Tu Meri Gal Maan Jaa: IshRa TS (Shot#4 on Pg 16) cmpltd on 31st March - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Superb story 👏
Love the update
Plz try to continue your ffs
Plz...😭
Pretty plz...😭😭
And welcome back after so long time

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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Waise pehle kuch personal baath ho jaaye?
Aap kaisi ho?
Mainae aapko holi wish bheja tha
Mila ki nahin
I missed u so much.
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Mujhe toh mail subah hi mila tha Di
Par wattpad toh pareshaan karke rakh diya
They didn't let me log in
N I was so sad sad
Acha hua aapne IF mein upload ki
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n the update was just superb
typical Maanvir style
Yeh donom JKR aur RK ek doosre ko challenge de rahi ho?
Wah kya baat hai?
Par bolna padega Di
Hamari RK na darpok nikla
Sirf attitude dikha rahi hai Ishita ko
Waise yeh dance kyun nahin karta?
Dance na karne ko itna saara bahana.
I really had hard time to control my laugh as both of them go on challenging each other
N Simmi is the devil
Bhai ko chod diya
Aur saheli ke saath nibhaayi
I loved it Simmu👏👏👏👏
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Update Soon Diii
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome update .
I was enjoying and enjoying and suddenly it ended .
I was like oops khatam ho gaya .
Beautiful update ,ishita was trying her level best to make raman dance and raman was trying his level best to escape the situation .
Waiting for next update to see who wins .
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Awesome
Update Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Glad 2 c u back here..
Update was too gud..
Lov it enjoy it also..
Updt nxt part asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
What???? Here I was hoping that one day"out of the blue" I will get an update from you from the ongoing ones n u r saying that u r not continuing that :'(
Ohh hello Punjabion ka Sirf pyar dekha hai gussa nahi naah :S
Mainu Ni pata continue those too. Time le lo jitna chahiye :(


Mood Ki band baja k update dete ho :|
But that is changed now after reading hehehe

You know you are one of a kind
You have no matc...match anywhere on is the planet.
Jo ideas apke hai n Jo jaise likhna hai nobody can even think of that.
Waise rightly said naah
Punjabian di battery charge rehndi hai 24 ghante... Ladhname k liye bhi :P

What to mention n what to not
I liked every bit of it
Muah muah muah.

Last one boli for you too so NAACHO
baari barsi khattan Gaya c
Khatt k liyaandi Kheer
Mehfil ta jachdi
Je nache Maanveer :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Eeekss..lovely awesome interesting and what not..
Update soonnn.. And plz update next part here only plzz

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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Hiii mannu di. ..
Kaise ho? ???
Aap ko bahut miss karrahi hoon. ...
Finally new story aagayi. ..
Lekin TMKBSJNS, IKNMP aur CKSAJH
Ka kya. ..hope jald next part padhne ko mile

Ab iss update ki baat karte hai.

Awesome part. ..


Ishita had heard a lot about Punjabi weddings and celebrations. She always wished to be a part of it and see if all that her Punjabi friend Simmi had told about Punjabiyaan di shaan was for real or not. Now that her very friend Simmi was getting engaged, Ishita was all excited to witness the celebration in Punjabi Style.
Oh toh ishita simmi k engagement function mein aayi hai. ..
dulhan k maa papa dono ne dance

"Ghar Aangan Ve Kone Kone
Goonj Uthi Shehnayi
Ke Naubat Dol Baje
Jab Nache Kudi Da Bhai"

Kya yaar dulhan k bhai ne toh dance karne se mana kiya. ..Mr attitude kumar. ..

Iss ki wajhe se simmi ka mood kharab hogaya.
Lekin ishita ne raman ko dance karwa k rahe gi. ..

"Simmi tu ne toh kaha tha ke Punjabi mard kabhi bhi kahin bhi bhangda kar lete hain. Par yahan toh Punjabi mard ladkiyon ki tarah moo chupa ke bhaag rahe hain" Ishita said aloud mentally poking Raman.

"Hey you! Punjabi mard ko lalkaarna matlab khatra. So just stay back. Do you get that!?" Raman snapped at her.

Hahaha teer nishane par laga


[B]And I am CHALLENGING you. Aaj rath naachke dikhao, phir decide karungi ke tum Fearless Factor ho ya Fearful Factor" Ishita challenged him.


"Mujhe challenge mat karo. Haar jaaogi" he countered.


"Uska faisla toh aaj rath hi hoga. Filhaal...wo kya kehte hain punjabi me... Tu meri gal maan jaa" Ishita applied her limited punjabi vocabulary to challenge a Punjabi guy.

Ishita raman ko nachwa kar hi rahe gi. ..
Ye madrasi. ..sherni Itni jaldi mane gi nahin

1# Mai kisise nahi darta, duniya mujhse darti hai. And 2# Mai jab naachta hoon, tab duniya mere saath naachti hai" He said in attitude.


"Yahi toh mujhe samajh nahi araha ke duniya ko apne isharon pe nachane wale aur sabko darane wale aap, aaj khud naachne se kyun dar rahe hain?" Ishita acted all innocent. She was hell bent on making him dance tonight just to bring back the smile on her friend's face.


"Maine kab kaha ke mai nahi naach raha. Mai toh aaj rath aise naachunga ke sab mere sath naachne lag jaayenge" Raman took a complete u-turn from his earlier statement all of a sudden surprising everyone.

Aaha raman ne liye U-turn. ..sahi hai
Punjabi sher ko lalkaraa hai. ..

"Lekin" Raman's voice brought a halt to Ishita's celebrations.


"Meri ek shart hai" he said.


"Kaisi shart?" Asked Simmi.


"Tumhari is Madrasi dost ko mere sath dance karna padega" Raman's statement astonished everyone.

Ye hoyi na baat. ..puttar wali baat

Mai...dance...kaise..." Ishita was startled.


In a quick movement he pulled her by her hands, placed them on his shoulders, held her by her waist and said "Aise...Baahon me baahein daalke, Ankhon se ankhein milake" He swayed as he stared into her beautiful eyes.
Ishita ka plan uss par hi bhari padh gaya

"Your bad luck Mr.Bhalla! Woh kya hai na ke mera ek resolution hai ke if I dance with a guy, he will either be my fiance or my husband. Aur unfortunately aap in donon category me nahi aate. Very sorry about it" she faked a sorry face and smartly escaped the challenge.


"Oh yeh baat hai! Toh ab kya kar sakte hain" Raman seemed upset and after a little thought added "I don't have a choice, sooo I am ready"


"Ready...for what?" Ishita was confused.


"To be your husband" he said calmly.


"What???? How???? I mean why????" Ishita blabbered flabbergasted.

Ishita ne bachane k liye baja na banaya Aur. ..
Raman bhi kuch kam nahin. ...haan kar di. .

Calm down baba. I know tum yahi chinta kar rahi hogi ke itni jaldi kaise ho paayega hai na. It's very simple. Abhi hum sagayi karlenge. Sagayi keliye kya chahye hota hai...Bas do rings na. Woh toh hain hi hamare paas. And ab Simmi ki shadi ho hi rahi hai, lage haathon hum bhi shadi karlete hain. Ek sehra extra order karna padega. Baraat ki toh tension hai hi nahi. As you said hum punjabiyon ko toh bas naachne ka bahaana chahye. Rishtedaar to aaye hi hain Simmi keliye. Unhe hi baraati bana lenge. Bas...Problem solve" he narrated the plan.
Ishita stared at him with wide mouth.


"Kya hua? Abhi bhi problem hai? Oh haan...mai samajh gaya. Tum apne jode ke bare me soch rahi ho naa. Simmi ke designer se bolke tumhare liye bhi Dulhan ka joda banwadenge. Bas mera ek hi shart hai. Mai chahta hoon ke tumhari bidaayi authentic tareeqe se Doli me bithakar ho. Theek hai na?" Raman continued.


Hahaha raman toh band baje k sath ready...
Punjabi sher ko jaga kar galti ki. .ye toh hona hi tha . 🤣

"Dance karne ke khatir kahan...Mai toh dance karne se bachne ke khatir kar raha hoon ye sab" he whispered under his breath.


Ishita happened to hear a few words like Dance...Kahan...Bachne... and she was quick to grasp what he was planning.
For your kind information Mr.Bhalla, jitni bholi mai dikhti hoon utni hoon nahi. Toh is galatfehmi me mat rehna ke mai aapki ye chaal nahi samajh rahi. And...as far as marriage is concerned...you will be the last person on Earth I would ever want to marry. So stop trying on me please" Ishita replied with a smirk.

pakda gaya raman ye hoyi na madrasi sherni wali baat. .aaise thodi na jeet ne degi. ..raman k pas koi option nahin tha wahan se Jane k. .hahaha.

Punjabi sher madrasi sherni tashan. ...aage kya modh leta dekhte hai aagle part mein. ...

Toh jaldi jaldi. .next part update ki jiye. ...


Edited by asma18 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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THANK YOU😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

You are back with a bang Maanvir and with full spirits!! Such a stress buster, this one. You reminded me of old golden days!!


Hey Umeirah!

Thnx a lot dear...ur cmnts r so flattering always

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