ISHRA FF YE KAISA MOHABBAT HAI part 14 pg 144 may 3

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Krishna priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: mayasundar
Hi Sanjana,
Sorry to ask but after reading both parts and the teaser it looks like your story is dealing with domestic violence on both sides is this the plot of your story.

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Sorry friend if I hurt you but It is not domestic violence Raman is very possessive husband ,he has fear that he may loss his wife once again that's why he is behaving like that

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#102

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN
Interesting teaser

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#103

Originally posted by: Divanru
Interesting teaser .
So raman possessive husband

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Sanjana_IshRa

Sorry friend if I hurt you but It is not domestic violence Raman is very possessive husband ,he has fear that he may loss his wife once again that's why he is behaving like that

Thanks for comment friend 😛

Hi Sanjana,

You did not hurt me. I was just wondering what is the theme of your story because there is only a slight difference between possessiveness and domestic violence so that is why I asked because I was not sure which side of the coin your story was dealing with.

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#105

Interesting teaser😃

Can't wait to read the next part😃

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Originally posted by: 9900
Interesting teaser😃
Can't wait to read the next part😃

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Krishna priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Hi friends

thanks for all your comments

here is the part3

In the police station

police officer:iska matlab aap ka damad aap ka beti par hath utha raha hai

(it means your son in law is beating your daughter)Mr iyer:nehi,meri damad meri beti par hath nehi utaya bas usko uske sath aapne ghar le gayi hai

(No,he is not beating her,he takes my daughter along with him)

police officer:toh yeh domestic violence case kaise hota hai

(this is not the case of domestic violence)

Mr iyer: arey kaise nehi hota vo meru beti ko zabardasti le gaya tha(

(he taken my daughter with him forcefully)

police officer: phir aap ja kar aap ka beti ko Lana agar vo compliant karegi toh hum case file karenge

(then you go and bring your daughter here,if she complaints against his husband then we will take case)

Mr iyer:arey inspector sab vo nehi bejega meri beti ko

(He will not sent my daughter with me)

police:tek hai phir hum aap ke sath chal kar investigate karunga

(OK we will go together and I will investigate the case)

with that both leaves to bhalla house

In IshRa Room[BR
Raman grabs ishita to bedroom and throws her into the bed,and quickly closes the door

Ishita sees towards Raman and realises that he is coming towards her,without waiting a second she move from the bed and tries to go outside of the room,but Raman grabs her by wrist and pins her to the door and says

Raman:Bahut bhag chuki ho tum mujhse abh bas...Kaha bhag rahi ho tum ,ha...Tum abh mujhse kahi bhag nehi bhag paogi,abh mein ek minute keliye bhi mujhse for nehi janedunga

(you tried very much to run away from me, but not now,where you want to go...you can't run away from me now because I will not leave you for a single minute

Ishita: Raman please..

Raman: Ssh...Beech mein math bolna ,mujhe acha nehi lagta jab koyi Beech mein toke,toh my darling wife, chup chap khadi raho abh tak Bahut bol diya tum ne mein ne bhi Bahut kuch sunliya aur tum ne Bahut kuch kiya mein ne Bahut kuch sehen kiya,abh mein bolunga tum sunpgi

(Ssh...,Don't talk in middle, I don't like when someone interrupt s me ,so my darling wife, stand silently, up to now you talked so much and I accepted so much and I also listened so much, you did so much and I accepted that silently but now I will talk you will listen)

Ishita listens silently

Raman:kya bolna chahiti ho tum, ye bologi ki tum mujhe kaise doka dena chahiti ho, ya ye bologi ki tum mujhse Bahut nafarat karete ho

(you what you want to say about, how you fooled me ? Or how you are hating me

Ishita: Raman ye tha aap ka ghussa ki karan ,lekin aap Jo soch raha hai vo sach nehi hai

(so Raman this is the reason for your angry,but you are misunderstanding me this not like that what you are thinking)

Raman:toh abh tum pura kahani badal dogi ,hai na

(so now you want to change all story)

Ishita: kya story Raman ,mein Jo bol rahi ho vo sach hai

(This is not story Raman this is the truth)

Raman: Mujhe math sikaov mein bacha nehi ho ,ki tumhar meti meti batho mein aa jao

(don't tell anything to me, I am not a small kid that I will come to you for your sweet words)

Ishita :pehele mujhe chodo

Raman increases his grip

Ishita anger raises, with that she throws Raman back due to the force he fall down on the floor

Due to pain Raman shouts at Ishita kya kathi ho yar itna jhor se taka diya pet tut gaya mera

(what you are eating yar ,you throwed me very hardly,my back broked yar)

meanwhile Raman phone rings

it's from mihir

Raman: ha mihir bol

mihir:Raman Bahut ghad bhad ho gayi hai

(something happened Raman)

Raman: kya huwa bol ,tum itna pateshan kyu hu

(what happened mihir ,why are you sounding very tensed)

mihir: iyer uncle ne tum par domestic violence ka case lagaya ,aur vo police officer ko lekar tumhara ghar aa raha hai

(iyer uncle files a case against you in the charge of domestic violence ,he already left to your house along with the police officer)

Raman: kya

(What)

mihir:ha Raman ,mein abhi police station aaya that tod sa kam se ,mein aapne aanko se dekha aur kano se suna

(ha Raman ,I came to police station for some work, and I saw that with my eyes and listens with my ears

Raman mutters slowly, case vo nehi mujhe karna chahiye that pathi ko torcher karne ki vaja se

(case have to filed by me against them for torchering her husband)

mihir:Raman kuch bola tum ne
[R](Raman you said something)

Raman: No nothing I will take care of that and thanks for saying mihir

with that Raman cuts the call

Ishita:kouna hairaman(who is that Raman)by geeting up from the floor

tumhara appa ka problem kya hai mujhe meri kam karne se rokta rehata hai ,mujhe disturb karne ke lava vuske pas koyi aur kam nehi hai kya

(what is your father's problem,why he is not allowing to do my work,he don't have any other work other than disturbing me

Ishita:kyu aisa kya kiya meri appa ne

(What he did)

Raman:tumhara appa ne meri upar domestic violence ka case lagaya tha vunhe kya pata yaha victim tum nehi Mein hu

(your father cased against me in the charge of domestic violence,they don't know about that victim is not you but it's me

Ishita:toh abh

(so now)

Raman:Toh abh kya,vun logo ko bolo Ki Mein ne tumko kuch nehi kiya aur Mein ne tum par kabhi hath nehi utaya tha

(So what,means say them I did not do anything to you,and I not beated you

Ishita:tek hai tum jaisa bol Mein vaisa hi kahunga lekin ek Sharat par,tum ye mana hai Ki Mein ne tumhe koyi doka nehi diya

(ok ,I will say whatever you said to me,but I have condition that you have to trust the thing about me that I never fooled you

Raman:nehi

(No)

Ishita:Toh Mein bhi nehi bolthi Ho tum ko

(so I will say No to you now

Raman:nehi matlab kya ,Mein ne tumhe kab Mara ,(Raman says angrily)

(when I beated you that you are saying no to me)

Ishita: aap meri bath nehi Mann raha hai toh iss ghar Mein nehi rahunga,toh Mein meri appa ka sath dunga,iss keliye mujhe karna pade Vo sab Mein karunga

(you are not listing my truth na then I will not stay in this house,for that I will say what my appa says,for that what much is needed that much I will do)Raman anger raises

he grabs her by her waist towards him and there is no gab between them to pass an air also ,there faches are very close

Raman:Tumhara ye appa ka Ghana Ghana bandh karado aur meri bath dyan se suno

(stop talking about your fathe and listen to me very carefully)Ishita sees towards Raman's eyesRaman :Tumhara pas doh options hai ,ruhi ya tumhara appa dono mein ek ko chuna hoga,agar tum roohi ko chuna toh tumhara samane doh sharate hai ,pehle tumhe har tarike se ishita raman kumar bhalla banake rehna hai dusra iss ghar ke bahar nehi jana hai agar gaya toh mera sath hi jana hai

(Raman :you have two options,choose between your appa and ruhi,if you choose ruhi,you have two conditions,firstly you have to become raman kumar bhalla's wife in all senses,secondly ,you can't go out from the house if you went out it will be with me)

Ishita :matlab mein apni clinic bhi nehi jaa sakti

(means i will not go for clinic also )

Raman :ha bilkul

(yes exactly !)

Ishita : Ye sab kyu kar raha ho tum

(Why are you doing this for me )

Raman:kyunki mere lawa tumhe koyi aur dekna mujhe pasand nehi hai

(because I don't likewhen, any other person will be seeing you other than me)

Ishita stares at Raman with tears in her eyes

Raman:Abh tum tumhara aanke pocho aur ye drama bandh kar doh

(Now stop your crying and the drama)

Ishita:lekin tum ne shadi karte waqt ye sab nehi kaha na

(you don't said anything like that at the time of our marriage)

Raman:Bas, mujhe tum se argue karn ke koyi shok nehi hai ,Mein jitna kaha hai utna kejiye

(ssh... I don't want to argue with you now,Do what I said)

Ishita:kyu karna hai aur ye kaise sharate hai Ki har tareki se tumhara biwi baneke rehan hai ,tumhara dictionary Mein biwi ka matlab ye hai Ki biwi KO vuska pathi ka kani peni ka dyan rakna hai aur vuska kapadhe doh kar press arna hai aur vuski bachi ka dyan rakna hai aur vus ka parivar ka kyal rakna hai ,iss Ki lawa biwi ka koyi kam nehi hai ,kya tumhara hisab se biwi aapni pathi se pyar pane ki hakdar nehi hai,ya vusko aapne tarike se jeene ka hak nehi hai

(Why I have to listen to you ha,what is the meaning of wife in your dictionary that is she made to do household things,she don't deserve any love from his husband,even she don't have right to live her life according to her wish)

Raman:dekh Ishita mujhe Jo kuch bhi kehna tha Vo Mein ne keh Diya ,baki tumhara marzi

(What I have to tell I already said to you so it's your wish to do anything about this matter)

with that Raman leaves

to be continued...

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Edited by Sanjana_IshRa - 9 years ago