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Jayashree

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey jaan it is good that u want tochange this TS to SS go ahead👍🏼 dear Iam very much liking this mystery and suspense in this story..

And now coming to the update..😊

It was awesome dear.. Its good that you are maintaining the essense of suspense in this story.

😃😃😉..after reading this part my biggest confusion is who killed appa

I loved the part where ishu trying to save her appa.. inspite of all the distraction and in stressful situation of in the verge of loosing her father...you poatraited her feeling beautifully👏👏👏

i still cant get over it😭😭😭

The fear of loosing her father to ishu was so emotional dear.. and the last talk between ishu and appa was perfectly wtitten...I was touched by it😭

Iam very much confused between aman and raman.. 😕😕

And anothet twist is Santhoshi is bua for ishu.. and the consoling scene of ishu by santhoshi was good too😊

Now i have so many confusion and also eager to know how will IshRa unite.. clear the confusion soon dear eagerly waiting for next update continue soon

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Intresting start diii

Raman is the killer

O god it is some what like kmh 2 track

Now ishu raman marry but raman is a gunda dont tell me mr bhalla is also a criminal and there is some tragic tale in mrs bhallas life

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Beautiful start Janni... Am excited for it. It's refreshing and interesting.

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

interesting start!!!

omg poor appa!

who killed appa hope its not the bhalla sons...

update soon

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

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Interesting start Janani...

Poor Appa...

I think Culprit is some other person...

Hope u bring more twists & blow my mind off😆

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raksha

@cutieruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Interesting janani

I am pretty sure Raman didn't do it

But who is this aman

Continue soon.

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raksha

@cutieruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

When u r planning to give title to ur untitled story.

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usaonly

@usaonly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Good start but sad and misunderstanding with the misleads.the killer are using Raman name to enter the house I pretty sure one of that will be Subbu and from the prologue he try to convince Ishu that Raman all behind this murdure. Hopefully Appa last wish will fulfill but with the hate from Ishu to Raman.the story going to be like hate like love later interesting. Now want to see how you will,portray Raman characters please continue.Have a beautiful start for new week my dear.🤗🤗

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1023427

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

awesome dear continue soon and very nice and interesting story.

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janani

@janani_divan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu
Intresting start diii
Raman is the killer
O god it is some what like kmh 2 track
Now ishu raman marry but raman is a gunda dont tell me mr bhalla is also a criminal and there is some tragic tale in mrs bhallas life

what is this kmh2

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