Ishra ts- Teri yaad saath hai last part on pg 62 added on Mar 28

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: Ramya.DivAn
Di, the teaser is just too shocking!
Update soon!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: sririt
Fearful Teaser.

Don't worry everything will be alright

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#263

Originally posted by: usaonly
RAKSHA it is a big twist what is going on. Please continue dear. 👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: rufana10
interesting teaser
Dr.rahil's wife's name is also ishu!
looking forward to ishra meeting...
update soon di...

Will update soon ruf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: nafnaf
Hey Raksha yeh kya huwa - total confusion hi confusion hogaya!!!😕😕
Please update soon and clear the confusion!!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!!!🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: anisha960
soo teasing
dr wife also ishu
confusing
continue soon

I know its confusing

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#267

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Is it a teaser or shocker.
Dr. Rahil's patient is his wife? N she is ishu?
N ishu is Ishita??
Ayyyooo I m so caaannnfffuuussseeeddd

Hehehe, soon ur all confusion will be solved

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#268

Originally posted by: fSharm
Wat dr.rahil's wife's name is ishu...
Confusion yar.. Update soon..

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#269

Originally posted by: Prayosha.DivAn

Hiii Di...

I know I become LATE LATIF nowadays...So sorry for that...

But I am here to COMPENSATE for it...

It was Friday.like every Friday today also Raman's battalion was out for camping in mid of the jungle.they lite the camp fire,and singing and dancing around the fire.food was being cooked in a corner.everyone was busy in enjoying while there was a person sitting in the corner,his eyes were closed,lost in his own world.as if he wanna be alone or may be he was,left alone.

He was Raman hai na...

His battalion saw him sitting alone and said- Raman,come and enjoy with us.why u always sit in a corner.

Raman- no,I am fine here.I seems to like this loneliness.

His friends- ohho,what u r telling.none like loneliness.

Raman- no yaar,I like this .I can feel her in this loneliness. When she see I am alone ,she slowly comes to me and hide in my embrace.she wipes my tears and smile looking at me,making me fell in love with her all over again.

Yes...He was Raman only...
Awww My Raman is so alone...he was feeling alone...without her...You know shat...Jab bhi mai yeh story padhti hoo...muje Ghajani ka last scene & lyrics yaad aati hai...
But I don't want Ishita to be ghost...or roaming soul...

Listening his words everyone stop their work and goes to him.they all make a round around him and asked-we have always listen that u loved someone.

Raman- I didn't loved someone but I love her and will always love her.

His friends- OK ,u still love her but tell us today if u love her so much then why u guys r not together. Did she love someone else.

Yes...he did not love...but loves & will love...

Raman- no,she loves me only,alot .actually more then words can describe. He said smiling.

Then...where is she!!!!!

One of his friends- so what went wrong. Why u guys r separated. Tell us naa.we wanna know.

Friend2-yes we wanna know .please tell us but from the beginning. How u guys met,fell in love everything.

Everyone start saying him please,please.

Yehhh...So now Raman will tell his & hers love story...

Raman- OK,OK.I will tell u guys everything about her.to start with,her name,ishita ,ishita iyer.my jhansi ki rani.he smiled remembering her.

Ohhh Jhansi ki Rani...

Raman- yes ,she is my jhansi ki rani.always ready to fight with anyone for me.and u know what she use to call me,buddhu kumar.I love her more every time she call me that.u know she is the most beautiful, most prettiest and most shaitan ( naughty) girl in the world.he said dreamingly.

Wow...Love story of Budhdhu Kumar & Jhansi ki Rani...nice combo...

Raman- we met on the road for the first time.I was back in Delhi after completing my MBA.one day I was driving my car when I saw a biker snatched a man's bag and ride away.I chased the bike and at last I pushed the bike a little and it skid.I immediately came outside my car and held the biker's hand.that time she said,leave me.its paining.I left her hand instantly and she removed her helmet and shake her long hair and I was lost,lost in her beauty.

He did his MBA...then whay was he there...in battalion...

& Ishita was riding bike...wow...very cool...

Ishita- u injured me,I am going to complain against u to appa.she said crying with her big saucer eyes.she was looking like a cute kid who is going to complain about him to her dad.

Awww She is tooo cute...

Old man- actually she is not thief but ishita iyer,daughter of police commissioner vishwanathan iyer.I am her caretaker and its a kind of hobby of her.we use to do it every now and then.I walk on the road and she use to snatch my bag.its our kind of adventure.

My God...they were playing like that...hum bhi chor police khelte the...par aise nahi...

Her kaku hold her hand and was taking her to hospital while she turn to Raman and said giving him a flying kiss- bye ,buddhu Kumar.

Raman ruffled his hair and smiled like an idiot.

Awww she is really cute...& Raman lost his heart...

Raman- it had been twenty five days since I met her.I enquired everything about her.she is a medical student. Only child of his parent,her mom died when she was too young and her kaku take care of her since then.her appa loved her alot and she was a complete spoilt brat.I mean she was not I'll mannered but very notorious. I use to follow her every now and then.I use to love her more and more since the time was passing.her every action look very cute and innocent to me.at last I couldn't take it anymore and went to my mom .I told her everything about ishita and tell her to ask her appa for our marriage.

Are waah...Love marriage ...jo mom ko Arrange karani hai...

Raman and his family was sitting in her house talking with appa when she came with tray in her hand wearing a blue and pink kanjeevaram saree.her long hair were tied in a bun and gajra was adding glow to her beauty.she kept the tray and sat down silently which is very unlike of her.Raman was amazed with her silence.he thought she is not happy with this marriage.toshi ji and Mr bhalla was too happy seeing her.she was exactly the same like they wanted.

Are waah... she came as typical madrasi...

Ishita stand up and unpinned her pallu.Raman was not understanding what she is doing .she took out her saree, pulled her gajra.now her hair was all free ,she was wearing a pink top with a blue Capri.

Ishita- this is real me Raman.I don't wanna cheat u.I am a modern ,crazy girl.I am not a behaved iyer girl.I am not a simple girl but a very naughty one.I go to parties.

Haaye...she told him every thing...but she did not know...that...Raman knew about her already & loved her too...

Ishita look at his cute expression,smiled a little,circled her arms around him and said- I am ready to marry u my buddhu Kumar.

Did she also love him????

Ishita- listen everyone very carefully.I am police commissioner's daughter.and if anybody touch him,I am warning ,u guys will be landed in jail forever. Just leave from Jere,everyone and including u.she said signalling towards the girl.

Yeh hui kuch jhansi ki rani wali baat...with tongue like sword...

Raman- she told naa,she will always save me.yes she did that only that day.she saved me,and our family but I couldn't save her.

What happened to her... 😭

But I did not understand what happened that day...she played prank then what...How did she saved him..???? They both were in different hotel or in same...& Ishita played prank so that Raman would go out of hotel ????

Dr Rahil- because Allah miya want to see her alive.if he want her to die,she could have died that day.but no she fought all odds and still alive ,that means someone is there who is not letting her go.if god can't break that connection then how can I.and she is not in coma completely.she can hear ,see and feel.she just need a touch of her special one and I am sure ,she will be alright.till then I will keep her sound and safe.saying so he look at her.

A lone tear escaped her eyes thinking about her special one,her Raman.

Ohhh That made me tear Up...

Yeah...soon her special one will be with her...to sooth her pain...

Thanks piyu at last u commented

Yes ishu was a complete prankster

Raman fell in love with ishu at first sight

But on the day of marriage they got separated

Will continue soon to let u know how they will meet again

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#270

Author's note- before updating this part ,I wanna thank all my readers for 115+ likes.love u all for liking this story so much and secondly I wanna inform that the coming week is very busy for me,so the updates may not be regular,pardon me for that.here is the next part.

PART 2

Nurse- u r so good doc.u r taking care of her as she is ur relative.

Rahil-humanity is the most important relationship which we all share.and if the bond of love is so strong between two that even god can't break, then we must protect that love.I am doing this for her and her beloved.I am sure one day he will come to her.

Nurse- but where she met u.I mean how u got her.

Rahil- i met her two years ago.when I went to Delhi with my wife ishrat.it was some days before my sister's wedding.we were gone for finalising a hotel for her wedding .saying so hr started narrating.

Flashback

Rahil and his wife ishrat,were in their car,waiting for the signal to turn green when ishrat said- Rahil,look at her.

Rahil look at the direction and saw a girl in bridal attire ,standing in front of a hotel and talking on the phone smiling .

Rahil- she is beautiful naa.

Ishrat- and very cute too.shakal se hi kitni shaitan lag rahi hai.I am sure she is busy in teasing someone. (She is looking too naughty).she said smiling.

Rahil- for the first time I am seeing a girl is praising another one.he said teasingly.

Ishrat- nothing like that rahil.but this girl caught my eye,she is very cute,innocent and beautiful. Seems today is her wedding. May be in this hotel only.

Rahil- then what she is doing here.

Ishrat-i told u naa she is teasing someone.I can read her expression.

Rahil- yes,why not.after all u r a psychiatrist.they were talking and laughing when the blast took place.the building collapse within few second in front of their eyes and the girl standing there ,was thrown away due to the blast.

Rahil and his wife came out of the car and ran to her.they pick her and saw her head was injured badly as she banged with a rock.she was bleeding terribly.

Ishrat- hello,can u hear me.she said shaking her.

She open her eyes and said with great difficulty- please save me,my buddhu will die without me.please don't let me die.saying so she fainted. Ishrat check her pulse .

Ishrat- rahil,she is alive.let's take her to hospital.

They pick her and took to their hospital as they can't go inside the city due to the blast.

When they reach the hospital, they started treating her,as rahil was neurosurgeon. He saved her but she slip in coma.after that he started treating her,slowly she started recovering but not fully.she can listen ,see and feel but can't talk, walk or do anything.

Flashback end

Rahil- from that day ,I and ishu r busy in in keeping her alive ,for her love,her buddhu.

Nurse- buddhu?did her buddhu ever come.did u guys found him.

Rahil- no ,but we tried our level best to find any information about her.but couldn't get as the hotel was destroyed.we r just waiting for him to come.I am sure one day he will come.

Nurse- strange ,u guys don't know her but still u r doing so much for her.all I can say is love is above all religion.humanity is the most important relationship ever shared.

Rahil- may be we r indebted to her.or may be someday she will also save us in some way.saying so he look at her.tears were flowing from her eyes.

Rahil goes to her and wipe her tears.

Rahil- don't cry .one day ur buddhu will surely come.see its time to meet ur friend.saying so he pushed her bed near the window so that she can look at the moon.

Rahil- I don't know why u look at the moon everyday like this.but I am sure there is some connection.this moon is like ur friend only.

Ishita was looking continuously at the moon.she remember their moment together.

Flashback

Raman and ishita were sitting in his garden under the sky hand in hand.

Raman- I have to go to London for two days .I have some work there.

Ishita- u will go without me.noways take me along ,I will miss u.

Raman- no baby,we r not married.and I will be busy in my work. U will be bored.

Ishita- u will not miss me naa.that's why u r not ready to take me along.she said with a pout.

Raman- nothing like that jaan.

Ishita- no,its like that only.u r going far away from me and u r unaffected. U don't love me anymore.

Raman- we will not be far.u and I will be under the same sky and will see at the moon at same time.then we can feel.each other with us.

Ishita-what rubbish,I am not going to do anything like that.I will just call u and shout ,buddhu Kumar come to me.I love u and missing u badly.

Raman- but if we ever go out of reach we can try this.

Ishita- shut up my buddhu ,we will never go out of reach of each other.understood.

Raman- understood ma'am.

Ishita- good,now compensate for the days I have to live without u.she said pulling him closer.

Raman- ishu,its garden.

Ishita- uff,mere sharmile Kumar(my shy Kumar) saying so she pulled him and claimed his lips fully.

Flashback end

Ishita- (st)where r u my buddhu.u r taking so much of time.u have to compensate for every day,every hour,every minute,every second I lived without u.waiting for u.come to me soon. I can't take this loneliness anymore.she thought looking at the moon.

On the other hand,Raman was looking at the moon.tears r flowing from his eyes.

Raman- see jaan,we don't want to but our destiny made us out of reach of each other.but I am sure,u were also looking at the sky and thinking at me this time.I am ready to compensate for every second we lived apart.just come to me once.I can't live without u anymore.

Some days later, Raman got a call that some terrorist have attacked an area in NCR .they have to go and rescue the civilians. And a lady ,on whom they have tied a bomb.

Raman goes to the area with his team.the terrorists have been arrested but the area was still under high alert .all were scared as a bomb was tied on a lady.

Raman get out of the jeep with his team when rahil ran to him and said folding his hand- please save her,my wife.terrorists have tied the bomb on her.save her,she is seven months pregnant. Please save my wife and child.he was crying.

Raman- please don't fold ur hand.its our duty to save her.I promise u,we will save her.saying so he was going when rahil said- please save my wife,my ishu.

Raman turned hearing the name.he came to him and asked-what did u say.ur ishu.

Rahil- yes my ishu,my ishrat.save her please.

Raman- I promise I will not let anything happen to her.ishu promise.saying so he went to the place where a lady in salwar suit was seating and crying bitterly.

Raman goes to her.

Ishrat- please save me and my child.

Raman- relax ishrat,stop crying.I will save u.just trust me and close ur eyes.

She did that and Raman resume his work.everyone was looking at them almost stopping their breath.there was a complete pin drop silence.after sometime he successfully diffused the bomb and everyone sighed in relief.rahil came to her and hugged her tight.both cried hugging each other.rahil kissed her numerous time .

Raman saw this and smiled.

Rahil come to him and hugged him tight.

Rahil- thanks for saving my wife,my life.

Raman- that's my duty.I think I should get going.saying so he was going when rahil said- ur hand got injured.come with me.I will bandage ur wound.

Raman look at his hand and said- its a small wound.it will be fine soon.let me go.

Ishrat- please come with us.u saved me,let me do this much for u.

Raman smiled and said- OK.he signalled him team to go back while he went to their house with them.

As soon as he entered their house,he felt something connected to the place.he closed his eyes like feeling her fragrance.

On the other hand,she opened her eyes trying to feel something.she tried to move her hand to get up but couldn't.

Raman- who else live in this house.

Rahil- just me and my wife.why u asked.

Raman- nothing ,I just felt something. May be I am wrong.

Rahil- come let me bandage ur wound.

Ishrat- let me bring some refreshments for u.

Rahil made him sit and started cleaning his wound.

Rahil- can I ask u something.

Raman who was trying to figure out why he is feeling her near him said- hmm.

Rahil- why u turned hearing ishu's name and u said ishu promise.

Raman- because I too have a ishu.my ishu,my love,my jaan.he said looking around.

Ishrat came with the tray and serve them tea.

Ishrat- can I ask why u r so sad then talking about her.

Raman- coz I lost her.he said with unshed tears.

They look at each other and said- oh we r sorry.can we ask what happened to her.

Raman- I couldn't save her.I lost my baby.but I knew she is somewhere safe and sound .I will find her very soon.I will find my ishu.he said almost crying.

They felt bad hearing his words.

Rahil pressed his shoulder and said- I am sure ur ishu must be safe and sound somewhere.u will find her very soon.after all u save many life's,someone must have saved urs.

Raman- yes I am sure,someone must have saved mine.and about this job ,I do.its all because of her only.

Rahil- I didn't get u.

Raman- u know I was very scared of crackers and its sound.I use to hide in my room when someone fire a cracker.she use to call me fattu(coward) and laugh on me. And I use to say ,I am not scared of crackers.where as she was hell bend to prove me wrong. So for proving that I am scared of crackers ,she filled the form of military bomb squad.can u believe she did that just to tease me and make me confess that I am indeed a coward.but she was like that only,a complete shaitan.whose naughtiness filled my life with happiness,but i lost her.I didn't know about it.I got a interview letter after I lost her. I was living aimlessly, that interview letter give me an aim to live.I thought may be I couldn't save her but will save others from any blast.

Rahil- u loose her in a blast.

Raman- yes. A blast where she saved me but I couldn't.

Ishrat- its so strange.a man who was scared of crackers, is now handling bombs.

Raman- its nothing strange.it just,I was afraid to die when she was with me.but now I don't afraid of dying,as I am all alone.he said sobbing.

Raman look at his watch and said- I think I should go now. Its getting late.

Rahil- bye,but we will pray to the almighty to make u meet ur ishu.saying so he hugged Raman.he too reciprocated the hug.

Raman was going out with rahil but turned to look around.he can feel she is around while on the other hand,she was trying hard to get up and shout as she can feel him near to her.

Raman came out of the house with rahil.

Rahil- shall I drop u somewhere.

Raman- no I can go myself.thanks for taking me to ur house.I felt good in ur house.

Rahil- u can come to us anytime. They were talking when Raman felt that his wallet in not with him.

Raman- I think my wallet fell somewhere.can u please look for it.

Rahil- yes sure.they start searching for his wallet.

On the other hand,ishrat saw his wallet and pick it.she opened it and saw ishita's pic in it.she was shocked to know that Raman is her buddhu who they were searching for last two years.she ran outside.

Raman and rahil was searching the wallet when ishrat came running to them holding her stomach,she was breathing heavily.rahil saw her running and said- ishu why u r running like this.

She came to them,hold Raman's hand and start taking him inside the house.

Rahil and Raman was stunned at her behavior.

Raman- what happened, where u r taking me.

Ishrat didn't say anything,just took him.inside the house,take her upstairs and stand in front of a room.rahil was following them also.

Ishrat open the door and said panting heavily- ur ishu.

Raman look at the direction and saw her laying on the bed.some machines where attached to her.her eyes were open and she was also looking at him.

Raman- ishita,ish.my ishita.he said trying to understand that what he is looking at ,is real not a dream.

He started walking towards her slowly, as it was more like a dream.he don't wanna break the beautiful dream.she was looking at him ,pleading through eyes to come to her.

Raman came and touch her face.wiped her tears, she close her eyes feeling his touch after ages. He pick her and hugged her tight and cried bitterly. Tears were flowing from her eyes too.

Ishrat too cried and kept her head on rahil's chest.he wounded his arms around her and said- I think we should go.they need some time together alone.

He cried,cried and cried hugging her tight.after sometime he broke the hug and join his forehead with her.

Raman- my ishita,my jaan.I knew u r alright.glad I found u.

Main pyaar te wadh tainu pyaar karaan

Tainu sajde sohne lakh waar karaan

Ishita was trying hard to move her hand to touch him but couldn't do.he kissed her forehead lovingly. She close her eyes feeling his touch.a tear fell from the corner of her eyes.he bend and kissed it.then her closed eyes,her nose ,her cheeks and then he kissed her every features on her face.she was trying hard to move her hand while he was busy in kissing her face lovingly and with longingness .at last he kissed her lips. She wasn't responding but trying hard to respond.he wasn't paying any attention that she wasn't kissing him back and he was overwhelmed that he actually found her.at last she slowly move her lips and sucked his lips very slowly.he look at her and broke the kiss.he brought his forehead near her lips.she very slowly planted a kiss on his forehead. He smiled and rubbed his lips on her neck.she tilted her neck a bit giving him more space.he showered wet kisses on her neck.she close her eyes feeling heavenly. She tried to move her hand and at last she moved it and wiped his tears which was flowing freely since they met.she nodded shaking her neck slowly saying not to cry.he kissed her forehead again and hugged her tight hiding her in his chest.

Main pyaar se wadh tainu pyaar karaan

Tainu sajde sohne lakh waar karaan

Jeye din nu tu keh de ke raat mahi

Nii main raat samajh aitbaar karaan

Main tere liye duniya nu chaddeya

Tere layi dur apne karee

Ke main tainu kinna channiya

Eh gal tere soch toh pare

That's all for now.will wait for ur responses.

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago