Ishra ss-tanhaiyaan muskurane lagi pt 15 on pg 143 updt on Jun 19

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#871

Hi Rachu.
I'm commenting on it for the first time I think 🤔 Moreover, I'm commenting on your story after like ages 😆 I read it and...I hit like 😳 Usually, I don't read on the show or its track babe. In my case, if I start something on the show, I hold But I read this one. This is an awesome work.

I really loved when things went smooth between IshRa, which is a never happening situation in the show. How serene it felt to read it this way. Only if something like this happened there; it would have been pleasing for eyes Alas, it could only be this way...I know!

I so loved the family reunion and Ishaan...he took my breath away. Four kids of IshRa...😲 I was real shocked and yet to recover 😆 Well this was too good. Ishaan and Pihu...(I loved Pihu here and otherwise you know 😵) they are adorable. Adi and Ruhi scenes are less I think...I want more...because I love them way too much...especially Adi 😳

Mani and Shagun...🤬 No words 😡 Those two. I'm already pissed with Shagun after the episode and here it is...uuurrrgghhh...I hate her. She's such a filthy creature. She knew that Ruhi is alive but she did not let anyone know it or try to help her. My heart goes out to Ruhi when she confronted Shagun with this 🥺... At last Shaggy died. Happy dance Oh I'm so relieved. I'm reading Shagun's death for the first time I think...I mean...such a soothing news it is ❤️

But me sad that puttar has gone through so much. PutWi are heaven. After seven years...despo puttar...🤣 How it would feel like watching something of sort in the show *sigh* #HopeNeverDies

Update soon baby...
Me waiting...
From now onwards, I'll give regular comments for this one. Promise 👍🏼

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nafnaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#872

Part 11

Such an emotional and sad update!!!!😭

It was Shagun's story throughout!!!😡

She turned out to be a real monster!!!🤬

How could she watch Ruhi being whipped by Nidhi and sot help her!😡

Loved Adi's words to her:"Adi- kaash aap iss shabd ka Matlab samjhti shagun mumma. I hate u .he said looking away."

And the slaps by Ishra - yayyy!!!!😈

And finally Ruhi's words to Shagun: "aap meri mumma kabhi nahi ho sakti shagun mumma.I hate u more then I hate nidhi.woh toh parayi this but aap toh meri mumma thi naa.u not only failed as a mother but also as a human being.I hate u.I hate u from the core of my heart."

Shagun trying to kill Ruhi - please this time let Ishimaa be able to save Ruhi please please please!!!!!!!!

Looking forward to the next update soon and also thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!!

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traveller_girl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#873

Awesome awesome update di

Loved it

Ishralicious

Pihan...cutiess

Remarriage...yay

Continue soon

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Mit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#874

Awesome update
Ishan n pihu cute
Raman baby with his madrasan
Ishra marriage waiting
Update soon
Thanx for pm

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#875

PART 14

Ishita- shaadi,hamari shaadi.what's the need we r already married.

Raman pinched her and said- chup kar madrasan.shaadi hogi toh suhaagraat bhi manane milegi.chup chap hone de hamari phir se shaadi .he said very slowly audible only to just her.

Ishita look at him in disbelief and said- besharam Raman,despo ho gayen hai ekdum.

Romi- bhai,what u guys r talking in urself.hogi naa aap logon ki dobara shaadi.

Adi- haan papa,tell naa.

Raman- aisa hai naa adi.ki main shaadi ke liye taiyaar hoon.apni ishimaa se puch lo,woh taiyaar hai ki nahi.warna mujhe tum logon ki nayi mummy laani padegi.(I am ready ,ask ur ishimaa ,if she is not ready I have to bring new mumma for u.)he said sheepishly while ishita made a perfect O.

Raman settle on the couch and said- itna bada muh mat khol madrasan.just say yes for our marriage. Warna mere paas bahut option hai.kya naam hai uss hot client ka mihir.

Mihir- miss chopra.

Raman- yes miss chopra.that day only she was asking me for a date.shall I ask her for marriage.bolo meri battalion,nayi mummy chahiye.

Ishita glare at him throwing daggers on him and said- kar lo shaadi uss churail chopra se.main jaa rahi hoon.

Raman- wow madrasan se chutkara mil gaya.sach kaha hai kisine,tere ghar der hai andher nahi.mihir call miss chopra.

Ishita- Raman,main sach mein jaa rahi hoon.

Raman- jaa na madrasan.main bhi dekhun.

Ishita- hate u raavan Kumar.saying so she was going when he pulled her and make her sit beside him.

Raman- maa,shagun ho gaya.ab hum shaadi ke liye taiyaar hain.madrasan bhi kya yaad rakhegi,ki mere jaise gabru jawaan ne sab hot bandiyon ko chod kar isse shaadi ki.

Everyone laugh at their usual nok jhok when Raman said again- but why this mandap.

Adi- for shaadi papa.

Raman- kya sirf shaadi hogi.adi ne,pihu ne ,ishaan ne hamari shaadi nahi dekhi hai.lets get married with all rituals.why this jhat pat shaadi.ab ishita ko presentable dikhne ke liye bhi toh samay chahiye.he said winking.

Ishita glare at him and said- yes mummy ji,he is right.

Raman- dekha madrasan tu bhi maan gayi naa.

Ishita- let me complete Raman.mummy ji he is right.we should marry again with all rituals.toh main amma ke ghar jaati hoon.shaadi ke baad iss ghar mein aaungi.right Raman.

The smiling face of Raman fell hearing this while everyone laugh at his expense.

Raman- nahi nahi.aise kaise.madrasan pagal ho gayi hai kya.shaadi toh kaise bhi ho,tu yahin rahegi ,mere paas.samjhi.

Ishita- no Raman.I will stay at amma's place.girls let's go.

Ishita stand up and was going followex by iyer's and bhalla's ladies along with pihu and ruhi.

Raman was looking at her with a poker face while she was smiling with a victory smile.

Raman- (st)itna mat has madrasan.abhi main apna bhramhastra chalata hoon.he thought and smirk.

Raman stand up and said- ishita suno toh.he was saying and suddenly held his chest and said- aah ,ishita.bahut dard ho raha hai.aah Ishita.

Everyone ran to him,ishita was first of all.

Ishita hold him and said- kahan dard ho raha hai.Raman,Raman boliye.adi doctor ko bulao.I told u not to stress urself.aap sunte nahi ho.romi take him to the room.

Romi- ji bhabhi.saying so all took him to the room.they made him lay down and Ishita was going when Raman said- please be with me naa.

Ishita- main yahin hoon ,Raman.u please don't take stress.

Romi and simmi were looking at Raman and said- simmi di,don't u think bhai is pretending.

Simmi- I am thinking romi. Look at his look,full of naughtiness.

Romi- wait.bhai cockroach.

Raman get up in an instant and said- kahan romi,kahan coacroach.

Romi- aapke shirt pe.he shouted.

Raman get up and start shouting.everyone was looking at him in disbelief that he fake his illness.

Romi- kuch nahi hai bhai.baith jao.aapki pol khul gayi.

Raman realised what happened and sat down silently.

Toshiji- aisa bhi koi mazaak hota hai.

Mr bhalla- we were so scared. This is not done.saying so Mr and Mrs bhalla went from there.

Ruhi- this is height papa.chalo pihu ,ishaan,papa se koi baat nahi.all three went.

Romi,simmi ,iyers,everyone went leaving ishra alone.Raman was sitting keeping his head down while ishita was looking at him with moist eyes.

Raman- I am sorry ishita.

Ishita- kaisa ghatiya mazaak tha yeh.I am so worried for u .I was scared to death and it was just a just a prank.she said crying.

Raman- kahan naa sorry.

Ishita- main baat hi kyun kar rahi hoon aapse.saying so she was going when he held her and said- jaogi toh iss baar sach mein dard hoga.mazaak mein nahi.(if u went then this time it will be pain in real).

Ishita cupped his face and said- aapko kho dene ka ehsaas kabhi mazaak nahi hota mere liye.its painful.(loosing u is never a joke for me).

Raman hide himself in her and said- I just want u only for me.kuch ghante sirf main aur tum.mujhe tumse kitni baatein karni hai.kitni baatein janni hai .itne saal kaise rahi mere bina.but noone is allowing me to be with u.all r always around u.I agree all want u but I also want u,mujhe bhi toh chahiye tum.he said honestly like a kid.

Ishita- but I am with u from last week.main toh aapke saath hi hoon.

Raman- haan hospital mein with lots of doctors and nurses.I want some lone time with u.

Ishita realised what he wanna say.she caressed his hair and said- aap ruko.I go and handle everyone.saying so she went out to talk with everyone.

All were sitting in the hall.ishita went there thinking ways to convince them,so that they can spend some time together.

Before she can say anything ,toshi ji said- ishita puttar,we r thinking that we should start marriage preparation from tomorrow and we will perform all rituals along with mehendi,haldi,sangeet,what say.

Ishita- jaisa aap thik samjhe.

Adi- and ishimaa we r going for movie and dinner. Aap aur papa should stay back coz he is not well naa.

Ruhi- haan ishimaa,koi problem toh nahi.

Simmi- if u want we can bring food for u guys.what say.

Ishita- no its OK.doctor told him to eat light.I will make something for him.u guys go and enjoy.

Simmi- and u guys also enjoy.she said coming closer.

Ishita slap her lovingly and soon everyone left the house leaving ishra alone.

Ishita was happy as she got what he wanted ,little did she know that they decided like this coz simmi heard Raman's talk that he badly need some lone time with ishita.

Ishita went to their room only to see him sleeping tired of the day incident.

She went to him and lovingly caressed his hair and said- Raman,see now ur madrasan is all there for u.everyone went leaving us alone.today I will make u realise that how much u mean to me.how much ur madrasan loves u.saying so she kissed his forehead lovingly.

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.give me lots of likes and long comments for an early update .

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago

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anisha960

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Posted: 9 years ago

#876

ressyyy

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lovely update
raman nhi sudhrega
he wants to marru with full rituals but not want his madarasan to leave
n his bhramhastra also fails bcoz of simmi n romi
n biwi got hurt
so now thy r all alone
waiting for next
continue soin

Edited by anisha960 - 9 years ago

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sukanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#877

@10
Shagun shagun kya karu Mai iska... Waise why me ... Writer karegi nah
Raman is always J of his own kids
Shagun aa toh gayi... Bus kuch or planning na kare