FF: KISMAT #2 teaser on page 119 on oct/31

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#361

Kismat

Teaser

Raman standing shocked after seeing the pictures... he sees adi and ruhi again... his eyes welled up with tears... He sits near them and takes them in his arms... Kisses them... Showers all his love on them...

Raman: I am sorry... Papa is so sorry... Papa kaise bhool gaye... You are my kids... I love you adi ruhi... papa love you so much... Sorry...

Both kids smiles...

Raman takes them downstairs... ishita sees raman... She comes towards him and tries to take the kids... raman stops her...

Ishita: ap ko office kay liye late ho raha hai...

Raman: muje pata hai...

Ishita: wo..

Raman: why you did not tell me truth???

Ishita shocked...

Family also gather...

Toshi jee: kiya keh raha hai raman????

Raman: why you all lied to me????

Mihir: bhai...

Raman: what you all thought I am weak??? I will not be able to take it???

Ishita silently seeing raman...

Toshi jee: puttar...

Raman: nahe maa... Aj mein bologna aur ap suno gay... Ye meri life thi to muje kiya itna bhi haq nahe hai kay mien apne baare mein jaan sakoon...

Mihir: bhai ap apni memory...

Raman: muje to aj bhi kuch yaad nahe... Lekin kam se kam sach to pata hai ...

Toshi jee: doctor ne kaha tha kay tujhe stress na dain...

Mihir: bhai hum...

Raman: muje ap sab say koi explanation nahe chahiye... Muje mery sawalon ka jawab kisi aur say chaiye...

Raman walks towards ishita...

Ishita looks on...

Raman: kiyon??? Akhir kiyon tumne sach nahe bataya???

Ishita cries...

Raman: mein kuch poch raha hoon

Ishita: I feared that if something happens to you ... between cries...

Raman moves back... Ishita sees raman...

Ishita: raman...

Raman turns while ishita goes towards him... Places her hands on his shoulder... Raman again moves...

Ishita: raman...

Raman: I am taking my kids to my room... Jesy abhi tak sab ne apni marzi ki... agay bhi jis ne... he eyes ishita... Jisne jo karna hai wo kar sakta hai... he leaves... Ishita cries...

That's it well I hope you all will like it... waiting for your lovely comments... I am telling you all post lots of comments so this thread cross 100 pages then I will give you update on Wednesday... Till then enjoy the teaser...

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#362

hi rida. I know re I deserves lots of pitaau from u isliye pehle hi maafi maang li maine.
as I told u I was busy that's why was unable to comment here but I was following story and I must say u are fab writer. the way u gave this story a new turn was awesome dear
I am enjoying this phase also, where Raman is attached with his wife and kids but still they have distance.
now I am eagerly waiting for next part. update soon and sorry for keep u in wait. vaise mujhe maafi mili na?

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: aarohi26
hi rida. I know re I deserves lots of pitaau from u isliye pehle hi maafi maang li maine.
as I told u I was busy that's why was unable to comment here but I was following story and I must say u are fab writer. the way u gave this story a new turn was awesome dear
I am enjoying this phase also, where Raman is attached with his wife and kids but still they have distance.
now I am eagerly waiting for next part. update soon and sorry for keep u in wait. vaise mujhe maafi mili na?

you are my lovely friend 😳so you have khulli choot.😉... no need to say sorry dear... i can understand the busyness 😊 ... weill i am glad you like the turn i brought in this story... 😃 i hope you will further like this story...

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Divanru

@Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#364

Nice teaser ridu but I can't wait till wednesday.update sooonish

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sulochana90

@sulochana90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#365

superb teaser

cant wait till wednesday

please stop teasing more and update asap

waiting to know more

thanx a ton

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: Divanru
Nice teaser ridu but I can't wait till wednesday.update sooonish

thanks pooja di

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#367

Teaser us teasing me

Finally he gets to know da truth av tau yr mana me ishu apne raman ko update soon yr

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aarti hari chandana

@Ishradivani

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#368

Omg yeah kitna teasing teaser hai

N ab aap Wednesday tak update nahi karenge

Not fair at all

Yeh confrontation ke liye mai aur wait nahi kar sakti

Please update soonish soonish

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#369

i am so happy... feeling on cloud nine...

this story complete 100 pages of thread two...

🥳🥳🥳🥳 yay...🥳🥳🥳🥳

i firstly want to thank all of you for giving this much love to this story... i havent thought that this story will get this much love from all of you... but well it got that... 😳

the story moves from a strangers tied in unbreakable relation and then fall in love... different hurdles they faces and their love wins in every difficult situation... their faith on each other is unbreakable... their love for each other is immeasurable...

and now they are facing another situation where their love is again testing... will their love win this this or not???? for this you have to follow the story...

i hope you all will like it... and your love for this story will increase...

i am telling you all that raman memory will not come soon... the story will progress how he fall in love again with ishita...

i am hoping you all will like it...

thanks again for your appreciation and love... its a motivation for me to continue the writing...

regards:

rida...