||IshRa OS|| Under the Painted Sky

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello peeps !
You probably might have forgotten me as I kinda left this forum. Nevertheless I just wrote a small OS on IshRa, so posting here

Dunno how this has turned out :P. Honestly, not sure what this shot was about !

@Evil-devil - Think this as a B'day present.
@Ne - Your belated b'day present
@Criminal - Tere tenth main aane ki khushi main 😆

This is no where related to current track. Just a random shot. I happen to watch IshRa dream romance scene by mistake which also ignited me to write this.

Not proofread !
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Ishita walked up to the terrace and stood at the end of the wall looking at the deep blue mesmerizing sky. She was waiting for Raman to come home.

She stood there remembering the fight she had had with her husband in the morning

Where the hell is my file?" Raman shouted

"I had kept it on the table itself" ishita said

"But it's not here. Is it?" He asked

"No but I had kept it here only " she argued

"You're so careless ! Never do a thing properly. If I lose this deal because of you, I swear I dunno what I'll do" be warned and walked away.

Raman had kept the file in his bag the earlier day so that he wouldn't forget it after ishita had placed the file on the table and had perhaps forgotten it.
He had shouted on her for no fault of hers. He called her careless. It hurt her. Yet she was missing him. This is what probably love did !

But she loved him but she wasn't sure of his feelings. What if she confessed her feelings and he said that he thinks her as Ruhi ki ishima and nothing else. That thought scared him. She thought it was better to stay quiet rather than setting your own house on fire.

"Suicide karne Ke aur aasan tarike hai" a familiar voice came
[There are easier ways of doing suicide]

She looked up. It was Raman.

"No seriously . and tumne note choda hai na, main nahi chahta police mujhe pakad lejai ki I killed you " Raman joked.
[Have you left a suicide note, I don't want police taking me for killing you]

"Very funny" she got down

"No I'm damn serious" he replied

"Mere Marne se aapko kya milega" she asked
[What will you get by having me dead ?"]

"Sukoon milega" he said looking upto the sky

"Kuch bhi. I hate you" she hit on his arm and was about to walk away but Raman caught her hand and pulled her back. He hugged her from behind with his chin on her shoulders. His hot breath lingering over her neck

"Are you angry" he whispered

She tried to break free but he held her even more tightly.

"Are you angry?" He asked again

"Yes" she said

He slowly placed a small Peck on her right cheek and asked "Now, Are you still angry ?"

"Yaa"

He then started placing light kisses on her neck making her go crazy. She was stuck there without an escape route. She had hard time controlling her hormones. Why did he have to be so romantic ? She thought

His mouth was near her collarbone now.

"Ramann.." She moaned

"What?" He asked huskily

"I love.. you" she managed to say

He immediately let go of her. She turned to look at him. What had she spoken? Was he angry? Would he lash out on her now.? She wondered

"You what?" He stammered not able to digest what she just said

"Nothing" she tried to cover up

"Don't lie. Tell me the truth" he said coarsely

"I love you. I really love you" she said looking down at her feet

He stood there registering of what actually was going on there. He then walked towards her lifted her chin and looked deep into her hazel brown eyes and asked "Really?"

She nodded in affirmative blushing. He cupped her face and placed a soft kiss on her forehead and pulled her into a tight hug

"I love you ishita."

About an hour later, they both were lying on the ground beside each other looking at the deep blue sky their hands entwined.

"Why didn't you tell me this before?" Ishita asked

"I wasn't sure. I thought you'll tell me that this marriage was a contract"

"Why would I do that?" She asked

"Then why would you think that I would tell you that you are sirf Ruhi ki Ishima" he argued

"That's... Somethings are better unsaid " she said

"That's better" he replied

After about few awkward minutes,

"Is it just my eyes or the sky is really very blue tonight?" She asked

"No. It's really deep blue today. No stars are seen" he said

"It's really beautiful" she whispered

"Yes. It looks as though it is painted very carefully"

Just then ,they saw a shining star in the sky. The shooting star.

"Raman, quick make a wish" she eagerly called out

Both made their wish. A small wish. A small word but that word meant the world to them

Raman... She thought

Ishita... He thought

They then fell asleep in each others arms . Under the sky which looked like a painting, two souls found solace and inevitable happiness.


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P.S - No Pm's sent yet.

Manny darling, Muskaan Akku, Aarohi tai, Jum, Inshu Di, shravu Didu, Pari Dii... I missed you guys a lot. I dedicate this to you too.

Love you all

Anyways drop on your reviews, good or bad...it really means a lot.

Edited by ..Anamika129.. - 9 years ago

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RashmikaMG thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Hey Vidu baby...
Just saw ur msg.
And I'm here.
Beautiful beautiful OS.
So cute confession.
Love it.
I want to write a long comment.
Bt the problem is...
I 4got hw to write them.
All tnx to my busy and lazy lifestyle. 😔
U try to write more stories and I'll try to write long comments.
So... The deal seal karein...???
Edited by --Rashmi--- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very sweet one jst like me 😉

Thank u for this gift👏

Love u meri jaan 🤗
Edited by ..TeriDeewani.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg my sweet vidu is back again wow im so happy to see your msg wow i cant believe is that you thx a lot to now forget us dear .


Awesome it a bomb Os dear so lovely written i love it their dialogues each scene were perfect super se upar wala Os tah
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a sweet story, I loved it Viddo. Do write more pls.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its so beautiful lovly and sweet thnks for writting this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey vidya
I don't knw u remember me or not

But yeah thanks fr pm
Luv da os
Beautiful job..

Really keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS Vidya...
Both were stuck at some point without confessing..
But glad they did at the end..
Their nok-jhoks r always good...
A Nice cute love story with a neat confession..
I m glad that u wrote again in this forum...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OH MY GODDD
it was beautiful 🥳 👏

This is awesome 🤗 🤗
I thought u r tensed about ur results 😆
Edited by nitii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haiye bacchi mujhe miss nahi na kiya tune 😒
Koyi nahi😭 ... par meine toh bohot missi kiya tuzha... ittta sara🤗
How are you darling?
My kiddo is back it seems
Beautiful os dear

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