Ishra FF:Aye mere humsafar teaser pg 130 june 8

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hello lovelies...
I had promised an OS on ishraru to nida long ago but couldn't get the tym to pen it down n then was struggling for the title
but finally here i am
scroll down for prologue n index😉

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PROLOGUE😊
A girl around 4 years old was playing in a park when she saw a handsome man entering the building
he had a fair complexion n was clean shaven he wore black suit
she jumped in joy looking at him n ran to him hugging him "papa...aap aa gaye"
he was shocked "m not your papa beta" he tried to convince her in vain
the little girl was heart-broken n began crying which melted him he carried her in his arms n stroked her hair calming her down he bought her some chocolates but the girl refused to take them "aap mere papa ho na"
raman thought to talk to her mother "beta where do you live?"
the girl hit her forehead with her palm "home...ap ko itna bhi ni pata budhdhu papa" she giggled
raman smiled at her flashing his dimples "so will you take me home?"
"yeee" she began dancing in his arms n took him to her place
he rang the bell n when the door opened she jumped in the arms of the woman opening the door mouthing "mumma see papa is here"
n all he could utter was "ishita...she's your daughter?"

that's all for now...
waiting for your responses.


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INDEX😊

SHOT 1

SHOT 2

SHOT 3

TEASER

SHOT 4

SHOT 5

SHOT 6

TEASER

THREAD 2
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added a prologue above
have a look😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for update; nice start
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intresting prologue Raman shocked to know dat little is ishita's daughter continue soon
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Interesting prologue! Akku
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue...why that little girl called raman as papa? Update soon...
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Nyc prologue
Waiting for update
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nice prologue akku
eager to read the update

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