IshRaRu OS: The Time to Heal (June 8) - Page 5

Originally posted by: anisha960

very beautifully written
too emotional also

thnx fr pm

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

Nidoo.. thank you for PM..🤗

loved this OS.. the best part was RKB comparing present and past situation.. IShita and Ruhi's bonding now and 9 years ago..😳

Originally posted by: mayraa

Amazing

Beautifully written

Originally posted by: Mdwst

It's beautiful ..idk what to say ..I'm speechless ..thank you for writing this wonderful piece.

Originally posted by: -Anku-

Nids 😳 I am honestly just speechless at how well you write, at you ability to understand and then express such intricate emotions.

Ishita and Raman are not easy characters to comprehend and I think by experience I say not even easy to write and express. They are layered, complex individuals who when together are as imperfect as they are perfect too.

They sure are, and there was a fair glimpse into these layers early on, which is why most of us are still remember the strong imprints of the original Ishita and Raman, and try to relate their current behavior with the established traits. CVs, however, have forgotten their own creation 😆

It's smart how in this story you haven't delved into Raman admitting his mistakes, or thinking about where he erred, he isn't mourning over the past but he's thinking into the future. It's human to not want to face that one factor that one day or moment that ruined it all.

Actually, accepting that a huge blunder happened and ripped all of them apart, is a sign of admitting and accepting his own role first. So I left that part to the reader's imagination 😳 Also, Raman is such a guile character, it is very difficult to describe the amount of guilt and his realizations, it can give any writer sleepless nights 😆 so I chose to smartly skip it 😎 But yes, it is true, and idealistic too, what has happened cannot be changed, and if you're in too much pain, best would to put the next foot forward 😳

I love how he thinks about what Ishita and Ruhi meant to each other and how before they ever came to rescue him, how they rescued each other.

Out of the entire OS, those lines stayed back with me, enough to inspire me and push me to write an OS of my own. Such was the beauty of the words, that they still stay back with me.

Aww... I'm so glad to hear that 😳 😳

Raman was loved unconditionally by Ruhi, without any question or doubt. But he learnt to reciprocate it because of Ishita, and the mother and daughter together healed them and him. The realization that he can never overcome the pain he is in until the two most important women of his life are happy was profound. The most hard hitting lines where his acknowledgement that Raman still had Adi and Pihu, but neither does Ishita have Ruhi ( who was because of whom she found every relation in her life) Nor does Ruhi have anyone to call her own.

Writing One shots is the hardest thing ever, because a surge of details and emotions have to be concisely put into a one time incident and still be explained so vividly. And you are a pro at it...

On the contrary, I find writing one shots easier that a multi-shot 😆 Pick one moment in time, and go with it 😆

I am your 'FAN' literally. Before we came to know each other and even became friends... I am sure you know I grew to be a fan of what you write...whether posts or stories. And you keep reminding me that every time you write such wonderful stories.

Omg I'm literally blushing now ☺️ ☺️

And this has to be one of your those stories that stay back...Enough to make me want to write something 😳 And that's a big thing because I haven't ever felt like writing anything post leap.

That is like THE BIGGEST COMPLIMENT ever, if I could inspire you to write post-leap 😳 😳

Love you 🤗

Love you back 🤗

Originally posted by: Zoyamalik2005

I don't know how you do it, you just do though nidoo. This was beautiful. The show can't handle the situation the way it should. I'm glad you can. This was stunning.😳

Originally posted by: ishrafan_us

Wonderfully written Nidoo.👏

Very emotional and read it somany times and Everytime it made me tear up.

Wanted to add more but I'm speechless and really can't do the justice to their pain. Hope they go the way you have written in the epi.

Thank you for the PM.