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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi friends,

It was my first story posting after lot of courage.i am not a writer and my mother tongue is not hindi nor English please ignore grammatical,typos and spelling mistakes.let me know if you didn't find it interesting or any other story with same storyline then I will stop writing this story.enough of my bak bak.here is prologue

Prologue

She says thank you for saving her life her rooh and continually telling him that how thankful she is for him when he turns to see her his heart stop beating it was like world was stopped for him lekin then reality hits him he saved her daughter it means she was married and he turns to another side unable to control the tears which was falling from his eyes .that's all for now hope you will enjoy this .

I will update first part soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part1-page2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/127659837

Part2-page4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/127705598

part3-page7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/127970095

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Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice .that was a very different prologue. In this story ishita is raman first crush and he met after a very long time na.interesting continue soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Divanru
Nice .that was a very different prologue. In this story ishita is raman first crush and he met after a very long time na.interesting continue soon.

Thanks dear

I will update soon

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Dhristi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice prologue pls continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rayaland
Nice prologue pls continue soon

Thanks

I will continue soon

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Pravalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi friends so sorry for late update.iam updating first part

In chennai there are two souls sleeping peacefully sunrises are slowly pipped into windows and fallen on the beautiful faces disturbing their deep sleep she slowly opens her eyes to see the worlds besstest gift her ruhi she was like an angel bring all happiness in her life she kisses her forehead and wakes up her

I-wake up my baby you are getting late

R-good morning ishimaa

I-good morning baby and come on get ready for school

R-ok ishimaa

They started their daily chores and goes for their destination

In another scene,

M- Raman get up we are getting late we have a important meeting

R-sone do na mihir you are acting like ma

M-kya thumne muja ma kaha thum ko pata hai hum meeting ke lite already late ha

R-arey bus chup kar jab dekho chapat chapat karte rehto ho thodi der tho admi ko chain se sone do

M-no you are getting up right now with that he pulls the duvet from him and he goes cursing mihir to get ready for their meeting

In conference hall

Mr.bansal:mr.raman humko Apka project bahut achha laga hum ye project denge lekin apko bana rukey ye project handle karna hoga if it's ok with you then deal is on

R-I have no problem in it of course I will go tomorrow onwards to chennai mihir mera tickets book karo

With all of them leaves from their

Who knows what has packed in store for his life

That's it friends muja pata hai ye Chota update next time I will try to give long update

In advance thanks for reading my story