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It is not proofread so ignore any typos...
The suspense is revealed in this update...hope you all like this update...
Recap:Ishra were having conversation when they were interrupted...
Part 2
As they came out of the room...ishita first saw shagun who was still trying to convince the bhalla and iyer families that she was doing this for ishita and raman's sake and wanted to give back something as ishita had done a lot for her children,she gave an irritated look and asked...
I-Kaun aaya hai mummyji?
(Who is it mom)
Mein...said Dr.Manoj.
Raman,ishita and shagun's eyes darted towards the door.They were surprised to see him.
R-Dr.manoj...tum yahan...abhi?
(Dr.M...you here...now?)
Dr.M-Haan...voh mujhe...
(Yaa...actually I...)
He was interrupted while speaking by ishita
I-Ek minute..Dr.manoj...isse pehle aap kuch kahe mujhe shagun se kooch baat karni hai...
(1 min.dr manoj...before you say something I want to talk to shagun)
Raman wanted to stop her but seeing her anger preferred to keep quiet for now.
T-Puttar,abhi baat karne ke liye bacha kya hai?
(Beta,what is left to talk now?)
Si-Haan ishita...iss aurat se tujhe ab kya baat karni
(Ya ishita...what do you want to talk to this woman)
I - Aap log,please...mujhe isse kuch poochna hai (turning towards her)...Shagun,tum badli ho ke nahi ye mujhe nahi malum, par tum ye sab kyun karna chahti ho?
(Family,please...i have to ask her something
Shagun,I don't know if you have changed or not,but why are you doing this?)
S - Ishita, mujhe pata hai tumhe ye sab bahot ajeeb lag raha hai...par mujhe tumhare aur raman ke liye kuch karna that kyunki tumne mere liye bohat kiya khaskar mere bachhon ko sambala hai...aur maine tumhe sirf dard diya isiliye, maine khud voluntarily surrogate mother banne ke ichha ki kyunki jisse humane surrogacy ke loye chuna woh fraud thi...mujhe sirf tumhe ek maa banne mauka dena tha..taaki meri tarah tumhe koi taane mar sake..lekin tumhare parivaar vale meri sunte hi nahi...ek hi baat bole jaa rahe hain...ki mein trustworthy nahi hoon...
(Ishita,I know this all will be strange to you but I wanted to do something for you as you have done a lot for me specially taking care of my children and I just gave you pain...that's why I voluntarily chose to be the surrogate mother because the one we had chosen before was a fraud...i just wanted you to become a mom once so like ne no one can taunt you but your family is repeatedly saying the same thing that I am not trustworthy)
I-Tumhe kya laga ki mein maan jaungi...tum khud hi socho...bhalle hi tum ache ke liye badal gayi ho...mein agar iss surrogacy ko accept karu toh kaise,tum mere pati ki ex-wife...why don't you understand aur pehle se hi humare sambandh ache nahi hai...phir
(What do you think...i will accept it...you only think...even if you have changed for good...how do I accept this surrogacy,you are my husband's ex-wife...why don't you understand and as it is we don't have good relations since the beginning...then...)
Before shagun could tell anything...
Dr.M:Inn sab baaton ki ab koyi zarurat nahi hai...
(There is no need of these talks now)
R-Kya matlab?
(What do you mean)
Dr.M-Mera matlab hai ki ab inn sab baaton ka koi faayda nahi...
I am sorry Raman...lekin tumhara bachha unstable tha and we couldn't save it...ye rahi reports jo mujhe aaj mili...
(I meant now there is no use of these talks now... i am sorry raman but your child was unstable and we couldn't save it...here are the reports which I got today)
Shagun was shocked and ran to Dr. Manoj
S-Ye nahi ho sakta...tum kuch kar sakte the...kuch kiya kyun nahi...
(This is not possible...you could have done something...why didn't you do)
Raman froze on hearing Dr. Manoj's words...he felt the air sucked out of him and succumbed to the floor crying...
Dr.M-I am sorry I couldn't do anything
Ishita tried to pacify him and the whole family rushed to comfort him,while Dr. Manoj tried to convince and comfort shagun
I-Dekha,maine kaha tha meri kismet hi aisa hai...hamesha aise hi hota isiliye maine ab koi umeed nahi rakhi hai kyunki mujhe pata ki voh voh kabhi na kabhi mujhse cheen hi jayegi...
(See,I had told you na,my fate is such...everytime it happens like this only...that's why I have left any hopes as I know sometime or other,it will be snatched)
Dr.M-Aisa nahi bhi ho sakta hai...
(It cannot be like that also)
I-Kya?
(What?)
Dr.M-Yes...Dr.Ishita...mujhe ye reports dekhne ke baad...ye socha ki abhi bhi kaafi young hai and there is a possibility isiliye maine aapke reports meri dost ko jo London mein hai...usse bheja hai...shes a quite renowned fertility expert and gynacologist...maine usse phone pe baat ki thi...she said there lots of possibilities and will look deeper into your case after the seeing the reports and tell me...
Shayad kuch treatments ke baad,aap phirse pregnant ho sakti hai...
(Yes Dr. Ishita...and after seeing these (shagun's)reports...i thought that you are still young and there is a possibility thats why I sent your reports to my friend in London who is a renowned fertility expert and gynacologist...she talked to me over the phone and told there are many possibilities and will look deeper into you case and after seeing the reports,will tell me...maybe after some treatments you can become pregnant again)
I - Thank you but iski koi zaroorat nahi hai hai...
(Thank you but there's no need for it)
Am-Ishu...ek baar usse koshish karne do...Murugun zaroor iss baar tumhe help karega aur sab kuch thik ho jayega
(Ishu...let him try once...I am sure Murugun will help you this time and everything will be alright)
Ishita gave a non-interested look.
T-Samdhan thik keh rahi hai puttar...
(She's right beta)
I-Kitni baar...hamesha umeed hoti hai aur phir toot jaati hai...mein aur nahi seh sakti ..
(How many times...everytime there is hope and then it breaks...i can't bear it anymore)
Raman looks at her pleading eyes and they shared a brief eyelock..seeing that ishita's heart melted...
Ishita [self thoughts-Kyun raman...kyun karte ho aap ye...aapko pata hai main aapko mana nahi kar sakti(Why raman...why do u do this...you very well know I can't say no to you)]
I-Thik hai...lekin ye akhri baar hai
(Ok...but this is the last time)
Everyone gave a slight smile and hoped that everything would be alright soon and soon they are blessed with a little bundle of joy.
I-Aur haan shagun... (she said turning towards her)...aaj jo kuch bhi hua usse mein bhoolana chahti bhalle hi voh bahot mushkil hai...lekin mein tumhe ye bataya chahti hoon ki mein tumhare aur Dr. Manoj ke liye bahot khushi hoon..Bhagwan tum dono ko khush rakhe. ..
(And yes shagun...whatever happened today...i wish to forget it though it's difficult...but i wanted to tell you that I am very happy for you and Dr. Manoj...May God always keep you happy)
Saying this she left to her room giving a blank look to raman and a little smile to others.
Shagun and Dr.Manoj also left the house.
Everyone turned to go towards their rooms and the Iyer family were about to leave the Bhalla house and go to their when...
R-Sunniye... (everyone halted their steps)
Mujhe pata aap sab log mujhse bahot naraaz hai lekin please meri baat maniye mere paas koi aur option nahi tha...
(Listen...i know you all are very unhappy because of me but believe me I didn't have any other option)
Mr.B-Ye koi baat nahi hui...hume kuch nahi sunna,tumne humari beti jaisi bahu ka dil dukhaya hai...pehle usko mana le...hum apne aap maan jayega...
(This is not done...we don't want to hear anything...you have hurt our daughter like daughter in law...1st go and convince her...we will be fine then)
Ap-Raman beta,main maanta hu ki tune sab ishu ki khushi ke liye kiya lekin abhi voh kuch zyada hi hurt hai...tujhe usse bahot manana hoga...
Raman beta,I know you did all this for her happiness but right now she is very hurt...you have to convince her somehow)
Am-Vishwa,tumne aise kaise usse maaf kardiya aur maan bhi gaye?
(Vishwa how did you forgive him so easily and be with him?)
Ap:Madhavi,Ishu hamari bachhi hai aur raman ke saath bahot khush bhi hai...voh ek dusre ko bahot pyaar karte hain aur hamesha khush rahte hai ek saath..toh issi liye hume raman ko ishu ko manane mein help karni chahiye...
(Madhavi,Ishu is our child and she is very happy with raman...they love each other a lot and are always happy with each other...that's why we should help raman in pacify in her)
Am:Thik hai...mein apni bacchi ki khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon..
(Alright,I will do anything for my daughter's happiness )
Mr.B-Thik hai Iyer Saab, jaisa aap kahe...Ishita iss ghar mein khush hai aur zaroor rahi
(Alright Iyer ji, as you say...ishita is and will always stay happy in this house)
R-Appa aapka bahot bohat shukriya,aapne sabko mana liya...papa,ma,amma...mein aapse vaada karta hoon ki main ishita ka bharosa phirse zaroor jeetunga...aur abhi se kabhi bhi usse dukh nahi dungi aur hamesha usse khush rakhunga...
(Appa,thank you very much that you convinced everyone...dad,mom,amma...i promise you that I will surely win ishita's trust back and I will never let her be sad and will always keep her happy...)
T-Matarani tera saath de puttar...iss ghar ki khushi aur chamak jaldi vapis la...
(Mataram will be with you son,bring the happiness and shine of this house soon)
R-Lekin aap sab ko mera saath dena hoga
(But you will have to be with me and support )
M-Bhai,aap sirf kisi bhi tarah bhabhi ko mana lo
(Brother,you just somehow convince my sister in law)
Si & Ro-Haan bhai...ghar bahot khali lagta hai bhabhi ki awaaz bagair...
(Yes brother,the house feels so empty without her voice)
Mi-Jiju,dhyaan se, akka itni jaldi nahi manegi...
(Brother in law,slowly...my sister won't pacify so easily)
R-Haan bhai haan...ishita ke chamcho...mein usse mana lunga
(Yes - yes alright...Ishita's pets...i will convince her)
He said to lighten up the mood...
V-Waise plan kya hai...kaise manoge ishu ko?
(By the way,what's the plan...how are you to convince her?)
B-aur haan...meri saali ko aur koi chot nahi pahonchni chahiye
(And yes...i dont want her to get hurt anymore ok)
R-Chinta mat karo...aisa kuch nahi hoga
(Don't worry...Nothing like that will happen)
He said giving a slight smile.Even though on the outside he gave the smile...but on the inside he himself didn't know how he was going to convince her as she was deeply and truly hurt by his actions.
So that's it for now...I have tried to give a long update...don't know if it's upto the mark.hopefully I have justified the conversations with respect to all the characters and hope you like the update and how this story is panning it...
Sorry for any mistakes and if you didn't like the update..ðŸ˜
Keep commenting your views and do give any suggestions if you want me to include any particular scene...😊
Edited by traveller_girl - 9 years ago
Anupamaa
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
Indian Mythology
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