Ishra OS - Together Forever COMPLETED

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

awww It was so emotional os..
u actually portrayed Raman's emotions so well ...all the trauma and the events taking a toll on him..
all their conversation felt like they are nothing without each other...
loved it.

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rufana

@rufana10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

amazing OS Prabh 👏👏👏
yup...ishra r meant to be together forever...
beautifully written 😊
loved it so much...
thanks for pm 😊

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Sonal

@...Forever...

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Nothing but...

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996541

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Albeli26
it was mind bobbling girl
mazaa aa gayaa
humara rondu raavan Kumar kitna rota hai na but jokes apart u portrayed his emotions marvellously. really enjoyed this os
the moment he collapsed in her arms was really scary but it was needed also.
prabh I always said that u are awesome when it comes on emotions. sorry dear for not commenting on your story but I am genuinely busy yaar but I am following story with every part and hopefully will cmmnt also
love u dear and take care

Thank you so much Aarohi! Glad you liked the portrayal of his emotions! I didn't want to add the part where he collapsed, but then thought it should be added sine it would really help Ishita understand his state! Thank you so much for liking my emotional writing, it means so much to me! Thank you once again for liking and commenting!