|| MY FIRST SS || Tere Bin Nahi Laage Jiya || Part~A1 Page~6 Updated||

Hi guyz...

I'm new here.

I've been reading from this forum from a while. Maybe that's what is tempting me to try a hand in writing as well!

I don't wanna disclose my identity here. So far no one does. I know. Still...you can call me Tipo. Not Typo!

So here goes a small bite of my story. It will be always this small if I get teeny-tiny response. And I'll run away if no one likes it. That's not a bad idea!

What should I title this curtain raiser?
A curtain raiser?
A prologue...?
Exaggerated terms...!

I'm a bad writer. So not gonna use those words and insult the very field itself.
Well then...Just gonna give the word Intro in place of what they calls a Prologue!

Will update shortly 😳


Tipo

INDEX

scroll Below For Intro

Chapter-A

Chapter-A1

Well guyz...Just laugh it out when you see some funny mistakes. It just happens man. Some defects with the system [me/my lappy]


MY BLAH-BLAH...!


In this story Raman and Ishita are trying for a divorce because Ishita cannot concieve. I know I'm being rude and killing the character of Raman. Well then, it's just a story man. Anything can happen! Please do let me know if there is any other story on the same theme. You know I needa pack up and escape!!!

I'm not gonna give those usual build ups regarding Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla's profession and all. The only thing which differs from the soap is...he was head over heals in love with this Madrasi dentist, Ishita Iyer, and made her Ishita Raman Bhalla after fighting with his own family. Now it is he who is trying hard to get a divorce from her.

Don't think that Ishita is crying sitting in a corner. She is ready for the much needed seperation. But then something is not working at all. Is that the tint of sadness she could always see in his eyes?

INTRO...!


The past three years was blissful. Raman's love and care was what made Ishita keep aside her worries over their families. Life in Mumbai, away from everyone, she spend it as if it is a lengthy honeymoon and they would be back home soon. That happened. They were back home! But the happy-go-lucky lifestyle changed by their families' interference in anything and everything.

The elders' expectations on getting a grandbaby became stronger by each second which made both Raman and Ishita feel suffocated. There they tried again and again in vain! Finally ended up with a fertility specialist who confirmed that Ishita cannot conceive.

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"I need a divorce. I don't want a wife who cannot bore me a child."

Raman shouted making the entire family go mute. They didn't expect that. They never in their dreams thought that it could be the reason why Ishita is staying at her amma's from the last one week. Raman didn't even peeped in to see her once. That was what made Ishita's parents suspect the situation and make their own investigation. Finally the cat was out!

Same time, Ishita was praying to her favourite God to give her strength to face her parents. She was worried over her mother's health. Madhavi had already gone through a heart attack when Ishita eloped and married Raman. What would be her amma's condition when she comes to know that her one and only daughter cannot bore a child!

Mihika, her younger cousin, the only one who knew everything all along, sat beside her and touched her shoulder. Ishita just shrugged it off saying she is not sad for separating from Raman but for her parents. Mihika didn't probbed her to say which Ishita is hiding from everyone from the very first moment. She felt somehow everything would get fine. That was a greedy yet justifiable desire as far as a lovely cousin like Mihika is concerned.

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"What are you saying Raman...? Ishu...can't be a mother...?" Madhavi fell down on the floor unconscious making the entire room go stiffened in worry.


What say guyzzz...😉
Should I continue or pack up?
Do let me know by your likes and comments...😳


Tipo

Please continue. It sounds interesting and different.

This Is Interesting.

Originally posted by: surabhiasthana9

Continue soon sounds interesting

Originally posted by: Anum_says

This Is Interesting.

Tho I don't like this Raman who wants to end this marriage just bcoz ishita can't conceive .

But may be there is something behind his this decision..

Continue soon please .I want to read more.

Originally posted by: Boo2014

Please continue. It sounds interesting and different.

Please PM me when you update.😃

Originally posted by: jaya1867

continue soon plz

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

interesting concept.continue soon.

I think Raman wants to divorce her for some other reason not bcoz she cudnt conceive. Do cont soon...