ISHRA TS: tumhare bina hum bhala kiya jiyegay epilogue: pg30 oct/12 - Page 10

Fab update...
I guess Last part was dream

fabulous update
ishita's antics were cute 😛
liked ishita and amma's convo
seems last hospital scene was ishu's dream 😉
waiting for next update 😊

Originally posted by: rufana10

fabulous update
ishita's antics were cute 😛
liked ishita and amma's convo
seems last hospital scene was ishu's dream 😉
waiting for next update 😊

Tumhare Bina Hum Bhala Kiya Jiyegay

Last Part

Ishita crying and screaming: raman come back... Please I can't live without you... I love you so much... please raman come back...

A voice capture her attention...

Inner soul: why ishita why you are crying??? Tum to hamesha yehi chahti thi...

Ishita cries...

Inner soul: yaad nahe jab raman ne tumhain apni taraf karne kay liye wo ignore karne ka plan kiya tha amma kay saath mil kar aur tumhain pata chala tha to kitna wabaal macha liya tha tumne...

Ishita remembers...

Amma talking to raman in room: raman ishita to bohat bechain horahi hai tumse milne kay liye...

Raman: bus amma humara plan succeed ho jaye

Amma: kiyon nahe hoga kamyab... zaroor hoga.. mien ne ishita ki ankhoon mien tumhare liye pyaar dekha hai... aur tumhara pyaar to sone say bhi zyada khara aur sacha hai...

Ishita listening to all this gets angry as she thought that raman is playing games with her... she barged into the room and start to shout on raman

Ishita: how dare you raman??? Mien ne nahe socha tha kay tum itne gir jaogay... muje hasil karne kay liye aise game play karo gay...

Raman stand shocked...

Amma tries to intervene but ishita stops...

Raman: ishita meri baat suno...

Ishita: I don't want to listen anything from you mr bhalla... you are not less than subbu...

Amma shouts: stop it ishu... You are crossing limits... how can you accuse raman like this... It was my plan not raman...

Ishita: haan haan ap to raman ka saath hi dogay na

Raman was crying...

Amma: enough ishita... You are accusing raman but infact you are the one who is responsible for all this... Your ego is ruining two lives...

Ishita stands shockingly...

Raman: please amma... Stop it... ishita...

Amma: no raman you will not stop me now... she is strubbron I thought kay life kay diye hue pain ki wajah say ye aisi hogayi hai but no she is just like her appa... selfish... Jise rishtoon ki koi qadar nahe hai... Tumhare pyaar ka na sahi per apne bachy ki to fikar honi chahiye na... mana raman galat hai per iss masoom ki kiya galati???? Bolo...

Ishita sees raman with teary eyes she tries to say something

Ishita clutches her stomach... And she start feeling pain... raman notices... he holds her and make her sit... Ishita was sweating badly...

Raman: ishita kiya hua??? Tum theek hona...

Ishita tries to touch raman ... raman holds her hand... She tries to say... ra...man...

Raman: ishi... kiya hua??

Ishita: i... ba..by..

Raman: please ishita I promise I will go away form you life with baby and I will never return...

Ishita tries to say but she fainted...

Flashback ends...

Ishita: no I don't want this to happen... Us waqt gusse mien wo sab kaha tha... but I wanted to tell raman that I love him... Only him...i wanted to tell him before losing my conscious that I want to spend my life with him and our baby... Us waqt mien yehi kehna chahti thi... Per kismat ne moka nahe diya... She cries...

Amma comes there... and seeing ishita in devastated state rushes to her and hugs her...

Ishita: amma... Ap sahi thy... mien ne khud apni zindagi barbaad kardi...

Amma: ishu...

Ishita: mera bacha kaisa tha???

Amma: baby boy ishu...

Ishtia cries...

Amma: ishu chup hojao

Ishita: raman ki tarhaan tha????

Amma nods...

Ishita cries...

After four months:

Raman sitting in office... Engrossed in work... mihir comes there...

Raman: mihir... kaisa hai yaar???

Mihir: kiya yaar jab say papa bana hai tab say dost kay liye no time...

Raman: janta to hai tu sab...

Mihir: haan haan janta hoon kay wo tumhare bina nahe sota... aur tum us ka koi bhi moment miss nahe karna chahty... Isley kaam jaldy say khatam kar kay ghar jaty ho...

Raman: haan... mihir pata hai us kay saath rehta hoon to zindagi kay har dard ko bhool jata hoon... Us ki hansi dekh kar sari thakaan door hojati hai...

Mihir: I am happy for you raman atlast you are happy...

Raman: yes indeed I am happy...

Alarm rings on raman phone... Raman and mihir smiles...

Mihir: lo time up kaam ka...

Raman: haan... tujse baad mien milta hoon...

Raman leaves...

ISHRA PARADISE:

Raman reaches his home and smiles... He touches the name plate hanging on door... And smiles...

Raman: indeed it is my paradise...

He rings the door...

Door opens...

All house was filled with cry of a baby... he rushes to room and takes the baby in his arms and tries to rock him...

Raman: papa is here na stop crying baby... Mera bacha... stop crying... sorry papa aj late hogaye thory say... Traffic na... its too bad... Mery baby ko itna rulaya...

Baby stop crying... A pair of eyes watching father and son with a smile on her face... She remembers...

Flashback start:

Amma: ishu chup hojao

Ishita: his eyes went on raman??? The same milky white skin na??? dimple on cheeks...

Amma: haan ishu... wo bilkul raman ki tarhan tha...

Ishita: amma I want to see him... I want to hold him... please... I will die amma... I will die

Voice comes from behind: you can hold him ishi...

Ishita turns and runs towards the entrance...

Ishita: raman...

Ishita hugs raman tightly and cries...

Raman: ishi...

Ishita: I am sorry raman... I am too bad na???

Raman: no ishi...

Ishita: yes I am... I love you raman... I love you...

Raman: I love you too... And kisses her forehead

Ishita sees the baby and hugs him and cries...

Raman: is he look like me???

Ishita: yes he is... And kisses the baby all over the face

Raman: I thought to go but I cant... I cant live without you...

Ishita: I love you I love you so much... and hugs him...

Raman: but I did not forgive you

Ishita questioningly sees raman

Raman: you have a punishment

Ishita: muje har punishment manzoor hai

Raman whispers: I wanted to have a baby girl but its boy... will you fulfil my wish???

Ishita nods...blushes and hugs him...

Raman: kiya ishi... meri patni kay itne sundar chehre ko ro ro kar kharab kar diya...

Ishita: sab apki wajah say...

Raman: meri wajah say???

Ishita: haan aur nahe to kiya aise choor kar koi yon jata hai??? Meri to jaan hi chali gayi thi...

Raman: sorry I promise I will never leave you again...

Baby cries..

Both rocks the baby... and smiles...

Amma blesses the couple...

Flashback ends...

Ishita comes towards raman and hugs him from back...

Raman: ishi...

Ishita: hmmm

Raman: shakal mien muj per aur adaaton mien tum per gaya hai...

Ishita: kiya matlab???

Raman: tum bhi roti ho ye bhi rota hai... tum bhi mery solaye bina nahe soti ye bhi nahe sota...

Ishita comes infront of raman and wounds her hands around raman neck... says: koi problem hai??

Raman: no...

Ishita: good...

Raman places the baby in crib and sits with ishita on bed hugging each other... They smiles seeing the bundle of joy...

Both says in union: hamara prem... ANSH RAMAN BHALLA...

Raman: wesy madam... I am too tired

Ishita: wait I will bring coffee for you...

Raman: coffee?? No...

Ishita: phr kiya chahiye???

Raman comes close to ishita and says: my wish...

Ishita: raman...

Raman: please...

Ishita: raman its time of dinner

Raman: and I am seeing my lovely meal infornt of my eyes...

Ishita blushes...

Raman pushes her on bed and positions himself on her and start kissing her senselessly...Raman takes Ishita lip in passionate kiss... Both enjoys the kiss.. while raman hands move towards her back and opens the dori of blouse... Ishita wounds her hand on his neck... Raman continue his work... he unpins the saree pallu...

Both break their kiss... Raman kisses Ishita neck line... Then he moves downward...he bites and sucks the breasts and Ishita pulls raman hairs wanting more... all room filled with their maons... They made love... after getting exhausted both lays cuddling each other...

Raman: I love you ishi...

Ishita: I love you too raman...

Raman: I want to grow older with you...

Ishita: but I don't want to become old...

Raman: why???

Ishita: my face will have wrinkles... and you will not love me and made a sad puppu face

Raman kisses her nose and says: I will love you always and my love will increase...

Ishita: promise???

Raman: promise...

Ishita kisses raman cheeks...

Raman: but what if you don't love me when I get old... I will not be handsome na

Ishita: no... you will be always hot and handsome...

Raman: really??

Ishita: hmmm... but get one thing clear don't ever dare to see other girl...

Raman: never ever... Hamari nazarain apse hataingi to auron ko dekh sakain gay na...

Ishita smiles...

Both cuddle more and closes their eyes to feel the closeness...

END... NOT SO SOON... WILL COME WITH AN EPILOGUE... SOONER OR LATE... PROMISE... I hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comments...

Really nice and emotional update

Nice Riddi..

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Nice Riddi..

Both Raman & Ishita executed the plan well...

IshRa in love & can't be apart from each other..

Ansh arrived & where is Ruhi?😉

Waiting for epilogue someday...

Nice one rida

Beautiful story loved it plss keep updating n waiting for epilogue

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Nice one rida

But u end it so soon

Loved it

Update the epilogue soon