IshRa TS: Renewed Promises ( part 02 - page 01 )

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Hello everyone!!!!!!!!
Well I know know maine hi kaha tha ki I will not going to see my face before 9 may 😆 but something was there which caught my attention and made me compelled to come here.

I know my story and TS are pending but still I started one more TS this time to wish someone. As you all know this is the season of wedding, so here is someone who completed her beautiful 2 years of blissful marriage on 2nd may. Yeah I am talking about your favourite writer DivanIsh who I fondly named Petal Tai 😆😆

HAPPY BELATED MARRIAGE ANNIVERSARY

Hey pankhu tai you know I am not so much good in sending wishes but still accept lots of wishes on your wedding anniversary to you and SJ 😉 ( I hope aap samajh jaaogi full form )

Best wishes to you both on your anniversary,
May the love that u share Last your lifetime through,
As u make a wonderful pair.
Happy Wedding Anniversary



Again a lots of wishes to both of you PT & SJ

I know I was supposed to update first part yesterday but was unable to do so because of my today's exam but koi na der aaye durust aaye 😆😆
So posting first part of this TS today. I wanted to write this story from long time back but seems like this story was in wait for some special moment. So here it is.

Read and let me know about your thoughts
Will wait for that.

Have a nice day all
PMS will be late
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Life was never so much perfect for them until they met each other. He looked towards his daughter who was sleeping peacefully clutching her father finger with her little one. He glanced at watch, it was 10:40 pm, Ishita normal time to come from kitchen but today she was little late then usual. He was about to call his dear wife but stopped hearing her voice which was coming from their bedroom door.

She finally entered in room after completing whole household chores. She was about to ask Ruhi but stopped at middle on seeing Raman actions which were indicating that their little daughter slept a while ago.

" Hey bhagwan, kitni draamebaaz hai yeh ladki. Kitna manaana pdta hain isko sulaane ke liye bhi. Sacchi tumpe gayi hain " she looked at him with surprised face. Shaking her head on his never ending antiques, she threw a cushion on him while settling near him. " Accha ji, yeh sahi hain. Jab laad ladaane ho tab Ruhi aapki beti ho jaati hain aur jab uske nakhre uthaane pade tab meri? "

He chuckled on his wife reply and lovingly stroked Ruhis head which made her sleep again. She smiled lovingly on their angel on seeing her healthy growth and upbringing. Dimming room lights, she rested her head on Raman shoulder while he covered them with comforter.

" Aaj tumhe zyadq time lag gaya na kitchen mein " he started their conversation while caressing her hairs which made her closed her eyes.

" Haan Raman, kal mummyji, simmi aur ananya aa rahe hain na , toh bas ussi ke liye preparations kar rahi thi, isliye zyada waqt lag gaya " she said lazily while yawning and stretching her hands. " Aapka aaj ka din kaise tha office mein? " she inquired further while settling herself in her husband arms.

" Bas wahi roz jaisa. Juniors ko instruct karo, boss ki farmaaishein suno, file sign karo...bas yahi aur tumhara din kaise tha aaj? " she smiled faintly on his sarcastic comment with closed eyes. She always enjoy listening his day to day chores, his experience. It was their daily routine to share their day with each other in night but things changed from the day their daughter born. slowly slowly they forgot they are husband and wife and became ruhi parents.
He was expecting her reply but for his surprise, he heard her little snores. Looking at her side, he found her in deep slumber resting her head on his shoulder. He smiled on seeing his wife tired face. Carefully settling her head on pillow, he covered her and him with comforter and started to pat her head.

" Kitna thak jaati ho na tum in sab kaamo ke beech mein Ishita. Main, Ruhi, office aur ghar...in sab mein tumhe apna khayaal hi nahi rehta hain na " placing their daughter in middle of bed, he covered them with comforter and settled himself in sleep.

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Their home was again filled with lots of chirpy noise today. She excitedly looked at drawing room from her kitchen. Toshiji and simmi was busy in playing with little Ruhi while Ananya was busy in learning new tricks from her mamu. Smiling widely on her little world, she asked them to assemble on dining table for lunch. Soon the family engrossed themselves in family lunch while Ishita started to feed little ruhi.

" Ishita puttar, ghar bada hi badla badla sa lag raha hai. Haina Simmi? "

" Haan mummyji...last time jab Ruhi ke naamkaran mein aae the tab ghar ki decorations alag thi aur ab alag hai. Kya kiya hai aap logo ne Raman bhai? "

" Ohh yeh...yeh sab Teri laadli bhabhi ki karamaat hain Simmi. Isne poora ghar Ruhi ke photo frames se bhar diya aur apni banaai hui paintings ko utaar ke side mein kar diya " Raman said with yucky tone while making faces at Ishita who was busy in her old world.

" Ishita Puttar...tune apni saari banaai hui painting kyon hataai beta? Jaanti hain Delhi wale ghar mein jo bhi aata hain, Teri banaai hui tasveero ki taareefein karta nahi thakta hain. aur yahan dekh tune sab hata diye "

" Main toh bol bol kar thak gaya Maa par yeh ziddi madrasan sune toh na "

" Stop complaining Raman!!!! " she glared her husband while handling their daughter to him. Wiping her hands with napkin, she sat beside her mother in law and said, " Aisa nahi hai mummyji but dekhiye na humari Ruhi ki tasveerein kitni sundar lag rahi hai poore ghar mein, aur yeh sab clicks aapke puttar ne hi liye the, maine toh bas inke birthday par inko gift kiya hain yeh sab " she explained her mother in law with wide smile and retired to kitchen to complete left work.

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It was a quite afternoon of their home. Everyone was retired to their respective rooms to get some sleep. Everyone was in deep slumber after eating delicious lunch by Ishita but he was wide awaken. He looked at other side where his wife and daughter were also sleeping peacefully but something was there which was making difficult for him to sleep.

Settling cushions beside Ruhi, he went towards a small store room of their home where they usually kept waste and unwanted things but who said store room only contains unwanted and waste of home, someone long forgotten dreams were also kept in their store room. He slowly unpacked a bundle of frames and started to admire them. It was a collections of marvelous paintings which won various awards in various competitions and exhibitions but now they were kept in a corner of a home. " by ms Ishita Iyyer " he caressed the signature lightly and started to admire them by sitting at balcony which was adjoining to store room.

Her art, her talent was only thing which made him fell in love with a tamilian girl. He never thought that a hardcore' Punjabi will easily fell in love with a simple and down to earth tamilian girl but things became possible because of their common interest. He sat himself on chair of their adjoining balcony. The beautiful pieces of art took him down to a memory lane when he met to a person who changed the prospectives of his life.

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~ 4 years ago ~

Raman Kumar Bhalla... a well known name among his friends and work circle. A happy and cheerful Punjabi munda by nature. He was an IIM graduate who was working in as business executive in Mumbai from past 2 years. He was favourite among his friends and office only because of his marvelous sense of humour and witty nature. His dimpled smile was enough to made girls crazy for him. Being a bachlors, his most of the time spent in office while weekends spent in friends and parties.

For friends and colleagues, he was a party going man, but he also had an another side which was always for his close friends. His love for art. Like his father, he was also a great admirer of art. Whether it is painting or music, he always praise it. It was the reason that he was associated with the groups which encouraged the young talents in these fields. He never knew that his active participation will change his life.

~ One fine evening ~

It was evening of Friday, the day for which he wait for whole week. Like every week, today he was also excited to spent his evening with his friends. He was busy in packing his stuffs but stopped hearing the buzz of his phone. He checked his Watsapp status, it was Mihir's message. Smilingly he checked his message which was informing him about new art exhibition. This reason was enough to made him delighted. Cancelling his plans for the evening, he picked his bag and drove towards his home.

" Mihir...tujhe is Art Exhibition ke baare mein kisne bataya? " he asked excitedly while roaming in gallery which were full of different shades of Art.

" Are yahan ke organizer ka message aaya tha mere paas. Woh log tumhara phone try kar rahe the par shaayad us waqt tum meeting mein the isliye mujhe bataya. Jaante ho is exhibition ki khaas baat yeh hai ki yahan mostly saare young artist ka collection display hua hai " Mihir description about the theme made him impress more and without wasting more time he started to look them keenly.

They was roaming through galleries to galleries, his eyes were searching for something soothing but nothing was there which can caught his attention in single glance. Sighting, he stopped in mid which left Mihir amazed.

" Hey abhi galleries baaki hai Raman. Tum yahan kyon ruk gaye? "

" Mihir I think hume ghar chalna chahiye. Nothing is interesting here like previous times. Chal chalte hai " he was about to go from gallery but on hearing Mihir request that only few displays were remained, he nodded and started to see remaining arts but this time he was unwilling to do so. But as said most of the happiest and pleasent things happened when you never expected them something happened with him to. Suddenly his eyes caught a view for which he waited so long. It was a normal portray of lord Krishna but he was able to saw the devotion, the passion in that painting.. The bright and vibrant color was indicating him about her positive thinking. His eyes refused to left the painting. Finally he got something for which he waited.

" Maine kaha tha na ki yahan par kuch na kuch toh aisa hoga jo aapko pasand aayega " his trance broke by mihir voice who was grinning on seeing his lost form. Smacking his head on seeing his mischievous smile, he signalled him to follow him. Soon they were with Vikas, the exhibition in charge who was his good friend. After discussing some random things with him, hesitantly he started to ask about the person he wanted to ask.

" Umm Vikas... tune us painting ke baare mein nahi bataya jo corner mein lagi hai woh painting kisne banaai hai "

" Oh woh...woh yahan ki sabse youngest artist ki entry hai. Nayi aayi hai Mumbai mein. South Indian hai but sacchi Raman ladki bohot passionate hai apne kaam ke liye. Yahi ek MNC mein kaam karti hai " he smiled on hearing praises of mystery girl from Vikas. Her continuous praises was making him more eager. Now his curious eyes were searching the girl about Vikas said. Unable to said anything he only tried to search that unknown face. Vikas and Mihir smiled on seeing his anxious face and signalled to bring someone.

" Here is the girl who stole everyone heart from her art and work. " his eyes diverted towards the voice. And the same happened what his heart said to him. His breaths became stopped, his eyes denied to blink the moment he saw her. She was girl of early 20's with black hairs, doe shaped eyes, smiling face. Everything was beautiful in him. He didn't knew but he wanted to stop moment there.

" Raman... " Mihir nudged him to bring him back from his dreamland. Composing himself he forwarded his hand towards her. " Hi!!!! I am Raman. " he introduced himself with shaky voice. He saw how she smiled on him. She was about to tell her name to him but stopped on hearing a call from her phone. Excusing herself she went from there. He wanted to stop her, wanted to talk her but looked like his stars were not in his favour. Despite of waiting several hours he didn't found her in hall.

" Vikas...where is that girl? I mean that south Indian girl " he asked in frustrated voice and became more annoyed when he heard that she went somewhere in hurry and he didn't have her number.

Raman face instantly fell on hearing same. It was first time when he wanted to meet someone desperately. His expressions and making faces were worth to see by Mihir and Vikas. He went from there hoping to meet her soon again.

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" Vikas ne kaha tha ki woh kisi MNC mein kaam karti hai. Ab konsi MNC mein hai, yeh kaise pata lagaaun? " started to tap his fingers on his table, he began to think ways to meet her. Already 2 weeks were passed from that exhibition but he was unable to find about her. Next day he dialled vikas number to knew about her but found he went on holidays at Maldives along his wife and son.

" Yeh Vikas ka bccha khud apne bacche ke saath holidays par chala gaya aur number bhi nahi dekar gaya. Bewkoof aadmi!!!!!! " he knew nothing will come out from his cursing ad he will be back after 2 weeks. Sighting he started to check the next project file which he had to present after an hour.

" Raman...today you will accompany me on the business lunch. Mr Malhotra will be there along with his PA. " he received his boss message and started to prepare required stuffs for meeting.
It was 2 pm and they were at barbeque, waiting for clients to start meeting along his boss. Though his eyes were fixed at laptop screen but his mind was occupied with the unknown girl who took away his sleep. " Sab sahi kehte hai ladkiyon ke peeche bhaagna hi nahi chahiye na jaane kyon main iske chakkar mein pad gaya, us madrasan ke kaaran meri neendein udii hui hai "

Busy in his cursing he didn't noticed that another unknown voice was present there who was busy in talking with Mr Bansal. " Raman meet Mr Malhotra " he shook his hand with him and settled themselves on seats. Soon they started to discuss about the project but something caught their attention.

" Are yeh Ishita kahan reh gayi " Mr Malhotra murmured to himself while looking here and there.

" I am so sorry sir, I hope I am not late " they heard a voice which was panting. Raman narrowed his eyebrows on listening a known voice. Was she same person for whom he waited for whole 2 weeks? Crossing his fingers he turned other side. A girl of early 20's was in front of him, all dressed in formals with a breath taking smile. His lips curved more after recognizing her. All he wanted to do was to hug her, to told her how much he waited for her but he also knew it was not right time to express his happiness. Composing himself he formally greet her and all of them settled themselves.

" Where was you Ishita? I was worries for you. "

" Sorry sir. I tried to reach on time but struck in traffic " she whispered slowly while scratching her head. Mr Malhotra smiled on her and introduced her to their clients. Soon there meeting started and as expected they able to finalize deal with each other. At all the time where his seniors were busy in discussing about project, he was busy in staring her. She was the same girl about whom he always dreamt. A simple sobar girl with big black eyes, innocent smile. A girl who can impress anyone with her sensible talks, her innovative ideas. She was a perfect example of beauty with brain.

" Kaash mujhe iska number mil paaye. Please mata rani, kuch toh aisa kariye ki mujhe Ishita ka number mil jaaye " he prayed to god and what happened next second was again surprise for him. His boss ordered him to exchange his number with Ishita to sync the work.

Soon they were alone in restaurant where she was arranging her stuffs he again started to drool her. He didn't even realized that she was looking at him with suspicious looks with knitted brows. Clearing her throat she grabbed his attention and seated beside him.

" Did we met earlier? "

" Ummm...haan...no...means yes. Woh 2 weeks pehle exhibition mein. Humati baat nahi ho paayi thi as aap kahin chali gyi thi "

" Oh I remembered... Mr Bhalla, right? Vikas ne batya tha aapke baare mein. Even main aapse baat bhi karna chahati thi but ek urgent kaam aa gaya and mujhe jana pada "

" Its fine Ishita. Aap khud painting banati hai Ishita? " she smiled on his question with surprised tone and nodded. Before they continued her phone rang and she took leave promising him to meet soon. He tried to read her features which were telling him that she is tensed, something is bothering her.

" I hope woh theek ho " he sighted after laying down on bed. He already saved her number in his phone which made him show her availability on Watsapp. His heart knew how much he wanted to text her, wanted to ask about her weatherbound but at same time he also knew it was not time to contact her. Praying for her well beings he drifted himself in sleep.

His next few days passed in between work and meetings. The next project was important for his company as well as for his further promotions. Going early and returning late from office became temporary part of his life and absence of Ishita was making more difficult for him in completing his work. Yes he was supposed to coordinate with Ishita for the next project but she was on leave from past 2 weeks because of unknown cause. It was good chance for him to meet and know her but again he missed the chance to spent time with her.

It was one of the same day when he was wrapping his work urgently to accompany his boss at another business meeting. Suddenly his phone rang which made his concentration broke. " Who the hell is this now " he angrily muttered in between work and picked the call.

" Aap logo ke paas aur koi kaam nahi hai na shareef logo ko tang karne ke alaawa. Kaha na mujhe koi credit ya debit card nahi chahiye... agar agli baar phone kiya na toh... "

" Cool down Mr bhalla. It's me Ishita Iyyer. I hope you remembered me. I...I am so sorry to made you disturb " the frown on his forehead suddenly disappeared in the next second after hearing her voice while his lips broke into smile. " No no...not at all Ishita. Kai..kaise ho tum? "

" I am sorry Mr bhalla for this inconvenience. I know yeh kaam hume karna tha but mere kaaran aapke oopar sara burden pad gaya. I am guilty Mr bhalla "

" Its really OK ms Iyyer. I know aap sach main kisi important kaam mein hongi " he answered her slowly. He wondered on himself how easily she soothed his anger.

" Mr Bhalla but now I wanted to help you. I know you completed almost 60% work but now I wanted to complete rest of the work. So shall we met today? "

" Mee...meeting!!!!!! Yes... ya ya sure. " He barely heard her saying that she will message him about place but did he actually heard anything???? All he knew was about his heart who was playing dhol and did invisible bhangda. " I love you mata rani!!!! "


" Actually Amma ki tabiyat bohot kharab thi un 2 weeks mein, bas yahi ek reason tha mujhe suddenly ghar jaana pada. Amma beemar thi aur appa bhi bohot panic ho gaye the. Samajh hi nahi aaya ki unhe kaise handle karoon. But thanks Raman meri baat samajhne aur cooperate karne ke liye " he silently smiled on hearing her confession and and continued strolling on beach.


It became their ususal routine to walk at beach after first rain of season. Two weeks were passed successfully and they were working on the project. Their evening passed with each other. First their meetings were thoroughly professional, being Ishita as reserved girl she barely opened with him but slowly slowly after knowing his genuineness she slowly started to open with him. Before 10 days, when they drove back towards her home to drop her, he got to knew about her that she loved rains and beaches. Immediately accepting her wish he took U-turn and took her to beach.

That day was silent for them. They didn't spoke anything only walked beside each other. He wanted to know many thing about her, about her passion, about her family but he knew might be she will misunderstood him. But after 4 days, today she finally spoke about her.

" I am little confused about you Ishita. I mean tum job bhi karte ho, tum ek artist bhi ho. How???? How you manage all things together? " he finally asked her while settling on sand.

" Actually dono. " she answered him with smile. Continue further, she said, " Actually meri Amma ek artist hai aur appa civil engineer, isliye woh bachpan se chahati thi ki main unka yeh hunar loon but sirf art se ghar nahi chalta hai na isliye appa chahate the ki main khoob padhun aur job karoon. Toh bas Amma aur appa ki wish meri wish ban gayi aur padhai aur painting meri life " she concluded about her with a smile which left him wondered on her. How easily she managed both things, it not easy to manage studies and passion in such time when our life revolves around parties and friends but at same time he knew she was different, different from everyone. It was only reason which unknowingly made him fell for her.

" Aapke ghar main kon kon hai Raman? " she asked further while eating Mumbai famous bhel.

" Meri life...khair zyada interesting nahi hai but haan hai. Meri family mein mere alaawa meri mummy, papa aur meri badi behen hai. Meri Maa housewife hai aur papa like your papa engineer hai. Simmi, meri elder sister married hai aur ek professor hai. Bas yahi hai meri life. As main Punjabi hoon, toh family solid loud hai toh bas har choti baat humare ghar mein Choti hoti hi nahi hai " his description about his crazy family made her chuckle.

They didn't realize when they started to spoke each and everything about themselves and the late evening passed in midnight. It was first time for them when she was with a man, whom she barely knew from last month. A girl who believed in keeping distance from strangers was wanted to spent her time with him and on other side smile was not leaving his lips. He rolled on bed and looked at her recent dp of Watsapp. Caressing her picture, he messaged her good night. " I am in love...Raman bhalla actually fell in love with you ms Ishita Iyyer . Ab bas mujhe us din ka wait hai jab tum bhi yahi kahogi mujhse" he said to himself with a shy smile and closed his eyes.

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8 months were already passed from their meeting. They successfully able to complete their project which made their companies and friends proud on them. With their professional life, their personal life was not less then a bliss for them. Their most of the evening started with their meetings and night ended with dropping her to her home. Sometimes on social gathering, sometimes on exhibitions and sometimes when she practice for her painting and on sketches.

His feelings was already became stronger for her on day when she told him that she never had any relationship in past. He already mat her parents twice and fate supported him that moment when her mother said that she liked her boyfriend. He still remembered her face which was red because of embarrassment and her stammering voice when she corrected her parents that he is not more then a friend for her.

" But ab main tumse confess karwa ke hi rahoonga Ishita ki main tumhare liye kya maayne rakhta hoon " He dialled her number and as expected she received his call in second ring.

" Hey watsup? "

" Nothing Raman. Next art competition ki theme ke baare mein soch rahi thi. Aap bataao, aapne kaise call kiya? "

" Umm...tumhe next weekend mere ghar par aana hai. "

" Ghar kyon???? Kya hua? "

" I knew it ki tum bhool gayi hogi. Are madam tumse maine kaha tha na ki main naya flat book karwane Wala hoon, toh woh flat book ho chuka hai "

" Congratzz Raman!!!!! I am so happy for you. Finally aapne apna dream poora kiya. Aap kitna chahate the na ki aapka khud ka ghar ho, see aapka dream pooraa hua . And don't worry main time se pehle pohoch jaaungi " she hung call with her trademark cheerful smile while he sighted, " Sapna toh mera ek aur bhi hai Ishita. Main chahata hoon ki is naye flat ko ghar tum banaao, is ghar ko aur mujhe dono ko sawaaro Ishita. Jabse tumse mila hoon mere har sapne mein ab tum bhi shaamil ho gayi ho. Ab tumhe apni zindagi mein laane se zyada main aur kuch nahi chahata hoon "

The next few days passed in jiffy for them. Ishita wholeheartedly helped him in every preparation for the pooja. Mr and Mrs Iyyer who was well aware with Raman feelings didn't stopped Ishita for helping Raman. Finally the day came when they held pooja for his home. Ishita came to his home with her Amma appa while Raman parents who were aware about Ishita special presence in their son life was eager to meet her.

Unknown to her, their parents easily mingled with each other and thumped up him for his choice. The pooja went well, slowly all guests started to left after dinner and only Iyyer and Bhalla left there. Where Ishita was busy in cleaning the house, their families were busy in finding ways to made them confess their love.

She came back from kitchen after clearing everything and the sight made her surprised. Their family members were missing from there. It was only Raman who leaned back on sofas and waiting for her.

" Are sab ghar wale kahan chale gaye? Abhi thodi der pehle toh yahi the na? "

" Haan woh mummy ko matarani ke mandir Jana tha toh uncle Aunty unhe le gaye. Bas abhi aa jaayenge "

" Oh " she whispered and sat on opposite side of sofa. Both of them were quite now. Where she was relaxing her muscles, he was thinking about the ways to initiate the conversation.

" Vaise Ishita mera gift kahan hai? Dopahar se raat hone aayi hai aur abhi tak tumne mujhe mera gift nahi diya "

" I am so sorry Raman. Ek min abhi deti hoon " she hurriedly got up from her seat and went towards the guest room of his home. Within second she came back with the big frame in her hands and forwarded towards him. He narrowed his brows on seeing this surprise as he didn't saw this with her when she came.

His eyes widened on seeing the gift from her, it was surely a best gift he could ever had. It was the same painting of lord Krishna which he saw in that art exhibition 8 months back. He tried to purchase that painting many times but every time her denial came as answer.

" Ishita Vikas ne bataya tha ki yeh painting tumhare dil ke kitne kareeb hai aur tum isko kabhi isko kisi ko nahi dogi phir aaj... "

" Tab aap mere liye ajnabi the Raman but aaj aap mere beat friend ban chuke hai, aur main jaanti hoon aap apni is dost ke tohfe ko umar bhar sahej kar rakhenge. "

" How you always manage to take care every one feelings " he said to himself and in next second his determination became more firm to confess his feelings. Thanking her for her gift he signalled her to come with him.

" Vaise tumhe poora ghar nahi dekhna? I mean set hone ke baad? "

" Ab is mein kya dekhna Raman. Poora ghar toh dekha hua hai mera "

" But still!! "

" Fine " giving up from his constant demand she opened his bedroom door. Her mouth opened on seeing the sight in front of her. His master bedroom was decorated with her photos of those 7 months which they spent. Most of the photographs was captured when she was engrossed in herself. Her next attention went towards the row of painting which she made when she was learning to paint from her Amma.

" Raman yeh sab... " she whispered unbelievably on the sudden change of events. But before she complete, he shushed her and continued by taking her hands in him.

" Ms Ishita Iyyer... today I wanted to tell you something. Please pehle sunlo " she nodded and he sat on her knees.

" Ishita main nahi janta yeh kab hua aur kaise, but yeh hua hai. Humesha se ek humsafar chahata tha apni life mein bas woh tasveer mujhe tab mili jab tumhe dekha. Jaanti ho mujhe tumse mohabbat tumhari khoobsoorti ya kisi aur baat se nahi hui balki mujhe us kalakaar se pyar hua hai jo is dil mein hai. I know I am not a perfect person, I know mujh mein kayi flaws hai but still I wanted you to held my hand, to correct me whenever I did something wrong, to complete me Ishita. Jaanta hoon ki tumhare kayi ambition hai, sapne hai jinhe tum poora karna chahati ho. Trust me Ishita main kabhi bhi tumhari kamzori nahi banoonga. Humesha tumhari taakat banoonga. Kya tum mujhe apne har sapne mein mujhe bhi ek hissa banaogi? Kya mujhe mouka dogi tumhara humsafar banne ka? " he lightly kissed her hand and offered her rose.

" Raman " this was only thing which she able to whisper
I don't know how it went but still tried to write something
I hope u all will enjoy it
Will wait for your review😳

Edited by Albeli26 - 9 years ago
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Hello friends...
Sorry for this delay. Sorry aadat se majboor hoon na 😆
Anyways lots of thanks for liking the first part of this story, hope u will like another one too. Next part will be last one.

So posting second part of TS
Kindly drop your reviews
Thank you 😳


" Ishita main nahi janta yeh kab hua aur kaise, but yeh hua hai. Humesha se ek humsafar chahata tha apni life mein bas woh tasveer mujhe tab mili jab tumhe dekha. Jaanti ho mujhe tumse mohabbat tumhari khoobsoorti ya kisi aur baat se nahi hui balki mujhe us kalakaar se pyar hua hai jo is dil mein hai. I know I am not a perfect person, I know mujh mein kayi flaws hai but still I wanted you to held my hand, to correct me whenever I did something wrong, to complete me Ishita. Jaanta hoon ki tumhare kayi ambition hai, sapne hai jinhe tum poora karna chahati ho. Trust me Ishita main kabhi bhi tumhari kamzori nahi banoonga. Humesha tumhari taakat banoonga. Kya tum mujhe apne har sapne mein mujhe bhi ek hissa banaogi? Kya mujhe mouka dogi tumhara humsafar banne ka? " he lightly kissed her hand and offered her rose.

" Raman " this was only thing which she able to whisper

" RAMAN " his dreamy trance broke by his wife sweet voice who was calling him from past 15 minutes. Wiping dust from the remaining frames he started to arrange them in small store room before going at her.

" Aap yahan kya kar rahe ho? Kabse bula rahi thi main aapko " Ishita came near him, her voice was curious wanted to know the reason behind his sudden appearence near store room.

" Haan bas aise hi " he replied slowly while glancing at the old memories again. She smiled at him and sat beside him. Leaning at his side, she kept her head on his shoulder and slowly glided her fingers on the frames the once she made giving her all time and devotion. It was not about the theme and awards it was about the dedication and hardwork with which she gave a new meaning of her imagination.

" Kya yaad karne lagi? "

" Main 17 ki thi jab yeh painting banaai thi, regional art exhibition ke liye, boards ki prep karte karte. See I won 2nd prize in it " she pointed towards the small star which made above the frame. After few seconds her gaze fell on next frame which was half wrapped in newspaper, " Are yeh abhi tak aise hai, you know this one is made by glass colors, maine Amma appa ke liye banaai thi " she cheekily said on remembering the beautiful memories which she already shared with him numerous times.

" Aur yeh yaad hai aapko jo maine humari shaadi ke first year mein banaayi thi, national art exhibition ke liye " he glanced at the big portrait which was beautiful among all of them. After lots of encouragement she painted her painting for exhibition. She recalled how much time she spent in thinking about the theme but was unable to do so. And the man who encouraged him to participate gave him the idea. She always sound enthusiasts whenever she talked about her hobbies or her achievement. It was no doubt that she is wonderful artist and she never showed proud on hwe skills or achievements. If she still loved her art then where that Ishita gone?

" Miss karti ho na yeh sab tum? " he slowly asked to her while she was busy in admiring the memories.

" No Raman...waqt ke sath sath cheezein badalti hai ab sab kuch pehle jaisa nahi raha na,ab hum sirf pati patni nahi hai balki ek choti si bacchi ke mummy papa bhi hai aur aap bhi sirf Raman Bhalla nahi, balki apni company ke general manager bhi ho ab sab itna easy thodi raha hai " she casually said and started to pack the frames which were unpacked by Raman earlier.

" But still Ishita... "

" Offo chup!!!! In sab se bhi zyada zaroori hai ek cheeze, woh hai aapka aur mera saath. Khoob saara pyar jo aap mujhse karte ho aur mujhe kya chahiye " she kissed his temple gently and kept her head on his shoulder

" Makkhan maar rahi hai madrasan? " he chuckled on her antiques and started to caress her hairs

" Jo maanna chaho maano but ya I still cherish the day when you proposed me " her memories again went to 3 years back when he forwarded his love filled hand towards her

" Kaahe ka propose, proposal lete waqt konsi ladkI chuse hue aam jaisa face banati hai aur kon bewkoof parents se permission maangta hai? Kapde khareedne nahi jaa rahi thi tum us din " he again teased her which made her frown and she kicked his foot in anger

" I was scared yaar. Aise kaise propose kiya aapne. Jaante ho dar gayi thi main. "

" Toh kya municipality se order lata ya tum kya mujhe aapne appa ki lungi mein dekhna chahati thi " they looked at each other and bursted in fits of laughter and recalled the time when he confessed his feelings to her but he witnessed complete opposite site as they expected, he saw her horrified face instead of happy face which made him shiver, " Ishita... tum theek toh ho na? "

" Raman yeh...aise achanak se kai...kaise? " she stammered while wiping the sweat which were forming on her forehead.

" I thought ki tum bhi mujhe... " he whispered dejectedly on seeing her horrified face. Before he reacted she ran from there while crying her Amma name. Soon they were in hall in front of their parents who were more tensed then Raman. Where he was tensed what will she answer while their parents were confused on seeing her teary face.

" Ishu Raman kya hua? " her Amma asked with confused face on seeing Ishita crying face and Raman clueless face.

" Amma trust me maine inko koi hint nahi diya tha but still he proposed me. Amma trust me na " she managed to said between hiccups which made their families jaw dropped.

" Kanna we know ki Raman tumko aaj propose karne Wala hai. He told us everything about his feelings towards you par tum roi kyon " her Amma cleared everything which made her eyes popped out, " Oye haan puttarji humko toh tu pehli hi dafe mein pasand aa gayi thi woh toh hum bas purpoje ja wait kar rahe the "

She stated at their families with clueless face, she herself was confused whether she should jump or cry on hearing the family revelation, " But aapne hi toh kaha tha na Amma ki you hate Punjabi's and aunty aapne bhi kaha tha ki aapko Raman ke liye Punjabi kudi chahiye phir... " she state her confusion which froze them for some seconds but made them burst in laughter in next minutes

" Are beta woh toh maine isliye kaha tha taaki yeh koi mini dress wali na utha laaye " his mother lovingly said while caressing her head. " Haan kanna that was normal Statement but Raman is nice boy and I know he will love our daughter so much " she looked at her parents who gave her assuring look and signalled her to talk Raman who might be cursing her under his breath. She moved towards Raman but he bursted out before she spoke, " It means tumko tumhare parents ki permission chahiye thi? Mujhpe trust nahi tha tumhe? Tumhe is ek saal mein mere liye kuch feel nahi hua? "

" Raman it not like that... main bas dar gayi thi "

" You nuts!!!!! Jaanti ho meri kya haalath hui in kuch minutes mein. Aur kon propose ke time Amma Appa ka sochta hai "

" Maine kaha na main dar gayi thi and moreover I always respected you " she yelled matching his tone

" Respect toh tum apne neighbours Shuklaji aur unki wife ki bhi karti ho bhai wali toh kya main tumhara bhai ho gaya "

" Raman you are a monster... I thought to confess my feeling to you, socha ki aapko bolun ki main aapse pyar karti hoon rehne do. Chalo Amma yahan se " she was about to Strom out along her Amma appa meanwhile he registered her words in his mind. He looked at his madrasan and found her going out. Taking long strides he yanked her closer through her waist which made her gasped, " Raman what "

" Ab boli ho toh jaane thodi doonga. I love you madrasan ab toh kam se kam haan bol " he whispered in her ear while their families were admiring them with aww.

" Pehle ring toh pehnaao tabhi toh lekar jaa paaoge na " she broke their moment. He composed himself and slid ring in her finger. The whole family clapped for them. Raman promised her parents he will always protect her from every problem and never became a hurdle in between her passion and her wife duties. Her parents wanted not much then the promise which Raman made. With the final nods their families finalized their wedding date which was after one and half month.

The last few days passed in blur, their each day was blissful for them. Mothers Pampers, father's love and with lots of readings from siblings her each day became like a fairy tale. Soon the auspicious day came in their life and infront of scared fire ,between holy mantras and with their parents endless blessings they tied in the nupital bond of marriage.

As he said he filled her each day with new beautiful memory with his love, care and endless pampers. Where small bickering and fightings in day helped them to knew each other more their passionate nights with love made their love and bond more stronger.

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Eight months were passed of their marriage. Their life was perfect the way she dreamt. Raman helped her in every way to balance herself between her office, home and her practice. Their families visit them often and tease her for their child which left her in blushing state always.

It was one evening when she was busy in preparing their dinner when their neighbours son came to their home and handed her letter. " Didi dekho aapka letter " 4 year little boy of their neighbours came to their home and handed her a letter. She smiled at him and gave him a chocolate to eat. In between playing with him, she forgot about the letter completely. It was a night time when they finished their and sharing their day with each other in each other arms.

" Ishita kal mujhe yaad dilana mujhe Head Office Ukraine ko ek mail bhejni hai. Boss ne yeh kaam mujhe diya hai " she nodded and again rested her head on his chest. She was about to close her eyes then suddenly something recalled to her, " Are Raman day time mein ek letter aaya tha ghar par. Woh Arhan ke saath khelne mein main bhool hi gayi " she jumped from the bed and rushed towards dining table where she kept letter earlier.

Her face color flew the next moment when she read the content in it. Her tensed and shocked face made Raman worried too. " Kya software engineer kisi ka account hack kiya kya tumne? Uska hi complaint hai na yeh " he mocked her while taking letter from her.

" Tumhara mooh kyon utra hai baba? Yeh toh acchi baar hai na? Tumhe invite mila hai National Art Exhibition mein apni entry bhejne ka. Tum kabse yahi chahati thi na "

" But who sent it? Maine toh application form bhara hi nahi tha "
" Woh maine chupke se form bhara tha " he said sheepishly which left her more surprised.

" But why baba? You know na ab kitni responsibilities hai mujhpe. Kaise karoongi main? Aur aapke khane peene ka khayal kon rakhega? Aur... "

" Are bas meri express train. Tumhare aane se pehle bhi main khana khata tha aur job bhi karta tha. Humesha toh tum rakhti hi ho na mera khayal ab agle kuch time tak apne pati ki khaatirdaari bhi lelo " she smiled on his cute gesture and peaked his cheek fondly.

" But it still not easy na. I mean only had one and half month, kaise karoongi "

" Ishita this is Christmas month yaar. Vaise bhi zyada kaam toh hota nahi hai office mein. Tumhe easily leaves mil jaayegi. Bas ab tum apne work par concentrate karo " she nodded while he peaked her lips gently.

" Vaise accha hai na practice ke waqt tumhare hands busy rahenge tumhara kaam karne mein aur mere haath mera kaam karenge " he winked at her naughtily and received smack on his shoulder.

" As he said things perfectly went the way he suggested. Aware from her talent her office easily grant her leaves and she started her work on her competition. Raman helped her in every manner the way he could. He took her all household responsibilities which left her little relieved. Whether it was making lunch or dinner or arranging home he took care of everything. Even he made eat his wife who mostly engrossed herself in books in order to search theme for her portrait. He even arranged a special Skype session withhwr teacher who was in Chennai.

She was working hard from last 25 days, she learnt new basics from her mother and her prof of university and even practiced them but she was still unable to search theme for her. It was one such evening when she was getting dressed for his friend Mihir birthday party. While dressing herself her mind was constantly thinking about the theme she has to use for her art.

" You know humari company slums children ke liye ek study campaign start kar rahi hai jismein studious bacchon ki padhaai ka kharcha humari company degi. Isn't it great Ishita? But dekho na kitni ajeeb baat hai ek taraf kuch bacchein hai jo sab kuch hote hue bhi kuch nahi karna chahaate aur ek taraf yeh. Kehne ko pankh nahi par phir bhi udne ka khwaab dekhne ki himmat aur lagan hai. I don't know why we such had a social discrimination "

Her eyes sparkled with joy on hearing her husband last line, jumping with joy she went near him abs give him a tight peak on his cheek.

" Umm you spoiled my Shirt madrasan aur ekdum kya hua "

" You gave me theme Raman. Social discrimination!!!! This will be best one according to theme they gave us " he smiled on her excitement and nodded his head. Grabbing their keys and clutch they hurriedly headed at party as she had to start work too.

Days started to blur for her, she worked hard on her portrait. After lots of thinking and discussing about the scenario she beautifully painted a group of children who achieved their dreams successfully despite of social and economical differences. Everyone compliment her for her work and with lots of prayers they submitted their entry in competition. For winning in national art exhibition she has to qualify cluster and regional levels. Though she was nervous but Raman consoled her and gave her strength.

" Thank you for becoming my strength Raman. You know I am lucky to found you " she whispered gently and kissed his hands. Whenever she recalled the moments her heart felt more proud on her husband. Packing the remaining frames she told him to come inside for tea while he again thought did she is actually happy or pretending in front of him. He followed her inside and found her chatting and jumping merrily with his mother and sister. She is the perfect example of wife, sister in law and daughter in law but where that Ishita went?? Did she lost herself???????

In evening his mother and sister went to shopping leaving their 9 years old daughter with her beloved Mami. Ananya was doing her vacation work in between playing with her little sibling Ruhi. After completing her Maths homework she told Raman to call Ishita.

" Mamu Mami ko bulaao na.. " she nudged Raman who was doing his work on laptop and taking care of Ruhi in between of work.

" Are beta Teri Mami se nahi hoga tera maths ka homework. " He yelled little loudly to made her hear.

" Aap rehne do " Ananya scolded her mama which made Ishita giggle silently. She took her in living area and handed her sketch book. " Mami please mera homework karwaao na " she pleaded in her childish tone which was enough to made her agree and soon the duo busied themselve in making sketch of non living things. It was hard for class 4 student buy with help of Ishita she managed to complete her work suceasfully. At night he saw a contented smile on her face. she was enthusiastically sharing her experience with Raman. The shine which he saw some month back was in her eyes today.

Something is amiss there but what was that?

~~ After some days ~~

It was a leisure day for Ishita. Being take off from office to spent her day with her daughter, she was doing everything with taking time. It was early evening when she put Ruhi sleep after feeding her milk and laid herself beside her. She was about to sleep for little time but her phone buzzed which made her little irritated. She checked caller I'd which showed name of her best friend Mihika.

" Hello mommwy wats up!!!! " chirped Mihika from another side

" Good and I am not your mommwy madam. "

" Yahh I know re. Bas teri yaad aayi isliye tujhe calk kiya " being best friend from childhood they were like a sole sisters for each other. Starting from their hi hello they chatted on almost every possible nonsense topic and giggled.

" Vaise Ishu how is your painting practice? Ruhi ke saath mushqil hoti hogi na "

" No re...no practice now. Ruhi, office and ghar bada hectic ho jata hai yaar "

" But Ishu you herself knew how much you loved your art phir kyon... "

" Miku sab kuch itna easy nahi hota na. You know na ruhi kitni choti hai abhi and moreover you know she was premature. Isiliye toh main aajkal kaam bhi ghar se karti hoon "

" But jiju promised you that he will took care of your likes "

" He is taking Miku but tu jaanti hai na Ruhi ke birth ke saath hi Raman ko promotion bhi mila. Woh subah se raat tak kaam karte rehte hai. Aise main unhe pareshaan nahi kar sakti na main " Mihika knew there was no point of discussing or arguing with her as she was right on her place. Soon they diverted the topic and again started to discuss random stuffs.

Unknown to her, 2 ears heard her conversation with her best friend. Though he came early to surprise his wife but something struck to his mind and he found the missing lead.


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An usual evening she opened door hoping her husband at other side but found postman who gave her an envelope of her name. Thanking him she closed door and tore envelope to read the letter. Meanwhile her husband too came from office and sat on sofa.

" Yeh letter " she exclaimed in shock while her eyes were popped out in surprise . It was her permission letter to participate in another competition which was organized under state level cultural and art fair.

" Ishita you will participate in it " he motivated his wife for nwq beginning.

" I didn't even touched brush in past 1.5 year, I can't...I can't Raman "



Edited by Albeli26 - 9 years ago
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res 3
in case I stretched it 😆
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Wow..
Awesome..
Love at first sight..
Raman not only fallen for her but also for her paitings...
Which made hime still...
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Updated part 1 on page 1
Read and enjoy
Pms will be later

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Great one dii
Soo well written
It turned out really really well
Raman totally got smitten to ishu after their 1st meeting itself
Loved ishita's character nd dedication
Continue soon
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Really Interesting
Fantastic
Update Soon
Thank You For The PM
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Hi Aarohi,
Hope u r dng good...
Congratulations on the new TS>>
It was a nice start..
IshRaRu together is always a bliss...
Raman smitten by Ishu from day one..
Her dedication & her nature is too good..
Waiting to see her reaction..
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Wonderful update, the way story started and the flashback. Ishita is such an artist; she shouldn't have left art. Waiting for result of proposal and also how Ishita gets back to painting; I am sure she will.
IshRa living in Mumbai separately. Lovely

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