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Hello friends,

Phew!! Finally thinking enough on current track, I got some ideas. Basically this story based on current track, so may be somewhere I will use Raman's harsh words, but definitely try best to avoid them. Okay!! Though the story based on current track, so I am using OLV scenes but the execution style will be different. I hope you will going to like it.

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|| Tu Hai Toh Mein Hoon ||

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~ Teaser - Below ~

~ Chapter 1 ~

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Teaser

The entire Bhalla house was decorated simply with flowers and curtains but still it was looking like a wedding house but there wasn't no chaos around, no hustle bustle.

Shagun was getting ready in her bridal attire while Pihu giving her company and asking her to wear this and those. Shagun admired herself in the mirror thinking the proposal by Raman. She wondered, "Whether I am doing right to marry him!!"

But Pihu's words brought her back to reality, she shook her head looking at little Pihu and thought, "No. No. I am over thinking. May be!! Really Raman decided to move on."

"Mumma!! What are you thinking??" Pihu asked seeing her lost, Shagun caressed her cheek lovingly nodding her head in no.

The priest was chanting holy mantra when Raman was doing the pooja in the mandap, the family member looked on sadly, Toshiji had tears in her eyes whereas Simmi tried to console her.

"Please.. Call the bride." The priest said when Raman looked at Simmi asking to bring Shagun, Simmi didn't bother to move from her position when Raman heard Pihu's voice saying, "Here's my Mumma!!" She brought Shagun down to the mandap and made her sit beside Raman. They did the pooja together, though Raman himself proposed her for marriage but happiness was far away from him whereas Shagun was smiling happily. After sometime Priest asked them to stand for phera. They stood, and started taking the phera.

"Matarani.. Please do some miracle!!" Toshiji prayed to God.

Raman and Shagun was about to take the final round when they heard someone saying, "You can't marry her Mr. Raman Bhalla." Everyone turned at the direction shockingly though not everyone, some were shocked and some were happy.

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Just a teaser. Okay few parts will be based on new OLV but the scenes will execute in my style, I hope you all will like it.

Now please do comment.

Thank you.

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