Hieee Gayu đ
This was a story I had saved to read later ... But couldn't resist seeing the PMs ... It was a treat to read this one!
I always had a feeling that what would it be if they haven't gotten the custody of Ruhi! ... But not anymore ... This is a perfect YHM in it's own world!
The way you got them to slowy fall in love and still struggle to recognize it was excellently narrated!
One of the best scenes apart from hundreds because this plot has many is the bench scene the first time when he comforted her without even speaking a word just by putting his hand around!
You have giving the best version of their siblings be it Simmi, Romi, Mihika or Vandu! đđź
That Chup chupke romance was so exciting! Raman feeling like a lovesick teenager was awsome! đ And Ishu's insecurties were brilliantly potrayed!! To perfection!!
đđđ In your stories you never fail to potray any character to perfection! I mean it's not very superficial but always to the fullest, for example you always give us a clear cut of their emotions always! Be it sad, happiness, desperate, lonly, angry, defeated, loved, overwhelmed ... And I feel they are so intense and complete! đđđ Sometimes I fear reading your stories because they effect me a lot I start to thing a lot after reading them ... Because of their intense emotions! For example it always happenes with "wish you were my first love" that's one priceless piece of work! Now this is going in that list too ... đ
Should I really say something regarding your narrating skills in mature content?! Or maybe this is enough đł đł đł đł đł đł
𤣠Oh God! How Raman's acts in the parking lot of Ishu's clinic in front of Shagun! Hahaha was the best. Well one of the best as there are plenty of scenes whr the humiliate Shagun and here I'm laughing and enjoying it to the fullest! ... It feels good with whatever is happening in YHM right now!
You created a new dictionary ... After reading this I have a different feeling towards the word "I hate you" ! ... What a confession yaar! Won't have asked for more! It just complemented their character as they both are too complicated to say it out loud in a normal way ... And ofcourse they are special and they needed something different and unique as this! đđź
𤣠So much wanting Ruhi with them that she never Let's them romance! đ Obviously apart from feeling a bit 'aarrrggg' the scenes whr utterly cute! The one when ISHU was above Raman and ruhi thinks she may hurt her papa and asks her to get down without hurting her feelings ... Awww that's one cute scene!
Awww I'm loving you for making Adhu such a cute kid! I mean obviously he is rude and behaves older then his age but that's justifies for the experiences he had and his mother's ignorance ... But if not he is perfect! He is definetly Junior Ravaan Kumar! His bonding with Ishu â¤ď¸ Balla to Balla talk ... One word - Mindblowing!
I won't lie I don't enjoy it but you are very cruel sometimes by making us go tru hell! Omg! I definetly didn't see that one coming! She got two miscarriages? đ˛ Poor Ishu! ... As ishu says this man makes us fall in love with him again and again and again ... To the square of infinity! <3
This Raman is selfless this is who he really is! How cana a person love someone so much that is wht I felt when he got to go through so much ... With the evil (Shagun) creating more problems and his wife's insecurities ... Omg apart from his two lost babies ... Uuufff it was too much Yaar! I had to stop take a break before continuing actually!
Well it had to come out anyway thanks to the evil creature it came out in a drastic way ... Ishu's reaction ... 'Sigh' ... Anyperson will go insane in Her shoes!
Something very strong You proved here that Raman <3 Ishu's love ! She couldn't afford to loose him! She had to be sane for him because he has gone tru so much in his life! The way they comforted eachother to be bck to normal in a sense was excellently written
These two lovebirds never get enough! And that's what we want đ ... Perfect family scene when kids come in and Raman hugs ishu from bck and they try to take his hand and he shows his tounge hahaha that's was so cute and perfect!
Ishu is so cute with her antics like a teenager around him and he an adorable lover <3 but their possesiveness for eachother is one thing!
Aaahhhaaa here come Ashok Khanna ... Gayu loves him hahaha he is definetly a good person đ well I also love him đđź ... Let's see what rifts this entry brings between Ishra's life ... Hope they both will tackle it maturedly!
Ggaaayyyuuu CONGRATULATIONS!! For 3 rd Thread on this excellent Plot! Many more to go I'm sure!
As promised on shot - 36 bck to bck 5 days update please! Pretty please! ... Besides I think you got more than 200 likes in that post! That's Awsome!!
Conclusion as always you are on of the best and I love you đ¤ Thaaannnkkk yyyooouuu! â¤ď¸
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