Ishra OS - lamha ye suhaana hai on 29/5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello friends I m here again with an OS as one of my buddy maalvika aka maayra suggested me song " tu kheench meri photo piya " for writing an is on it .And now we recently had new OLV in which ishita is dancing on this song and after looking to this my another buddy D.KPIAN want me to write something on this situation .so here its my take on this.

Lamha ye suhana hai

Ishita was dancing carelessly in the dance floor while Raman was bussy in saving her from lusty eyes .Raman so wanted to ignore her but as ashok has spiked her drinks ,she lost her senses .At first she went to raman to talk to him but as usual he ignored her ,at the same time the DJ starts playing the song .

Mood aashiqana hai
Subah ghar jaana hai
Tune kaisa jaadu hai kiya

Lamha ye suhaana hai
Time nahi gawana hai
Jeene ka maza le sathiya

Tu kheech meri photo
Tu kheech meri photo
Tu kheech meri photo piya (x4)

Befikar dil hai aaj
Hai tera mujhpe raaz
Jo kahe kehne de
Baawra ye samaaj

Bhaage yahan wahan ye zindagi ferrari hai
Waisi hi zindagi hai jis tarah guzari hai

Mood aashiqana hai
Subah ghar jaana hai
Tune kaisa jaadu hai kiya

Lamha ye suhaana hai
Time nahi gawana hai
Jeene ka maza le sathiya

Tu kheech meri photo
Tu kheech meri photo
Tu kheech meri photo piya (x4)

Khwabon kaa town hai
Raat bhi brown hai
Kya huaa kuch nahi
Do hi drink down hai

Nashe mein hum nahi hain
Ye sama nasheela hai
Paani bhi peete hain
Toh lagta hai tequila hai

Mood aashiqana hai
Subah ghar jaana hai
Tune kaisa jaadu hai kiya

Lamha ye suhana hai
Time nahi gawana hai
Jeene ka maza le sathiya

Tu kheech meri photo
Tu kheech meri photo
Tu kheech meri photo piya (x4


And our drunk ishita started dancing on its beat ,she went to raman and wanted to click a picture of them but he sushed her away ,then she went to another person ,he showed his interest on ishita and started dancing with her .soon many men's joined them and our raman didn't like this as noe also he is same possessive as he was earlier for ishita .He chsed everyone away from ishita and dragged ishita out of from the party .He was dragging her while she was trying to free herself from his tight hold . At last ishita shrugged his hand with force and spoke almost shouting " Raman don't you dare to show your authority on me ,you threw me away from your life seven years back ."

R- ( angrily )- to iska MATLAB hai tum kisi ke bhi saath naachti phirogi .

I(almost crying )- main kisi ke saath naachoon ,ya mar jaaoon ,ya zinda hoon ,ya khus hoon ya dukhi hoon ,kya farak padta hai aapko .waise bhi you are going to marry shagun and I m nobody to you .why are you bothered about me . for you I m dead na then go from here ,I will remain here .it will be good if somthing come and hit me in this night ,I will be dead and you will feel peace.you go raman I m good .


Saying so she pushed raman but instead ,she lost balance and was about to fall when raman held her in nick of time .Soon she lost her senses ,he hugged her close to his heart tightly and closed his eyes to feel her near him .Then he thought where to live her ,at first he thought to drop her in her home but then he thought that if somebody will spot them ,it will not good
So he took her to a hotel ,booked a hotel room ,tucked her in bed and get back to his work of drinking .soon he Also slept in couch.

It was midnight when ishita woke ,she got up in a jiffy and checked herself as the place is totally unknown and she recalled that she was drunk .ishita got up from the bed and was trying to recall that how come she is here ,when she saw Raman sleeping .ishita immediately understood that he is the one who had brought her here .

Ishita walked to him ,sat beside him and traced his face lovingly ,she was hurt with his bitter and harsh words but the fact that she loves him beyond limit cannot stop herself from loving him .she lovingly was touching him when she recalled ,the day when last time she was drunk and raman took her to hotel ,that was the day when they consummated .That was the first day when they made love for the first time ,she was recalling her old memories while tears made their way from her eyes and rolled on his cheeks . He wiped the tear and tried to turn when he realised that he is not on bed but on couch .He woke and sat on the couch only to see ishita was sitting beside him .

His expression changed ,he started shouting on her ' what are you doing here . mujhe samajh nahi aata tumhe kis bhasha mein samjhaaoon ki I hate you .stay away from me and my kids .chali jaao yahan se ,tum mere liye mar chuki ho'.

I(wiping her tears)- then why did you saved me .why did you brought me here .why didn't you left me there .Marne dete mujhe wahin ,kyun laaye mujhe yahan .

R- did you know what you were doing ,you were clinging and dancing with other men's .

Ishita laughs sarcastically and spoke " if they are some other men's then who are you raman .you are also other man for me as you are going to marry shagun ,from the time you announced your marriage with shagun ,we become strangers raman.yes raman you are also other man for me .and with them I was dancing but I m in a room with you.

Raman was tongue tied listening to her , everything which she is telling is right but the fact is that he cannot see her with anybody . He still love her like he had loved her in past ,he so wanted to squeeze her in his arms and say that how much he loves her . He so wanted her to tell that he so hated Mani's presence around her . but still his ego was stopping him .

Both looked at each other , both were wanting to threw themselves in each other arms and cried their heart out that they love each other and missed a lot . ishita thought that its the only time they are getting together ,he already hate her and will hate her some more but today she wanted him tell that she only loves him and will love him only ,she wanted him to tell how much she missed him and how she was broken when he blamed her for ruhis death .thinking so she walked to him, looked deeply in his eyes then tiptoed and pressed her lips on his .Raman was startled with her sudden act ,he tried to push her but she was holding his face tight ,soon he also lost himself in the kiss ,and start taking part in that .They were biting ,sucking and fighting between the kiss as venting all there anger ,longingness and loneliness in it only.

After much time they parted and then ishita ,kept her head on his chest and spoke " I know raman you hate me but I only love you ,I missed you a lot .I tried to die but seems destiny also left me as you left me ,it was my badluck that Mani rescued me but in process of saving me ,he lost his legs which actually made my belief that I m a bad Oman strong .That's why I never came back ,even I never wanted to interfere in your life but because of this campaign I have to come India and met you all ."

R- but for me you are dead .

I- haan to main mar hi chuki hoon ,main bas apne is shareer ko dho rahi hoon ,I m dead long back .you remember I told you that I can't see hatered for myself in your eyes ,I moment I will see that I will die .So raman that ishita bhalla who was full of life has died on the very first day when you blamed me for death of my ruhi ,when you said I m barren ,when you called me bad omen .and after that I m dying daily ,seeing that hatered in your eyes day by day .I m dead raman nothing is left in me but you know ab sahan nahi hota ,Raman main to itni manhoos hoon ki mujhe to maut ne bhi thukra diya ,Maine koshis ki Marne ki lekin har baar kisi ne bacha liya .Raman ab sahan nahi hota please aap hi maar do na mujhe .

Saying so she took his hands and tried to strangle her neck from.his hands ,when he pulled her to himself and crushed her in himself in a bone crushing hug and spoke
" I m sorry ishita ,I never realised that how much I was hurting you in my anger and ego .I m sorry ,but I swear I too missed you a lot ."

Both remained in same position for some more time ,then raman kissed her temple lovingly and said " though I threw you out from my life but its also true that I was never happy without you ,ishita you the one who is my life ,I always love you and will love you only ."

Saying so they again embrace each other in their arms . After a while both parted and and glanced at the room ,Raman looked at ishita and asked " ishita do you recall something looking to it ".

I- ( hiding herself in him )- how can I forget that day ,that was the most beautiful day of my life .

R( naughtingly)- wanna to live one more beautiful day of your life .

I- datt raman at least think our kids are grown ups.

R- what it has to do with loving my wife .

Saying so he pulled her and captured her lips for a soul shearing kiss ,she also kissed him back with same flavour .then he start dropping open mouth kisses on her body ,soon they were in bed exploring each others body lost in their passion world .At last he again entered her marking her his again after many years .


That's all for now friends .Hope its up to mark .I don't know what CVS are going to show but I want to end ishra hatred like this .Do share your views and hit like buttons .
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akriti154 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing os di
luvd hw raman was protective towards ishita n took her from there
luvd hw ishra talked n sort out their differences
thnxx 4 pm
Edited by akriti154 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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URESED..

Wow. ...
Awesome os...
I totally loved it...
Though raman say that he hate her. ..
He can only love her not hate her ..
Amazing..
Edited by fSharm - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb OS di
Awesome work 👏
Edited by Sanjana_IshRa - 9 years ago
Divanru thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello friends added an is .have a look
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much di for writing this.
As usual awesome one. The ending was beautiful. I really wish cvs show us something but no!!
Anyways thanks again. 😊
Edited by D.KPIAN - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's just superb
I am also tired of seeing Raman hating ishu...
Hope CV will reunite ishra soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow yaar plsss thora tho show mein aisa hi ho n plsss update ur other stories too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one Pooja loved it atlast ishita told her feelings to him and he too accepted his feelings and d way she questioned him and d way he hugged her close to his heart wen she fell itz too good yaar atlast Ishra are together kaash serial mein voh din jaldi aaye
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i am sure in show definitely they wont show this..raman again taunt her& she is such a cry baby& start crying..what is the use of telling her jkr i dont understnd:)
The story you wrote was nice concept..very romantic one:)

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