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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: jaya1867
Superb update
loved it
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: lalibhaskar
Good one
Loved shravu going to raman
How nicely they have bonded
Ishita on her feet
Family happy for them
Finally they became husband wife in true sense
Does the last line means ishita came to know everything
Pls update next part soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: mayraa
Awesome update Di👍🏼
Both became one😳in all sense

I'm confuse is ishu got her memory back????

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium
fabulous update dear

love it so much dear

shravu started waliking on his knees and ishu send him picture was cute dear

when raman see the picture his excitement was fabulous dear

ishra bet over whom shravu love most was cute lovely dear

ishu fake cry and raman and shravu hug and their selfie was fabulous dear

i am more than that happy ishu started walking dear

family happiest and emotional moments was superb dear

ishra sing songs and make shravu sleep ( that whole part in bedroom with caring love and slight romance with kiss and trio lovely bond was fabulous ever dear just love so much of this part ) dear

romance of ishra so hot and romantic dear

why raman confused by her answer dear

hope everything is fine and ishra together always dear

precap is good

continue soon dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: ajuswa19pm
awww so romatic n cute part!😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
Awesome update sis😃
I know am late😊don't get angry

thank you it ok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Yay you're back. So happy, hope everything is fine with you. Ok coming to our dil ka rishtha 😉 12,13 both parts are really good. Raman taking care of ishu and shravu. Hmm Mani soul helped Raman a lot. And their nok jhoks were really nice. Shravu Raman Kumar bhalla yeh kaisa naam yaar 😆 hehe. I'm also waiting for little Punjabi munda to arrive😛. Yup she confusing me with her gesture. It seems Ishu got her memory back but still pretending to be memory loss????. Hope it will get clear on your next update. Good one hansa. I love your commitment. See you're updating and continuing your stories unlike some other writers. Take care 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Hello guys me again bear me n my writing too .

Now im not going to ask to like n to do comment , im fed up on saying it now , but im serious on one thing who will not read or like n comment , in my works then im sorry even after you will pm me i wont read yours 😔 .

Please dont give fake excuse also it better talk true but dont lie to me .

I know im rude but im little furious too .

Here we go

Part 14

It start that day pass well for ishra , she was looking more happy , even raman but his mind was wondering on ishita talk before leaving the room , they went back home .

Ishra room at night

After finish their love session , raman was doing a side hug to ishita , both was tired due of love making , both feel relax in other arm .

Raman was playing with her hair n ask to her in a nice way " Ishita may i ask you something " .

" Hmm , what is it ask " ; she was caressing his chest .

" Woh , you remember in the morning in hotel room , you said , you become mine in a truly way with full right n it was our first night , what does you mean on it ? , im little confused " ; he kiss her forehead .

" I dont know why i said it but i felt it can be our first night , n when ever you touch me i feel very strange like it first time im feeling your touch , it still give me shiver why n how that possible , n yest night i feel i was in nine clouds with you , i dont know i felt yes it now im complete with you n i becomes yours , so i said it , you know i dont remember our first time love but this one will be unforgetable believe me i meant it raman " ; she kiss his hand .

Raman was relief she did not get her memory , ishita laugh .

" What why are you laughing now ? " ; he look at her .

" Raman how fool you can be han ? , if its our first time then how shravu came han ? " ; she was in teasing look .

Raman giggles her on saying " You are pulling my leg han , i wont spare you now wait " ; he start to harass her with his touch , both then make love again n they sleep .

Days pass well ishra romance n love was growing more deeper , shravu become naughty , raman pampered him a lot , he is raman life now , he came for lunch to eat n feed shravu as he dont accept to eat even eith ishita , when he return from work he spend his time with shravu he will feed him his diner for shravu he came early to feed him , shravu looks more happy when raman is with him .

One day during lunch time raman could not come , when ishita was trying a lot to feed him , on doing all types of things to pacify him but no , he push her hand n start crying n look at this dad chair .

Toshi n Om even ishita know he want only raman , toshi make her call raman to let him hear his voice then he can eat , ishita did n told him im call your papa now stop this crying shravu , you will hear him ok , she wipe his tears .

Raman was in meeting his mob ringing , on seeing sweetheart flash , he realize shravu n excuse himself n attend it .

R " Hello shravu beta , papa could not come you will eat with mama ok , be a good boy , shravu is papa good n brave boy nah " ; he talk so sweet n nice way .

Shravu who heard him , got smile on face , ishita feed him while raman was talking to shravu , he hold the mob n he was seeing raman as it was video call , the way raman handle shravu even being far from him , was amazing such a bonding son n father no body has been seen before , for raman shravu come first then his work .

All wait for him until his done with his call n came with smile on face , one friend told him , they should learn with him how to keep their child happy , they praise him for being a good n loving father .

In the evenning when raman came home as he enter he saw his parents n ishita sitting , shravu was in his baby walker near the door waiting for him , he drop his bag n lift shravu kiss him , shravu hug him tightly .

Raman realize how shravu has been.missing him , he to has miss him a lot , he sit on coach carring shravu , who was caressing his cheek , raman was playing with him , ishita bring tea for him .

Toshi " Putar now a days your son is becoming very naughty , just like you " .

Om " Arey today he did not eat until he heard n see you raman , he haress ishita a lot while she try a lot to feed him , right shravu " .

Raman smile , he lift shravu n giggles him n ans " If he wont be naughty , who will be hai na beta , papa ka ladla beta hai , han lekin beta mama dadi aur dada ko nahi satana chahiye na " .

" After all who's son he is han , just like papa , waise hi beta hoga na , dono hi mujhe parechan kartey hai , heina mumiji raman bhi aisa hi tah nah " ; she offer tea to raman n take shravu from him .

" Hmm han putar raman too was naughty like shravu is now " ; tosti reply her

After having tea ishra along with shravu they went in the room , toshi has tears in eyes , om ask her what happen why tears now .

" Bhallaji it tears of happiness , on seeing my son happy married life , my eyes could not stop from being wet , bhallaji we got our first waris n it none other than shravu , have you seen how shravu n raman are attach to each ever , how their bond are growing n becoming more deeper , im very proud of raman " she ans him .

Om " Bilkul chach kahan aap ne toshiji , indo no ko dekar dil bar ata hai , raman shravu ko apne jaan se bhi ziada pyaar karta hai , hum kuch naseem hai jo aisa bate paya hai , in do non ka pyaar dekar mujhe ishra ka pyaar dekta hai , jo dil ka rishta hai , jo bara hi pyara hai , sabse alag hai dil ka rishta , jo hamare raman aur shravu ke bich me hai , aaj ishravan bahot kuch hai et saath , aur aap ne sach kahan hamare ghar ka waris hai hamara shravu " ; with a proud n smile on face .

Ishra room

Raman who was playing with shravu n baby like shravu feel happy to get a dad like raman , ishita told raman " Raman ! why you dont rest i will take care of him , you are tired too " .

Raman " No its papa n son time , all my tired get vanish when im with him , when i saw his cute innocent face , he is my life my strenght " raman smile while he was talking .

Ishita " Oh that means your love , your life is only shravu not me right , you dont look happy on seeing me ,.why should i stay here then it better you take care of him " ; she act as she was jealous .

Raman hold her waist n pull her to him n make her sit on his lap , he hug her n say " Hmn you are feeling jealous han , madrassen you are also important in my life got it , when i saw your smile while i enter is enough for me , i feel relax on seeing your beautiful face , you both are every thing for me , without you both im nothing madrassen " ; he kiss her forehead n say i love you .

Shravu clap his hands on seeing how his parents looks cute , ishra was amuse on see how he look happy for them , raman take shravu n they have a cute family hug .

Day pass shravu start to try to talk all was waiting whom he will call first dadi dada mama or papa , ishra relation was nice some times they have their nokjok as it their love .

Some times they go out with shravu taking him to the sea side , garden , some park , they used to have fun , ishra was happy along with shravu .

One day raman got contract to go in mumbai for two weeks , for its difficult to stay away from his wife n son so long time , but has to agree on thinking to take them olong with him .

Raman ask ishita to go wuth him along with shravu , she could not shravu needed to do his vaccination which is imported to do , finally after so much pacify raman he accept to go alone next day , with a heavy heart , before leaving he record a video for shravu , then he can eat n saw him when ever he want , he take a selfie with shravu n ishita before leaving , ishita hug him n wish him luck also , he kiss shravu n ask him to be a good baby , which he nod n all laugh .

Raman do bye bye to them as he was about to step his feet outside , shravu first talk " Paaap pa " ; he turn to him on hearing him call papa first his first word n it papa , raman was overwhelm n he go to him n hug him kiss him all over his face due of happiness , he ask him to say again , n he did " Papa " every one was happy n on seeing raman huge feeling for him .

Raman leave once he reach he inform at home , after two days shravu say " Mama " ishita was happy , some times raman make video chat to see shravu , ishra chat via text too , every thing pass well for raman also , shravu did his first walk n every one happy as he walk now , raman too saw him walking n was happy .

Raman got the contract which give him happiness as it was in shravan name , he shared his good news to ishita n his parents which they bless him , ishita congrats him n ask when he will be back as they are missing him a lot , he told them he will be back in two days n cut after sent kiss for her n for shravu .

After finishing his shopping , he was entering in his car n stop on seeing some one n was shocked , he talk to himself " Yeh yahan kaise " ; in a curious n shocking 😲 .

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That's all guys now it on you do what ever you feel free .

Next : Some one open the door n got shocked on seeing raman " Tum yahan " .

Thx

Love 😊

Hansa 😊

Edited by --HANSA-- - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Wow... awesome...
Ishra & shravu bond z getting stronger day by day...
Specially Raman shares a great bond vth shravu...
Awesome...
Egerly waiting for nxt update to see who that person z...

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#270

Originally posted by: AttitudeQueen13
Yay you're back. So happy, hope everything is fine with you. Ok coming to our dil ka rishtha 😉 12,13 both parts are really good. Raman taking care of ishu and shravu. Hmm Mani soul helped Raman a lot. And their nok jhoks were really nice. Shravu Raman Kumar bhalla yeh kaisa naam yaar 😆 hehe. I'm also waiting for little Punjabi munda to arrive😛. Yup she confusing me with her gesture. It seems Ishu got her memory back but still pretending to be memory loss????. Hope it will get clear on your next update. Good one hansa. I love your commitment. See you're updating and continuing your stories unlike some other writers. Take care 😊

thank you so much for your comment im glad you did i was waiting for you 😃