*Gali Me Aaj Chand Nikla* IshRa OS

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Hi All!

It's an OS again!!!


And this time it goes to two people...

Firstly it goes to the one who had initially requested me to write an OS on this song but was too AFRAID that I would turn this into a heart breaking emotional story and so asked me to write on a romantic song instead 🤣

Behna this one is for u...nt just because u suggested dis song but because der is some surprise or rather some shocks awaiting for u in this OS...
Read at ur own risk ;)šŸ˜›

Secondly I would dedicate this OS to a friend who was too AFRAID to tell me to write an OS and sent me the request through my Behna

@Roohachu this goes for u as well...

Btw guys tell me y is evryone AFRAID of me???? Am I so scary???šŸ˜•

Anyways lets discuss about that later...
Now just read the OS & tell me how it is 😳

PS: The OS credit completely goes to behna for I have stolen a lot from her for this OSšŸ˜‰

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~ Gali Me Aaj Chand Nikla ~


Raman was observing his wife from quite a while now.


She was frantically dusting the already dusted furniture, vigorously unfolding the folded clothes and folding them again, hurriedly fishing her purse for nothing in particular and strenuously re-arranging the neatly arranged pillows.


In short she was doing everything that she actually did not have to do and the pace in which she was working appeared as if she was in a hurry to catch a flight.


He knew exactly what her actions meant. She did this whenever she was seriously upset about something or deeply hurt. And she did this to hide her emotions from others.


But what she didn't realise was that in an attempt to hide her pain from others she was infact making it obvious to people around her that she has been affected by something very deeply.


He silently walked towards her.
Sensing his presence behind her she busied herself further in trying to find something...well actually nothing...in the wardorbe.


"Ishita" he whispered.


"Maine aapke sare kapde rakh diye hain suitcase me. Aur zaroori files laptop bag me rakh diye taake apko dhoondne me koi mushkil na ho. Maile kapde aur geeli towel rakhne keliye ek alag se cover rakh diya hai. Sar dard ki goli aur back pain ka balm suitcase ke samne wale pouch me rakh diya in case apko zarurat pade" she blabbered with all her attention towards the drawer and its contents.


"Ishita" he softly called out her name.


She closed the wardrobe in a jiffy and began to dust the bed yet again.


"Ishita" his voice was soft yet the tone was demanding.


"Apko kuch chahye tha Raman?" She asked while picking the cushion from the couch and re-arranging it for the hundredth time.


"Ek nazar" he paused for a few seconds before adding "Milegi kya?"

(Dialogue copied from the show PKHJND. I wish it was picturised on IshRa. They wud hv nailed it for sure)


The impact of his statement was so deep that she froze in her spot and stood like a statue with the cushion held tightly in her hands.


He held her shoulders and turned her to face him.


Here eyes were closed, head bent and body stiff. She was still not ready to face him.


He gently pulled away the cushion from her hand, made her sit on the couch and held her cheeks in his palms.


"Is chand jaise chehre pe ye udaasi achhi nahi lagti" he tried to comfort her.


That was it and all her tears she had held up until now poured like a stream on her cheeks briskly without warning.


Raman was taken aback.


"Hey" he said wiping her rapidly flowing tears and forcing her vision into him.
"In ankhon se kehdo ke badalon ki tarah na barse. Kahin mere chand ki roshni in badalon ke peeche dhundhla na pad jaye"


"Meri roshni toh aap se hai Raman. Aapke bina to mai waise hi benoor hoon" she replied in a heart wrenching tone.


"Kaisi baatein kar rahi ho Ishita. London jaa raha hun, space me nahi. Aur phir mai hamesha keliye thodi na jaa raha hun. Sirf 15 din ki hi toh baat hai" he said.


"Chand bhi toh 15 din keliye hi jaata hai na Raman. Par phir bhi raath uski roshni ko tarasti rehti hai" she was ready with a reply.


"Chand toh jaata hai par apne peeche sitaare chod jaata hai taaki rath ki khoobsurati bani rahe. Mai bhi apne sitare Adi aur Ruhi tumhare paas chodke jaa raha hoon" he replied in a soothing tone.


"Sitaare toh hote hain Raman. Aur rath unhe apni aghosh me panaah bhi de deti hai. Par Chand ki judayi ka dukh itna gehra hota hai ke gham ka badal chaaron taraf andhera banke chaa jata hai" she spoke sadly almost at the verge of crying.


"Kaisi baatein kar rahi ho Ishita?" He began to give up on seeing her not budging to his comforting words.


"Sach hi toh keh rahi hun Raman. Aap khud bhi toh dekh rahe hain k aaj ki raat me sirf ek Chand ke naa hone se aasmaan kitna adhoora adhoora sa lag raha hai" she pointed towards the dark night sky and indirectly conveyed to him that she would feel incomplete in his absence.


"Ishitaaa...tum aisi baatein karogi toh kaise chalega. Mai jaa hi nahi paaunga. Aisa mat karo please" he begged holding her cheeks firmly in his palms.


"Mai aisa jaanboojh ke nahi kar rahi hun aur mai aisa karna bhi nahi chahti. Par pata nahi kyun? Pehli baar hum itne dinon tak door rahenge" She hid herself in his chest and whispered "I will miss you Raman"


"I will miss you too" he whispered back while he captured her in his arms.


Finding momentary solace in each other's arms they parted after a few minutes.


"Ab airport chalein? Flight ka time ho raha hai" he reminded.


"Mai nahi aarahi airport" she pouted.


"Kyun?" He asked.


"Bas aise hi" she replied sadly.


"Achha...samajh gaya. Theek hai. Chodne keliye na sahi, par lene keliye aana hoga" he commanded.


"Hmmm"


"Oh toh ab madam hmmm mode pe agayi. Chalo khair mai tumhare hmmm mode se bahar nikalne ka intezar karunga aur tum Chand ke aane ka intezaar karna. Waada hai mera tumse ke jis rath falaq par Chand hoga, us rath tera Chand tere sath hoga"


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She stood in the balcony, her gaze shifting from her phone to the sky every few seconds.


If anyone was to ask her, she probably would not be able to decide what she awaited more, the arrival of moon or the arrival of his message.


Finally giving rest to her wandering eyes, a tiny curve appeared on the night sky which turned her lips into huge curve.


Her fingers immediately tapped on his name on the message screen
"Chand toh aa gaya. Aap kahan rehgaye Raman😭" she sent reminding him of the promise he made before leaving.


"Samjho ke mai bhi aa hi gaya. Flight board karliya. Ab bas 8 ghante aur. Phir wo Chand aur ye Chand dono tumhare sath honge 😃" his reply made her smile grow wider.


Her WhatsApp status now read 'Gali Me Aaj Chand Nikla!!!😳'


Tum Aaye Toh Aaya Mujhe Yaad
Gali Me Aaj Chand Nikla



"Mummyji, Papaji, Simmi, Romi...Raman ne flight board karliya" she chirpily announced it to everybody gathered in the living room.


"Chalo shukar hai. Warna mujhe laga tha ke ab uski flight subah hi take off hogi" Mr.Bhalla said.


"Kitna thak gaya hoga mera puttar. Subah se airport me baitha hai. Beda gark ho un flight walon ka jisne itni der tak rukaye rakha" Mummyji lamented.


"Mummyji weather ki wajah se delay hua tha flight. Airlines walon ne toh passengers ki safety keliye hi unhe rukaye rakha na" Ishita said.


"Khair jo bhi hai, ab toh mera puttar ghar araha hai. Ab sare chetti chetti so jao. Warna phir 2 baje aankh nahi khulegi" Toshiji instructed.


"Haan chalo sab" Mr.Bhalla left his seat and marched to his bedroom.


"Mumma Chand toh aaj asmaan me nikla hai, par aapko nahi lagta uski Chandni aaj hamare ghar me khil rahi hai?" Simmi said out of the blue.


"Hain??? Kya bol rahi hai? Kidhar hai chand ki chandni?" Toshiji was confused.


Ishita too began to search for traces of moonlight inside the house.


"Arey apko nahi dikhayi de raha? Wo dekho apke bahu pe chehre pe kaise chandni khili hai" Simmi leaned on Toshiji and pointed towrds Ishita.


"Kuch bhi" Ishita blushed gloriously.


"Ae gal toh tune bilkul sahi ki. Jab se Raman gaya hai tab se iske chehre ka rang hi ud gaya tha. Na jaane kitne dinon ke baad ye nikhar dekhne ko mila hai" Toshiji caressed Ishita's hair & broke her knuckles at her temple.


Jaane Kitne Dinon Ke Baad
Gali Me Aaj Chand Nikla



"Mummyji aap bhi?" Ishita reprimanded shyly.


"Aaye haaye dekho toh zara kaise nayi naveli dulhan ki tarah sharma rahi hai" Simmi nudged Ishita through her elbow.


Ishita bit her lips.


"Ishita puttar ab tu bhi jaa so jaa. Tu thaki hui hogi" Toshiji said.


"Nahi Mummyji, aap log so jaiye. 2 baje sabko jagana bhi toh hai. Isliye mai abhi nahi soungi, aap log so jaiye" she expressed her wish to stay awake.


"Theek hai puttar. Jaisa tujhe theek lage" Toshiji agreed and left to sleep.


"Abhi so jaati baadme toh tujhe jaagna hi hai" Simmi winked naughtily and teased Ishita before she went to her bedroom.


"Sab log mujhe kitna tease kar rahe hain. Pata nahi ab Raman jab aayenge toh phir kya haal hoga mera" Ishita spoke to herself as she sat on the couch in her bedroom, the same couch were they had their last conversation before Raman left to London.


"Kitna miss kiya maine apko Raman. Sirf 15 din keliye door gaye the aap par aise laga jaise 15 mahinon se apko nahi dekha ho. God I miss you so much" she spoke to his picture on her phone screen.


"Dekho na aapne mera kya haal banake rakha hai! 2 bachhon ki Maa hoon par teenager ki tarah behave kar rahi hoon. Paithyam" she smacked the back of her head as she remembered how she had spent the 15 days without him.


Her WhatsApp status would change everyday.


#Day 1

'15 days...consoling my heart in 50 ways' her status read 1 hour after his departure. She missed him already and the countdown from 15 to 1 had begun.



#Day 2

'14vin ka Chand ho...' she had written in her status gazing at the night sky which reminded her of his promise.



#Day 3

'13 karun gin gin gin intezaar...' her status changed as she counted every hour and every minute to his return.



#Day 4

She had tried her best to keep herself busy and not miss him but all her attempts turned futile.

Her heart ached for him and she wrote '12 din...tere bin'



#Day 5

She had thought it would get easier with time...but with time she missed him more.

Her status changed to '11 days more...sabr nahi hota aur'



#Day 6

She thought of cleaning the shelves and drawers of her cupboard to keep herself occupied, there she found the Sorry card that he had made for her when she had fractured her hand.

She lovingly caressed it reminisced how she fell for his antics first and finally fell in love with him.

'10 bahane karke le gaya dil...' she wrote.



#Day 7

He had been busy throughout the day in meetings and conferences.

He had promised her a video call that night but when he said he was too tired and wanted to catch some sleep, she adamantly wrote '9 (Nau)...I want you now' in her status.

He perfectly understood what she meant, he smiled imagining a cute pout on her face & all his tiredness disappeared into thin air.

The very next moment her phone buzzed with a video call notification.



#Day 8

"Tumhe toh koi kaam dhanda hai nahi. Mai yahan dinbhar thak haarke raat ko aake WhatsApp check karta hun toh kya dekhne ko milta hai? Ye faltu status messages. Free ho iska matlab ye nahi ke aapne sade mood se sabko pakao. Abhi 8 din hain mujhe aane me. Koi kaam dhoondlo in 8 dinon keliye" he always hid his emotions behind his taunts.

Although the message she just received was full of taunts she knew exactly how he felt.

"Dhoondliya kaam" she replied.

"Woh kya?" he asked.

"Status check karošŸ˜‰" she said.

There he saw '8 letter word 'INTEZAAR'

"Sudhrogi nahi na" he said.

"Aap hi ke sangat ka asar hai" she gave back.

"I miss u too" he finally gave up.



#Day 9

He had secretly contacted her colleagues and made them plan a staff picnic. He thought it was a good idea keep her mind diverted.

When her colleagues asked her to join them she plainly refused.

"Mujhe nahi jaana Raman" she said when he pestered her to go.

"Jab dekho tab mujhe pareshan karti rehti ho ke kahin ghoomne lekar nahi jaate. Ab mouqa mil raha hai toh jaana nahi chahti. Tumhe to ghoomna pasand hai na" he tried to convince her.

"Mujhe ghoomna pasand hai lekin..."

"Lekin kya?"

'Agar tum (7) Sath ho' she replied through her status.



#Day 10

'6 days to go...ab aa bhi jaao' her status read on the 9th day.



#Day 11

She woke up with a startle late in the night. She had a nightmare and immediately called up Raman.
"Aap kahan ho Raman? Aap theek ho na?"

"Ishita mai bilkul theek hoon. India me toh abhi aadhi raat hai. Is waqt tumne ye poochne keliye call kiya?"

"Raman mujhe bahut dar laga raha hai. Maine ek bahut bura sapna dekha. Please aa jao wapas. Please Raman" she pleaded.

"Ishitaaa...calm down. Mai bilkul theek hoon. Mujhe kuch nahi hua hai" he comforted her.

"Mujhe kuch nahi pata. Aap bas aajao" she argued.

"Abhi nahi aa sakta hoon mai. Ye last ke 5 din bahut crucial hain. Samjho please" he tried to convince her.

"Aap safe rahoge na Raman?" Her fear was evident in her tone.

"Mai chota bachha thodi na hoon. Aur waise bhi tumhari duaein toh hain mere sath 24 ghante bodyguard ki tarah mujhe protect karte hue. Toh mujhe kya hona hai" he lightened the situation, spoke some comforting words and asked her to go back to sleep.

She knew she was acting silly yet she could not help being worried fo him.

She silently prayed 'Din reh gaye 5 (paanch)...aaye na koi tujhpe aanch'



#Day 12

After that nightmare the wait seemed longer to her. Her condition was exactly like her status 'Lambi judaayi...4 dinonda...'



#Day 13

He had demanded for IshRuAdi selfie.

The three put on a sad face and clicked a selfie that went into her DP along with the status '3 idiots waiting for the fourthšŸ˜•šŸ˜”'



#Day 14

She had been waiting for his call. He was stuck with some clients.

She decided to hear some songs on the FM. Co-incidentally the first line she heard described her present condition.

She immediately copied the lines into her status 'Zindagi 2 pal ki...Intezaar kab tak hum karenge bhala'



#Day 15

This was going to be the last day without him yet the most difficult one. Her anxiety, impatience and desire kept growing.

'Bas 1 pal...' she said to herself.



#Today

She ran around making arrangements for his welcome. She cooked all his favourite veg dishes and got Mummyji & Neelu to make his non-veg faves.

He was to reach Delhi by 6 pm. Unfortunately his flight was delayed due to adverse weather conditions.

Her heart sank when he informed her that the flight was indefinitely postponed.

She whined reminding him of the promise he made.

"Bas ek baar jo maine commitment kardi toh apne aap ki bhi nahi sunta" he went all filmy.

"Aapke ye filmy dialogues rehne dijiye Raman. Flight udegi hi nahi toh aap aaoge kaise?" She was all grumpy.

"Uski fikar tum mat karo. Tum bas Chand ke aane ka intezaar karo. Chand ke aane ke saath saath mere aane ka intezaam bhi ho hi jayega" the confidence in his tone kind of assured her that he was definitely going to fulfil his promise.

Since then she was in the balcony waiting for the moon to appear.
Probably God could not see them yearning for each other like this and so He decided to shower his mercy on them.

And Lo! as Raman predicted, on one side appeared the crescent moon and on the other side Raman's flight was ready to take off.


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She felt a tap on her shoulder followed by Toshiji's voice "Ishita puttar...Uth jaa...Do baj gaye"


"Haan" she woke up with a startle and realised that she had drifted off to sleep unknowingly.


"Hey Bhagwan! Mai so kaise gayi? Mai toh jaag rahi thi" she worriedly spoke.


"Subah se tu eddar uddar bhaag rahi thi. Thakaan se aankh lag gayi hogi" Toshiji replied calmly.


"Par mai so kaise gayi mummyji. Wo bhi itni der tak. Agar subah meri aankh hi nahi khulti toh kya hota" she held her forehead cursing herself for having slept.


Aaj Ki Rath Jo Mai So Jaati
Aankh Khuli Subah Ho Jaati



"Tu itni pareshan kyun ho rahi hai puttar? Kuch nahi hua hai" Toshiji tried to explain.


"Mai itni laparwaah kaise ho sakti hun Mummyji. Maine hi apko kaha tha mai sabko jagaungi. Agar aap nahi jaagti aur hum sab sote hi rehte toh koi bhi Raman ko lene airport nahi jaa paata. Sab bigad jaata" she blabbered.


Mai Toh Ho Jaati Bas Barbaad



"Kuch nahi bigadta. Raman London se Delhi tak akela aa raha hai. Airport se ghar tak akele aana kounsi badi baat hai. Airport pe toh taxi bhi aram se mil jaati hai. Aur waise bhi ab toh mai jaag gayi na aur tujhd bhi jaga diya. Isliye ye sab sochna chod aur jaake tayyar ho jaa. Mai sabko jagati hun" Toshiji said.


"Theek hai Mummyji" she nodded her head.


"Aur haan puttar, jane se pehle ek kaam kardena"


"Ji Mummyji boliye"


"Tune Raman ki saari favourite cheezon ki tayyari toh kardi, ab Raman ki sabse favourite cheez ko tayyat karde" Toshiji instructed.


"Sab toh tayyar kardiya maine. Kuch reh gaya kya?" Ishita was unable to comprehend.


"Haan reh toh gaya, woh bhi sabse zaroori cheez" Toshiji smiled knowingly.


"Woh kya?" Ishita asked.


"Tu" Toshiji said and blew a kiss to Ishita.


"Kya Mummyji aap bhi" Ishita blushed.


"Jitna tu usse milne ko bechain hai na, woh bhi utna hi bechain hoga. Isliye khud ko achhe se tayyar kar. Kyunki khane se toh sirf uska pet bharega, dil toh tujhe dekh ke hi bharega na" Toshiji explained.


Ishita casted her eyes down shyly and fiddled with her pallu.


"Bina sajawat ke hi kitni soni lag rahi hai meri bahu. Jab tayyar hoke niklegi toh mera puttar toh dekhte hi rehjaana hai ke aaj gali me nikle chand ki chandni zyada khoobsurat hai ya uske biwi ke chehre ka nikhar"

Gali Me Aaj Chand Nikla



"Ab jaa chetti se tayyar hojaa" Toshiji said and went down to wake up the others.

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Lagta hai IF mujhse Dushmani nikal rahi hai ke maine use dagha deke Wattpad ka rasta pakad liya...😭

Isiliye jab bhi mai yahan OS post karne aati hun toh woh mere update ko ek baar toh uda deti hai aur dusri baar dil pe patthar rakh ke mere update ko qubool kar leti haišŸ˜›

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Keeping Toshiji's words in her mind she decided to wear the best outfit she had.


Her hand automatically reached to a blue colour saree. As she began to pull it out she remembered one of their conversations when they were heading to a party.


~Flashback~

"Tum aaj party me ye pehennewali ho?" He asked looking at the saree placed on the bed.


"Apko pasand nahi aayi?" She asked.


"Nahi aayi. Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisine table pe ink ki sheeshi khuli rakh di ho aur galti se saree pe girgaya ho" he mocked.


"Par blue toh apka favourite colour hai na Raman" she argued.


"Blue mera favourite hai toh kya tum har party me ink pot banke ghoomogi?" He countered.


"Hadd hai. Ek toh aapki pasand ka khayal rakh ke tayyar ho, phir upar se aapke taane suno. Aapko khush karne ki sochna hi bekar hai" she was annoyed.


"Ab moo mat phulao. Koi aur saree nikal lo. Humein der ho rahi hai party keliye"


"Mai nahi nikal rahi koi aur saree. Ab mai soch sochke koi doosri saree nikalungi aur aap usme bhi koi kami dhoond nikalenge. Isliye aap khud hi nikal ke de dijiye" she folded her arms across her chest.


Raman opened her side of the wardrobe and roughly moved one saree after the other.


"Idhar aao" he commanded.


"Kya hai?" She didn't move an inch from her place.


"Kaha na idhar aao. Mera dimag mat khaao yaar" he spoke irritated.


She stomped disinterestedly towards him.


"Ye dekho" he pointed towards her sarees.


"Kya?" She asked.


"Tumhe kuch dikhayi nahi de raha? Ye kya hai? Tumne ujala ke chaar boond ki jagah poori bottle undel di thi kya apne kapdon par? Har saree ki colour blue hai" he chided.


"Aapko pasand hai blue isliye jab bhi koi saree khareedne jaati hun toh bas blue hi pasand aati hai mujhe" she admitted.


"Tumhe green colour pasand hai toh kya mai roz karela banta phirta hoon?" He asked.


"Suits you...kadva karela" she put her tongue out teasing him.


"Karela ka chilka toh tumhe pasand hai. Toh kadva karela tum hui na" he gave back.


"Toh phir ink pot aur aaya naya ujala, chaar boondon wala bhi aap hi hue" she fought.


He locked his arms behind her neck and said "Madrasan kitni baar tujhe kaha hai, tu jaisi hai waisi hi mujhe pasand hai. Kisi keliye khud ko mat badal. Itni si baat is bheje me nahi ghusti kya?" He smacked her forehead.


"Maine aapke rang me rangna chaha toh kya galat kiya?" She argued with a cute pout.


"Mujhe achha lagta hai jab tum mere rang me rangti ho. Par iska ye matlab nahi ke tum apne rang ko tyaag kar mere rang me rango. Mai kabhi nahi chahunga ke meri pehchan banane keliye, apni pehchan ko kho do. Tum jaisi bhi ho meri ho. Samjhi?" He hit her forehead with hers.


"Haan. Achhe se" she said completely understanding what he meant.


"Baat agar achhe se samajh aayi hai toh ab jaao aur tayyar hojao"


"Par raman. The problem remains the same na. Mere paas tob saare blue sarees hi hain na"


"Ye tumhari problem hai meri nahi" he smirked and proceeded towards the washroom.


"Hawww...Kaise ho aap? Itna bada lecture sunaya aur ab mujhe akela chodke khud tayyar hone chal diye" she threw her hands in air.


"Ishita mere laptop bag me ek file rakhi hai use nikalke samne rakh do please" he yelled from the washroom.


"Hadd hai. Matlabi aadmi. Sirf khud ki padi hai. Ye toh bol diya ke blue mat pehno. Ab kya pehnun ye toh batate hue jaate. Ravan kumar" she blabbered while unzipping his laptop bag.


To her surprise she found a pretty green saree with pink border. Green her favourite & pink her daughter's.


Yet it wasn't the colours that mattered. What mattered was his gesture and his thoughtfulness.


And it was not the matter of the clothes she chose or wore either, it was something entirely different.


She was chosen for a research programme by the Dental Association. She had always wanted to be a part of this programme. And here it came for her but it came at a time when Raman had planned a vacation for them.


For her Raman was the priority and so she had decided to back off from the programme.


Raman knew that if he had tried to convince her directly, she would have argued and wouldn't have paid heed to his words.


So he chose this trick to convince her. That was the beauty of their relationship; he would never tell her anything directly and she would know what he meant. They knew each other in and out.


~End of Flashback~


She smiled at the memory. She pulled out that green saree "Aaj toh mai yahi pehnungi" she said to herself and began draping herself in Kapde ki thaan.


She sat at the dressing table making her hair. Having done with the hair, she reached for the Kajal that had remained untouched for the last 15 days.


"Jis din rumhe rona ho aur is baat ko sabse chupana ho, us din Kajal mat lagana" he had once said wiping the smudges of Kajal below her eyelashes "Kyunki ye Kajal ke daag is baat ki gawahi dete hain ke tum royi ho"


She knew pretty well that in these 15 days her eyes would cloud yearning for his glimpse and they would pour like unseasonal monsoon.


Ye Naina Bin Kajal Tarse
Barah Mahine Badal Barse



She felt a warm tear drop on her cheek and realised that she was crying.


"Ab kyun ro rahi ho Ishita? Ab toh Rab ne tumhari faryaad sun li hai. Chand ke nikalne ke sath hi tumhare Raman bhi nikle hain. Ab kuch hi lamhon me woh tumhare sath honge" she said to her reflection in the mirror.


Suni Rab Ne Meri Faryaad
Gali me Aaj Chand Nikla

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Her eyes remained fixed at the arrivals gate.


The flight had landed 20 minutes ago. In a hurry she had left her phone at home, so Raman called on Mr. Bhalla's cell informing of his arrival and asking if they had reached the airport. Mr. Bhalla informed him that they were already at the gate waiting for him.


After a long wait of about half an hour, he walked out elegantly with his luggage.


The moment her eyes spotted him, a chill ran through her spine, her heart came to a halt, her breath hitched and her limbs turned cold.
Medically this condition would be termed as mortem which in common language is called death.

[CENETR] Maine Tumko Aate Dekha [/CENTER]
Apni Jaan Ko Jaate Dekha



"Papa" Ruhi ran to her dad brushing past through Ishita.
That slight push brought Ishita out of her current state and she realised Raman had been scanning her through his eyes.


As if compensating for the lost breath and the heartbeats, her breath quickened and heart began beating faster. The admiration and longing in his eyes seeped through her skin bringing a warm blush on her cheeks and in the process making her palms sweat.


Her present condition was exactly opposite to what she felt moments ago.


She could not fathom the reason for this sudden transformation in her body language.


Raman was surrounded by Adi, Ruhi, Toshiji and Mr.Bhalla. The anxious kids were asking him about the places he visited and the gifts he got for them, the concerned mother was enquiring about his health and the doting father wanted to know about the progress of his business deals.
Raman answered to their queries briefly but not for a moment did his eyes leave her.


He wanted to capture her in the closest hug ever and she too wanted to be engulfed in his warmth.


She had imagined herself running towards him like its shown in the movies but nothing of that sort happened.


"Hi" he said to her.


"Hi" she whispered back to him.


For reasons unknown, they were acting like complete strangers.


She had been waiting for this moment, but it was kind of awkward when it really happened.


They did not exchange any word other than 'Hi'.
He quirked his eyebrows at her and received a few nervous smiles from her in response.


He decided to wait until they reached home. He would deal with her in privacy he thought.


"Mai fresh hoke aata hoon" he said as soon as they reached home.


He was expecting her to walk behind him to the room.


"Mai khaana garam karleti hoon" she said to his dismay.


"Flight me khaa liya tha" he said.


"Toh kya hua? Wo khana thodi na ghar ka khana jaisa hoga. Aur Ishita ne kitni hasrat se banaya hai saara khana tere liye. Thoda sa chak toh le" his mother intervened.


Before he could open his mouth in resistance, she was already in the kitchen.


He realised it was no use arguing with them now and so silently left for his room.


"Kya kar rahi hai Ishita! Kya hogaya hai tujhe! Raman se bhaag kyun rahi hai" she mentally chided herself for acting silly around him.


"Kya kya sochke rakha tha ke jab Raman ayenge to aisa karungi, waisa karungi. Ab kuch bhi yaad kyun nahi hai?" She asked herself.


Jaane Phir Kya Huaa Nahi Yaad


She instructed Neelu to serve him dinner and went to put Ruhi and Adi back to sleep who had been hovering around his suitcase wanting to know what their father had got for them.


"Papa abhi bahut thake hue hain na, ab unhe khana khaake rest karne do. Aapke gifts subah dekh lena" she made them understand.


He was disappointed to not find her at the dining table.


All the efforts she had put in to prepare his favourite dishes went in vain as the delicious food appeared tasteless to him without her sight.


He quickly finished his dinner and went to his kids' room.


They were already asleep and there was no trace of his wife there.


He knew where to find her and she was exactly where he had expected her to be.


She was in the balcony gazing at the moon with a content smile.


He looked at the beautiful crescent moon and then at his wife. He was not able to decide who was more beautiful.


He placed his left arm on her right shoulder.


She sensed the touch and her smile grew wider.


"Ai Chand meri Chand ko aisi nazar se na dekho
Ke kahin use teri nazar na lag jaaye" he recited addressing the moon on the sky.


"Us Chand ki nazar mujhe kya lagegi
Jo Chand mere Chand ke aane ki khabar le aayi hai" she replied in an equally poetic style.


Gali Me Aaj Chand Nikla


"Toh phir us Chand ko nihaarna chod do, aur mujhe apne Chand ko nihaarne do" he said.


She silently obeyed and turned to face him.


They looked at each other to their heart's content. Raman pulled her into his arms and she clasped her arms around him.


"I missed you" he said.


"I missed you too" she whispered.


"Ye toh poori duniya jaanta hai ke tumne mujhe kitna miss kiya" he teased.


"Kuch bhi! Newspaper kr headlines me aaya tha kya jo duniya ko pata chalega?" She argued.


"Nahi tumhare WhatsApp status pe aaya tha. Aaj ke zamane me log utna newspaper ke headlines nahi padte jitna WhatsApp ki status padhte hain" he said.


She bit her lip not finding words to counter him.


For some time they stared at each other silently reminiscing the days they spent without each other.


They would have probably stayed like that till dawn if Raman's naughty mind had not interrupted him.


"Haan theek hai" he said suddenly.


"Kya theek hai?" She asked.


"Tumhe uski awaz sunayi nahi di?" He acted all innocent.


"Kiski awaz aur kya kaha?" She was baffled as there was no one around them.


"Arey wo wahan" he pointed towards a direction.


"Kahan?" She tried to spot that someone in the direction he pointed.


"Wahan koi nahi hai Raman" she stated.


"Arey hai na. Theek se dekho. Aur usi ne kaha" he said.


"Kisne kaha Raman?" She asked sternly.


"Chand Ne Kuch Kaha
Raat Ne Kuch Suna" he sang one of his favourite songs from the movie Dil Toh Pagal Hai, pointing at the moon.


She rolled her eyes at him and began to leave the balcony.


He pulled her holding her wrist and making her crash into his chest.
"Tu Bhi Sun Bekhabar" he hugged her from back.


Traced his finger seductively through her arms and sang "Pyar Kar...oho ho...Pyar Kar"


She stifled a laugh and pushed him away "Pyar toh mai aapse pehle se hi karti hoon. Aaj thodi na kuch naya hua hai" she acted all innocent although she knew what he meant "Aap bahut thak gaye honge. Jaiye so jaiye"


"Tumse na kuch expect karna hi bekar hai" he scoffed. "Isse achha toh London me hi reh jaata. Kam se kam ye sochke toh khush ho leta ke meri biwi mujhe yaad kar rahi hai. Yahan toh biwi ko khadar hi nahi hai" he blabbered.


She laughed at his antics when he turned back.


He waited for her to respond. On seeing that his emotional blackmailing had no effect on her, he gave up and began to leave.


"Aayi Hai Chandni
Mujhse Kehne Yahi" he heard her sing.


She turned him around, hugged his right arm and looking at the moon sang
"Aayi Hai Chandni
Mujhse Kehne Yahi
Mere Gali Mere Ghar"


She then pleaded him through her eyes while singing
"Pyar Kar...oho ho...Pyar Kar"


Raman did not waste another second before lifting her in his arms to compensate for the nights he stayed without her.


Two stars gathered above the crescent moon forming a smiley on the sky. It appeared like the sky was happily smiling at them.



~ Gali Me Aaj Chand Nikla!!! ~




Edited by maanvir - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Omg Omg Omg Omg

Mannu di aap aagaye

Yayyy 🄳 🄳


gali mein aaj chand nikla

Sach mein hamara chand. .hum nazar aagaya. ...
Kab tak chupa rehta. ..
I'm sooo happyyy
Ur back mannu di. ..
Missed u sooo muchhh
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
res from me
bas hope karo ki unres bhi ho
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Superb OS based on the moon...šŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Diii
Kya bolun main?
It was just beautiful
Actually pehli baar kisine mereliye aisa kuch kiya hai
I was surprised when I got ur PM
Then when I saw this n get to know that it was a dedication for me along with Pankhuri Diii I was sooo happy.
I was not afraid of U k?
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Ab mein update ke baare mein kya bolun?
Woh toh itna cute tha mei aankhon mein aasu aagayi
Itne saare emotions ek saath
Mujhe toh laga ki main ek real family dekh rahi hoon
Jahan pe nanad apni bhabhi ko tease kar rahi hai
MIL care for her all children
Aur Babies r always there to cheer their parents
N finally hamari hero n heroine unki toh baath hi math karo
I lived each n every moment in this story with Ishra
Aur kya bolun kya bolun?
Meri paas toh hamesha worda ki shortage hai
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Aap hi ke story se kuch copy karke hamne kuch likha par kaisa hai yeh toh pata nahin
Just bear with me
Aur koi option bhi nahin haišŸ˜›
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Bin chaand ke aasman ki tarah
Bin tere adhoore hai hum
Jaise chaand iss aasman ko
Poori karti hoona
Bilkul ussi tarah poori
karo tum hame bhi
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Diii kya likha hai kaisa likha yeh toh nahin pata
Bass itna pata hai ki aapne jo aaj mereliye kiya woh aaj tak kisine nahi kiya
N I love u sooo much
Aapne ruladiya mujhko😭😊
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Same same comment
I copy pasted it.
Too lazy to type today
Will give another comment tomorrow😳
Sowwwy Deedu😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
beautiful OS dear
I m speechless
Loved every word of this OS
Specially Her Whatsapp Status

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