IshRa Revival SS - 27/9/16 - Pg 12 Part -3

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Megher_Palok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

This is brilliant stuff <3

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snehaseshan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: mayasundar
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Maya thank u so much from bringing ishita's pain very well kudos👏

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Anum_says

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Brilliant..

U perfectly portrayed ishita's emotions..

Raman used really harsh words.

I hate cvs for doing this to raman's character...

But I hate him for saying all that shit to ishita..

Though I know.. He said in anger..

But I want to see Raman in guilt for his words just once..

Brilliant Awesome Update..

Update next part soonish

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peggy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Superb update continue soon 😊

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Interesting Part.😊

Ishita Emotions were Heart-Touchingly explained.😭

Even,Raman is there she thinks it was her Imagination,it was so Nice.😊

It was Nice that Raman knew how Ishita Suffered.😊

I hope Everything will be fine.😊

The Pics were so Nice.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Hi Maya ,.

Read both parts together .

Awesome yaar .

You potrayed ishita s emotions very well .

Update soon

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nahtani88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Fantastic

Update Soon

Thanks 4 The PM

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anisha960

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

superb updte
both can feel each other presence
n finally they meet
but ishita thinks to ba an illusion
its just fab
emotions of raman ishita r too beautifully portrayed
raman is guilty
n ishita just shattered
she thinks her to be a big omen
but she forgot d happiness she has given to thm

waiting for nxt

continue soon

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Akriti154

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Superb update maya
i hope raman is able to talk properly nw
continue soon

update ur other story too

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Mdwst

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

HI Maya

Finally i read it 😆

I sincerely apologize for the delay

So here we go

Perfect

Ramans lines "her last moments, his regrets for ripping her heat and wished she died contented in hang ans noose"... His regrets and guilt , his realization ...was bang on ..the best " I still cannot fine leave within myself".. His self imposed punishment ..loved adi and ramans convo.It was awesome.

So you made him see her first then her..Her hallucinations,and he mu's her as if she's ignoring him...realistic .

The best partners the way she explained herself as manhoos " I've been manhoos all my life, but never realized it until Raman pointed it out". Oh my hiw hurtful it was,,,I can imagine how low she thought of herself...how broken she was...the depth of damage he has done ..very strong and powerful line.

Mani's promise ..i liked this take,..respecting the friendship ...beautiful

When she said " even death did. It want me"... I teared up here...

Loved Ishu's lov..you justified heras to why she did not contact her family and her reason was bang on.

Loved it...can't wait for the next update.

I again apologize for,the delayed comment.

Thank you