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The prologue part is in the latter part of this update...

Henceforth all characters will have the following abbreviations...

I-Ishita

R - Raman

Ru-Ruhi

A-Adi

S-Shagun

T-Toshiji

Mr.B-Mr.Bhalla

Si-Simmi

Am-Amma

Ap-Appa

Mi - Mihika

M-Mihir

Ro-Romi

Sa-Sarika

V-Vandita

B-Bala

Sh-Shravan

English subtitles in brackets

Kyunki Mein Tumse Pyaar Karta Hoon

Part 1

The story picks up from a point in the show and then I have given it a completly different approach...

The plot as of now is the moment when Raman tells Ishita that Shagun is the surrogate mother of their child...

Now I know their conversation was amazing in the show..here's a different take on that conversation...(there might be some resemblance to the conversation from the show)

I-Kyun Raman...kyun kiya aapne ye?

(Why raman...why did you do this ?)

R-Tumhare liye Ishita...sab kuch mein tumhare liye kiya...apne pyaar ke liye kiya...

(For you ishita...i did everything for you...for our love)

I-Humare pyaar ke liye??maine kitni baar apko kaha hai mujhe baccha nahi chahiye...mein already ek maa hoon...who bhi 2 bachhon ki jo meri zindagi hain...phir bhi

(for our love?how many times have I told you that I don't need a child...I am already a mother..that also of 2 children who are my life...then also)

R-Mein tumhe voh khushi dena chahta tha...humare pyaar ki nishani...

(I wanted to give you that happiness...the symbol of our love)

I-Toh aapne yeh raaste apnaya...mein maan gayi thi ki mujhe yeh khushi kabhi nahi mil sakti...phir bhi aap nahi mane aur iss bache ki maang karne lage...aur iss chakar mein kitni baar mujhe hurt kiya aur mera bharosa toda...kabhi - kabhi mujhe pata nahi chahta ki mein aapki life kya hoon...kya aapki life mein meri koi value hai ya jaisa shagun kehti hai ki aapki baccha ki aaya hoon...

(So you chose this method...i had accepted that I will never get this happiness but you never accepted and craved for baby and in the process hurt me and broke my trust..sometimes I don't understand my value in your life...do I have any value in your life or as shagun says that I am just your kids' nanny)

Tears rolled from her eyes as she said this...

R-Kya keh rahi ho tum...tumhari vajah sehi toh meri zindagi mein jaan vapis aayi...tumne mujhe meri parivar aur bacchon ko kareeb laya...phir se pyaar karna sikhaya...aur ab tum mujhe apni value pooch rahi ho aur jo kuch bhi meine kiya aur chupaya uske liye mein sharminda hoon aur sorry bhi bola..aisa kabhi mat bola ki tumhare koi value nahi hai...

(What are you saying...you bought the happiness in my life,bought my family and my kids closer to me,teached me to love again and now you are questioning your value in my life and what I did and hid from you I am already ashamed of it and said sorry and never say that you don't have any value in my life)

I-Acha...meri value aapne bahot achi tarah se dikhai thi...jab mihika pe rinky's ke murder ka ilzaam laga tha,tab aapne shagun ko shant kiya na ki apne parivaar ka,hamesha uske calls aur msgs ke saath busy the aur mujhe jhoot kaha ki aap office ke kaam mein busy hain,yahan tak ki apne bachhon ko bahar ghumane nahi le jaate the...meri bateon ko ignore karte the,mujhe ulta sunaya jab mein aapko uske baare mein poochiti thi,humesha uske calls ko attend karna,gaana gaana...kya aapko lagta mein ye sab she sakti,miscarriage hone se mujhe kitna dukh hua main jaanti hoon,lekin iss se bada dukh aur dard ye hai jo aapne mujhe diya...

(Really,what value I hold you very nicely showed me...you supported her rather than me or the family when mihika was accused of rinky's murder,you were always busy with her calls and messages and said lies that you were busy with office work,you said no to the kids also ,you ignored my talks,got angry on me unnecessarily instead when I asked you about her,singing songs for her...dp you think I can bear this...i only know the pain of the miscarriage but this pain and hurt is much bigger)

R-Ish...

She interrupted before he could complete.

I -Meri baat abhi khatam nahi hui hai raman...aapne kya sochkar aur kis haq se usse ruhi ke function mein le gaye the...who toh acha hua mein vahan pahaunch gayi nahi toh mujhe kabhi bhi pata nahi chalta aur ghar aakar aapne mujhe phir se sunaya na ki mujhe bataya ki kya chal raha hai...aur sabse badi baat aapne mujhse mere sign li consent papers chupa ke puri baat bataye bagair...aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakte the ke mein maan jaungi...meine aap par bejijak bharosa kiya tha...lekin...

(I have not completed my talk yet raman...what did you think and with what right did you take her to ruhi's function..it's good that I came there though otherwise I would have never known about it and then in the house you instead shouted on me rather than telling me what's going on and the biggest thing is making me sign on those papers hiding it and not telling me about it..how did you think I will be okay with it...i trusted you blindly...but you...)

She started crying unconsolably and in between that she continued...

I - Surrogacy aur woh bhi shagun ke saath...

(Surrogacy...that too with shagun)

R-Mein ye sirf tumhari khushi ke liye kiya aur tumhare sar se bhaanj jaisa tag nikalne ke liye kiya

(I did this for your happiness and to remove the tag of bhaanj)

I - lekin ye sab se aapne mujhe aisa mehsoos karaya hain... bhaanj mein phir bhi hoon kyunki woh 9 mahine toh bachha shagun ke pet mein hoga na ki mere;woh cravings,woh mood swings...mein kuch bhi mehsoos nahI kar sakti...phir kaise...mein aapko iss liye kabhi maaf nahi karungi...ye yaad rakhiyega...ab mein ye ghar aur aapki zindagi ko chodkar jaa rahi hoon...ab aap rahiyega uske aur apne naye bachha ke saath

(But by doing this you are making me feel like one... i will be a bhaanj only because for 9 months shagun will carty the baby not me,the cravings,the mood swing;I cannot experience this ...then how... i will never forgive you for this...remember that and now I am leaving this house and your life...stay with her and the new born)

Saying this she starts packing her bags and gets ready to live when he says...

R-Nahiii..ishita please tum nahi jaa sakti...adi aur ruhi ke bare mein socho,hamare parivaaron ke baare mein socho...

(No..ishita please you can't go,think about adi and ruhi,our families)

I-Aapko ye sab karne se pehle sochna chahiye tha...

(You should have thought about it before doing this)

R-Please ishita...mein unhe kya jawaab doonga...Ishita...please socho...atleast mere liye nahi to unke liye ruk jao

(Please ishita...what will I tell them...please think...don't go for then if not for me)

I:Raman...

Their conversation is interrupted by toshiji.

Toshiji:Raman...Ishita..chetthi aao...tum logon se koyi milne aaya...

She keeps her bags aside,clears her face of any tears and replies back...

I-Aai mummyji...

(Coming mom)

Raman follows her out to the hall looking broken.

So that's it for now...I know this update is quite heavy but with progress on the story i promise it will get quite light and happy.I will be back soon with another update...till then do comment your views...

Tried to do justice to their conversation in my way...don't know if I was successful...sorry if you do not like it...

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