TS:The Right Decision (completed) Epilogue on pg 23 on 10 nov - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am back with the last part of this TS,thank you all so much for your comments.
Here it goes,hope you all like it.

Recap:Ishita had come back to the house and exposed Shagun and Dr.Manoj's truth.After hearing this Raman was very hurt and went to his room.

Part 3

Raman was in 2 states of mind now.He was happy that Ishita had come back now and was hale and hearty but also angry with her for leaving the house without telling anyone & irritated and disgusted with Shagun's behaviour.
The end result being the matter where he was so effected by all this that he broke down.

Ishita had followed him into the room and she was pained by the sight she saw.
He was all pale because of her absence and them the truth coming out had made him all weak.
She immediately went to him and tried to calm him down but he cried more.
She knew that it was no use of trying to stop him now and let him cry to wash away all sorrows.

I-Raman...Shh...relax..everything is fine now.I am alright and am with you.

R-Ishita..why does it have to always happen with me,am I so bad?
I almost...
As his eyes filled with more tears.

I-Ab honi ko kaun taal sakta hai
(What has to happen,will happen...we can't do anything)
It was my destiny to be under the influence and go and expose her truth.Think of it this way,as what all happened,all happened for the good only,we came to know their truth,I am alright now and most importantly we are together.

R-Ishita,never ever leave me please...is know I have been very bad to you before and have given you only pain but I cannot live without you now.

I-No one is going anywhere and never ever say that...you have given me so much...Ruhi,Adi,a beautiful family and mostly the love and the reason of my life in the form of yourself.
Instead I should be the saying sorry as I failed my duty to protect and take care of you all.

R-Ishita...don't say that..you didn't,haven't and will never fail in your duty.You are the best daughter in law,mother and the best of all,the best friend,companion and wife.
It's just that my past always troubles which I hate,it always brings bad memories.
He had calmed down by now and was holding her in an embrace.
R-Why is she behind me,why can't she understand and leave me alone.After that earthquake I didn't want to see her face,then I saw her in Mumbai working in an ngo.Then the surrogacy thing happened and now this.
Why???

I-Raman relax,she's Ruhi and Adi's mother.We have to respect her atleast for that no matter how she is and whatever she does.And if we think anything bad about her then what is the difference between her and us.
Please just forget about all this,nothing matters now...
Please...

R-Ishita,why are you so good.I don't still understand what I did that I got you in my life.I...I...I just love you Ishita...You are my breath and I cannot live without you and want you to be there for me always.

I-I love you too Raman...and I will always be there for you.

As they hugged each other,they felt the time stop at that moment as they felt calm in each others arm.

R-Ishita...why did you leave like that only without informing me before...you don't know how I spent these days without you.

He said as he sniffed a sob.

I-I didn't have any option as i knew you wouldn't have any allowed me to go alone ,so this was my last resort...I am sorry and living without you was not easy for me too.
I used to always think about you but I carried 2 photos with me that helped me through this phase.

She showed him 2 photos...1 was him with adi and ruhi and the other was his pic alone.He smiled as he saw the photos.
I-The 1st photo is the the one I used to hug and sleep in the night which gave me the feeling of being closed to you all and the 2nd photo was the one which I carried with myself whenever I went for any tests or checkups as I needed your support to get through this and I used to talk to this photo every night before sleeping and every time I woke up.
You were always with me in my mind and heart and will always be.

R-I always looked through old albums and remembered our times together as how much ever I tried to search for you and nit knowing when you would come back had literally broken as I had healed myself after along time all because of you and didn't want to undergo the hurt all over again,this time I knew it would be too much to handle.

I-What matters finally is that We are together.

R-I still cannot believe myself that I used to hate you so much.

I-Circumstances...We learnt to respect each other,then cared for each other,became friends,we're concerned for each other and realised too late that it was love that bonded us...but not too late.
We still have the whole of a lifetime to be with each other because this Jkr will not leave this raavan kumar so soon.

R-Very correct and this realisation should have been a little earlier and don't worry there's a lot of time left.Who will play with Ruhi's and Adi's grandchildren and believe how dumb their great grandmother is and how their great grandfather used to manage and of course to tell our story to them

They laughed at this thought and cuddled to each other and slept away dreaming of a happy future together.

And...that's the end of this TS...didn't want to drag their conversation too much and lose the essence.
Gave my best attempt to write it as I cannot the magic Divan create onscreen with the emotional scenes.

Sorry if you didnt like it or if the ending was too abrupt and if I didn't live upto your expectations.
Maybe will come up with an epilogue later if possible.

Do share your views,suggestions and criticsms...

Thank you all once again for liking the TS.😳
Edited by traveller_girl - 9 years ago
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Bravo.. šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ¤—
U r jst amazing.. WHn u drag n stretch things dn dey loose dere essence... Jst lyk d YHM nw-a-days...
Anyways u were FAB wid ur TS... šŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice ending
Story ended on a light note
Good one
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swatica.arora

Bravo.. šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ¤—

U r jst amazing.. WHn u drag n stretch things dn dey loose dere essence... Jst lyk d YHM nw-a-days...
Anyways u were FAB wid ur TS... šŸ‘

You are too kindā˜ŗļø
Thank youuu..glad you liked it 😳
Wish the track winds up soon

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