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Ishra_g26

@Ishra_g26

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Awesome update achuu
emotional and sweet
i loved last part alot ...raman ishita ruhi moment
lovely
plz give an epilogue also plxz

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Krsna

@Krsna_PV

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

What have you done Achu!! (got your name from comments😉)
Sorry I am back to this forum after ages so most of you might not know me, I am Krishna.
About the OS

Yaar I just loved it matlab sab mil gaya mujhe ye story padh ke, aisa laga!
That day when I saw that episode when Ruhaan says aap mujhe chhod ke mat jao, I so hoped that she called her Ishima!! But pata tha humare CVs ye hone nahi denge... This story just made me cry, I could visualize and experience all just as I was a part of it!
Thank you very much Achu, I'll forever be obliged for this OS. No one knows how they are gonna mess up with our beautiful yhm and ishraru but I'll be happy reading this OS again and again.
Wo ishru scenes, Ishima ka apni Rooh ko sulana...uff!
And Ishra scene in the end... Love you baby you made all that possible, at least in a story. I so wish this was current track of yhm, but wo nahi to ye hi sahi.. Thank you 🤗

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snehaseshan

@snehaseshan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Osm.. Just loved d way ishita handed over Ruhi & went back & loved ishita's dialogues to Raman...

In the show also I want ishita to give Ruhi & go back & fight for her respect...

Edited by snehaseshan - 9 years ago

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Rinki

@IshraMiNeholic

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Dis was d superb best updte..

After leap os..

Plz updte epilogue soon..

Plz

Plzz

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Lakshmi.divan

@Lakshmi.divan

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Hi achu:-) really u have written soo beautifully... It's soo emotional n heart touching... Plz do write an epilogue also... And thanx to those who asked u to write this amazing story... And anisha:-) thanx 4 d pm...

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meenakshi

@Meenakshi_5896

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

i wish this happens in show also too good yaar.. and so emotional...love u ... big hug😊

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Mehtabsait

@Mehtabsait

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Hey super Fantafabulous. Story amazing please please pretty please continue with another part or an epilogue please please please

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Ramyasri

@Twihard18

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Wonderful OS!

I love it dear! :)

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attitudequeen17

@attitudequeen17

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Awesome update ash

beautifully written yaar
coming to os everything its just perfect ash

A hug for the starting lines yaar...

i loved the way ishita came to know abt Ruhi and tried to help her out of dat situation without letting her know

nd then aliya played a cupid between ishita and ruhi..though ruhi knoes about ishu but she dont know the real truth and when she came to know that then she told sorry for her mistake..

wow..i loved that part too

Then finally ishita rescued ruhi and that mask of ruhi that shedoesnt care an all is removed and we came to knoe that she is just innocent like when she was in her childhood

nd when she woke up ..the firsst thing she called was ishima ...

aww..

and then ishu came and assure her that she is safe and she will be always with her and that promise...she tried to her pain and her insecurities of loosing everyone

Ramans reaction when he knows that he 's two love;ly angels are alive was just too gud and that hug...i love that..then the confrontation between ishra

and i loved ishus dialogue...muaahhh

nd then both promise together to start a new lifewith their kids...

nd and

its not over yet baba

then ruhi again plaid a cubi between ishita and raman

and i loved the manng m sindoor bharne wala part...

nd it just give the perfect ending

but i want an epilogue too...

ekk free advice..u knoe what u should write often..u r a greaat writer

and i would wish that u use the prohibited words ofter so i would give u such punishment this time😉

well awesome job yar

i just loved the whole os