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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ananyachaudhary

u know what i really dont like these sacrifice things and if u do be strong enough to bear it for whole life without crying and blaming the one u sacrificed for
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its better dont sacrifice and get what u want
i dont like pain in love

love never give pain
its betrayal and sacrifices which gives pain not love

And one more thing if even after knowing that her sister knows raman and vice versa and is pregnant with his child even if it is out of wed lock then also shagun marries raman then she is damn selfish...
She even took her baby and then she says she loves her sister and has guts to point a finger at her
SHAMEFUL
Her husband rejects her regularly and tells about his love...cries in front of her/...lover to kya wo friend keh lane ke bhi kabil nahi hai
how can a lady bear that and do that to her sister
It is fine she is being selfish for her own satisfaction
then why cant others be...
and i seriously doubt her love for ruhi as well
she couldnt leave her work for her so called daughter
then she calls herself her mother




So here I got an outstanding review so far 👏
I'd like to quote something here...It will tell you the whole story and my inspiration

"I guess that's just part of loving people: You have to give things up. Sometimes you even have to give them up."

"Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live."

"I say let the world go to hell, but I should always have my tea."


Okay these are not my words...but I'm attributing these to some of the characters in the story which you clearly know. 😳
And thank you so much for such a great criticism 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: avni_19

Woahooo great concept. Loved it soo muchhh!

Shagun n ishita are sisters...unfair stuff...lol but im loving the buildup here. I hope Raman go bk to Ishita n ruhi gets to know her mumma is ishima..alll happy.

Shagun gt hitched with someone else! Lol..im making up story..

Awesome attempt. Cont soon. !


Unfair stuff 😆
Sometimes these unfair stuffs do attract people a lot 😆 😉
I loved your made up story, but I'm not planning such things 😉
Glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg its amazing... i feel so bad for ishita!!!!
please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: super_cutie

Amazing story yaar
Read the three parts together and must say this story is very unique
But I don't like the ishra sacrificing their love for the stupid shagun
It will great if ishra would start fighting for their love
Loved ashok in this update and the way he behaved with Raman
Want ishraru together
Continue soon


Thanks for liking it yaar
No one is liking this sacrificing thing... 😆
But I'll try to fix it ASAP 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayraa

Superb update gaya...

Why shagun is so selfish yaar...
I want ishra fight for their love...

And plz don't stop it dear...


Thank you yaar 😳
I'll try to update soon and prolong it 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Divanru

Amazing,I can only say.it was superb.so ruhi is ishra's daughter.can't wait for ishra confrontation. Please update soon dear.


Thanks yaar
I'll update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan

For a change..
ishra are married or not..?
akka ..for akka sake she sacrifies raman and roo.she not fight for her love .raman ,..he snatched ru from ishu..
shagun is using ishita to get ruman.she using her sisters love as her playing cards..how selfish she is..
Continue karo..


See...
I can make Shagun and Ishita blood sisters
But still...I failed to make Shagun a good girl 🤣
But it won't happen with Ashok...
You know why...
Because I love him 😆
Thanks for the comment Jaanu 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pcnsb


Ok I am hell confused...😕
So as far as I could gather, its Raman Ishu are ex lovers..
they have a daughter Ruhi...but Raman is married to Shagun who is Ishu's elder sister...
Apparently, ishu sacrificed her love for her sis and as an revenge Raman took away their daughter...
Ashok and Raman are brother duo...
Right?!
We need a confusion clearing update soon...!!
Nandini


You're right...not completely though...
I'll try to give a 'confusion clearing update' soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Ashok Raman's brother😲

Gaya, u r gonna kill us one day I think so...


Is it a bomb or something boy 😉
I casted them just like that 😆
Edited by Gaya3sb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anum_says

Nice Update..

I don't like one thing that Raman ko shagun ki fikar hai k agar usne divorce dia to shagun will harm herself and she is her friend..so he can't divorce her.
But what about ishita, y he doesn't think about her...
And she is the one whom he loves...
And ishita is so much in love with her sister k usey Raman ka pain nahi dikh raha
And Shagun is the most Selfish woman ever, she don't deserve anyone's love.
Ru doesn't know about her real mother..
I really want Ruhi to know about ishita..
And I am waiting for a much needed conversation between IshRa.
Fabulous Interesting..
Update soon..


He cares for Shagun because...I WON'T TELL YOU 😉
So...two wishes of yours...
A conversation b/w IshRa and Ruhi to get to know about her real mother 🤔
Both these scenes needs a real hard work from my part...else it will get spoiled...🤢
So I'm planning to take it slowly 😳
Thanks for the comment 😳

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