Ishraru os - I promise ( note on page 12 ) - Page 3

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welcome back amazing prologe update soon
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welcome back amazing prologe update soon

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Originally posted by: agm1998

Very interesting prologue

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Thanks a lot for ur support
I will update soon
Edited by Love_pearl - 9 years ago
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Hi friends,
This is the first instalment of my os. I will update the rest tomorrow.
Actually the plan was to post this today itself but I got myself busy getting pampered by everyone on my birthday and I totally forgot about this.
So advance main sorry.
And please hit the like button if u enjoy reading it and if u leave the comments I will be greatful.
Now stopping my chitchat let's go for the update
PART 1

" please doctor, u know that u need to eat something or else it may affect ur health. " Dr ishita was pleading to her new patient - Dr. Raman Kumar bhalla . And the most annoying part was even being a doctor, he was not leaving a single chance to trouble her.

" leave it doc , u know that I definitely don't care even if I die . What is the point in living such a life when u can't even walk by ur own ? " Raman said as usual.

This was a regular scene in the hospital. Raman himself was a reputed doctor. He had done a great study in the blood cancer. When he was so close to find a perfect remedy for it , life played a very cruel game with him. While returning to home he was hit by a truck and got thrown away off his car ( don't ask me how . Story hai , kuch bhi ho sakta hai ) . And as if this accident was not enough to keep him away from his work, he got paralyzed. He couldn't move his body from neck .

Now he was admitted in the same hospital in which he used to work and all he could do was sleep in his bed and quarrel with his doctor, Dr ishita iyyar . Being a great fan of his work ishita was doing everything she could to make Raman take medicines and food on time. But it was not an easy task.

Raman had lost his hope for living. Now a day's all he could do was to sleep in the bed and wait for his death to come , at least he said that so. Very few people knew the reason behind this. Raman had not only lost his capacity to walk but he also had lost love of his life.

As usual ishita got successful in making Raman to have his meal and medicine and she went back to check her other patients. Raman sighed seeing her retiring figure and lied back . Now till 5 o clock no one was going to trouble him and it was just 12 noon now. So he closed his eyes and unwillingly his mind went back to the same day when all this had happened.

FLASH BACK

" Don't worry sweet heart, I will be there on time . I promise. Pakka . Ok , now please be my good girl and get ready .

Yeah baby , I know I have to bring u a necklace and I am going there.

Yes shagun , it will be the most expensive piece in the shop. Now please cut the phone I will talk to u later. "

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DASH##^^####

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And all he could remember was being in hospital , seriously wonded. Then she came to meet him.

" ummm , hi Raman...

See Raman, I loved u, but it's past.
And for now the present is that u can't provide me my needs.

So I think we need to move on... And please don't try to follow me.

From my side , we are done and I don't think I need to know what u think . So this is the final goodbye. "

And she went away . Went with taking the most cheerful, And charming person with her. Now who remained was the angry , rude , arrogant patient who always liked to make everyone feel like hell .

FLASH BACK ENDS

Even after remembering the incident after hundreds of time Raman had tears in his eyes which he couldn't even wipe away.

At the same time he heard a knock on the door. The door flung open with a force when he was preparing himself for another one's sudden death by his ramblings and a beautiful girl came to him.

She was looking like five to six years old. Having her hair braided beautifully she was wearing a cute pink dress as if to complement her cuteness. She came straight towards Raman who was now surprisingly looking at her.

" hello uncle, I am Ruhi. I am here with my brother - Aadi bhaiyya. U know what , maine aapke baremain bohot padha hai. And I think aap thode samajdaar hai. Par baaki i don't think iss hospital main kuch bhi thick hai. But don't worry, ab main aa gayi hoon na , so i will make everything perfect. Ok ?
Have a nice day uncle. "

Saying so she lightly hugged him making sure that she won't hurt him in that process and also kissed him on cheeks . Some wardboys and nurses saw this sight with their mouths straight opened while those who listened this from them said that it was almost impossible. But in that day , the only topic was enough for everyone in the hospital to think upon.

In the next day , at the same time when ishita left after feeding Raman, Ruhi came back.

" hello uncle, aap boreho rahe honge na ? Aap free time main kya karte ho ? "

" Main kuch bhi karu tumhe usse kya ? Tum chupchap jake apna kam karo. " Raman answered in his usual rude mode.
But Ruhi paid no attention towards his disheartenes.

" uff, aap bhi na uncle ... achha mujhe ek baat bataiye kya aapne kabhi apne khidki se bahar dekha hai kya ? "

" nahi. Main jabse yahan aaya hoon main sirf iss chat ko dekh raha hoon. Nothing else. " Raman said frowning.

" oh my God , do you have a slightest idea what u r missing?
Ok ok no worries. From now on I will tell u what ever is happening around u. "

" pata hai uncle, yahan na ek beautiful garden hai. Bacche khel rahe hai yahan pe. And ohhh wo ladka gir gaya . Ch...ch...ch , bechara pakda gaya na ! Ab use sabko pakdna hoga. "

And she went on telling him so many things happening around them. Without even realising Raman was paying full attention on her silly talks. At 5 o clock when ishita came to take her rounds and give Raman his medicine, She was herself astonished to see Raman listening someone's talks so much sincerely.
Edited by Love_pearl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Updated PART 1
Have a look
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow ruhi is too adorable
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: agm1998

Wow ruhi is too adorable

Continue soon

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Thank u😊
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Awesome!!
Ruhi is such a cutie!! 😳
Update soon... 😉

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