FF || Love Vs Hate || (Teaser)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello!!

Let me start with a introduction. Me, Rushita - Diya's younger sister. I am only 15years, completed my 10th board exam.

I have seen di is writing something every now and then. So, I asked then she showed me her works, I was like - really!! My di is a writer?? 😆 And after that I always followed her writing as whenever she has done writing, I just open the laptop and go through the documents and read them right there.

Recently, I just asked her to create a acc for me!! But poor me, she started her lecture saying I should concentrate on my studies, these two years are very important and so on bla bla...

But last week had my birthday, she asked me about the gift - Aww!! so sweet. And I used the advantage, I said to create a new account for me, I wanna write. Though she denied, but promised her, I will concentrate on studies first. And she just gifted me this account.

Yahoo!!! I am IF-Dazzler, though originally newbie.

Okay enough of my blabbering, you know I am so much talkative, my train never stops at any station. 😆

Okay Okay!! Back to the point.

Here, I am starting my story. Though I am new in writing, not experienced. So, may be!! I will do mistakes, just ignore them and do tell me. So that I can improve my skills.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love Vs Hate

Teaser

Present Day,

Raman was restlessly pacing to and fro, he was continuously looking at the glass door, when suddenly a smile crept on his lips, he walked to the door to let the person walked in.

R(excited)- Tell me.. Tell me!! Did you meet with her? What she said? Did she ask about me?

The person stood there facing back to him, Raman made him turned towards him.

R- What happen Mihir? Speak out yaar.

M- No response.

R(frustrated)- Damn it!! Speak out, your silence is killing me.

M- Raman I...

R- I what?

M(looking down) - I followed her right there but suddenly she vanished.

R(angrily) - Vanished? How it could happen? You were following her right? Then how could she vanished suddenly. As far I know, she hasn't that watch which Mr. India used to have. Isn't? " he sarcastically asked.

M- Raman. Please, don't get angry. See!! Now at least we came to know that she's here, in Mumbai. Now if we try then who knows we can find her. If we find her then I can also...

He stopped when Raman looked at him, he could feel the love, he felt guilty, "it was all my fault. It was my fault that she left me, I could not make her realize my love. But.. But not again. This time I will make her mine. I will prove my love but just once. Just one I find her.

M - That day will come soon Raman.

Raman hugged him sadly and wiped his tears silently which were forming in his eyes.

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It's a short update. After all, it is a teaser only. How it could long?? Isn't?

Now, hurry up!! Read and give your long feedback. 😉 Sounds greedy like? Can't help it.
Edited by ..crystal.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oye!! Make sure, do not change password there. 😛
Back to update.
Nice one. So, Raman is finding Ishita.
Why? What was his fault?
Update soon (do inform me first 😃)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome to the writer world Rushita . And congratulations for new start of this story. I am pretty sure you will rock the forum like DIYA my dear.🤗🤗 Now come to the Teaser what did Raman do this time to make Ishu upset oh no is that Ishu you mention . Hope not other girl. 😉continue soon. Find her fast Raman.😉
Edited by usaonly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome friend 😛
Nice one
Continue soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for writing n nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting dear
welcome to if...
hi i m rida... diya friend ...
yes diya is right... focus on studies then if...😆

ps: diya really good elder sister... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear
Congrats fr new story
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Originally posted by: _KP.ISHRA_

Oye!! Make sure, do not change password there. 😛 I know, I know.
Back to update.
Nice one. So, Raman is finding Ishita.
Why? What was his fault?
Update soon (do inform me first 😃) And THANK YOU!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: usaonly

Welcome to the writer world Rushita . And congratulations for new start of this story. I am pretty sure you will rock the forum like DIYA my dear.🤗🤗Now come to the Teaser whatdid Raman do this time to make Ishu upset oh no is that Ishu you mention . Hope not other girl. 😉continue soon. Find her fast Raman.😉

Thank you di. May I know your name?

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