his lips automatically curved up in the brightest of his smiles all his anger went down the drain he moved to his royal chair with the same smile lingering on his face and sat down she was still buys recalling all that had happened during the day when mihir entered the scene

M-bhai where have you been? We have been trying to locate you for the last five hours but there's no trace of you and your car was found in ashes at the lokhandwala circle

"bhai are you even listening" he shook raman getting no response from him breaking his trance and that was the moment he noticed it

M-omg bhai you have got hurt said a worried mihir and was about to call a doctor but raman stopped him

R-relax mihir I am fine now I got medical help in time and about that stupid ashok implanting a bomb in my car, that idiot still needs to know what Raman is he's way smarter than you can think and cunning than you can ever imagine after all he's not an ordinary man he's the one who has been ruling this world for over 10 years and for a reason so now you don't worry and get to work find that moron who's living on my money and doing ashok's works

M-yes bhai he nodded like a perfect slave and left the place without any more questions while raman again got busy drawing sketches of that perfect beauty in his mind he had met a few hours ago Dr.Ishita Iyer he recalled her name and smiling dozed off to sleep after his tiring day mostly under the effect of those medicines

The next morning he got up and as usual loaded his guns preparing to suck the life out of that man who had dared to betray him as he hates betrayers which he was sure mihir would have found out by now

He stepped down the royal staircase as the culprit was right before his eyes as he had just expected him to be looking down guilty of his act

He got angry his body shaking with anger as he grabbed that man by his collar shaking him vigorously scaring him of RKB's wrath

Man-I am sorry sir please forgive me I will not repeat this mistake in the future

R-yes you will not as you won't be alive anymore to do it

And those were the last words that man heard before he fell down on the ground lifeless having got shot by raman blood flowing down his head and raman didn't even care to look at him once before he ordered his men to take him from there

"I just hate betrayers I hate betrayers" he repeated his words again and again as if telling the world that he does so even when there was none around except mihir and some more of his loyal men

So this is Raman a Don yes you read it right he's a Don who has been ruling the underworld over the last 10 years beating ashok who was a fellow goon to raman earlier but now his biggest enemy who was still hopeful taht he would be able to kill raman and take his place as he knew he would never be able to do that by fair means till Raman is alive

He had bribed one of raman's men to get a bomb implanted in his car but raman being raman had successfully managed to escape from there but when the cross firing between his and ashok's men began, he had ran from there and unfortunately a bullet had managed to pierce his skin and that is how he had ended up meeting Dr. ishita iyer

Eager to know how he became a don, let me tell you why fear when akku's here

Raman had a happy childhood until one day his father showed up with a woman who claimed to be his second wife and his mother unable to take that betrayal had committed suicide in front of his eyes he still got flashes of that horrid night in his dreams his whole world had came crashing down to the ground all because of one thing his father and his betrayal the heated argument between his parents how his father had spit venom to his mother leading to her committing suicide without caring to think about him or his life after her death and as he had expected his life was no more a bed of roses as he had been thrown out of his house by his step-mom the very next moment along with his lifeless mother in his arms whom he was trying helplessly waking up and his three years old younger brother mihir who was completely oblivious of the whole scenario unable to understand anything and raman had become a father figure for mihir since then at the age of eight!

He had somehow managed to do the last rites of his mother stealing from somewhere and that was how he had met Rajeev Arora his guardian who happened to be of this world he had adopted raman keeping him with himself teaching him the lessons he had been brought up to and eventually raman had become a Don happily or not but now he was a DON who never failed to pour out his anger on anyone who betrayed him as he hates betrayers to the moon and back and he just hates them!!!!!

So that's all for now

Will be waiting for your responses and the next update will be based on that only

LOVE

AKKU😊

Edited by akriti154 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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She lied to the goons and dressed his wound.😳
He came home dreaming about her.

OMG raman is a don 😲
He literally just killed a man just bcz he betrayed him.

His past was a painful one...😭 Bechara...

Continue soon Akku.😉
Edited by Jinan_R - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Raman the don wow now waiting for ishra scenes as raman is liking ishu

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