FF ' DOOSRA JANAAM '#2 UPDT last Part & Epilogue Pg 102 - Page 35

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome one hansu di
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update hansa Di
Cont soon
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
sad emo lovely updt i hope ishra are aware of suhana being param
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lonelyyy

omg so suhana is the villain
it will be so difficult 4 dem to find out
she is so cheap she kills a innocent soul
raman plz dont hate ishu
hope they realise soon
do cont soon...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: discipline

Lovely update dear

Raman is angry on ishu
Let's see what suhana will do next
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm but the link is not working


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hana_y

emotional updt love ishra romance i think ishra or raman is aware of suhana
raman will never be angry on his ishita
im surs they did nog lost the baby



thank you hana im glad on your comnebt
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: super_cutie

Nice update di

Hate that suhana to the core
Hope Raman understands ishitha's plight
Continue soon



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess2791

suhana i mean param is so mean and cruel. emotional update dear. i hope raman will try to understand ishus sitution. wonderful update. thanks for pm. waiting for next update.



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Posted: 9 years ago
Sad to hear about the loss di...condolences
Nice update
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello buddies im Hansa di sis Husna , im doing this updting on her behalf on copy from her book .


She said sorry to not be able to comments on her writers updts but only like n also she could not replies all comment for previous updt but she will for sure .


My sis wont be able to write or stay longer in mob due of her eyes n weakness in hand also
, for may be three or four days she need lots of rest to recovery , she cant stay without you all every time make me check who pm her for updt or just to ask about herself n i was surprise to see lots of friends of her who pm her to ask about her health , you guys are like her second family , she cant stay away long time from india forum n most here 😃.


Thx to who's pm her to ask about her health n to give her lots of love here im glad to see how you all are with her thx again to accept my di in your forums n shower love to her 👏.



Thx Hana di to visit her on knowing her illness 😃 .
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That was my part to thx you all 😃 .


I will need some one who can pms all her friend for this updt please as i dont know whom to sent pm .


Ok here we go


Previous part 20 end with ; Raman leave hospital in anger .



Part 21


It begins after


Raman left hospital , other member went to meet Ishita , she was in tears on seeing them , Toshi amma try to console her , she search for Raman n ask about him ... Toshi said he could not bear the lost n want to stay alone .



Ishita feel bad on Raman ... she know how badly broken he must be right now , how his dream has been shattered ... she could not keep his precious gift safely ... she was more hurt for raman ... Bhalla's n suhana leave amma appa stay back with Ishita .



Toshi was worried for Raman ... he did not return home , it was late at night , she stay awake for raman until he return , suhana too wait for raman on showing fake concern for raman .


Raman return it was almost middle in the night , he was in drunk state , unable to walk , suhana handle him n ask toshi go to sleep she will take care of him showing a fake smile .



Once they reach raman room ... she make him lay on bed ... raman was murmuring on saying " Ishita i hate you " .



Suhana sit beside him caress his face n said " Im so sorry raman , you lose your baby n very soon you will lose your so call love ishita , n you will be shattered in bad state but i will be here to supporting you until i become yours in your life as your wife " ; she smirk n leave .



Next day ishita return at home ... she wait to see raman n to talk with but raman avoid her n he came late at night to not talk to her , he leave early before she wakes up ... if she is around he dont talk nor even look at her , he dont eat nor drink from her hand , some times he behave rudely to her on taunting her ... he spend more time with suhana ... ishita was very sad n hurt with raman behavior n his avoiding her ... it was going like this almost one week .



Ishita decide to have a talk to raman as she was suffering a lot with his rudeness behavior ... While raman was having his breakfast she came other there n others was there too .



" Raman ! why you are punishing me like this ? why you are avoiding me ? your love was just because of the baby that it ? i told you how it happen ... then why doing this with me ? im suffering more than you ... i was carrying our baby in my womb i could feel him ... you think its easy for me to bear that pain alone ? raman its god wish who known's " ; she was sad with with pain .



Raman in anger push his plate n stand in angry way , he glare at her with so much hate in his eyes for her n say " If you would listen to me ... today my baby would be still here but you did not wanted so he gone ... dont think i will forgive you for it ... you have lost my love too along with my baby ... more i will look at you it will remind me of my baby .. it better to stay away from you " ; point his finger to her with glare look .



Toshi try to console n explain raman to not be rude with ishita ... even amma try to control situation .



" You think im happy on losing our baby raman ? how could you think of it han ? n why only your baby han ? it was my baby too ... im suffering along with you , but you are only blaming me , or taunts me why , if i get worry for your safety i was wrong tell me ? , on doing all this our baby will come back again ? dont punish me like this raman it hurts me a lots i wont bear it " ... she was crying while talking .



Toshi talk n say " Raman putar , it happen some time we may lose the baby but that does not means we cant get another child han , you both are still young you will have another baby too , dont be so upset putar , see even i pass thru it before i got you , but see you were born later , it will happen with you too its life you both are here then why hurry for child , if we did not become grand parents now will be later it ok " ... she try to make him understand in polite way .



Raman get more furious n hit the chair in anger tears in his eyes , he glare at ishita n said " What you all think im angry because i lost only my baby han ? , mah if you got me it because you could become mother n bear baby , but here nothing like that will happen , forget to have any grandchild who will call you as dadi , dada , pati n tata too , because this will not happen at list not with her " ... he point his finger to her n tears fall down .



Om slap raman on his talk n said " How can you talk like this han , i agree you have been hurt but not to talk or behave rudely in this way , she is your wife need to have some respect each ever , n what is this to not make us grandparents ? " ... he talk with a tone .



" Ok slap me if you want but cant deny what is truth , yes n the truth is i will not become father nor she will become mother not even you all as grandparents , you know why ? , to become mother she should be able to bear it n she wont be able to bear any child in her womb now , she cant conceive again , she wont be able to be mother , she lost every thing , there will be no waris in this house , i lost all happiness all my dreams has been shattered , i hate her for this , i dont want even to see her face now , she is unlucky for us for me , i hate her " ... he shout with pain broken heart , cries while he was talking in stammers .


On hearing such a word from his mouth , has shattered her broke her into pieces , she feel weakness on her knees n fall on coach , with such a shocking news , tears fall from her eyes , she could never believe to hear this hurt word , n most raman hate her for this lost , now she can understand what undergo he was passing on keeping it with him , such a big pain n truth , she understand his anger frustration its all due of all the matter , n more he feel she is unlucky for him , why she should stay with him , he deserve more happiness which she wont be able to give him now , she decided to leave him .


Others too got a shocked with what raman said they was in tears n shattered as now their dream has been broken too .



" Raman it ok putar will leave with it n you know na now science has been progress we can get a suruget mother it not a big deal putar " ... toshi try to explain him .



" No mummiji no need to any suruget mother i have decided to leave raman , he will be live happily with out me , if i will remain in front of him , he will not forget our lost n my incomplete woman , im unlucky for him as he said it better i leave him n you all , amma appa pack your language wil leave from here " ... ishita reply her n said her decision with a big pain in her heart n tears in eyes .



" Yes it better for you to leave me n my house too , i will be happy on not seeing your face , n its good you took the decision to leave , let her go mah " ... raman too reply in sad n pain voice .



Amma , appa try to arrange things but in vain both was decided to be separate , both parents feel sad on their children decision , amma appa n ishita went to pack their suitcase , same time miky arrive n was shocked on seeing the situation of the house on hearing every thing .


Suhana was enjoying the scene .


Mihir ask raman to think again but he refused n ask him to take them with him , ishita leave she take blessing from toshi n om , raman told her he will get married with suhana in a week , she just nod as yes n leave with tears in eyes .

Suhana was happy n hug raman for doing this .


At night raman was in car n stop in front of a house after a while he drive again .


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THAT IT GUYS HOPE YOU WILL LIKE IT N PLEASE DO HIT LIKE BUTTON LEAVE YOUR COMMENT TOO 😃


NEXT WILL BE LAST PART


THX

HANSA 😃
Edited by --HANSA-- - 9 years ago

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