Ishra ss-khinche mujhe koi dor teri ore,pt 6 on pg 113 updt on Sept 5 - Page 64

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Hello everyone, here I am with another updt of this story but before that I wanna wish all of u a very happy ganesh chaturthi and happy teacher's day.

PART 6
Ishra went down hand in hand to have their food.Raman sat on the chair and ishita stand near him and start serving him the parathas, Raman was happy that ishita is serving him only.

Pammi- the parathas were too tasty ishita.it will be awesome if u make breakfast everyday.

Param- yes it's too tasty. u will make naa.

Raman became angry hearing this and said- nahi woh meri biwi hai,woh sirf mere liye khana banayegi.naa biwi.he said only to make param angry.

Param- what do u mean by she will make only for u.hum bhi toh rehte hai,can't we eat something good made by her.

Raman- biwi nahi banayegi.main bhi toh rehta tha but nidhi never give me good food,toh biwi tumhe kyun degi.u eat yucky food made by ur nidhi.he said giggling making param angry .he was about to say something but pammi held his hand and signalled not to make a scene in front of ishita.

Param- it's OK, nidhi khana ganda banati hai ,toh kya tumhari biwi mere liye khana nahi banaa sakti hai.he said controlling his anger making raman think.

That's when nidhi came out and hear that param is praising ishita.she boiled in anger and think,how dare param compared me with her,abhi batati hoon iss pagal ko aur uski biwi ko.she think and saw a help coming with a tray with tea for all of them.

She took the tray from the help and think- now I will burn her pagal pati.mujhe jalaya tha naa,abhi batati hoon.she think and smirked.she start walking to the table thinking to pour all the tea on raman while ishita's eyes was just on her.

Ishita- why she is smirking and looking at Raman.omg she wants to pour the tea on raman.abhi maza chakhati hoon.let her come near.she thought and said- we all can discuss later,first have ur food Raman.saying so she started feeding Raman while her eyes were fixed on nidhi only.nidhi cams very near to ishita,just a step away to pour the tea on raman,when ishita put her leg forward making nidhi loose her balance.she fell and poured all the hot tea on param's suit making him wince in pain.ishita smiled sheepishly seeing this.

Param- r u mad nidhi,kal maa par aur aaj mujh par.can't u see and walk properly. Never seen a careless lady like u.

Nidhi- Maine kuch nahi kiya,iss bitch ne tang addayi.

Ishita- mind ur language nidhi,I am busy in feeding Raman.tumhare liye samay nahi hai mere paas.

Nidhi- I am telling true mom ji.

Param- shut up nidhi just shut up.ek toh bura bura khana banwati ho upar se jala deti ho.and now in place of calling doctor u r fighting unnecessarily.

Nidhi- main sach

Pammi- just shut up nidhi.one more word and I will slap u hard.param puttar tu ander chal.I am calling the doc.saying so pammi took param inside,nidhi went behind them.

Raman- tumne kiya naa biwi.he asked slowly.

Ishita- Maine?? Nahi toh.

Raman- jhoothi,I saw it.u did it naa.

Ishita- yes because she was coming to burn u,toh Maine apne pati ko bachane ke liye uske pati ko jala diya.but don't tell this to anyone,yeh hamara secret hai.OK.

Raman- OK,biwi u r the best.yeh lo ek aur gift.he said and pecked her lips .ishita smiles and pecked his cheeks.

Raman- why u r not eating.baitho tum bhi khao.he said signalling her to sit.

Ishita- yes I want to sit but kahan baithun.the whole dining table is messed due to tea.all chairs r ruined.don't know where to sit.

Raman pulled her and said making her sit on his lap- meri godi mein baitho biwi.

Ishita- how can I.koi dekhega toh.

Raman- so what,jab jagah nahi hoti thi toh main mintu ko bhi apne godi mein baithata hoon.tum bhi baith jao.he said smiling and eating a morsel.

Ishita smiled and start eating with him.Raman was feeding ishita and ishita was feeding him while nidhi was just looking at ishra and was burning in anger.

Nidhi- I am not going to leave u ishita,tumhare aur tumhare iss pagal pati,joh ki tumhara pati hai bhi nahi, tum dono ki wajah se Maine bahut baatein suni hai.I won't leave u.she was standing and thinking while ishra were lost in each other.soon the day passed it jiffy.it was late night,ishita was completing all her work to go back to their room .

Ishita- kitni der ho gayi.Raman jarur so gaye honge.I have to rush before woh gehri neend mein so jaayen.I have to sleep with him warna woh nightmares.she thought about her nightmare and her hand start shivering.she finished her work and rush towards their room.

Ishita entered the room only to see their room in complete darkness.she was already scared because of the nightmare and this darkness was adding to it.she meekly said- Raman Raman,aap hai kya.but noone answered back making her more scare.she was shivering in horror when she remember how she cut the wire of param and nidhi's room last night.

Ishita- oh my god.I am sure yeh uss param aur nidhi ki chaal hai.yeh log sudharte kyun nahi.wait let me handle them.saying so she was going when someone held her hand and close the door scaring ishita more.

Ishita- kaun ho tum ,kya chahte ho,jao yahan se.Raman ,Raman kahan hai.she screamed and turned the person only to see his face.

Ishita was shocked to see him and said- aap??

Raman- haan main.he said smiling.

Ishita- aapne dara diya mujhe.kyun chup ke khade the.and why u r sitting in darkness.light kat di kya kisi ne,aap thik ho naa,she was go on saying when Raman put his hand on her mouth and said- ohho biwi,kitna sawaal puchti ho,aur answer karne ka mauka bhi nahi deti.now u will keep quite and will only listen.won't tell a word.OK.

Ishita- OK.

Raman- tumhe OK bhi nahi bolna hai,u have to remain silent.ekdum silent.rakho finger on ur mouth.

Ishita obliged to him.he hold her hand and took her and make her stand under the fan.

Ishita- what u r doing Raman.

Raman- kaha naa no talking.only pati will talk no biwi will talk.warna I will give u punishment.

Ishita- aur kya hogi punishment.

Raman- no gift for a week.

Ishita- arey baap re,no no I want my gift.I will stand silently.see finger on my mouth.she stand smiling.

Raman went to the switchboard and switch on some buttons,only to lighten the lights with small golden bulbs decorated in a row giving the room a beautiful look.ishita was in awe seeing the beauty of the room.then he switched off the fan and rose petals start falling on her making ishita smile.she close her eyes and start feeling the Rose petals falling on her face while raman was just looking at her.after sometime the petals stop falling ,ishita open her eyes and look at him and found him looking at her smiling.

Ishita- yeh sab aapne kiya.

Raman- yes.

Ishita- kyun.

Raman- kyunki tum special ho naa.u r my biwi ,that's why I did this for u.

Ishita- yeh lights aapne lagayi.

Raman nodded.

Ishita- how and why,aapko shock lag jaata toh.

Raman- tumhe achcha nahi lagaa,Maine kitni mehnat ki.maali uncle se phool maang ke laya,phir usse fan pe sajaya,phir yeh lights dhoondhi storeroom se.isse thik kiya aur lagaya,magar tumhe phir bhi pasand nahi aaya.he said making a sad pout.

Ishita- nahi Raman,I liked it very much.in fact I loved it,I am just telling that u shouldn't do this,agar shock lag jaata toh.

Raman- mujhe kuch nahi hota,coz I am an expert in lighting .he said smiling.

Ishita- really.

Raman- haan,u know jab maa Papa ki anniversary hoti thi,I use to decorate everything, but an toh maa Papa nahi hai,sirf tum ho toh tumhare liye decorate kiya,tumhe pasand aaya.

Ishita- bahut pasand aaya.

Raman- ab tum mujhe chod kar nahi jaaogi naa,main tumhe woh cheez naa de paun.param tumhe de tab bhi nahi naa.

Ishita didn't understand what he is talking about.

Ishita- param mujhe kya dega Raman.main samjhi nahi.kuch kaha kya param ne.

Raman nodded with moist eyes.

Ishita cupped his face and asked- kya kaha.

Raman- when u were in kitchen and I was playing with mintu in the room,he came here.

Flashback

Param entered the room and sat beside Raman making him scare.

Raman- why u came here,go from here.biwi biwi where r u.he said scared of param hugging mintu tight.

Param - relax Raman,don't be afraid of me.I am not going to do anything to u.main toh yahan bas tumhe kuch batane aaya hoon.

Raman- kya.

Param- u love ur biwi very much naa.

Raman- yes,woh biwi hai meri sirf meri.he said hugging mintu tight.

Param- so there is a bad news for u.very soon ur biwi will be mine .

Raman- why she will go to u ,she is my biwi,woh hamesha mere saath rahegi.she promised me.he said innocently.

Param-coz every wife need something special from her husband. Aur tum toh pagal ho tum usse woh special cheez nahi de paoge.so she has to come to me to fulfill her desires,as I am the only man in the house,tum toh bachche ho,not a man but a mad man.so very soon ur wife will come to me.so be prepared to loose ur wife.saying so param went from there smirking leaving a sad Raman.

Flashback

Raman- toh biwi tum mujhe chodkar nahi jaogi naa,param ke paas woh special cheez lene. He asked with utmost sincerity.

Ishita feel disgusting hearing those words.her fist curl in anger and she badly wanted to punch that man hard for saying so filthy words to her innocent husband. But she controlled her anger knowing well that her husband is too innocent to understand anything.

Ishita cupped his face and planted a feathery kiss on his forehead ,he closed his eyes feeling her love.

Ishita- u really think ur biwi can ever leave u that too for that param.u don't trust ur biwi.

Raman- I trust u but aisi kaun si cheez hai uske paas joh mere paas nahi.jiske liye tum uske paas jaogi.

Ishita- aisi koi cheez nahi hai,joh mere Raman ke paas nahi hai aur uske paas hai.aur agar koi aisi cheez hai joh aapke paas nahi toh woh chahte bhi nahi mujhe.all I want is my Raman Babu smiling and showing his cute dimples.she said poking on his dimples making him laugh wholeheartedly. Ishita too smiled seeing him laughing.

Ishita- u know ur beautiful smile is the best thing anyone can have,isse khoobsurat toh kuch ho hi nahi sakta aur woh toh mere Raman ke paas hai.toh main uss gandu ke paas kyun jaun.

Raman- haan biwi woh toh hasta hai toh mere jitna cute bhi nahi lagta,main cute hoon naa,he asked showing his dimples.

Ishita- sabse cute hai mera baby.OK now lets not talk about him.we will talk about ourselves. Aapne itni sundar decoration ki hai,toh ab mujhe bhi aapke liye kuch special karna hoga.kya chahiye aapko.


Raman- mujhe sirf tum chahiye,mere paas rahogi naa hamesha,main roz tumhe gift dunga.mujhe chod kar nahi jaogi naa.

Ishita kissed the back of his palm and said - never.

Raman- then sit down.I have one more gift for u.

Ishita- can I hug u once before sitting.

Raman nodded and opened his arms for her.she came closer and engulfed herself in his arms and hugged him tight.he too hugged her tight.they stay like this for sometime and then Raman made her sit on the couch and himself sat taking the guitar,he start playing guitar ,ishita was amazed to see how beautifully he play guitar while he start singing.

Haan aa...dere naa naa

Haan hasi ban gaye

Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage (x2)

Har safar har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Maante thhe Khuda
Aur haan wahi ban gaye

Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

Pehchaante hi nahi ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi hai dhoondte wo tujhe
Pehchaante hi nahi ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi hai dhoondte wo tujhe
Hum the dhoondhte jisey wo kami ban gaye
Tum mere ishq ki sar-zameen ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

O.. aaa



That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for ur responses.

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww diii kitni pyari update thi diii
i just luv dis story so much
ishu raman r bst
raman ko kitna gussa aata my baby gussa bhi krta h
kre toh ga hi ishu sirf uski h
ishu tu toh bs tu hi h kya nidhi ko mja chakhaya great
raman ne jb kha jhoothi mujhe bhit achcha lga i was imaginig raman saying jhoothi 😳
raman ka gift 😳
ishu jldi jldi kam kr ri h pucho toh kyon kyunki use raman ko hug kr k sona h noty bachchi
i knowww wo raman hi tha usne ishu ko surprise diya
raman kitna insecure tha
param kitna ganda bol rha tha cheee... thodi toh sharam kr le yar isse teri izzat mein fark ni aayega ooops sorry teri toh izzat hi ni h rite
raman kitne innocence se puch ra tha ye sab
""" ab tum mujhe chod kar
nahi jaaogi naa,main tumhe
woh cheez naa de paun.param
tumhe de tab bhi nahi naa."""
"""" I trust u but aisi kaun
si cheez hai uske paas joh mere
paas nahi.jiske liye tum uske
paas jaogi.""""
ishu ne kitne pyar se smjhaya raman ko
ya raman k pas cute dimple wali smile h
raman gana bhi gata h
yee mera favrite song gaya thanku

update sooonnn dii
bhot achchi story h ye

ps diii iss story ko end mt krna plzzz
chahe thoda break le le k update de dena plzzz
n take care
get well sooonnn
Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congratulations dear..

Update fast..
Can't wait..
Edited by Rkchinju - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Phir se... Ab who aap :P
Mere sawalo ka jawabb do ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Resyy
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Unress 😊
awesome update di
param and pammi want to eat food mde by ishita 🥱
possesive hubby nhi voh mere liye hi bnayegii 😆
than tha nidhi 😡 was coming to burn raman. ...
But raman ki biwi hayeee bechari nidhi lol 😃
param pe gira dii
cute little ishra convo at dinning 😛
teaser part 😉
I guessed ryt it was raman only 😊
he decorated room for ishita 👏
and their cute talks 😳
flash back 😲
param ganda aadmi 😡
last ishra scene ishita saying she will never leave his babu 😳
another surprise ⭐️
raman singing for his biwi 😳
loved it 😊
continue soon di 😊
Edited by gunita_ishra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice teaser
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful chappy
Stupid people
Update soon buddy
Param is disgusting
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
loved it
but plz make raman well fast because dont know
but it feels weird hearing raman talks
update soon
thanks for pm👏😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update
love Ishita so much she is always there to protect her Patti
Hate param and Nidhi so much
Acha hua param ke sath
Biwi is the best
He gave surprise to Ishita wow lovely
But Ishita have nightmares...what is in her nightmares
Update soon dii
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the pm
Take care love you 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome..
Lovely update..
I felt good when raman speak back to param..
Im glad that he z changing..
& ishita she z sooo smart she made nidhi to pour all the tea on param..
& raman he wantef to make something special for ishita & decorated their room..
&;this param.. i just wanted to kill him for saying unwanted things to raman..
Entirely an awesome update...

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