ISHRA TS:BROKEN HEART part 2(last) on page 8 28/06/2016

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1056084

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Look. Look. Who's here?

Monster Bhaijaan,

Hihi!

Smile mode on pe rakhiyo ke liye kuch bhi. :P

Unres after. Reading both the parts.

Tata.

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1056084

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

res.. ;)

Unres...

Hello Barfi Behna..

Finally here. Sorry for late comment.

Read both the parts. And it was beautiful and realistic type. Completely visualised all the characters and their scenes.

It was an awesome two shot story I guess. So finally raman and ishita will be together just for ruhi.

Felt nice to see positive shagun as well.

All in all beautifully narrated story.

Keep writing more.

And smile mode on pe rakhiyo lol! (sorry for chotu sa comment..)

Urs loving bro.

Monster Bhaijaan

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Sharmin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Wow.. Awesome..
Update soon & plz,do pm me..

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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Look. Look. Who's here? Who..whooo😉

Monster Bhaijaan, bhaijaann🤗 surprise...🥳

Hihi! Hehe...

Smile mode on pe rakhiyo ke liye kuch bhi. :P aww..u r so sweet bhaijaan...smile mode is on...big big wide wide smile😃

Unres after. Reading both the parts. No probzz...I don't know how it turned.. *I'm running to hide😆

Tata. Tata..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: mayasundar
Hi Binu,
It is good to see Raman realized his mistake lets see how he woos his madrasan

If you can please pm when you update

Hey Mayasundar...

Thankyou somuch for the comment dear...

I'm glad u liked it...😊

Of course,I will... Actually it was 2 shots,so that was last chapter...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: raspi
lovely n tnxxx fr pm

Thankuu Raspi😳

Mention not dear.. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: abhisree
nice update... thanks for continuing it... raman feeling guilty... waiting for ishra millon...update soon buddy..

Thankuuu somuch abhisree...

It was two shot dear...last part...

I just want to show their thoughts...

I will try to give next part...not sure...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: sririt
Great update.
So, its Ruhi Ke Liye V2
But it's definitely a great start. Raman has realized how his words can break someone, or rather say shook someone's foundation.

You know I really loved Shagun here, the way she talked to Raman was commendable.

Thankyou somuch for the wonderful comment dear...

Yeah,finally Raman realized his mistake...And he is going to bring back what he destroyed due to his anger...

I'm glad u liked Shagun,there is no negativity in Shagun anywhere & She realised her position in bhalla's house.. 😳