The 31st day : An IshRa OS

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: gargpoo
This is superb pb.. .
U r an awsm writer...
Portrayed emotions really well...this is so painful.
His one line stole my heart..'claim me ishita'..
How i wish to c them claiming each other with right in the show
And the resolve broke ...
Jst loved it..
Can v hv next part. It made me geeedy... 😳

And wat abt ur other story..?..chance pe dance maaring... 😛

Thanks poonam..glad you liked it..

Yes...it's one of my long pending wishes that for b once both ishra claim each other. .just for each other. .for no one else...

Next part..dunno re...this was meant to be a single shot...

Arre I need some solid inspiration to write the last part to my other story. .let's see😉😆

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arreddy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Brilliant update... Thanks for this beautiful piece ...

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ishraholic.maya
I love this os very very very emotional

Thanks😛

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -Anku-
WOW that was impeccable... brilliantly worded and so heart touching. And with this piece you have reached the core of their relation. They've never been selfish for each other. And that is why even after so much love and so many years, they still live with securities.

Thanks😛..glad you liked it. And this coming from a brilliant writer like you makes it more special😊.

Yes, that's the crux of their relationship. . The fact is they have gone in so deep that they cannot survive without each other..but then fools that they are they won't even fight to be with each other, just for each other..it's a painful but nevertheless beautiful relationship😛

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Diksha Naik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

awesome os

a really wish ishra always stay together😊

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kaa1202

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Nice one Pb...

Emotional Selfish IshRa... In your dreams woman...😛

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ishra_JD_club

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Its really amazing ...
Very emotional ...

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momb24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Emotional😭

I can actually see this happening on the show, both in a dilamma.

very well written👏

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Amazing
Plz continue

Thanks😛

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: s2397
such a beautiful os
very well written 😊
i wish we can see something like this in the show 😔

Thanks. ..don't know about which way the show is heading but even if they make a small attemot b to show ishras turmoil and longing at the end of 30 days it would be surely worth a watch.