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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Hello all 😉
So the devil is back 😆

With a new update 😉

This time a longer one 😉

And this part of mine is dedicated to some one 😉

So I hope u all enjoy reading it

It is not proof read so plz avoid my typos

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Part 3


Ishita was standing with her head bent down and all of a sudden out of blu she lifted her head and laughed raman who was going out of the class just stopped in his track after listening to her laughter

He turned and looked at ishita is shock as if he could estimate her silence to be the calmness before the storm

Abhi - yeh has kyu rahi hai pagal Vagal tho Nahi hai na

( y is she laughing is she mad or something )

Shagun who was standing beside raman was just looking at raman s change of expression from. Proud to shock to confused to scared

Wait a min scared what was that the great RKB the prank star is scared

She gently tapped on ramans shoulder and asked what happend

Ishita - thum ko kya lagthi hai ke I really said I love u because I am scared of ur dhamki

( what did u think ) ( and made a scared face )

Raman was still silent and just looking at ishita and that is when she turned and started walking towards him wile clapping her hands

She let out an other laugh seeing his face

Ishita : Raman Raman Raman kab sekoge thum
( when will u learn )
Thum ko kya lagthi hai ki thum itne smart ho ki mare hi ghar mai mare hi kamre mai thus kar mari hi photo sa muje blackmail karoge aur muje patha bhi Nahi chalega

( what do u think ur so smart. That u dill enter my own house my own room take my own pic and blackmail me and I won't get to know )

Ooo ur so much mistaken mr bhalla

Abb app khud apne batho se vo sari pics delete karege

( now u will delete all those pics with ur own hands )

Abhi - aur thum ko aysa kyu lagthi hai ki hum aysa Kuch bhi karege

( and y do u think we will do that )

Ishu - aaa smart question but wrong timing well ur abhi right hamare area ke ips officer ke Betey

( son of the ips officer of this area )

Kysa lagega thumare papa ko jab un ko pata chalega ki un ka beta adhi rath ko sidi laga ke kise. Ladki ke kamre mai ghustha hai aur bina us ke permition us ke photos bhi Letha hai

( awww how will ur papa feel when he come to know that his dear son sneaks into a girl s house At midnight and clicks her photo without her knowledge )

And that is when Mihika enters

Mihika - ooo ishu don't do that bechara buri tareke se phas jayega

Ishu - and u mr umid. Yar apni duty tho dhang se kar liya Karo check tho karo ki insan so raha hai ya sone ki acting kar raha hai

( u should do ur duty at least na properly u should check na if a man is ready sleeping or acting to sleep )

And u how can I forget u mr photographer before clicking the pic u should have Atleast checked ki kis ki pic click kar rahe ho

( ur clicking whose pic )

Abhi - what do u mean ?????

Mihika - hindi samaj Nahi aye let me translate she means check ur phone

( u dint understand hindi )

Abhi immediately took out his phone to check the pic and all the others gathered around him exept Raman

And what they saw shocked the wits out of them

In the pic Raman was on the bed Hugging a old lady trying to kiss her

Ishu - kya mr bhalla kam se kam Dadi ko tho baksh dete

( what mr bhalla u should have At least spared Dadi )

Kya mr bhalla muje app se yeh umeed Nahi thi I thought u could do better

( what mr bhalla I dint expect this from u I thought u could do better )

And haaa may be u should learn to propose a girl properly instead of proposing her saying she has a good structure then u might not get slapped in future and could save ur time and energy instead of making these flop revenge plans

And she thud the novel Raman gave her in his own hands patted his cheeks and told grow up mr bhalla grow up

And she was above to leave the class with Mihika but stopped and suddenly turned towards Abhi

And said

U can keep the photo now if u want or delete it is ur wish and the morel of the story for u my boy is don't mess up with the people u can't Handel

Saying that she walked out of the class

And there were all kinds of whispers in all the corners of the room about the drama which just took place with the new girl and Raman bhalla

And that is when Raman lost his cool and barked out in a loud voice

Raman -SHUT UP !!!!!!!!!!!!

And he snatched the phone from abhi s hand a just threw it on the ground with such a great force that the phone broke into pices

And what followed was a pin drop silence in the class

And Raman just took his bag and walked out of the class banging the door shut

And that is when abhi opend his mouth

Abhi - man what was this ( totally shocked speachless ) I thought we r playing with her but hear. ...

Ashok - man she is not only hot but also smart

Suraj - ur sooo right the first girl who had the guts to challeng and mess up with rkb man she has got something in her

Shagun - shut up u gyes ... I think there is more to this story she just said Raman proposed her but the known fact is that Raman hates girls

Abhi - man this is going to be a amazing game

Shagun - enough u people come follow me we need to check on Raman

Ashok - I wish I could follow that ishita instead of her

Abhi - in ur dreams man stay.away from her she is mine

Ashok - and when did that happen ( lifting his eyebrow and rolling his eyes )

Abhi - just a few seconds back

And he walked away behind shagun

Now the scene shits to ishu s house

Mihika and ishu are sitting in ishu s room

Mihika - u should have seen his face man it was too good

( and she laughed to her hearts content but ishu dint respond and was busy setting her room )

Mihika - what happend ishu thum khush Nahi ho kya

( r u not happy )

Ishu - is mai itna khush hone wali kya bath hai

( what is there to get so happy about it )

Mihika - tho yeh saude hue Shakal kyu banaya hai kya thum us se abhi bhi payar Karthi ho

( then y this face do u still love him )

And that is when ishu turned towards Mihika and firmly said

Ishu - I never ever loved him we were just friend and that friendship is also long over and a old forgotten story

Mihika - tho fir us ke insult ke bad thum ne aysa chera kyu bana liye Jaise ke teri insult hui ho

( then y after his insult u make a face like u have been insulted )

Ishu - aysa Kuch bhi Nahi hai mihi ur just over thinking

( there is nothing like that )

Mihika - ooo really

Ishu - ya really and do u want to fail in tomorrow 's test go go and study

Mihika -( as if touched by a live wire ) shit man I forgot the test

And saying that she ran away to her room

( note - hear ishu and Mihika r not sisters but are friends and Mihika lives with ishu as her family lives in usa )

And after Mihika left ishu went and sat by her favorite spot in her house near her window looking at the sky she told

Ishu - I will never let u win over me Raman Kumar bhalla not now not again not ever

At the other side some one else was also sitting in the balcony of his house. Fuming with anger and that is none other than Raman

Raman - I won't spare u for this ishita Iyer u will have to pay for this one
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So that is all for now people

I am really sry if u don't like it as it is written in a haste

Plz do leave ur comments and likes

Thanks for reading and encouraging us

The next one is posted by sush

Asha 😳


Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Kya update hai
It was an amazing one
And ready for twist rides😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu




Awww but we love u yar😉😳



Aww Asha I love you too

But this I hate u was exclusively for sush 😛
Woh bhi I hate you like I love you love you wala 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Pravalli

Kya update hai

It was an amazing one
And ready for twist rides😃


Thank u sooo much 😳

And about the twist i am learning from our owm twist queen so 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sukanksha



Aww Asha I love you too

But this I hate u was exclusively for sush 😛
Woh bhi I hate you like I love you love you wala 😆



Heee i hate u like i love u 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sukanksha



Aww Asha I love you too

But this I hate u was exclusively for sush 😛
Woh bhi I hate you like I love you love you wala 😆

hawww heheh!! meine kya kiay?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu



Heee i hate u like i love u 😆

tu chup hoja!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
what a twist yaar...gaya...why did she slap him???...she said i love you because of those pics..revenge game me to raman ne bazi maar li😆..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rk654

what a twist yaar...gaya...why did she slap him???...she said i love you because of those pics..revenge game me to raman ne bazi maar li😆..


Nahi bazi marte marte reh gaya 😉 read the third part 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
i'm enjoying revenge game...ye ishita iyer hai bholi bhali fir bhi RKB pe paad gayi bhari..😆...abhi picture baki hai mere dost..RKB ki date aayegi..Ishita use set ho jayegi🤣🤣...smiply awesome update Asha..your twist was better then gaya..👏

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