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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kras

really nice update

mihir and ishita bonding is really nice

mihir really respect ishita a lot and ishita understands mihir also

mihir shares everything about mihika with ishita

and mrs bhalla overhear their conversation

i think mrs bhalla change her mind towards ishita slowly

and she adores her very soon

mihir and mihika loves each other a lot but mihika fear was also right because mihir leave her when she needed him and appa concern was also right

raman really loves his brother

he went to see mihir first after his office

so ishu wants a baby and raman doesn't want and they fought about this matter

and now i am very curious to know that why raman doesn't want a baby a what is ishita next step now

over all a nice update

you portray every relation very nicely

sorry for my mistakes

and update soon



thanku u commented everything of my update,there are no mistakes
thanks for ur lovely comments
i will update soon😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: misavelon789

Shocking update...

why Raman doesn't want any kids...
oh my god here we are dreaming about ishu's adorable kids.
please clear these conditions asap.


ur doubts will be cleared in the nex part,i too waiting to show ishu adorable kids
will update soon😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
hi friends iam here with next updates,thanks for ur wonderful comments one imp thing i want to say,iam not going to update for another 2weeks but i compensated those updates now,i will waiting for ur wonderful comments,ur encouragement is what i needed

part-76

raman:mujje abhi abhi baby nahi chahiye
ishu:abhi abhi mathlab chey mahine hogaya humari shadi hokar
baby aane ke samay thak ek saal bhi hojayengi
raman:ishitha make it to u clear i doesnt want baby now
ishu:nahi mujje chahiye baby she speaks stubbornly making raman to go more anger
raman:holding her wrist tightly mujje nahi chahiye yeh baath yaadh rako


ishu:releasing her hand from his grip runs to daadi's room
while raman realises how he behaved with her,"yaar raman thum kya kar diya,u should have said to her calmly"
he settles on the bed lost in thoughts thinking about ishitha's words
...
ishu in daadi room
rushing to daadi hugging her she cries her heart out
while daadi tries to console her not able to comprehend what made her to cry bitterly
making her to drink some water,and settling on the bed along with her pothi she speaks pating her hair
"ishitha first tell what happened to u?"
ishu speaks with hicupping words "daadi miney kaha raman se mujje baby chahiye,jaise vandu akka ka baby aarahi hu naa"
daadi:understandingly she nods her head asking her to continue further
ishu:lekin raman mujpar gussa nikal diya,voh keh rahi hu inko baby nahi chahiye,mujje warning kar rahi hu
daadi:gets shocked listening to ishitha's words
"raman isa kaha ishitha?" she speaks unable to believe her words
ishu:haa daadi,i wont go to that room,i will be here only with u
raman who listened to ishu and daadi's talk walking to the room keeps his hand on ishu's shoulder making her to look at him while daadi looks at raman questioning him with her eyes,what he need
ishu jerks away his hand angrily and moves away
raman:ishitha chelo humara room ko
ishu:mi nahi aavungi she speaks without looking at him
raman:ishitha dont make me to go anger once again
ishu remains silent while daadi decided to talk to raman later without ishitha,more to scold him for speaking nonsense
daadi:ishitha go to ur room dear,i will wash his brain later,dont talk to him now,but sleep in that room or else ur mummiji will scold u unnecessarily
ishu walks back to her room silently wiping her tears
while raman follows her without glancing back at daadi
ishu walks to the room which is attached to their bedroom,sitting on the sofa hugging her knees she cries bitterly remainding raman's behavior and his words
she speaks to herself "aap mujjse kabi nahi pyar kiya raman,kiya tho isa nahi baath karengi,aap jhooti hu"
raman:walks to the room where ishu went with a glass of milk to her,sitting beside her he holds her hand only to be jerked away again
forcing her to face him he speaks angrily "dont u dare to push me away again ishitha"
ishu:looking angrily at him she speaks "kya karengi mujje maarengi kya"
raman:hugging her tightly speaks with tearful eyes "please madrasan isa maath bolo,mi nahi jeepavungi thumhari bina"
ishu:aap jhoot bol rahi hu,mujje patha chal gayi,sacche mujje pyar kar rahi tho aap isa nahi bolengi
raman:kissing her hair he speaks "sorry very sorry ishitha,i didnt intended to speak like that,but seeing ur sturbborness i just spelled my thoughts in a wrong way"
ishu:hugging him back cries bitterly
raman:ishitha meri baath shanth se suno na
ishu:nahi
raman:please ishitha
seeing her being silent he speaks "ishitha mujje bhi baby chahiye"
ishu:jumps away from him listening to his words with a spark in her eyes,saachi raman aapko bi baby chahiye?
raman:ha lekin abhi nahi hi
her face fells down with sad listening to his words
raman:cupping her face speaks to her "ishitha i want baby but we are married just recently"
ishitha:tho kya raman iss me baby ka lena dena kya hi
raman:see ur vandu akka was going to give birth to a baby na
ishu:she speaks sadly with a pout "ha baby aayengi"
raman:see ur akka was planned for a baby after 2years,she enjoyed her married life with bala very much then thought about baby
but see we got married before 6months after our marriage many problems it was just 1month everything was normal between us
i want to spend more time wiht u,then after we both can enjoy with our baby
ishu remains silent
raman:thumko mujjse time spend karna nahi chahthi ishitha
baby hi tho hum dono ek saath time nahi spend karengi,aur hum dono milkar romi aur mihir ka shaadi bhi karna hi naa,thum baby se busy ho tho koun karengi saab kaam unka shaadi mey
u have that responsibility na as bhabi to them
ishu:yes i know my responsibility
raman:so if we plan for baby now,then how can do their marriage with all responsibilities in a grand way
ishu:she silents nods her head positively turning her face to the other side
raman:ishitha if u still want then iam ok with it,ur happiness matters most to me
ishu:hugging him she speaks sadly "its ok raman,iam sorry i should had understood ur feelings"
raman:thanks ishitha for understanding me,sorry for disappointing u
wrapping her hands around his neck laying her head on his chest she closes her eyes thinking about the things happened which was entirely opposite to what she had thought
raman pats her hair lovingly feeling her in his arms
both fells asleep on the sofa itself
daadi walks angrily to talk with raman privately,seeing them no where in the bedroom she marches to the attached room and finds them both asleep on the sofa
their loving form all her anger melted
still she cant delay the topic so she patted on raman's shoulder making him awake
raman stops daadi from talking further showing her ishu's sleeping form
getting down from the sofa carefully taking ishitha in his arms he walks towards their bedroom placing her on the bed covering with quilt pecking her forehead lovingly he walks out with daadi out of the room
in daadi's room:
daadi:r u mad raman,what u r thinking about urself
every woman wants to become a mother,she too deserves it,who r u to say no,it is her right,being her husband u have to be with her,but u r refusing her wish
raman:yes i was refusing
daadi:screams at him angrily seeing his stubbornness "this is what i teached to u,if ur father didnt wished for children then u ur brother and sister wouldnt had alive with blood and flesh now
raman remains silent
daadi:dekho raman agli baar isa harkath math karo raman
angrily she looks at raman as he is not giving any reply to her orders only to see tears in his eyes
concern overtaking her anger she speaks to raman "raman kya hogaya thum ro rahi hu?"
raman:kuch nahi
daadi:making him to sit on her bed rufling his hair lovingly enquires him
raman:daadi do u think i will oppose ishitha's wish,i too want to be a father
daadi:then what is ur problem raman
raman:"ishitha" daadi
daadi:kya raman,thum kya baath kar rahi hu mujje kuch samajthi nahi
raman:daadi mujje ishitha ka fikar hi isiliye isa mana kiya uska wish ko
daadi:matlab
raman:she is not capable to upbring a baby now,because she herself was a child
daadi:yeh kya raman,she is very matured girl her way of living was childish
raman:no daadi,she will be in so much confusion for every decision of hers
i was worried about her,if anything happens to me,she cant live,then what about our baby
daadi:raman pagal hogaya kya thum isa sochna bi math karo
raman:we dont know our future daadi,if something in future traps her to live alone only with our baby will she be able to live?
she is not an independent woman,till our marriage her appa took care of her,now iam,always one wont be accompained with us,we born alone and we will die alone
daadi:raman thum sacchi me pagal hogaya?
raman:nahi daadi mi saahi bath kar rahi hu,she is not capable to upbring a baby,i cant believe her,because i know about her
daadi:so life long u wont plan for a child of urs
raman:no until i change her to a independent woman i wont plan for baby
mrs.bhalla walks in when raman left a confused daadi
mrs.bhalla:mummiji i couldnt understand what raman wants,i too not an independent woman still iam dependent on my husband
like me ishitha,why he is going broad
daadi:i too cant understand what he wants,he is thinking ishitha was still a child,he is thinking she cant take care of their baby
mrs.bhalla:no woman will be trained how to take care of her baby,it will be in her implicitly,pagal kutha kat kiya usko,i will tell ishitha not to listen raman and i will ask her not to take any precautions listening to raman
daadi:mujje kuch samajthi nahi toshi,jo karna karo,thumhara marzi lekin thumhari vachan se uski beech me kuch jagada nahi hona chahiye mujje


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part-77


after 2days
ishitha in her room sitting on the bed still thinking about raman words
raman:was getting ready to his office glancing again and again on ishitha
to make her normal he starts his antics "ishitha arey ishitha idhar aavo dekho yaha mera shirt ko"
ishu listening to his screams walks to his dressing table and questions him with his eyebrows
he shows his shirt button which he plucked away just before
raman wear another shirt for today,i will sew it today
nahi madrasan i want this shirt only
ishu:ok remove that shirt i will sew it
raman:no i wont
ishu:then how can i sew it raman
raman:isa hi karo
smacking her head taking a thread of button color she starts sewing the button on his shirt while he stares at her naughtily
after completing her task she looks at him indicating her task was finished
when she was about to walk back he pulls her towards him wraping his hand around her waist
while she wraps her hands around his neck instantly to balance herself
not giving a chance to open her mouth to scold him,he hugs her tightly nuzzling his face in her neck kissing her naughtily she blushes more for his naughty antics
ishu:blushing at him she speaks "raman chodona office jaana hi naa aap"
raman:pulling her more close towards him looking at her eyes he speaks naughtily "madrasan hum abhi thak honeymoon par nahi gaya naa,aab chelengi kya?"
ishu:slapping on his arm casually speaks to him "kuch bhi raman,humara honeymoon hogaya,aapko yaad nahi daadi ne humko US beja "
raman:reminding his office tour to US with ishu "this is not fair ishitha,we went there for our office work"
ishu:i dont know about anything humara honeymoon hogaya,aab chupchap se office chalo nahi tho mi daadi ko bulavungi yaha
raman leaves to office shooting dagers at her,while she giggles with his antics
in office:
raman was thinking about numerous things about ishitha,how to make her seriously thinking about future
he starts reminding his starting days of marriage and his deeds,reminding of her MBA application form he immediately calls mihir to come to his cabin
mihir:rushing to raman's cabin to know the reason behind his call "bhai u called me,is there any problem?"
raman:mihir get the certificates of ishitha from mumbai, from her parents,and i want an MBA admission in the very good university
mihir:but bhai why suddenly u r thinking bhabi to continue her further studies
raman:she was interested to do MBA,but because of me she didnt joined in MBA,now iam rectifying my mistake
mihir:but bhai
raman:stop ur but and do what i said
mihir leaves from there nodding his head positively
...
at the evening:
raman comes from office and enquires about ishitha with mrs.bhalla and gets to know that daadi and ishitha went to visit temple
he walks to his room to search a file which was missed in the office
in that process he gets file of ishitha's certificates,he immediately dials to mihir and asks him to come back as he found ishitha's certificates
mihir:kya bhai aap bhi naa,i was almost near the airport
raman:bewakoof u still didnt reached the airport na,so come back
mihir:drives back to home muttering about his bhai for pestering him always
..
raman sitting back on his bed opens ishu's certificates
he looks shockingly at his 10th class certificate seeing her percentage,what only 50% in 10th,is she this much poor in studies
shaking his head unbelivebly he picks another certificate which is her 12th standard,"in 12th also she got less but better than 10th ,60% but not good
he takes her degree certificate and sees the percentage as 50%,she is very poor in studies,iam the gold medalist in double MBA but my wife was just passed candidate,kisiko yeh baath patha chelengi tho meri izzath ka kya hi?yeh bagawaan
how could i get a seat in MBA for her,for these poor percentage,beta chelo baahuth mushkil kaam hi thumhara saamne
ishu who came from the temple walks to her room as her mummiji informed raman's arrival from office,seeing raman laughing like mad seeing some papers in his hands,she walks to him to know what those papers which made him to laugh like that
,seeing the papers as her certificates she snathces it from raman and looks at him angrily
raman raises his head to see who snatched the papers was none other than his wife,he laughs more looking at her
while ishu pouts looking at his laugh on her marks
raman:ishitha frankly i dont know that u r too good in studies,how u managed to get such a outstanding marks in ur exams till now,can u give me some tips
ishu:with a pout,why u took my file out without my permission,there is no need to tease me,i know iam poor at studies,but that doesnt mean u to laugh sarcastically at me
raman laughs more now and then reminding her marks
she walks out angrily for teasing her
raman(st):ho madrasan ko gussa hogaya,thum bhi na raman,what was there to laugh like a mad,now i have to manofy this madrasan,he walks down to look where his madrasan was,seeing no one in the hall he walks to kitchen
where his wife was preparing tea for him showing all her anger on the utensils and ingrediants
he walks towards her only to be ignored royally by his beautiful wife
hugging her from back wrapping his arms around her waist and placing his chin on her shoulder he smiles seeing her ignorance still
"ho meri madrasan thum kithna hot lag rahi hu iss gusse mey,aab thum bahuth tempting lag rahi hu yaar
she shrugs away his hands filtering the tea into the cup
she turns to his side and angrily places the cup in his hands
and walks to the hall settling herself on the sofa with a pout on her lips
raman smiling at her antics walks to her and settles beside her with the tea cup in his one hand and the other hand wrapping around her shoulder he pulls her towards him while she struggles to get out of his hold
raman:madrasan chup chap se baito mere saath kuch nakra math karo
ishu:chodo mujje mi aap par bahuth gussa me hi,har baath par mujje tease karthi rahithi aap
raman:madrasan stay still dont move see it is getting difficult for me to drink tea
ishu:mujje chodkar bhi tea pee saakthi aap
raman:wow u know what till now i didnt get such a great idea,to be frank i have to say that u r really brilliant
ishu:pouts listening to his sarcastic comments
raman:what madrasan u removed ur anger on me on this tea,see u forgot to put sugar,it is very bitter
ishu:karelu baath karne valeko saab karelu hi laghtha hi
raman:saachi madrasan it is really bitter,if u doubt me u can check,he forwards the tea cup to her
ishu sips innocently thinking it was really bitter,understanding his naughty antics she smiles at him placing the cup on the table
raman:what r u not feeling bitter
ishu:nahi mujje bahuth meeta lag rahi hu,she hids her face in his shirt smiling shyly
raman:hugs her caressing her hair lovingly

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part-78

after 3days
raman gets an admission in best B-school in Delhi,with his business mind
he calls mihir to bring ishitha to university
...
in mansion:
ishu:mihir but where should i come i couldnt understand anything
mihir:bhabi i too dont know bhai asked u to bring iam doing the same if we go more lately then he will kill me
ishitha nodding her head getting into the car silently while raman zooms away the car towards the university where raman was waiting for his wife
mihir stops the car infront of the MBA University while ishu gets down from the car surprised why she was there infront of MBA school
ishu:mihir hum yaha kyou aaya
mihir:bhabi bhai bulaya,both walks to the administration office where raman was speaking to the head of the school
raman:talks to head introducing ishitha to him "ishitha he is the head of this business school"
ishu:greets him not understanding why raman was introducing to some of head of MBA university
the trio walks out
raman:mihir u go and wait in the car i will be back in 5minutes while ishitha looks at him thinking something was fishy
ishu:raman why u brought me here,chelo hum ghar chelengi
raman:hum nahi mi chelungi office thum andhar jaayengi
ishu:andhar kaha?
raman:inside to ur class
ishu:class kya hi raman,mujje kuch samajthi nahi
raman:hello madam why i will bring u to university
ishu:how could i know
raman:thum saache mey pagal hu madrasan
ishu:raman mi ghar chelungi aap yaha hi kade raho
she takes a step but raman stops her holding her wrist
raman:ishitha i joined u in this university
ishu:in shock kya?
raman:u r going to study MBA here,how was my surprise
ishu:walking back to him glaring at him angrily she speaks "kya bakwas bol rahi hu raman aap ?"
raman:placing his hands on her shoulder he speaks "what ishitha why r u showing anger on me,i was rectifying my mistake which i did 5months back
ishu:i was unable to understand what u r saying to me
raman:pagal kutha kaat kiya kya,u r joined here to continue ur studies
ishu:who asked u to do this,i wont if u want u go and study
she tries to walk away only to be pulled by raman angrily making her to land on him
raman:gritting his teeth,dont play ur pranks on me,on the first days of our marriage,u had applied for MBA admission,because of me u were unable to join at that time
so i got the admission now
ishu:yes at that time i thought to study only to win my appa's love back,but i wont study now,
raman:its ok ishitha now ur appa is talking to u but u can continue ur studies,u can be an independent woman ishitha
ishu:raman aapka bakwas mi nahi sunna hi,i want to go home so better u leave me
raman:ishitha dont be stubborn,with lots of effort i got admission to u,see the firt semester had started before 3months,now one give u admission in the middle of semester
i agreed for his conditions,and he wont say to anyone that u r my wife,so there will be lots of privacy for u,did u got that
ishu:with tearful eyes,i doesnt want to study why u cant understand it,who asked u to join me
raman:as ur husband its my decision,go to class silently
ishu:struggles to get out of his embrace while tears starts flowing from her eyes like a kid who refuse to go to school on her first day
raman:wipes her tears and kisses on her forehead lovingly speaking to her,"ishitha if ur love on ur appa and on me is true then u will go inside to the class or else its upto u
ishu:comes out of his embrace and speaks angrily "r u blackmailing me?"
raman:if u r acting like a kid then i have to do this,it is a test for u
ishu:i will go but not because of u,its because u r testing my love for appa,for u i will never do this,because my appa never force me like u
she walks towards the class and walks back with tearful eyes,"see because of u everyone looks at me teasingly,seeing a married woman joining in the university at middle of semester
raman:ishitha there is no age limit to for education,no one will tease u
ishu:still i doesnt want to go raman
raman:just now u said that u will do everything for ur appa,what happened within secs
ishu:wiping her tears i will do everything for appa,and i wont do anything for u,i wont listen to any of ur words from now on
raman:he takes her words litely and speaks "ok wait he calls mihir while mihir was infront of them within secs
taking the college bag from mihir's hand he asks mihir to go
he forwards the bag to ishitha while she shouts at him angrily "do u want me to wear this bag and go inside to the class"
raman:looking at the bag he speaks "it was good na madrasan these days college girls are wearing these one side bags na madrasan"
ishu:no i wont
raman:ok its ur wish,i will give the books u carry it in ur hands if u want
ishu:snatches the bag from his hand
raman:evening driver will come to pick up u,if i come u will say iam snatching ur privacy
ishu:walks away angrily without speaking to him
while he smiles looking at her disappearing figure
...
in the evening
ishu:getting down from the car rushes inside her room sobbing bitterly which she was stopping since the time she entered the class in her college
mrs.bhalla notices ishu running to her room with tearful eyes
why she is crying what happened to her,where raman took her in the morning
hoo now mummiji is also not their in home,she walks slowly to ishu's room
seeing ishitha crying badly burrying her face in the pillow
as a mother concern overtook her stubborness and walked to ishitha,patting her head made ishitha to look mrs.bhaalla,unable to control her tears she hugs mrs.bhalla and cries her heart out
mrs.bhalla:ishitha kya huva,thum kyou ro rahi hu?
ishu:with hicupping voice she mutters only the word raman
mrs.bhalla:kya raman,raman ne kuch kiya kya bolo mujje mi usko chodungi nahi
raman enters the room just then and stands at the door way listening to mrs.bhalla while ishu still in mrs.bhalla's embrace
raman:walks towards them and sits beside ishitha,he places his hand on her shoulder which she shrugs away angrily
mrs.bhalla:looks angrily to bringing ishitha again to square one
"raman why ishitha crying,did u do anything wrong
raman:maa how could i know i just came now,then how can i know why she is crying
ishu:looks at him angrily and speaks while wiping her tears,aapko patha nahi hi kya mi kyou ro rahi hu
raman:speaks innocently unable to understand her words,"how could i know ishitha why u r crying,u will have a reason always to cry
ishu:u r the one who makes me to cry
mrs.bhalla who is unable to understand their heated argument stops them,"tell anyone what happened?"
ishu:mummiji he joined me in MBA i doesnt want to study,he forcefully joined me,he wants everything according to him,he never thinks about me,i hate him,i really hate him
raman walks out angrily listening her accusations on him,
mrs.bhalla calms ishitha after lots of effort
coming out she scolds raman,for saying no to baby and for joining ishitha in college

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part-79

at night
everyone comes to know about ishitha resuming her studies daadi to doesnt likes his idea
at dinner
raman:walks to the dining area seeing ishu no where he enquire with daadi only to know that
she didnt came out from the evening
raman walks to his room,she was no where in the bedroom,when he was about to go to hall he notices the drawing room door attached to their bedroom was opened,he walks inside only to see ishitha fallen asleep with tear stricken face
he taps on her shoulder making her to wake up from the sleep
she turns her face away
raman:ishitha come down everyone are waiting for u
ishu:remains silent
raman:ishitha iam saying to u only
ishu:i doesnt want to talk with u dont come near to me
raman:angrily pulls her towards him
ishu looks at him with tearful eyes,i know u never valued for my words,u will do the opposite of my request
raman:why u r behaving like a kid ishitha,whatever iam doing its only for ur own good,u should be independent,it was what i want
continuing further studies in not a bad thing ishitha
ishu:pushing him away walks into their bedroom
raman:its ok come to dinner
ishu:u go,iam not feeling hungry
raman:if u wont come i too wont go for dinner,if i wont eat daadi will not eat,if daadi doesnt eat no one will eat
only because of u everyone will be sleeping with empty stomach
ishu:u always blackmails me,i hate u really,she storms out angrily while he follows out sadly for hurting her
after dinner ishu silently walking into the drawing room locking herself in that room
raman walks into the room and understands that she is ignoring him royally which made him felt very bad
slipping into the bed he closes his eyes feeling why she is unable to understand the reason behind her actions
next day morning
ishu gets up early and comes to their bedroom to see raman sleeping cuddling to the pillow with frown on his face
(st):why raman why r u doing this to me,i doesnt want to study,i hate this,u dont know i lost anjali only because of this crazy love on her studies
sitting beside him she caresses his forehead lovingly which removed the frown on his face,kissing his forehead,she walks to take her bath
working in the kitchen ishu thinks to cook a plan to escape from going to college
raman walks out getting ready to go office
after breakfast ishu walks to her room thinking about what to plan
raman sensing her plan walks into the room
taking his car keys turns to ishitha who was sitting on the bed biting her nails
"ishitha take ur bag i will drop u at college
ishu:mi nahi aavungi meri thabiyat teek nahi hi
raman:ok we will go first to doctor then i will drop u at college
ishu:aapko ek baar boli tho samaj nahi sakthi kya,she shouts on top of her voice
daadi and mrs.bhalla rushes to their room listening her screams
ishu seeing them starts her acting holding her tummy she cries as if she was feeling some pain
mrs.bhalla:walks to her in concern,"kya huva ishitha?"
ishu:mummiji bahuth buri tharaha peet me dard ho rahi hu
mrs.bhalla:wait i will bring medicine for u
raman:stops mrs.bhalla and speaks "maa voh jhoot bol rahi hu,she is trying to escape from going college"
ishu glares at him for spoiling her plan
daadi:raman if for one day she doesnt go to college nothing will happen
raman:u dont know about her drama,please u dont spoil her further
ishu:cries seeing raman destroying her plan,nahi daadi,saachi daadi,peet me bahuth dard ho rahi hu
daadi tries to talk but raman stops her and signals to go out from the room
after they leaving the room,raman turns to her
ishu refuses to come with him
raman:ishitha just come with me,dont create a drama in the early morning
ishu:iam not creating any drama,just go away
pulling her down from the bed he carries her on his shoulder taking her bag into another hand while she shouts at him struggling to get out of his hands "ravaan kumar chodo mujje,chodo..."
he walks down,everyone looks shockingly seeing the raman's strictness and ishitha's stubborness
pushing her to the passenger seat he drives to her college
while she sits defeatedly
...
ishitha gets down from the car taking her bag into her hands,raman stops her and speaks to him "ishitha concentrate on studies u joined in the middle of the semester
ishu enters into the college angrily glaring at raman
in college in her class:
yesterday everyone stared at her like a aliean
she silently sits at the last row
3girls walks to her chair and introduces themselves to her
she gets to know their names as divya,mamatha,kaushika
the three turned as her friends within minutes and settled in the same row
while ishu smiles remembering her old friends
...
in the home:
mrs.bhalla:mummiji i cant understand why raman is behaving like this,why to send her to college now
daadi:he is fulfilling her father resposibility
like a kid she is stubborn to go to college,cant u see the love in raman's eyes towards his wife
mrs.bhalla:but this may bring distance b/w them
daadi:what do u think of my potha he made ishitha to love him when she hated him to the core,now she is loving him,how can she stay away from him
till she accustoms to the new environment she throws tantrums on raman,poor raman he has to bear her mood swings even before she becoming a mother
she laughs at herself thinking how raman will bear all her antics when she really gets conceived
mrs.bhalla walks away to kitchen smilingly listening to daadi's words
...
at night both sleeps seperately
while raman sleeps with a pouting face

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part-80

ishu gets ready in a chudidhar
raman noticing that enquire with her "ishitha why r u wearing chudidhar?"
ishu:speaks angrily to him "its my wish what to wear,from today i will live according to my wish,i wont sacrifice anything for u"
dont speak to me from today
she leaves the mansion to the college
while raman drives to his office sadly
...
2weeks continues in the same way
both sleeping in 2 different rooms
in a fine morning:
raman paces in office thinking how to manofy his madrasan
(ST):this madrasan is making me desperate day by day,she making me to sleep with empty stomach,kithna dhin hogaya kuch romance karke,kaise biwi hi,kuch bhi hojayengi tho mujje dhoor rakhengi kya,i should do something or else she will make me to sleep alone in
the bedroom for whole 2years until she completes her MBA
raman kuch tho socha beta nahi tho yeh madrasam thumko pagal banayengi
after thinking alot he drives back to home buying a saree for ishitha
...
seeing daadi cutting vegetables sitting near the dining table walks to her
raman:daadi i want to ask u one thing
daadi:stops chopping the vegetables listening to his words while mrs.bhalla puts off the stove and walks to them
raman:daadi i thought to give a gift for ur birthday when i was in US,but we didnt got a chance to celebrate ur birthday because of my sudden marriage
now i want to give u that gift and u should accept it
daadi:aisa kya hi raman,u r pleading me
raman:opening his tab shows the mansion which he directed the constructor to build according the house which he seen in US
daadi:raman eh ghar kisi ka hi?
raman:its ours,ur gift for this birthhday
daadi:par raman,u know na this mansion has memories of ur daadu,i cant walk out from this mansion
raman:par daadi u said u will agree,ok if u doesnt want to stay then we will come back after 2months
please daadi please just for 2months
daadi:ok but we have to do gruha pravesh i will ask pandit to fix the date
raman:kissing on her cheek walks to his room happily (st):madrasan now u cant escape from me,there will be no other room attached to our bedroom,i will see how u r going to resist me
jaldhi aavo madrasan thumhare liye intazar kar rahi hu
...
in the night
daadi:announces moving to new house the next day morning as pandit fixed the date
in ishra room
before ishitha walking to her drawing room he stops her
ishu:kya hi?
raman:handsover the packet to her,"yeh thumhare liye kal hum naya ghar ke gruhapravesh kar rahi hu na,isiliye
ishu:keeping it aside on the bed,she silently walks to the drawing room,hurting raman
raman silently walks to the bed and slips into sleep,while a lone tear escapes from his eyes,seeing her behavior
ishu comes out from her room in the midnight and looks at raman who slept carelessly in high A.C shivering with cold without covering himself on any duvet
looking at the strains of tears on his face,tears rushes down from her eyes,she covers him with duvet,after turning the A.C down, sitting beside him she opens the gift packet
it was a designery saree of voilet and orange color saree with gold thread work on it
she caresses the saree lovingly
pecking his forehead lovingly pats his hair and fells asleep placing her head on the same pillow of his
at the early morning she finds herself on his bed and reminds how she fell asleep on the same bed,sensing him beside her getting down from the bed rushes to the drawing room and bolts it
...
everyone gets ready for going to new mansion for gruhpravesh
ishu walks with her bag wearing her daily dress
raman looks at her surprsing for her behavior
daadi:ishitha where r u going
ishu:to college
mrs.bhalla:but beta we are moving to our new house na,u r the DIL of her house,u should do gruhpravesh
no college today
ishu:looks at raman,to listen what he says
raman:i applied leave for u yesterday itself ishitha,he speaks with a dull voice
daadi:go and get ready like a bhalla's DIL,u should look beautifully
ishu walks back to her room and opens the wardrobe and takes a saree into her hand and turns towards the dressing table to see the saree which raman gifted her yesterday
night,keeping her stubborness aside she takes the saree into her hands as she has no heart to hurt her raman more
nicely decking up in the saree which he brought,she wears a simple diamond necklace and earrings which were matching to her saree
she walks down making raman to look at her widening his eyes
romi:wow bhabi u r looking beautiful,see bow bhai was staring at u,he teases raman
while mihir and mr.bhalla chuckles seeing raman
ishu:smiles shyly looking at them while raman comes out from his dreamyland and glares at romi
daadi and mrs.bhalla walks out from their rooms getting ready
everyone leaves in 2cars raman,ishitha on front while daadi and mrs.bhalla at the back seat
while father and other sons in other car
raman glances at ishu now and then,while ishu tries to hide her blush from noticing by him
...
soon they reaches the new mansion
ishu looks at the mansion with a surprising expression,she was dumbstick seeing the beautiful mansion
daadi and others voice out the same which ishu felt about the mansion
entering inside the gate ishu looks at the garden which was her famous area in every house of hers
there was a long flower garden at the front view of house after entering in from the gate
and a small lane of garden surrounding the entire mansion,forgetting everything she walks around the garden touching each and every plant
daadi:calls her "ishitha u can enjoy looking at this garden afterwards first we have to do gruhapravesh
pandit also reaches at the sametime,after doing the rituals ishu enters into the mansion along with raman performing puja she lits the diya
after sending away the pandit,raman shows everyone rooms,atlast he walks with ishu and daadi towards their room
he opens the door ishu opens her mouth in a perfect -o- shape seeing their room,
their room was very vast with a king sized bed,a beautiful dressing table and a glass table before the bed
2wardrobes,attached washroom,what attracted more is,their room had a path to special garden which he modified later for ishitha's sake
which was seperated by his bedroom with a glass wall and a pond in the center of the garden
she rushes inside where daadi and raman looking at her childish expressions
forgetting that she is not speaking to raman in her happiness of seeing the beautiful sight infront of her
she voice out her happiness "raman this house especially our room was so beautiful i really loved it
raman(st):madrasan forgot about her mounavrath on me with her happiness,and she forgot there was no other room attached to our room,i did everything cautiously madrasan i removed the sofa too,who knows u will sleep on that sofa only
looking at his sheepish grin she remembers her act of not speaking to him,she turns away seriously and walks out from the room
raman pouts looking at daadi
daadi:my raman can win anything,u should not accept ur defeat easily
raman:daadi mi dekhlungi aaj uss madrasan meri baahonse kaise baag jaayengi
daadi:raman kabhi kabhi sharam rakho,kaisi bath kar rahi hu thum
raman:biwi hi voh meri,isme sharam karne ka kya hi
daadi shaking her head about her impossible potha went to continue the further things in the new house
ishu arranges their clothes in a single wardrobe neatly which meant soo much for raman,smiling at her love he walks to hall
...
at night:
ishu changing her to night formals looks around in her bedroom
(st):ayyo there was only one room here,no other room was attached to this room,where should i sleep not even a single sofa was not there here
raman who was standing at the door way smiles inwardly understanding what she was thinking(st):dekhlungi madrasan aab thum kaise baag jaayengi
sensing raman she walks to wardrobe while raman confusingly walks towards the bed and takes his place
taking a mattress and a pillow she walks towards the glass door which was opening to their garden area attached to their room
raman walks to the door to know what she was doing
arranging her bed at the center space of the garden,she slips into the bed,covering herself with duvet looking lovingly at the flowers around her
raman(st):this madrasan became more intellegent after resuming her studies dekho kaisa mera plan mitti me dal diya

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part-81


next day morninng:
raman comes down to the hall after getting ready and looks surroundings to get a glimpse of ishitha
seeing her no where he asks daadi about ishitha
daadi:raman ishitha college gayi na
raman:nowadays she is not coming with me,she is going alone with the driver,baahuth hogaya madrasan ka drama
stepping out from the mansion he asks the driver to start the car
driver:sir car had broken down,one car went to drop ishitha mam,other cars took by romi and mihir sir
raman:shit how should i go now
driver:sir woh benze car hi naa mi garrage se baahar lekar aayengi kya
raman:speaks angrily no need of that bloody car
just then ishitha's car comes back to mansion,
raman asks that driver to drive to his office
another driver:sir i have to pick up madam again in the evening
raman:abhi nahi naa,chelo
he droves to his office
...
in the office:
how should i manofy this jhansi ki rani she is becoming stubborn day by day
its almost 3weeks she is not at all speaking to me,pagal madrasan
gusse naak me naachengi usko
...
in college:
in the lunch time:
ishitha with her other three friends sits in cafet for their lunch
kaushika:makes a conversation:ishitha u always bringing punjabi food,r u a punjabian
ishu:ha kaushi iam a punjabian
divya:but u r not looking like a punjabian
ishu:haa actually iam a iyer but married to a punjabi isiliye mi bhi punjabi huu
mamtha:excitingly she speaks,"wow ishitha so ur's is a love marriage
kaushika:bathavo ishitha koun propose kiya thum dono me pehle
ishu:giggles seeing their excitment,
divya:jaldhi bolo ishitha thumhara love story lunch break is going to end
ishu:our's is not love marriage it is an arranged marriage
the trio shouts in shock "what?"
ishu:ok common now the break has finished
kaushika:yeh ishu ur story is very interesting please tell me how a tamil girl and punjabi boy got into this arranged marriage
ishu:kal bathavungi she walks away leaving the three people crazyly cooking their thoughts how their marriage happened
ishu(st):i dont know raman i can spend and play pranks in college too
see how i will spoil ur plans,u urself will ask me to stop studying further
...
at office:
driver walks to cabin with the permission of raman's P.A
driver:sir now i have to go to ishitha mam college it was already late i have to pick up her
raman:getting out from his seat walks out along with driver saying "come iam also going to home in the way we will pick up ishitha"
nodding his head driver walks out
driver:sir this car also not starting
raman:shouts in anger,"what u r doing,dont u have the common sense to give the car at servicing,she will be tensed there
mihir:walks out "bhai kya hogaya?ithna chilla kyou rahi hu"
raman:dekho voh log kaam kaisa car rahi,subah ek car aab ek car,ishitha will be waiting there
mihir:bhai take my car and go driver take this car for servicing
raman:without muttering a word drives fast to the college
...
at college:
ishitha with her friends and other girls of her batch were waiting outside of the college for their vehicles
divya:ishitha i think so ur driver was late today,should i drop u on my bike
ishu(st):ayyo murgan if she sees my home she will faint,i said iam living in a double bedroom flat in an apartment
divya:bolo ishu will u come
ishu:ayyo divya i doesnt want to stress u,he will come soon
after 20mins
kaushika:ishu iam going my driver came to pick up me,if u want u can come with me i will drop
ishu:no u go i will wait
mamtha:atleast call to ur husband or someone in ur family
ishu picks up her phone to dial raman hesitatingly
just then raman's car stops seeing him getting down from the car all the girls rushes to him while ishu opens her mouth widely with shock seeing the girls rushing towards him
raman at first searches for ishu through his eyes,seeing her across him he calms down and looks at his surroundings where all girls are hovering on him
taking out his cooling glasses he smiles at them adjusting his coat
while ishu pouts looking at his smile for others instead of hers
girls shout excitingly seeing him
rkb sir u here infront of our college wow we didnt thought any day that we will see u this closely
raman smiles looking at the girls while ishu starts biting her nails jealously looking at him
another girl:sir u r too handsome,whenever i see u in some channel or paper i couldnt take of my eyes now i my knees are giving up seeing u infront of me
raman:thankyou miss
another girl:sir u look too loving when u r like this clean shaved in baby pink and white coat
raman chuckles listening to her comments
while ishitha bits her finger as her nail was totally bited
she screams with pain raman turns to her concernly while ishu looks away
another girl turns his concentration back to the girls "sir we are waiting for ur marriage,i want to see who will be that lucky girl who can spend her lifetime with u"
another girl:daring a step comes forward and pecks his cheek while raman looks at her with shocking looks
"hai mr.rkb iam geetha,i love u crazyly give me a chance to become ur life,i will keep u happy life long
ishu:looks at them mainly at raman cheek where that girl pecked with her poped out eyes
glaring angrily at the girl
geetha:tell me sir will u give me a chance
raman:in my life i have only one chance to get married i cant dare to marry so advanced girl
geetha:but i can try me level best na
raman:smiling at the crazy girl speaks "sure miss geetha"
unable to see more ishitha starts walking away from the college,as no one has time to concentrate on her,everyone were busy with her husband
raman:seeing that excuses herself while ishu took a turn too,not even present at the range of his sight
waving a bye at the girls he zooms away towards ishitha
seeing the area secluded he stops the car aside ishitha,while ishu halts in her way
raman opening the door at passenger side looks at ishitha with an innocent eyes
ishu starts walking away
raman drives to her again and stops making her to glare at him again
"ishitha it is getting dark please get into the car first"
ishu:i wont so many are waiting for u naa,go and drop all them,why me
raman:madrasan but i only want to pick up u not those girls
ishu:dont over act i know about u
raman:knowing she wont budge bending over passenger seat pulls her into the car holding her wrist making her to land on the passenger seat
bending more on her he closes her side car door
making her to breath deep
he starts driving while she starts her taunting seeing the lipstick mark on her
someone was so much interested to date with unknown girls chee how my appa got married to such a flirter
she goes on scolding him
raman stopping the car looks at her who was busy still in scolding him
pulling her towards him wrapping his hands around him captures her lips into his enjoying the kiss which he missed for almost 3weeks
involuntarily she shifts more closer to raman wrapping her hands around his neck responding to him making him deepen his kiss
unable to get satisfied of the kiss he leaves her to see her flushed face pulling her again starts planting kisses on her neckline making her grip on him more
lost in his love she looks at him only to see the lipstick mark on his cheek,romantic feeling turned to anger seeing someone's mark on him,pushing him away taking a tissue paper she rubs hardly on his cheek to remove the mark making him to wince in pain
he pulls her away and looks at his cheek in the mirror which was reddened by scratches because of her rubbing on the skin
raman shouts at her with pain,pagal hogaya kya dekho kaisa laal hogaya mera gaal
ishu:holding his collar angrily "if i see u again around u then i wear tear all ur skin"
raman:looks at her shockingly seeing her possessiveness "pagal hogaya kya maardungi kya mujje?"
ishu:i will kill u and later i will kill myself if i once again see u around any girl,
raman:gulping the lump which formed on his throat he looks at her being terrified at her anger
ishu:now drive carefully
raman starts driving while she continues her scoldings on him
raman:kuun nikhlengi mera kaan se thumhara hawaz ki vachanse
ishu:this fear should need to be when u r flirting with girls
raman:i didnt flirted with them,they flirted with me
ishu:in any way i will be the one losing u
raman:stopping the car he looks at her
ishu:looks at him with tearful eyes
raman:raises his hand to wipe her tears
ishu pinches his hand making him to withdraw his hand wincing again in pain
raman:truely u decided to kill me
ishu:dont try to touch me again making lame excuses did u got that,how dare u to keep quiet while she kisses u
raman silently drives the car as it is useless to make her to understand
they reaches home which made raman to feel like a decade
..
daadi:looks at both of them
"ishitha jaldhi freshup hokar neeche aavo dinner karengi,aaj thumko bahuth late hogaya"
ishu:no daadi u people eat i wont,because of ur grandson my stomach was full,she storms upstairs without looking back while daadi walks towards raman
she keeps her hand on his shoulder making him to turn to her side
daadi looking at his cheek reddened with scratches she asks concerning him
raman:u married me to a woman who beats her husband,see what she did to me,u will say na she is innocent look now how innocent she is
daadi:aisa kya hogaya raman,voh aisa thumhara chehre par thalwar utaaya
raman:tells how a girl kissed him
daadi:she loves u soo much raman,that was evident in her actions
raman:i know because u selected her for me,so u doesnt want to blamed so u r blaming me
daadi:thum sudherengi nahi,jaavo aur inko lekar aavo dinner keliye
...
in ishra room
she prepares her bed again in the garden,taking a bottle she walks into the garden continuing her muttering on raman
raman coming to his room looks at her sleeping arrangements he speaks to himself making ishitha to audible
"u will shower ur love with ur actions and then u will shower ur anger,and then u keep ur husband away not giving a single chance of touching,then again u will warn me if someone flirts with me
biwi kadus hogaya bahaar ladkiye pyaari dekh rahi hu mujje aajkal
listening to his words she angrily walks inside only to see raman applying cream on his cheek
taking other water bottle into her hands she pours it on his head making him to shiver with sudden cold
taking the bottle from her hands he throws it away shouting at her "pagal hogaya kya saachi me mujje marne ka irada hi kya"
ishu:dont instigate me wantedly raman,if u even think of flirting with some other girls i told u before itself
she angrily walks away and slips into her mattress
raman shaking his head at his impossible wife changes into night wear walks out to sleep along with his beautiful and at angry wife
she was staring at the night sky which was beautifull adorned by stars and moon shining prettily
because of her husband moment the waterdrops falls on her face
she looks at raman who was standing beside her with wet hair looking at the sky where she was glancing a minute before
getting up she walks inside while raman looks confusingly why she went inside
ishitha comes out with a towel in her hands
while raman looks at her unable to comprehend her behavior
ishu:makes raman to sit on the mattress pulling him holding his wrist
raman obeys her like a good child and sits on the mattress comfortably enjoying cool breeze coming from the plants which doesnt give any costly A.C
she dries his hair with towel while raman enjoys her fragrance
placing the towel on the corner of the rope she settles beside him comfortably hiding in the blanket to feel warmth
raman:gets into her blanket and hugs her lovingly while she tries to get away from his arms
ishitha bahuth hogaya thumhari drama abhi thak lekin aab nahi chup chap se kadi raho
ishu:i hate u raman
raman:kissing her forehead he speaks "but i love u madrasan"
ishu snuggling closer to him holding his shirt with her hands rests her head on his chest speaks to him "then why r u hurting me by joining in MBA"
raman:please ishitha dont ask me the same question i told my answer long before
ishu:i missed my pillow from these many days
raman:lifts her face to make her see him "what pillow madrasan"
ishu:points at his heart resting her head again hugging him tightly
raman:hugs her happily because of her possessiveness today he was with her feeling her in his arms,
both closing their eyes feeling each other presence drifts into the sleep in b/w beautiful greenary and a roof like sky
with stars and moon giving the night light which reflecting their beautiful happy faces


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Edited by sarayasriya - 9 years ago
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Hmmm so raman thinks ishita is childish and not independent datz y he doesn't want a baby... I guess he wants ishita to peruse her MBA first datz y he is delaying baby??? Acha hua ishita ne raman aur daadi ki baathe nahi suni... Sunleti to raman ka kya hogaya hoga???? Even daadi is confused with his behaviour... I really hope toshiji doesn't do something dat will create any problem between ishra... Thanks for d update dear...
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omg so many updates in one go
really nice updates👏
raman really loves ishita lot
he can't see tears in her eyes
he was really guilty for hurting her
ishita really wants a baby but raman is also right
she is not much mature to take care of a baby and thats why he doesn't want a baby
mrs bhalla and daadi are lso right because woman doesn't know how to handle a kid before their birth
but raman's concern is also right
they both are very emotional
but mrs bhalla's trick about taking precaution is really wrong because isse ishra mein problem ho sakti hai
so ishita become upset with raman because he forcefully admitted her in college
but he is really stubborn and he really wants her success
he is really gem as a person and really a good husband
they both doesn't want to stay away from each other
but ishu's stubbornness uff
raman did great efforts to manofy her but she didn't talk with him
he buy a house to manofy her but she is really stubborn
but she is really possessive about him
she become jealous after see him with another girls and pour her frustration and jealousy onto him in form of anger
but at last they both sort their problems in a romantic way
and ishu makes some freinds in college really nice
and now she will play pranks to run from studies really naughty
now i am curious to know that what will ishita's next step
u are really nice writer
you write everything very nicely
every character ,their dialouges , their emotions , their emotional attachment everything is very nice
sorry for my mistakes
update soon
Edited by kras - 9 years ago

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