IshRa SS : Dil Kahin Rukta Nehi.. (Prologue)

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Dil Kahin Rukta Nehi..


Prologue


Shagun : Raman.. I am pregnant !!


Raman looked at her amazed and then lifted her in his arm and swirled her in circle, saying : Thank you Shagun.. Thank you so much..


But her face wasn't showing the excitement, he noticed that and asked : Kya hua Shagun?? Tum disturb laag rahi ho..


Raman dropped her and made her stand on her heel,she turnedback saying : Amm!! Raman.. Woh.. Mujhe.. Mujhe yeh bachha nehi chahiye..


Raman : What?? Pagal ho gai ho kya?? Pata bhi haikya bol rahi ho??


She turned at him and said : Mujhe achhi tarah se pata hai ku mein kya bol rahi hoon!! Raman.. Humari shadi ko sirf 2 hi saal hue hai, abhi humare paas hai hi kya?? Isse sirf janam dene se kaam khatam nehi ho jayega.. Aur waise bhi meri bhi kuch dreams hai, kuch ambitious hai.. Agar mein abhi maa baan gai toh mere sapne ka kya??


Raman was silently hearing her, and then he said : Konse sapne Shagun?? Humara sapna tha, humari ek choti si dunia hogi, sirf mein, tum aur humara bachha..


Shagun : Oh come on Raman !! Be practical.. Tumhare paas abhi hai hi kya?? Hum dono jaise taise karke ghar chalate hai aur ab yeh bachha..


Raman held her hand firmly and said : Shagun, I promise, mein bohot mehnaat karunga, mein humare bachhe ko woh sare khusiya dunga, jo woh deserve karta hai..


Shagun : No Raman !! Meine decide kar liya hai.. Aur yeh bachha mere andaar hai, toh iss par mera haaq zyada hai..


Raman : Par yeh mera bhi bachha hai..


Shagun : Whatever !! Kal mein doctor se appoint le liya hai.. Hum jakar isse abort kar lenge..


She walked out from the room, leaving behind hurt Raman..


Next day, at clinic,


Doctor : Meine sare tests kar liya hai aur mein sare results dekh kar yehi kahungi ki aap iss bachhe ko adopt maat kijiye, isse apke jaan ko bhi khatra hai.. Aap isse adopt nehi kar sakte ab...


Shagun : Par doctor yeh mera bachha hai..


Doctor : I know Mrs. Shagun ki yeh apka bachha hai par hum doctors ke bhi kuch rules hote hai.. Aap kisi bhi doctor ke paas apna report dikha sakte hai.. Mein toh apko yehi advice dungi ki isse khushi khushi apna lijiye..


Shagun angrily walked out, Raman thanked the doctor and then followed her...


At Chennai,


Ishita chased Subbhu by saying : Subbhu no !! Woh pictures mujhe do..


Subbhu : Nope !! Zara meri amma ko bhi toh dikhau unki hone wali bahu kitni moti thi..


Ishita : Shut up and give it to me !! Waise amma ko bologe kab humare bare mein..


Subbhu : Madam !! Yeh sawal mujhe aapse poochna chahiye..


Ishita : Bolungi.. Bas!! Scope nehi mil raha.. But don't worry bohot zald bol dungi...


At other side, as Shagun was unwillingly ready to give the baby birth, Raman informed everyone about her pregnancy and everyone became so glad and excited.. Toshi jee started taking care of her like her own mother.. She used to do all her daily chores so that she won't get stressed much... It had now become a daily routine for Toshi jee o make some special dish for Shagun that was her favourite.. And this things made her more irritate... Slowly the nine months got over, doctor had predicted the delivery date in the third week of the month... So, everybody in the home was well prepared for it and keenly waiting for the new little member to join them...


On the day of delivery, everybody was waiting eagerly outside the room... Raman was pacing to and fro in stress.. And Shagun's screams would add more to it... Every second was becoming hard to pass for him... Suddenly, her screams stopped and so Raman's pace... He immediately rushed to the door to see her... The doctor came out and informed happily : Congratulation Mr. Bhalla, beti hui hai..


Raman's face flashed with a huge smile and so with the other family members, Raman said to doctor : Can.. Can I meet with her??


The doctor nodded and he walked in the room and saw his baby was sleeping and then he looked at Shagun who was looking away..


Raman : Shagun dekho, humari beti.. Kitni pyaari hai..


Shagun : Oh stop it Raman.. Tum jo chahte the woh mil gaya.. Now please leave me alone..


Raman : Shagun please behave.. Hospital hai yeh aur bahar ma papa aye hue hai..


Shagun : I don't care..


Raman thought to give her some time so he left the room.. They name their daughter Ruhi.. But after the day Shagun's behavior was totally changed, she used to stay out most, didn't take care of Ruhi and on second month she handed him the divorce papers saying : Raman mujhe divorce chahiye..


Raman was trying to convince her but all in vain, she left him and Ruhi.. From that day, Raman became angry type, he spend very less time with Ruhi, always trying to ran away from her and slowly he started working hard and within two months he got success, he awarded best CEO of year..


At othrr side, Ishita shifted in Delhi as her Appa retired from his job but still Ishita didn't say anything about her relation with Subbhu..


On a such day, Raman was coming outfrom his flat and at the same time Ishita came out and they dashed unknowingly, the files from Ishita's hand fall on floor but Raman ignored her when she said : Excuse me !! Ek sorry kehene se aap chota nehi ho jayenge..


Raman : Whatever !!


Ishita glared at him whereas he left from there.. Mr. Bhalla and Mr. Iyer became friends when Mr. Bhalla said about Ruhi, Mr. Iyer shared this with her family.. Ishita felt sad for Ruhi.. On a day, Raman wake up early due to his pain in teeth and started throwing tantraums on family members..


Mihir : Bhai kya hua?? Subha subha aisa mood kyu hai??


Raman : Mihir koi dentist se appointment le !!


Later, on that day Raman walked in Batra's clinic and receptionist asked him to go in some chember.. Raman walked in cabin..


Raman : Tum?? Dentist??


Raman looked at Ishita stunned.. Ishita said : Haan !! Kyu??


Raman : Kher !! Treatment karna janti bhi ho kya??


Ishita : Aise hi degree nehi mili.. Kya problem hai boliye??


Then she checked him and prescribed him some medicines, Raman was going to leave when Ishita said : Excuse me !! Woh aaj ek polio session hai.. Kya Ruhi ko le gaye the!!


Raman arrogantly replied: I don't know.. Aur meri beti ke liye tumhe fikaar karne ki zarurat nehi hai..


He left from there.. Ishita murmured : Ajeeb baat hai.. Bhalai ka toh zamana hi nehi hai..


After a month later, Raman got a notice about Ruhi's custody, Raman goes to meet her : Ab yeh kya naya natak hai tumhara.. Mujhe chodh toh chuki ho ab mere beti ko bhi mujhse durr karna chahti ho!! Achanak itna pyar kaise agaya?? Woh tum hi thi na jo usse abort karna chahti thi..


Shagun : Raman woh purani baat hai.. Par ab mujhe meri beti wapas chahiye.. Aur waise bhi she needs her mother..


Raman shouted : No, she doesn't, do you get that??


Shagun : Woh toh court faisla karega..


Raman : Fine.. Tum kitni bhi koshish karlo Ruhi mere sath hi rahegi..


On a day, Ruhi was crying so badly, no one couldn't stop her and it was raining heavily, so no doctor was available..


Mihir : Bhai, doctor Ishita toh hai.. Unsey help le kya??


Raman : Pagal ho gaya kya?? Woh toh dentist hai..


Mihir : Bhai, dekhne mein problem kya hai?


With that, Mihir goes to Iyer's place and asked Ishita to help and she quickly agreed.. Ishita took Ruhi in her arm and trying to stop her..


She called a child specialist and asked for some medicines, Mihir somehow managed to bring.. After giving her medicine, Ishita made her sleep and she slept in her arm peacefully..


Everyone was touched by seeing this but Raman had so much irritation and soon Mr. Bhalla offered Mr. Iyer for marriage proposal to come out from the custody problem.. First, Raman and Ishita both denied as they didn't like each other but for Ruhi's sake, they agreed...


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I know, you will find similar with the show but it was necessary and that's why I wrote the part.. From next part, it will different.. Waiting for likes and comments..


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Albeli26 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice part
loved this one
we all are waiting for next part now
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic start
yeah its a bit similar but i loved it
but what about subbu?
Ishita n subbu love eachother right?
Then how did he agreed to this marriage?
Thanks for pm
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Fantastic start
yeah its a bit similar but i loved it
but what about subbu?
Ishita n subbu love eachother right?
Then how did he agreed to this marriage?
Thanks for pm
plz continue soon

No !! Subhhu didn't know anything about it. As everthing rushed in a hurry, so before Ishita could reakize or do anything, they already fixedcthe date.. So she just let subhhu's thought from her mind.. That's it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Why did Ishu agree to the marriage when she is in love with Subbu? Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous start...👍🏼
Waiting for next update...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Along the lines of old YHM. Do cont soon.
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nice start
continue it soon
thanks for pm😊
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Awesome start
Totally loved it
BT way abt subbu
N please update soon
When z d next update
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Amazing Interesting Plz update soon Thanks for pm

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