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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: The-Heart

Congrats for the new thread

Amazing Update👏👏



thanku😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: rinku95

Congrats

Superb
Continue soon



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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sarayasriya



kisey party chahiye karthik bathavo dedungi😛😉

thank u so much😊


Ek lambi si update chahiye as a treat
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Originally posted by: Sri1091


Ek lambi si update chahiye as a treat



for sure dear but might take time😊
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Originally posted by: sarayasriya



for sure dear but might take time😊


Jaldi se dene ki koshis karona plzzz plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarayasriya



thanks😊,u didnt said anything about the update😭😛

i did not read the part .that's why...didn't say about the update...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
hi friends came up with double updates and a condition too😛
i need likes or comments from all my readers,or else i wont give further updates,whether it is good or bad i want to know by ur likes and comments😉😉(i know iam blackmailing but the time has came to blackmail😛)

ignore typing mistakes😛

part-73(a)


...
in airport:
ishu was silently sitting on the waiting area one side thinking about raman and other side feeling excited for going to see her family atlast
mihir walks to her with a water bottle "bhabi pani"
ishu:she looks at him and takes the water bottle silently
mihir:sorry bhabi,i didnt thought anything seeing bhai in hospital unconsciously lying there
i should have called u to inform,sorry bhabi
ishu:cooled down seeing mihir's guilty face,its ok i had forgiven u for this time,u have to take care of him from here onwards
mihir:a smile crept on his face after his bhabi forgiving him
ishu:raman will be fine na,she asked looking at mihir in a concerned tone
mihir:bhabi bhai will be fine,daadi wont let him to step out,she will take good care of him
ishu:i hope so,
listening to the last announcement for the take over of their flight walks to check in
...
after 2hrs
mihir and ishitha lands in mumbai airport
...
in delhi:
raman:was feeling restless even though his wife left before only 3hrs
he tries to sleep closing his eyes,so that he cant think about ishitha,
understanding that sleep will also wont accompain him he shouts at himself"this bloody leg doesnt helping me take even single step,if this leg was good then atleast i would have diverted my mind to work
but nothing is helping being in this room,our room,iam feeling ishitha every where,why u made me so desperate about u ishitha,iam missing u,why u went leaving me here"
getting anger on himself covering with duvet he shuts his eyes forcefully to sleep
daadi walks to his room to give a glance at her potha
seeing him tossing on the bed covering himself with the duvet she walks towards the bed glancing at the table where his breakfast was untouched
daadi:sitting beside him removes the quilt from raman's face only to see tears in his eyes with worried tone she speaks "raman kya hogaya thumko,why r u crying"
raman instantly places his head on daadi's lap weeping more like a small kid
daadi:wondering what happened that made him to weep bitterly "raman kuch tho bolo mujje darr lag rahi hu"
raman:i want ishitha daadi
daadi:yeh kaisi baath hi raman,u willingly sent her to her maternal home,i think so she might be landed in mumbai just now,and u r here wanting her back to our home,if
u doesnt want her to go then why u sent her
raman:because i doesnt want to hurt her,its her right to attend her sister function,i cant snatch her happiness
daadi:so u r clear about sending her to mumbai,then why r u crying now
raman:because i was unable to stay without thinking her sitting idle here doesnt helping me anymore
daadi:raman its about only one day,i will stay with u whole day,how u enjoyed in ur childhood spending time with me,now u can do the same,call ur P.A and ask him to get ur project files
engross urself completely in one or the other task till ur madrasan comes
raman:hmm ok
daadi:now get up and eat ur breakfast
raman:getting up from daadi's lap speaks to her "no iam not feeling hungry"
daadi:starts feeding raman forcefully
...
in mumbai
ishu and mihir reaches appa's mansion
total mansion was beautifully decorated by flowers
both walks into the mansion
appa in the hall speaking on the phone instructing his workers about missed arrangements for his elder daughter godhbari function,bala instructing the workers who are decorating the stage in the hall
while amma,sharadha,mihika,sarika,sarika mother,and many more cousins of her,to her surprise rinky are all running here and there in the mansion doing last moment arrangements for the function
appa suddenly glances at the entrance only to see ishu with mihir standing behind her,his eyes widened and teared up with surprise seeing ishu a mere whisper of him made everyone to turn towards the entrance who was standing at the entrance of her home,with tears welling up in her eyes
getting his voice back appa calls her with more voice "ishu"
everyone rushes towards the entrance seeing ishu there in their home but her eyes are only on her appa
he opens his arms seeing that ishu rushes to him letting her tears flow freely,hugging her appa she cries more,speaking in a breaking voice
"appa i missed u so much,i missed u,i love u appa"
appa:hugging his daughter back sobs like a kid,i love u beta,appa missed u so much
everyone walks back to the place where father and daughter duo standing
amma welcomes mihir
appa pulling ishu out from his embrace wipes her tears saying "my darling never cries like a kid" for which his daughter giggles like a kid
coming back to his sense he speaks "ishu u here how?where are ur in-laws did u came without informing them,he asks bundle of questions without giving her a chance to speak"
after showering all questions he looks at her to get answers,but he gets only a cute pout
mihir replies instead of ishu "appa,mamma only sent bhabi to mumbai to attend vandu akka function"
without giving appa anymore chance to interogate her daughter amma walks towards ishu only to be hugged by her daughter sobbing again missing her amma
amma:ishu kanna kaisa hi thum,amma missed u so much ra
ishu:i too amma
...
vandu in her room who was in complete mood swings in these days,ordered her husband to bring hot drink which she never consumed
while her husband tried very hard in making understand her what hotdrink was but failed,to escape from her giving a fake promise walked to hall to do further arrangements
she walks into the hall to give another round of scoldings to her husband only to see karthik swirling ishu in his arms
karthik:"ishu akka iam so happy atlast u came i know u will come to see ur chota bhai,"
ishu:ayyo karthik iam feeling giddy get me down,please karthik
karthik:finally makes her to get down from his arms
vandu:walks forward who was surprised seeing ishu in appa's house
"ishu thum aayaa...?"
ishu:looks at vandu where her tummy was bulged as she was going to step in 8th month in 2days tears whelmed up seeing her akka,taking care of not hurting the baby she hugs her akka happily
i missed u akka
vandu:who was in tears now hugs back her saying "i too missed u ishu"
staying in each other embrace for some minutes vandu pulls ishu out of her embrace looking at her doubtingly
ishu:what??
vandu:appa said u and raman went to some trip?so u r unable to come to my function,then how did u came?
everyone gets tensed seeing vandu questioning vandu
ishu:looks at appa turning to her akka cooking something in her mind to escape from her akka's interogation
"akka yes we went to trip but we came back two days before as raman got into some urgent meeting in Delhi,"
vandu:hoo ok
everyone feels relief but vandu's psychiartist brain didnt stopped probing further questions
vandu:haa then where is raman,ur in-laws,only mihir accompained u?
amma:too thinks about raman and asks about him to ishu
ishu:gets tears reminding raman
vandu:side hugging ishu asks in a concern tone,"ishu is everything ok,u r not hiding anything na?"
amma:thinking worst,that ishu and raman fighted regarding her trip back to her maternal home,asks in a concern tone
everyone looks at ishu waiting for her answer
ishu:raman met with an accident so he was unable to come here,mummiji and daadi are taking care of him
appa:what ishu?but how?did raman was fine
mihir:nothing serious appa "a small accident he is fine"
everyone feels sad for raman
bala:only looks at ishu not uttering a word
ishu:wont u talk with me
bala:in a fake anger,"when someone totally forgot me after getting married then why should i speak to them"
ishu:side hugging bala "jiju this serious face and talks wont suit u,common iam always urs ishu"
bala:dont try to butter me
ishu:serious jiju
vandu:who forgot why she came to hall reminds looking at bala "she screams with all her energy 'bala'"
everyone turns to her tensedly as her mood swings are reaching high these days
only ishu looks at her vandu worriedly aparting from bala
bala:in a scared tone,"mmm va..n..d..u?
vandu:u came out from our room before an hr saying that u will bring hotdrink for me
everyone looks at her surprisingly but ishu looks a her shockingly
ishu:akka r u drinking,when u r habituated to drinking?'
turning to amma,"amma we are pure tamil brahmins being a punjabi still iam not toching any non veg,but see ur elder daughter is talking about hotdrinks,and her husband is getting what she demanded
vandu:ishu u too can drink if u want,why r u feeling jealous of me
ishu:ayyo yuck,i wont,
bala whispers in ishu ears "ishu this is her one of mood swing"
ishu:mood swing?
bala:haa pregnant women behaves always unexpectedly and we dont know what they will demand in what time,only u can save me ishu now,how can i get her hotdrink that too in function and she is pregnant
ishu:understanding about mood swings she assures her jiju "jiju u dont worry i will take care of her"
turning to vandu "akka wait i will bring hotdrink for u,saying that she walks to kitchen,she walks with a glass of coke"
take here is ur hotdrink
vandu:seeing the color of coke thinking as hotdrink gulps it eagerly
wow ishu u really loves me,bala only fakes loving me,he doesnt love i dont know what will happen to my baby,careless father he is
ishu:giggles seeing her akka mood swings
mihika:pouts looking at ishu
ishu:understanding her choti sister worry hugs her happily
after talking to all,ishu settles in vandu's room with her akka
while other resumes their work
ishu:in an anxious tone "akka ur tummy was bulged"
vandu:in an excited tone "ishu baby will come out after one month"
ishu:dreamily speaks "ha akka yes,i want to see the baby urgently
vandu:smiles
ishu:why r u laughing?
vandu:baby is kicking ishu
ishu:haa baby know how to kick?she speaks surprisingly as her akka is teaching new things to her
vandu:yes ishu,see if u want saying that taking ishu's hand into her she places on her stomach
ishu:feels baby movements and looks at her akka with surprised expressions
vandu:u know ishu,baby kicks more when bala stays near to me
i think so baby loves bala too much than me
ishu:hhaaa how u know akka?
vandu:because child feels happy only seeing their loving persons near by them
ishu:nods her head understandingly
vandu:ishu u r looking beautiful in this maroon and cream color saree,u dont like to wear sarees na?
ishu:a blush appears on her face listening about vandu's words "raman selected this saree for me to wear while getting ready to come here,raman likes to see me in sarees,so i was wearing sarees"
vandu:smiles seeing her sister love towards her husband,"it might be very good if all bhallas had came to my function"
ishu:gives a fake smile
bala:walks to vandu's room with plate of fruits
sitting beside her he forwards the plate to vandu
vandu:keeping a yuck expression "bala i dont want to eat these tasteless fruits"
bala:pleads vandu which goes futile
after lots of persuading vandu agrees to eat while bala feeds her
ishu:smiles at their love and reminds raman
"jiju loves u alot akka"
vandu:hoo u r thinking that,but the reason behind his pampering is the baby,he loves his baby most so he is feeding me
ishu:kuch bhi mi jiju loves u alot
vandu:u wont believe me now,when u will become mother u will get to understand,when ur raman starts pampering ur child more than u
ishu:smiles shyly listening the mention of being mother
while vandu and bala smiles silently seeing blushing ishu
...
in the hall rinky and karthik starts fighting regarding the food items
while mihir and mihika rushes to stop their fighting
mihir:rinky what was that u r fighting like a kid,stop it
mihika:karthik,what is this let her decide the menu,u r becoming childish day by day
karthik:ohh u r lecturing stop that,it wont suit u,come rinky hum select karengi
rinky:glancing at mihir walks with karthik
while mihika smiles sheepishly looking at mihir
mihir:miku hum raath me date par chelingi kya?
mihika:no mihir,ishu akka was their after long time and moreover function hi naa aaj,phir kaabi dheklungi
sharada:who listened their convo walks to them "mihika my going to be son-in-law is asking u to come for drive u r refusing him"
go now,we have still 2hrs time to start function
mihika:ok amma i will go,turning to mihir "mihir i will go and change dress"
mihir:nods happily

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Posted: 9 years ago
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part-73(b)
continuation from part-73(a)

bala:ishu go to ur room and take rest u might be feeling tired
ishu:tell me u want to romance with ur wife,dont bring some lame excuses
vandu:haa ishu,its not like that
ishu:haa i know dont try to hide
she leaves to her room
...
sleeping on the bed,facing the ceiling she starts thinking about raman
in the next instant grabing her mobile she dials to raman's number
...
in delhi:
after doctor leaving checking him,and also his P.A sincerely delivered the required files to his boss quickly,he was engrossed in files to escape from his madrasan thoughts
listening to the call,he grabst the mobile to see ishitha's name displaying as the caller
he picks the call eagerly to talk to his wife "hello madrasan"
ishu:i miss u raman
raman:hoo hoo someone was dying to see me,who just left before 4hrs
ishu:phir bhi,aap teek hu naa?
ghar me hi naa?
office me tho nahi hi naa?
raman:hoho breaks apply karo madrasan thumhara express ko,iam fine,just now doctor left after checking me,iam in our bedroom looking into the files
did u met everyone there?
ishu:haa raman,with that she narrates everything that happened in her maternal home
raman:feels happy as his wife was happy for meeting her family
ishu:raman do u know baby in vandu akka womb was moving,akka said the baby is kicking her,aisa ho saktha hi kya raman?or is she fooling me?
she asks eagerly to know the truth of her akka's words
raman:smiles feeling her childish nature, deciding to tease her a bit more he speaks "how can i know madrasan,woman carries babies,not men,if u r doubting ur sister go and ask other woman in ur home"
ishu:in an angry tone,ok i will know myself,but i sensed the baby moment,so it means right,she exclaims loud,so i too might kicked amma when i was her womb"
raman mi aapse baadh me bath karungi,amma se poochna hi if i kicked when i was in her womb or not
not giving a chance to speak him she cuts the call
raman(st):pagal madrasan saab jaldhi hi thumko,iam happy because u r happy
...
appa and amma r looking at the jewellery which they r going to gift vandu
ishu:rushes to their room shouting "amma amma..."
amma and appa looks at ishu with smile playing on their lips,as they missed her rushes in the mansion,her screams,her naughtiness,ishu leaving the mansion made the mansion dull with no smiles or happiness
ishu:looks at the room which was totally messed with clothes,all gift boxes which were emptied,"ayyo what is this amma,see how dirty u made the room,isa hi rakengi kya room?'
amma opens her mouth widely in shock listening to ishu's disciplined words
ishu starts cleaning the room arranging the things in their respective places while appa and amma thinks past
flashback:
ishu starts throwing all the dresses on the bed not understanding what to wear for visiting temple as it was her akka's birthday
amma walks to ishu room to check whether the drama queen,her daughter was ready or not,seeing the room in mess she screams on ishu "ishu yeh kya hi hardhin thumhari vachan se meri kaam jyada horahi hu"
clear the mess
ishu:wait amma,i was unable to decide what should i wear to temple
amma:wear something,its not ur bd,its ur akka's,and clear this mess
ishu:i wont clear,u clear the mess,and i wont come to temple
amma:its ur wish,but clear the mess,or else
ishu:or else what r u trying to frighten me?but iam ishitha vishwanath,remember that
appa and vandu walks into ishu room as the both mother and little daughter screams are resonating the entire mansion
appa:ishu what happened why r u screaming dont waste ur energy,ur amma is mental na
ishu:hi-fi's with appa and winks at amma
amma:vishwa iska natak bahuth horahi hu aajkal,know one worries about me,see how ur daughter messed up the room
ishu:pouts at her appa
appa:what u r doing whole day,everything was done by servants u r becoming fat,so my daughter is helping u in becoming thin
both daughter and father laughs,while vandu and amma looks shockingly at his words
amma:vishwa ek baar achi tharah se aanke kol kar dekho koun mota hi,koun pathla hi
vandu:appa i have to go to college iam getting late,temple jaayengi ya nahi
ishu:its ur birthday take leave from college
vandu:hello iam not like u to search some reason to bunk the college
appa:takes the situation in control to stop third world war between sisters,"ishu jaldhi chelo na beta"
ishu:nahi appa,i wont u people go,see iam unable to select which dress i have to wear
appa:turns to amma "madhu u didnt gave that packet to ishu"?
amma:smaching her head,ayyo vishwa mi bulgayi,with that she rushes to room and comes with the packet
appa:taking the packet from amma,forwards to ishu
"ishu take this dress and get ready fast and come"
amma:vishwa what about this mess
appa:u do after returning from temple
while amma pouts sadly making the trio to burst into laugh
...end of fb...
amma and appa comes out from flash back only to see the room neatly arranged by ishu
amma with appa whispers "humari ishu bahuth badal gayi"
appa:i said u na madhu girls after getting married will become very resposible,that is why i never said anything to her
ishu:smacking her head "ayyo i forgot the purpose why i came to the room"
with that she sits between her parents folding her legs
amma:kya chahiye ishu?she asks kissing her daughter forehead
ishu:placing her head on appa's lap closing her eyes she speaks to both her parents "amma did i kicked u when i was in ur womb"
both amma and appa looks at each other
amma:now why this doubt suddenly ishu
ishu:bolo na amma,vandu akka saying that baby in her womb was kicking her,i too felt that,so i thought to ask u did u felt the same when i was in ur womb
amma:taking a sharp inhale she speaks,"u r very naughty ishu,u and anjali used to kick me always and when vishwa was near by me,u used to kick more
a tear escapes listening anjali's name from the trio eyes
ishu:getting up from appa's lap,"sorry amma,appa because of me u reminded anjali"
appa:to make the situation lite he speaks "madhu how u know that correctly ishu kicked u when i was with u"
amma:because i used to feel the baby kicks on left side of my womb whenever u r with me vishwa,after delivery i asked the doctor which daughter was resided in left side of my womb",doctor said it was ishu,
sharadha comes to their room informing them to get ready as function was about to start
...
mihir and mihika returns home after their short drive
in their car,"miku please ek kiss yaar drive se kya faida hi mujje"
mihika:mihir bahuth hogaya,aab aavo function will start
mihir:no not untill i get a kiss
mihika:pura kandan ziddhi hi kya
mihir:thumse zyada nahi hi
mihika:quickly pecking his cheek runs inside
...
ishu helps vandu to get ready
she helps her to sit on the decorated chair on the stage
soon the function starts everyone gives blesses to vandu and her baby,filling her godh with fruits and sweets
appa and amma gifts vandu alot of jewellery
ishu:presents a diamond necklace set
vandu:ishu why all these
ishu:daadi ne karidhkiya thumhara liye
relatives leaves after having lunch
all family members were seated for lunch
appa:forwards his hand to feed ishu
ishu looks at him with tearful eyes
appa:i missed u beta
ishu:i too appa,she eats the food through her appa
looking at them everyone gets teared up
all the youngsters settles in playing lots of games making vandu to feel happy
ishu settles in their parents room,sleeping on her amma's lap as her appa went to settle distributing money to the workers
amma:ishu what happened why r u silent,this is not my ishu,humari ishu badhalgayi
ishu:aisa kuch nahi hi amma,iam thinking about raman,i came here when he needed me,he is unable to walk because of sprain on left leg
amma:phone karo na ishu
ishu:hmm
amma:kya kanna
ishu: i missed u all,bahuth yaadh aaya aap loug
vandu akka yahi hi rahthi hu naa?
amma:ha she is staying here only
ishu:she is very lucky she is staying with both appa and bala jiju
"in my life i have no such choice"
amma:ishu u shouldnt say like that,u r very lucky u have a big family
ishu:i know but u people wont be with me na
amma:pats her hair lovingly while ishu soon drifts into the sleep
placing her head on the pillow she walks out to continue her work
...
in the evening ishu wakes up only to see her in their parents room alone
rubbing her eyes she starts walking to her room but halted listen vandu akka's words in their room
vandu:looking at tummy she starts scolding bala which is one of her mood swing
"dekho bala,see iam not looking good anymore,see iam becoming fat and this tummy is making me more ugly,while walking iam unable to look down,only i was seeing this tummy
bala:making her to sit on the bed,he kneels down to butter his wife 'vandu u dont know how beautiful u r and i love u more now,because u r making me to become papa
" i love u vandu" u r my life ,because u today i got a family i got parents many siblings
vandu hugs bala and cries her heart out
ishu walks into her with tearful eyes
in delhi:
mrs.bhalla walks to raman to check out how he is doing
she sees raman sleeping on the bed with files scattered all over the bed,while he cuddled himself at the end of the bed sleeping inconvinently
she walks towards the bed
arranging files she places them on the table and while covering him with duvet she notices his phone,she takes it from his hands
and notices ishu's photo on his mobile wall paper
she smiles looking at raman's cute pout
mrs.bhalla:he was sleeping in improper time,who sleeps in the evening 4pm
my son is missing his wife,she runs her fingers on his hair lovingly
u have to be happy forever raman
suddenly his mobile starts ringing
she attends the call not to disturb him
appa on the other end of the call "raman mi appa bath kar rahi hu?"
ishu told u have met with accident how r u feeling raman
i know i did wrong raman,i will ask u to forgive me till the end of my life
but now i called u to thank u for sending ishu to attend vandu function
mrs.bhalla;she rages on appa "hogaya thumhara bashan"
appa:aap aap santhoshiji? namasthe
mrs.bhalla:koun chahiye thumhara namasthe,why u called to my son,wont u people let him stay peacefully
appa:with tearful eyes he speaks on the phone "aisa nahi hi santhoshiji,i just called raman to thank him for sending ishu here
mrs.bhalla:we doesnt need anything from u,we sent our home DIL only to see her happiness we wont forgive ur family never forever
keep that in mind,my son was an innocent fellow he only thinks about others happiness,do u know how reluctantly he sent his wife to mumbai,to ur house
only for the sake of ishitha and her sister happiness he sent her
dont try to take another chance to seperate my DIL and son,this time i will do everything in my power to make hell of ur lifes
she hangs the call angrily
while tears flow continuously from appa's eyes,amma who was standing behind him from the time he called mrs.bhalla
she wipes his tears signalling him to not to cry
...
at night after dinner everyone chitchats sitting in the hall while appa always sticked beside ishu,only looking at her daughter,as he got a rare chance
to be with his daughter
vandu:ishu come with me to my room,i have to show u all the gifts which i got today
both walks into vandu's room
ishu uninterestingly looks at the gifts which her akka was showing excitingly
vandu:looks at ishu's kanchivaram saree keenly "ishu this saree was beautiful green and pink nice combination
ishu:looks at her saree and reminds raman's words "madrasan wear that saree which u weared for our first night u will be breath taking in that saree"
she blushes thinking his words
vandu:not looking at ishu's face she speaks to ishu "ishu give me this saree na,i want this"
ishu:looks at vandu shockingly
vandu:please ishu
ishu:akka iam using this saree,its not new
vandu:phir bhi this is good i want
ishu:with a pout she speaks "i wont give u,"
vandu:why ishu u always gave me the dresses if i liked anything,u changed ishu,u doesnt love me now
ishu:aisa nahi hi akka,i love u always
vandu:then give it to me
ishu:no i cant,this is very special to me
vandu:why ishu
ishu(st):ayyo akka yeh meri first night ka saree how can i give u this
vandu:bolo ishu why u wont give this saree
ishu:with stammered words voh a..a..h "raman gifted me this saree on his birthday which is the first one he celebrated with me
" if i give u this saree if raman asks me about this saree then what should i say,he will feel bad
vandu:understanding ishu concern she speaks "ok ishu iam sorry i dont know na so i asked u"
ishu:no akka wait i forgot to give u with that she walks to her room and comes with a packet
vandu:what is this ishu?
ishu:raman brought this saree for u,he is good at selection
vandu:opens and sees a mazentha color saree with black combination
wow ishu beautiful i think so raman is like appa,bala wont help me in anything like this
bala:who was listening to their talks walks to them "haa u always point out me,it has became very common thing,tell me who selected the saree which u weared now"
u girls na will never satisfied with ur husbands u always will be competing with others
vandu and bala starts fighting while ishu slips from them and walks to appa to spend the left over hours with him
she walks to their parents room to see both her parents in tears
she rushes to them worriedly
appa kya huva aap ro rahi hu?
she asks with tears in her eyes
both amma and appa looks at ishu shockingly
sitting beside them she speaks as tears starts rushing down understanding that they r crying because of her,her MIL
"appa u called to mummiji?did she scolded u?
appa:ishu aisa kuch nahi hi beta
ishu:aap jhoot math bolo mi ithna pagal nahi hu,i can understand what made u to cry in this happiest moment,iam very bad appa because of me u are suffering always
u were keeping silent bearing all their hurting words
appa:ishu when we do some mistake we have to be dare to accept that,iam doing the same
ishu:but appa ur daughter is failing to win her in-laws heart
appa:not all only santhoshiji,she likes u but she is stopping from showering her love on u because of ur appa
ishu cries her heart out hugging her appa
...
at night
amma and appa walks to ishu's room who was playing carroms with karthik mihika and rinki
seeing appa and amma everyone leaves giving space to the daughter and parents
trio settles on the bed
appa:calls the servants to get the bags
ishu:looks at both of her parents frowning her eyebrows
after servants leaving the room placing the bags in the room
appa and amma starts opening the gifts for ishu
he opens a trolley bag full of sarees of all types chiffon,kanchivaram,designery in all good color combinations
while ishu shifts her gaze from her parents towards the bag of sarees
amma:ishu appa ne thumhare liye karidh kiya ek hapthe ke pehle
ishu:looks at appa surprisingly widening her eyes
appa opens another trolley bag which is smaller than the first bag
it was full of chudidhars,coming from kurtha's cotton dresses,salwar kameez and many more designer dresses
ishu was now more shocked
"appa yeh saab"
amma:these are also brought a week back
appa:ishu i thought now u would wear less dresses and more sarees,so i brought more sarees and less dresses
ishu:how u know that iam wearing sarees she asks surprisingly
appa:ishu everyone tells that a mother can guess what was their in her daughter's heart but we too are exceptional i can know what my daughter needs more than ur amma
the love u r showing towards raman,made me understand that u r going to be turned out to be complete married woman who loves to do what her husband likes
ishu:hugs appa lovingly saying thanks to him
amma:hoho little devil there are many surprises to u
appa opens a small bag which is of matching jewellery to her dresses and sarees
his daughter was in cloud nine seeing his appa's love more now
he opens another bag which is of gifts for all ishu in-laws
ishu speaks worriedly "appa will they accept these gifts"
appa:i dont know but we have to give as it was our custom
ishu:appa i will keep all my dresses,sarees and jewellery here in my room,and whenever i come to mumbai i will use them
amma looks at appa worriedly
appa:why ishu,u wont accept appa's gifts to u,i know u r the DIL of bhalla's but still u r my daughter,i want to cherish happy moments by showering with gifts and my love
ishu:appa i love u and my love to u will never come down,
amma:ishu vishwa bought all this selecting the best for u,no one will say nothing beta
ishu:looks at both the parents who were sad for refusing the gifts which they bought with lots of love,thinking alot she speaks,"appa i will take these with me
but ur SIL will pout as u didnt bought anything for him
amma and appa laughs listening to her comments on raman
after dinner everyone retires to their room
ishu walks to appa's room she sees appa sleeping and amma arranging things in their cupboard,not have the heart to disturb her appa's sleep she steps back and halted only by her amma's words
amma:ishu u here?do u want anything beta?
ishu:with a pout,i thought to sleep today with appa,but he slept
amma:smiles at her daughter who was grown up by age but still kid at heart
"so what u can sleep still beside ur appa and bonusly with amma also,today my little devil sleeps between her amma and appa,ok na?
ishu:runs inside the room saying ok
she settles beside appa,while amma takes the other side bolting the door
both daughter and mother shares many things which made madhavi to understand that she was loving raman deeply
finally she felt asleep by resting her head as usually on her appa's shoulder and drifts into a happy sleep
...
in delhi
raman:after tossing a lot sleep welcomed him
feeling a tap on his shoulder to see ishitha in front of him all decked up in dark green saree with black patterns and a black designery blouse her hair flowing down her waist openly swinging where the wind is moving with jasmine flowers adorning her hair
raman:gets up from the bed both mesmerized by her beauty and shocking to see her in the mid night in their room,in delhi
ishu:raman ur sprain on leg was gone?
raman:what madrasan r u thinking that all the life long i will be on bed unable to walk
ishu:gets sad listening to his taunts,she pouts disappointedly
raman:sensing her sadness he speaks,ho madrasan common iam joking,doctor came and checked me,i was walking from the evening but still some pain was their
ishu:in a concern mannered walks to him and makes him to sit on the bed,"raman still there is little pain na so dont stress ur leg"
raman:but madrasan u here in our room in this midnight?
ishu:what raman should i go to some other room in this midnight
raman:madrasan stop ur dirty jokes my question was u r supposed to come tomorrow early morning na from mumbai
ishu:but i was concerned for my hubby so i came today itself
raman:pulls her towards him making her to fall on him while he resting on the headrest of the bed
ishu:ayyo raman ur head,it will be hurted leave me
raman:iam fine madrasan,so ok u came concerning about me but why to get ready like this beautifully ha bolo?
ishu blushes listening his comments,"kuch bhi raman chodo mujje"
raman:not today madrasan kal tho meri thabiyath ka baahana lekar aaya aaj iam perfectly good and i wont be leaving u,who gives up when wife is beautiful and got ready to kill husband with looks
ishu blushes more letting her cheeks to turn into to deep red
raman:ha mera apples aaj bahuth tempting lag rahi hu,zyada laal hai mera apples,taste tho pucca karna padega
he bits her both cheeks litely making her to blush more
he moves towards her lips to kiss them,while ishu pushes him away
he opens his eyes screaming at her for snatching his favourite food
"madrasan do whatever to escape but i wont leave u today,"
daadi:wakes up listening to his screams who was sleeping beside him
she shakes him holding his shoulders
raman looks the room and realises he was dreaming sleeping in his daadi's room
daadi:raman why r u screaming u r saying that u wont leave i didnt listened clearly any nightmare raman?
raman:feeling disappointed he gets down from the bed speaking to daadi "no daadi kuch nahi just a dream"
daadi:but where u r going?
raman:i will sleep in my room iam unable to sleep here
daadi:smiles understanding his plight,only this night raman
raman:sleeps on his bed keeping her photo frame near to his heart,while tears flows down which he was not in a position to sense that he was crying like a kid
...
in mumbai:
sensing someone's touch on her cheek ishu wakes up
seeing raman at foot of the bed who was completely hovering above her she opens her mouth in a perfect o shape
he linger his finger on her face making her to blush
he whispers in her ear,"madrasan r u going to disturb ur parents
ishu:coming from her dreamland speaks in a whisper,"raman u here,in mumbai,in appa's room?how?
raman:iam missing u madrasan so i came here instantly,what i did anything wrong by coming here?
ishu:nods her head negatively with shy completely taking over her
raman:so r u coming with me or else u r going to disturb ur parents
ishu:speaks shyly "raman where i have to come"
raman:where matlab kya hi madrasan to our room,i mean urs,r u going to make ur parents see our romance
ishu blushes more listening his words
taking her hand into his he helps her to get down from the bed,both walks to their room hand in hand looking into each other eyes
raman:turns towards her after bolting the door,he looks at her top to bottom
ishu:raman aapka sprain?
raman:iam fine we have lot more to talk and do,waise madrasan i asked u to wear our first night saree,but u r in chudidhar ha?
ishu:biting her lips hmm,function hogaya raman,function me vahi saree pehenliya miney
raman:ok no problem,i have more thinks to do,he walks close to her while she lost in his eyes which were reflecting love towards her
she walks back while he steps towards her,hitting to the wall she yelps in pain making her to come back from her dreams
she opens her eyes and understoods that she was hitted to the headrest but not to the wall,and she was dreaming about raman
tears whelled up in her eyes,as she was craving for him since she left their house in the early morning
silently slipping from the bed she rushes to her room,bolting the door,taking his photo frame from her bag,placing it near to her heart she drifts into sleep murmuring his name



note:friends let me get a small introduction about u all,i know very less people names who r reading my story,dont know till when i will be active in this forum,again work pressure started to me😭😛😊

Edited by sarayasriya - 9 years ago
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Res... 73 parts will unres one by one. 😊 tanks for informing us about ur tight schedule. Till then I will enjoy by reading all updates of this ff. 😊
Edited by AttitudeQueen13 - 9 years ago
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Thanks for the double dhamaaka Sriya.
Emotional re union was nice.
Both of them are missing each other like anything.
Mrs.Bhalla still pissed off at Iyers it seems.
For a moment I thought Raman gonna surprise Ishu by coming to that function by keeping his anger out of it. Do cont soon.

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