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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Un ke twist ka tho mai bhi wait kar rahi hun yar 😉 abb tho bas vahi hoga jo manzaroore sush amma hoga 😆

Gaya aur sush to Raman ki watt lga degi...😆

Edited by mayraa - 10 years ago

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: mayraa

Gaya aur sush to Raman ki watt lga degi...😆

Abb kis ki watt lage gi aur kis ki kismath phutegi yeh tho vakth hi batayega 😉

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Deep

@rk654

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#263

hehe Asha...you got trapped by gaya's straight one😆..

twist hi nahi mila to turn kya karti😉...filler update de ke sara burden sush pe dal diya...😆...writer me ye smartness bhi hona jaruri hai🤣

but you didn't send pm for this update😡

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Deep

@rk654

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Yeh kya tha 😲 kis ko kon si bimari 😲 deep ji app na zara sambal ke raho khi aysa na ho ki muj se sam ugalvane ke chakkar mai app hi ulat pulat ho javo 😆

Aur mai bolna chavu bhi tho nahi bol sakthi as i really dont know 😆 sooo keep trying 😉

hawww maine kya kiya😲...ji main toh Zalebi ki tarah Sidha hun😉...

last kuch comment fir read karlo kuch raaz khol chuki ho aur insist kare to khologi bhi😆😆

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Deep

@rk654

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Look at this and some one told me writing hamare bas ki bath nahi 😆

Abhi bhi wahi bolta hun...maine to song ki taang todi hai...credit original writer ko jana chahiye 😆

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: rk654
hehe Asha...you got trapped by gaya's straight one😆..
twist hi nahi mila to turn kya karti😉...filler update de ke sara burden sush pe dal diya...😆...writer me ye smartness bhi hona jaruri hai🤣

but you didn't send pm for this update😡

U r so right actually muje party wala part likna tha 😆 but then that bhai wala dialogue was so intresting that i ended up writing half of the update about it 😕 adhe update mai party ka kya twist deti and also i was too lazy to write a long part 🥱 abb kya kare sangath ka asar 😉

And pm mai kaise bhejthi vo net beach mai hi chala gaya tho is bar ke liye muje maff karna 😉 dont worry pm na bhejne ka compensation milega in form of a long update next time 😉

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@rk654

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Male female was not to insult you.. Its just i knew u the only one active here. As u said urself u know many silent are there too. Toh I actually m shocked and proud on you bcz boys don't like to admit that they too like FICTIONAL STORIES.
sorry if you feel offended 😕

don't be sorry yaar didn't feel offened...i'm die hard fan of fictional stories ...isme admit na karne ka to sawal hi paida nahi hota...childhood ki habit hai ashani se nahi jati😆

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: rk654

hawww maine kya kiya😲...ji main toh Zalebi ki tarah Sidha hun😉...

last kuch comment fir read karlo kuch raaz khol chuki ho aur insist kare to khologi bhi😆😆

Dont tell me u actually beleaved all that 😆 u should ask gaya di mai itni badi bhulakad hun ki ek idea deke khud bhuljathi hun and end up writing something else 😆

That is one of the reasons y we dont discuss about this story and plan an update 😉