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@tiara9198

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Hi Prabh

So nicely written

Hot, passionate & mature update

Amazing

Superb😉😉😉

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janani

@janani_divan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Awesome update prabh baby..

I like begi billi and jkr..
ishu surprise gift is too hot to handle by raman.
Honeymoon without chamchas is great to read without any interuption.

Ha ha ha raman is scared to think about his madrasan if she come to know a unknown women in his hotel room that too in bath room.where ever he go,his thoughts was filled with his madrasan.

oh you are taking break,hope you are gud prabh baby.i agree in one point of yours,that is lack of motivation.

great break and great holidays ..enjoy your days.

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Awesome os

Loved it

Hawwt and bold

Too good

Loved the bold Ishita and the scared raman in between

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1023427

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

its so romentic well done.

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Isha Pathare

@Isha_Pathare

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Ahem ahem

For a change naughty ishu

Not bad haan ... actually it was fabulous

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Albeli26
res

Unres soon!😊

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN
Awww
Cute one
Wonderful work..

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: agm1998
That was a perfect surprise dii
Really loved it
Soo romantic and passionate
Will wait for u to b back wud ur writing eagerly

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially all the romance and glad you found it passionate! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written...👍🏼

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially the writing! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: kaa1202
It was hot Prabh..
Raman frightened of his JKR..
He is surprised & also shocked..
His JKR impressed him again...
Their Passion encounter is really nice..
Hope u have a nice break from writing Prabh..

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS! especially Raman being scared of Ishita and his surprise then shock on seeing his JKR as well as their passionate romance! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: peg_pionne
It was a great story and have a good break i think your right you really need it and you're gonna make a brilliant come back i know 😉

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the story! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: Mdwst
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Wow brilliant OS
Hot, passionate, bewitching, flirtatious, enticing, tantalizing
Loved it.. Biwi's shocking surprise.. His shuck and panic.. Then equally flirting after recognizing the beauty spots .. 😆 😉
Loved it

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially all the flirting and passionate romance as well as Ishita's surprise as well as his panic, but then flirting after seeing the beauty spots! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: -K.13-
Awee this was so romantic and adorable! I love this bold Ishita!

While I'm sad you are taking a break from writing - I totally understand! I do hope you visit the forum frequently! Good luck with school & work! ❤️

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially the the romance and the bolder Ishita in this one! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!