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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

Updated the story guyz...
Enjoy reading and leave your lovely feedback...😳

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zeny_Nian

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Posted: 9 years ago

i hate you for ending it this abruptly!!

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Balasri

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Posted: 9 years ago

Short and sweet both have feelings for each other bt as ishu accepted to get married to Abhi Raman is angry and jealous loved ishita's childish antics for eating a chocolate and bechara raman's reaction on seeing dat unkowingly ishita toh raman ki sane mind ki band baja di so ishu wants to dance with her lover she prefers to think Raman as her lover rather than Abhi dat shws it all yaar lovely update bt u stopped it

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gunmu

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Posted: 9 years ago

what??????? how could the song end!!!!!!!

cute piece, but small update

pls give another part for this pls

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zeny_Nian

i hate you for ending it this abruptly!!

Awe...you hate me 😔

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zeny_Nian

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Awe...you hate me 😔

you're a devil ...u knw u cant get a ishra fan aise high n dry n just leave...i want more

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zeny_Nian

you're a devil ...u knw u cant get a ishra fan aise high n dry n just leave...i want more

But I'd have written all dirty things if I wouldn't have stopped there 😆

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JENI

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Posted: 9 years ago

You are too much yaa😭😭😊😊😆😆😆...

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Sushma

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Posted: 9 years ago

hahaha nice!

now give a epilogue

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 9 years ago

how do you find such titles for the story😛

gosh...song over at very wrong tym😆

thnks fr pm

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