Song OS thon #2/2 Epilogues by Divanru on pg 144 on 19/5 - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
rida dear

lovely update

beautifully written dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

just a lovely cute love story dear

love it a lot dear

simple but cute dear

lovely more elegant dear

just loved every part in this os so much dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

ishra first meeting on bus

raman never want to leave her alone in delhi so he want to take her with him

accidently sindoor felt on ishu and raman wipe that and their eye look

toshiji misunderstood that they are married

ishu felt down by motherly love

15 days agreement

in between ishra felt for each other they love deeply

their first date with ishu past enclosure

raman hold her and said to him that she is his wife

ishu break down and raman console her

raman proposing her

toshiji accept for ishra marriage and promise of ishu to raman to marry him

simple marriage

blessed with cute kid ruhi

ruman scene

morning romance of ishra

ruhi jealous that papa give attention to her mother

overall cute marvelous update dear

finally ishra assure her by kissing that both love her so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
OS Tum Bin - Aaawww sooo saaaddd!!!😭😭
Raman getting jealous of the person with Ishita before himself!!!!😡

Old fashioned in-laws - throwing her out for being a bad omen - such a shame that these things still happen nowadays!!!!!

Having finished telling her story she tells him to go as she would not like to see him hurt as she is a bad omen!!!!
And he says: "just tell me why you don't want that I would be hurt if you are not affected ,if I m there or not ." loved that line!!!!!

He leaves her when she insists but no she is not happy that he left - she wants him to come back because she loves him so much that she feels she will die without him!!!
It's only because of Ruhi that she cannot!!!!!

Someone is knocking on the door... is that Raman?????
Please update soon!!!!!
And thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... awesome dr...
Strangersvsuddenly became hus & wife...
But finally they became trulybhus & wifeb& soulmates forveach other...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice os ridu Di
ishu's antics was sooo cute
Raman is a sweeetheart
he didn't wanna leave her alone in the city
awww I just love him
n the mu of toshiji was cute
bechara Raman ko kitna tappad mila
ishita ko accept bhi kar diya in a second
she's such a sweet mother
n abhi 😡
he misbehaved with ishu n his mom
I hate both
they're bad
n finally when toshiji get to know the truth then also she was not angry
awww I love her

meri aliyaan ki khayal rakhna dii
aur meri taraf se dheeer saaara pyaar bhi dena
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely os rida
Raman is a sweetheart
Ishu was too cute
Loved his proposal
Everything was too good
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha


Hello one more Punjabi here 😆
U r from???


nawanshahar n u??
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Posted: 9 years ago
@divanru
part 1
superb story di
raman fall in love at first sight
he even proposed her but ishita rejected his proposal
and she has a daughter😲
waiting for her past to be revealed
continue soon
thanx for pm
again i am sorry for the late comment


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Posted: 9 years ago

We are very near...

Pm-ing Wait 😉
Edited by sukanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello friends thankyou somuch for all your comments and likes in my last update of OS
Teri meri kahani .I m so sorry friends as I can't reply each of you saperately due to lack of time but believe me I had read and liked all the comments and can still count the people who hadn't like and commented on it.so its a request to the left ones ,please read and do comment
And thanks a lot for those who has already commented .I m thanking all of you together hope you people will not mind.

THANKYOU SOMUCH FRIENDS

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello friends I m back with another OS on song
" Boond Boond " suggested by my buddy
"Nishani".I know friends my last OS is incomplete ,I will complete it in following updates actually its a long update and today i don't have that much time so i m writing another one.

BOOND BOOND


A black Mercedes was running on the highway from kullu to Delhi .The owner of Bhalla group of hotels Mr Raman kumar bhalla and his PA ishita iyer were driving back to Delhi after the inaugaration of bhallas new hotel in kullu.They were driving from last 6 hours and now also 5 hours journey was left .As per the weather forecast ,there was going to be heavy snowfall in kullu ,so Raman wanted to be in Delhi before the weather get worst .They stopped in a highway dhabba to get something to stop their hunger .Ishra were having their food when it started drizzling and till they complete their food it become a heavy rain .The dhaba person stopped them that its not good to drive in this weather but The mighty RKB had never listened anyone till date .He orderef ishita to sit in the car,poor soul don't want to travel in this bad weather but what can she do ,she was his PA and her job is to obey him .

After driving for next half and hour the car suddenly stopped in the mid of road .He tried many ways but it didn't ignited ,he came out from.the car and opened the bonnet and peeped in the engine but it was of no use ,he is RKB not a car machanic ,he hits his Mercedes in anger but then also it didn't helped him .For the very first time ishita glared him and spoke
" see we reached Delhi ,that person was telling not to drive in this weather but had you ever listened to any one ,no na now what we will do in this rain in middle of road ,how we will spend night ,the whole night is yet to spend ." we will teach Delhi by 11.00" ( she said this mimicking him)she we are in Delhi ( showing the sides of road ) this is your house and this is mine ,ok bye I m going to my house you go to yours .

She was going on blabbering and cursing him when he stopped her " chup ,how much you will speak ,let me think .let me search a place to spend night ".

I- that's a huge joke ,place to spend night that to here ,in the middle of no where ,noways I m not going to come out from the car .

R- to maro usi mein .

saying so he started walking on road to get some place to get shelter.After some distance he saw a hut which was half broken but its roof was alright and somebody can seek a shelter to escape from rain .He walked back to the car and saw ishita out from the car as she was looking for him.she looked tense as she was all alone in the highway that to fully drenched in this rain.He reached to her and patted her shoulder ,at that time she was looking on the opposite direction .she got scared thinking who is there ,she turned slowly and hugged him tight finding him only.

R( angrily)- what the hell are you doing ,outside car .At first you refused to come with me and then you are here .

I- I was scared .

R- then you should wait for me .

I- I thought you actually went away .

R- are you mad ,where I can go in this rain that to by walking .

I- I thought .

R- I told you na ,don't use your mind its very little.

Ishita cursed him under her breath ,he took their bags and walked to the hut .she followed him . Till they reach the hut both were fully drenched.Raman passed ishitas bag to her and told to change ,he also went to change his cloths on the other side of hut .The hut was dark and there was no trace of light ,so to get some light they switched on the flashlights of their phones .Raman was done but ishita was still changing ,He turned to her side and saw her changing ,though she has made a curtain of her Dupatta but the thin cloth was not able to work as a wall and everything was evident through it .The light of flashlight was also helping him to see all the curves of her body .At first he turned his face and chidded himself that he is ishita ,his PA ,his friend ,his partner in crime but the man in him cannot stop .

He walked to her and reached the place where she was ,now they were face to face and she was only in her underclothes ,she crossed her arms to hide her upper body but it was not needed as his eyes were on her innocent face ,before she can spoke anything he bend and pressed his lips on her ,at first she tried to struggle but his assault was making her to loose her sanity .she was going weak on her knees ,slowly she also opened her arms and encircled them around his neck ,soon both were fighting for dominance .They were chewing eachothers lips like they were eating chocolate, soon he entered her mouth and marked his victory ,both enjoyed relishing the others flavour ,they parted for a whole and again get engrossed in their job of kissing eachother, soon both were clothless and were clinging on each other ,Raman was pleasuring her kissing each and every inch of her body ,she was also enjoying his assault and was pulling him to her.Both were lost in their world of passion ,soon he entered her and both rocked till they reach the point of escatasy.




BOOND BOOND KATRA TERA MUJHME GIRNA
AUR MUJME MUJH SE ZYADA HONA TERA

BHEEGA BHEEGA SA MUJHKO TERA TAN LAGE
AAJA TUJHKO PEELOON MAN MERA KAHE
MAON NA BACHA MUJME THODA SA BHI
DEKH TU NA BACHA TUJH MEIN BHI
JALNE LAGA GARM SAASON SE MAIN
TU PIGHALNE LAGA MUJHMEIN HI


QATRA QATRA MAIN JALOON
SHARM SE TERE MILOON
JISM TERA MAUM KA PIGHLA DOON
KARWATEIN BHI TANG HO
RAAT BHAR TU SANG HO
TERE HAR EK ANG KO SULGA DOON

They slept cuddling to eachother on the floor in the bed made of straw but were not feeling discomfort as their arms are their pillow and both were sleeping almost on eachother .

Next morning ishita woke and got embrassed looking to their state ,both were intermingled in eachother but were so comfortable as they belong to it .

Ishita POV

Shit ishu what have you done ,you were not drunk but were in your senses then also you did this blunder ,you know very well his nature ,he is a playboy having lots of girlfriends .you are the one who you to fix his dates with them then also you lost yourself to him .Now what is the future of this relation ,he will never accept you ,what to do now should I talk to him ,no no I know he will never accept me then why should I mouth anything to stoop low .I have forget this as a bad dream .

Thinking so she tried to got up before he wake but in that process raman also woke and they shared a beautiful eyelock .ishita broked the eyelock and went away to dress herself Raman ruffled his hairs and thought " shit raman what you have done .I mean no one but ishita iyer, she is your PA ,your friend and moreover she is not that type of girl yaar .shit now what will she think ,she will tell I only say that she is different from.those girls but never consider her same .should I say sorry nope she will eat me up .what to do now how can I escape from this JKR.

Not getting any answer he also got up from his placecabd dressed himself ,both didn't talked after that .it was still raining but as it was day time ,so anyhow he managed for a machenic to got his car start and they drove towards their destination .No one talked through out the way .

Raman Kumar bhalla was the elder son of Mr On prakash bhalla who own chain of hotels in all over India.After completing his studies raman also joined his father's business and started opening new hotels all over India ,he was a good person but the only bad habit he had was that he is a playboy ,he like to be with girls and girls also throw themselves on him as he was rich as well as he was having a pleasing personality.

Though he flirts with almost all the girls but ishita was different ,its not that she was ugly ,fat or tacky but she was simple and very beautiful .so beautiful that it seems if somebody will touch her she will get dirty ,she was angelic .So raman never developed bad thoughts about her but ishita was just opposite of her look .Raman was a serious business man ,he was very sincere in his work so most of the people were scared of him but ishita never feared him instead he always fears her .she just own him ,all his projects ,all his meetings ,all his tours and even his dates were also fixed by her only .she knows him inside out.

Actually deep inside ishita loves him but as she knows there is hell difference between both of them ,so she never mouths her feeling .

Some days passed now ishra relationship has changed ,raman was already dependent on her but now he was always found of her .His dates and affairs were almost stopped ,he was slowly falling for her but now they talk only if needed .A different type of awkwardness and longing ness was occurred between them ,they were always together but avoid talking with each other ,they steal glances but never had eyelock .

One such day ishita hadn't come to office and Raman was restless ,he asked to the receptionist and came to know that she will not come to office as some boy is coming to see her for marriage .Raman got more restless ,he tried to concentrate on work ,on girls ,on projects but always he ends up with the thought of her going away from him .He got up from his chair and ran to his car .Next moment he was driving towards her house.

On the other hand ishita was getting ready but was feeling very guilty ,she tried to think about the boy and his family but she always ended with Raman's thought .she was thinking that she is cheating the boy as now she don't have any think in her to give him as she has given everything to raman .she was thinking that some miracle should happen so that she could marry Raman .

She was lost in her thoughts when he entered her room seeking permission from her parents to meet her..Raman bolted the room and walked to her .she turned listening to the sound and found him standing dangerously close to her .she almost stop breathing ,he held her both shoulders and asked "why didn't you cone to office".

She was still lost ,so she didn't answered him ,he shook her and asked again " why didn't you come to office ".

I( lost)- some boy is coming to see me for marriage .

R- and you are ready for this marriage .

She was mum .
He asked again " tell me damn it you arereafy for marriage ".

I- (sadly)what else I can do ,I don't have any reason to deny.

R- ( cupping her face)- how can you do that,how dare you do that when I marked you as mine .

She looked at him without blinking her eyes ,not getting what he is talking .He didn't spoke anything but bend and captured her lips for a gentle kiss ,she closed her eyes and felt his touch .After they broke ,raman pulled her for a bone crushing hug and mouthed" don't you dare to marry anyone your are mine ,I love you ".

He was going on talking to her while she just resiprocated the hug and closed her eyes to feel his touch and his words feeling contended.

That's all for now friends ,Hope you like it .Enjoy reading and do comment .seems you people are not liking my stories as I m not getting enough comments and like .please friends I m writing this only for you so please spare a minute and hit the like buttons with your comments .

PS - it a apology to my writers ,friends don't know why but my net is bothering me a lot these days so I m bit slow in reading and dropping my comments ,please wait for me ,I will surely read and give my comments though it will be lil late .

Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago

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