Ishra TS|||HaalDil|||chap1B updated

-VisheshTippani thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Hey guys might new here... But my a writer... M having a new story it's a TS.
My name is Needa
Don't get confused with my I'd name.
Hope to get a warm welcome by all😊
N one more thing... I met KP.
Anita di on set of bcl... M will b going again soon :)


--------------++-----------------------+++++-----------
Ishra TS-HaaleDil
Prologue

RAMAN a highly successful bachelor of dis decade.A business tycoon. famous for his punctuality & commitments. running successfully all his companies with his sharpness & capabilities... which includes manufacturing to marketing in each & every sector ranging from food&agriculture to jet&airway industry.For him his work is a priority and he will never compromise on that.

RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA aged 28 had his priorities set-R.B GROUP of
industries.

Every rich & social businessman wanted him to join hands with him by some or d other means.some wants to collaborate others wanted their beautiful daughters to marry dis handsome young man.


Raman was aware of all dis, despite dis fact dat he was one of d most eligible bachelors he was not even interested in any1 .Reason behind dis was not dat he was gay or something bt he was d one who had already lost so much in life dat he don't want to get attached to any1 now.

very intelligent in selecting his employs.Chooses one who's not so experience bt who's loyal & trustworthy.

and whoever even d one who tries to break his trust he never forgive dem& leave dem.
He was d one who can't tolerate injustice & fraud done to him or to any1 for dat matter.
he was capable to punish dem for their bad deeds. He never waited for judicial system to punish dem.in fact he used to think as judicial system isn't reliable as criminals get clean chits while innocence one got punishment...
-----------

hope u all will like it...

Index
-prologue-pg1
Chap1 - pg1
chap1B- pg13

& whoever wanted PM of update do like story I'll send pm surely.
for PMS of update buddy me.
Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

86

Views

5.3k

Users

14

Likes

73

Frequent Posters

-VisheshTippani thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
HAAL-E-DIL(T.S.)



HAL-E-DIL


SHOT 1---
(A)




Few days back Raman got a call from anonymous number at around 2am it was not clear who he was
bt
Raman was not too dumb to find it out ...who dat person was...



Raman who hardly make friends had only 1best friend who was missing from few days.Raman thought dis call might b his only...But WHR he was& why he called him like dat??



Mihir WAS only one who understand Raman well bt sometimes it was hard for him as well to gauge wat was happening to Raman.
as he's highly unpredictable.

Raman thought to himself - wat might happen to him as he tried to remember his last meeting with Mihir.


-----------------------
He tried to figure everything out after remembering their last talk.

Abt a week back... When He met Mihir at farmhouse.

There was a party thrown by Raman on his farmhouse...

Raman vividly remembered.. He was looking quite tensed.

Frequently checking his phone.His behavior was also not normal. but on asking by Raman he wasn't telling anything either.

while
Sipping a glass of champagne der.
Raman over heard Mihir when on call he was discussing sum property issues with his parents on phone.

To which Raman didn't paid much attention. bt got lost in his own thoughts ... Remembering his own parents...



His father a struggling businessman & his mother a famous painter & a housewife too.

They loved Raman a lot.

Despite of poor company status his father never compromised giving Raman whatever he asked for...

for which he was grateful to them&will always b & he started studying day & night to make his parents proud of him.

Even after yrs of working his parents would b proud.of him.who r not alive know .

He had lost his parents few years back when he was young in a plane crash.

he wished if they were alive to see him succeed this much...
But he knew somewhere in heaven, his parents must b very happy seeing him succeed...

---------------------
present day

RAMAN BHALLA u don't even know proper address of Mihir's village how would u reach der ??

Raman asked himself.



He den remembered dat he owned a telecom company as well which can track his phone location in no tym.


After tracing d last location he planed to go der all alone.

He reached dat place which was very remote from his hometown city Mumbai.

It took almost 5 hrs to reach dat place.



Again he was not sure as from WHR to start his searching for him...last location suggested dis place only..

an underdevelopment village.. bt now how to go abt...



He was having recent pic of Mihir In his phone.DAT he showed to village ppl.



one of dem helped him to reach to panchayat.dey confirmed dat Mihir belonged to this village bt his family & him were involved in a fraud ... &THEY RAN AWAY WITH ALL THE MONEY.




Raman denied dis...as he knows Mihir very well. he never would do such fraud to any1.infact he WAS against all such things.

Then Raman said to panchayat ...he would help dem to find him.

They agreed.

Raman knew There must b another side of it which he should find out as early as possible.& DEN
He decided to stay in village .till d matter get resolved...


Next day again he was called by pamchayat for his respective matter.Under shade of dense tree.

He suggested we should search him from where he had last seen or with whom he was last seen...
----------

While Searching for Mihir, at evening time.

He got attacked by some ppl in village. To escape & to hide from dem he entered a hut ...

There he met a little girl...


To b continued...






Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago
Sri1091 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Hey needa welcome to d forum 🤗
svati12 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Edited by swatica - 9 years ago
-VisheshTippani thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
I guess kisi ko b new story padhne me interest ni h
-VisheshTippani thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: Sri1091

Hey needa welcome to d forum 🤗

Thank you.. BTW what's ur name?
-VisheshTippani thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7
-VisheshTippani thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Welcome Needa 🤗

Thank you BTW ur good name 😊
Roselada thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9
hi needa welcome to the forum dr.
definitly want to read ur story.
-VisheshTippani thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
It's a nice start though 😳

Related Topics

Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: Im_sherlock ¡ 5 months ago

On the show, we all know how Raman tried to give hints to Ishita about his feelings and desires, by keeping a box of condoms in her drawer. An...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: ChanChanMan ¡ 4 years ago

I dare you to post a thing about anyone other than DivAn.

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: Devanshi14 ¡ 5 months ago

Chapter # 01 Title: “Pehli Baar Ishq Hua” Raman and Ishita had been married for months now—contractually, yes—but slowly, silently, love had...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: Im_sherlock ¡ 5 months ago

It was one of those rare calm nights in Delhi, the kind that carried a soft breeze, the scent of blooming mogra, and a strange kind of silence...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".