FF: KISMAT #2 teaser on page 119 on oct/31 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: --abha--

Yipeee new thread...
congratulations dear...

waiting for surprise


thanks dear...
surprise is on the way
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: kras

nice update

so param became mad and want to destroy raman emotionally and for this he want to kill a unborn baby really sick😔
and ishra don't know his intentions
mrs bhalla became happy to know that her daughter will stay with her for long time because she doesn't know about param's plan
raman is really mad about ishita and his unborn baby and they all were teasing him about that
and ishita become mad because of raman protective nature because she has no work to do
and then raman cute antics to manofy his jkr
and his posesiveness towards his unborn baby
raman gave a file to ishita and she became happy
haaye kitna khayal rakhta hai
then param played his dirty trick ans spills water on ground
and our hero come on the nick of time and saved his lady love and unborn baby
ishita scared but he pacify her
and in precap param harm raman
oh i hate him😔
but thk hai a story is incomplete without a vilion so its ok
over all a nice updatešŸ‘
sorry for my mistakes and late comment
thanks for pm
update soon please


thanks dear...
glad u like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

thanks dear friends.. sorry i was not able to comment on each... busy with some personal issue...

i havent thought that this story will get this much love... it was my second story... i thought it will end soon but i think there is much more to go...

love you all for loving my stories
i hope your love will...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
hi friends i am busy now 😲 but dont worry i will give you some think that you will be in thinking... and then i will back with an update...
so i am giving you again a special teaser...šŸ˜‰ i love to tease you all...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

so gear up dears...

TEASER

raman talking to ishita on phone: yes ishita i will be back why are you worrying so much... see you are bothering my princess...

ishita: raman ye mazak nahe hai... jaldi ao na...

raman: okay dear i am coming... phone band karo phr hi to drive kar kay aonga na...

ishita: bye... drive safely...

raman: yes madam sure... take care...

raman cuts the call...

...
...

AT BHALLA HOSUE

phone rings,,,,, ishita takes the call... and screams RAMAN.....
...
...

param laughs thinking wah mera half revenge to poora hogaya... raman bhalla is dead...
...

ISHRA ROOM:

ishita sitting in room remembering raman... how he use to talk and makes her happy... toshi jee comes, ishita cries and hugs her...

toshi jee: ishita...

ishita: maa... kiyon kiya raman ne ye??? kiyon wo muje choor kar chaly gaye...

toshi jee: na puttar roo mat...

ishita: kaise na rowoon maa... mein raman kay bina kaise jeeyongi???

toshi jee: you have to live... iss bachy lay liye...

ishita: mein nahe kar sakti ye... mein raman kay bagair iss bachy ko nahe paal sakti... wo aise nahe kar sakty maaa... unhain wapis ana hoga... mery liye... hamare bachy kay liye... raman ko ana hoga... wo wapis ayengay na maa...

toshi jeee: sambhaal ishita... wo nahe ayega... wo chala gaya hai... raman nahe ayega...

ishita: maa... raman..

toshi jee: sach ko maan lay ishita... hamara raman mar gaya hai.... hum khud uski chita ko aag laga kar ayen hain...

ishita screams : NO.... and cries vigorously and loses her conscious...

thats it... no comments on update from my side.. i am crying writing this... this is the twist dear...😭😭

waiting for your comments


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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
I think it's param dream Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Kya yeh sab raman ka plan hein??? Raman dying is nt at all possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Y rkb is nt dead he is alive ... I knw it it wud be some trick to catch param
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
waiting for the next update eagerly..
kras thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
it is really scary
why are you doing this to us
please don't do this to us
please don't make us cry
i am very emotional and i can't read this
and please update soon
please please pretty please
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Please update soon
There must be some catch
Raman can't die

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