An ISHRA OS:- SECOND BEST CINDRELLA on 26 april

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discipline

@discipline

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Lovely os dear

Thanks for the pm

Beautifully written

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lakshmi

@maduragymhasium

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

beautiful update dear

love their possessiveness towards each other dear

poor mihir come in between ishra

romance in garden was so good more lovely dear

raman is raman at last make her listen what he want to say to her

kiss part was so romantic dear

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Nice OS Tanu...

So the story is abt the two people who plays hide & seek..

Both r childhood friends..

Nice FB..

Both like each other...

Fell in love but couldn't up..

Jealous is the part of their relationship..

She felt it when he went out with Richa..

He was burning when she was going with his brother Mihir..

Haha.. Such an unique couple..

But at last their aashiq won over their ego..

Nice ending..

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Cute, the crush, the first kiss, very sweet

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

An interesting OS!!!!

She is crazy about him and he then confesses at the end the he never asked Richa but wanted to ask her always!!!!!

But I was upset that he called her a s**t and did not even apologise properly and she let him get away with it - not good!!!!!!

I like it when she says that she does not want to be second best Cinderella and he says you were never second best!!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!

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Krishna priya

@KP_IshRa

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow
Such a lovely update tanu 😛
Enjoyed it a lot 😊
Thanks for pm 😃

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Lovely os

Both have a crush and want to jalofy the other

But finally ishra are Ishra...saath mein aa hi gaye

Their kiss...lovellyyy

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Akriti154

@akriti154

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Superb os tanu
luvd d jealous raman
thnxx 4 pm

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lonelyyyy

@lonelyyyy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

amazing
i also want ishu to be FIRST N LAST BEST CINDRELLA 😉
aww ishu hesitates using makeup
raman babu if u want to ask her to be ur partner then ask directly wat have u done 😲
ishu choses his bro ovr him good
raman in jealousy goes overbroad very bad
he hurts her badly
cute nok jhok bout jacket
theirs kiss aww

writr some more stories plz i really luv ur writings 😊

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Amazing OS..
Ishra met in kindergaden..
Both love each other bt didnt express.
Ishita is jealous bcs raman is going with richa n raman is jealous bcs she is going with his bro mihir...
He ws hell jealous wen she did sexy dance for mihir...lol
He confessed he lied abt richa...their first kiss..
He too wants a sexy dance..hehehe ...
Loved it!