TS: Phir Le Aaya Dil

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello doston,

I am re-posting an earlier TS of mine here (my Pic-OSthon TS). Do read in case u missed it earlier! 😃 I hv been reading my own stories lately, n i m actually enjoying dem 😉😆

Also I know i promised a new story, but i m extremely sorry, I am just not getting d tym lately. 😭

And maybe my next OS will not even be an Ishra story, its most probably gonna be ManYA (Mantu-Amaya of TSM) So do catch up for it on the show's forum in case you wud be interested/ let me know.

Anyway,

Part 1 is posted in this post, d next part is in d below post. 😊

TS: Phir le aaya dil- Part 1

"Yaheen rokdo bhaiyya"

[Please stop here bhaiyya]

The driver obeyed her command.

Her heart was thumping very loudly now. Her stomach clenched and her knees weakened as she made an attempt to unlock the car door.

But she could not, she could just not do it. She let go of the car handle, sat back on her car seat and took a deep breath.

"You have to do it Ishita, you have to do it. You have to do it for your best friend. You have have to do it for someone who has always been like a sister to you, or even more." she spoke to herself.

She somehow gathered courage,collected herself, and stepped out of the car.

It did not feel as if it had been over an year since she had been away from this place, her place. The same area, the same street, the place whose memories where the only memories she seemed to possess.

As she watched her steps head towards the place where her heart lay, she couldnt avoid seeing the visuals of his steps moving in sync with hers.

She could still feel his presence around her, her mind clouded with the memories of the long chats they would have every night while taking a stroll on the street..his laughs, his taunts, his smile, his love, his eyes..

Phir le aaya dil majboor, kya keeje

Raas na aaya rehna door, kya keeje

Dil keh raha hai

usse maqammal

kar bhi aao

Wo jo adhoori si baat baaki hai

Wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai

Her eyes caught sight of that bench, that white one..it encapsulated so many of their special moments together..

Haan to kya pharak padta hai..sab jagah idli khaate ho khaali chutniyaan badalti hain, how does it matter!

[What difference does it make..in all the south indian states you eat idli, only the chutney changes, how does it matter!]

She felt her lips curve into a smile as her cheeks wet with tears..

Amma theek keh rahi thi, aap jabse hamari life mein aaye ho naa Raman, humare tensions khatam ho gaye hain. Pata hai aap par hamein apne se zyaada bharosa hai.

[Amma was right, since you'v come to our lives Raman, our tensions are gone. We trust you more that ourselves]

She then turned around only to notice a purple car parked. It seemed that every object in the place had some memory of his stored in it..

Yaadon ka kya hai, phir ban jaayengi, tumhari aur meri..

[ Memories, we can make then again, yours and mine..]

"Yaadein..ab sirf yaadein hi to reh gayi hain na Raman" [Memories..now only memories are left Raman] she sighed and wiped her tears.

She raised up her head to read the Akash Ganga society board. Only she knew how tough it was for her to go back there, her feet seemed to be jammed, her heart felt heavy.

"Bas Ishita, ab kuch socho mat, bas upar cholo..you have no choice, you have to gather courage. Just do it, dont think anything"

[Stop it Ishita, do not think anything, just move up..you have no choice, you have to gather courage. Just do it, dont think anything]

She pulled up her white lacy saree slightly and walked up straight to the second floor., The Iyer house was now occupied by another family, for amma appa were now staying in Chennai.

She turned to look at the Bhalla house.

She noticed the name plate with her name had been replaced with another one similar to it, just this one did not have her first name and her DR. initials in it. She ran her fingers over his name written on the plate..

"Raman" she spoke, her hands fingers still caressing the letters of "RAMAN" on the the name plate which read RAMAN BHALLA.

"Kitni yaadein hain tumhari, kitni baatein hain humari. Aaj chodo ge nahin naa tum mujhe.."

[There are so many memories of you, so many chats we have shared. You will not leave me today naa..]

She wiped her face clean properly before she rang the bell.

A familiar figure emerged out as the door was opened.

"Bhabhi"

It was Romi's voice. Even he seemed to be overwhelmed with emotions on seeing her.

"T..t..tum log abhi nikle nahi?" she questioned him.

["you guys hvnt left yet?" she questioned him.]

"Bas..sab nikal hi chuke hain. Simmi di apne kamre mein hain, aapka wait kar rahi hain kab se" Romi replied.

[" Bas..almost everybody has left. Simmi di is in her room, she has been waiting for you for so long" Romi replied]

"Hmm" she patted him gently on the shoulder.

She tried not to look around the house as she headed towards Simmi's room, she had already been struggling with the memories. She slowly pushed open the room door which was already open slightly.

"Arey Ishita" a smile popped on Simmi's face as she greeted Ishita.

But then her expressions changed instantly as she looked at somebody standing on her side.

Ishita's heart skipped a beat.

Raman was there, Ananya was in his arms.

Kismat ko hai yeh manzoor kya keeje
Milte rahe hum badastoor kya keeje
Dil keh raha hai

usse musalsal

kar bhi aao
Wo jo ruki si raah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai.

He stared at Ishita expressionlessly for sometime, but then turned away.

"Simmi tu isse sambhal, main nikalta hoon" he left Ananya on the bed and headed to the exit door where Ishita was still standing.

["Simmi you take care of her, I am leaving" he left Ananya on the bed and headed to the exit door where Ishita was still standing.]

He pretended not to acknowledge her presence, he walked past her as if she was a stranger.

Their hands brushed. Ishita couldnt control herself, and most naturally, she turned and grabbed hold of his wrist.

"Raman..kaise ho" [Raman, how are you] she spoke softly, looking in his eyes.

"Jaise tum chod ke gayi thi. Aur vaise bhi tumhe isse kya ki main kaisa hoon"

["Just like you left me. Anyway how does it matter to you"] he sounded rude.

He pulled his arm away from her hold and walked out of the room.

"Ishita, thank god tu aa gayi. Main kabse tera wait kar rahi hoon pata hai" Simmi spoke.

["Ishita thank god you are here, I have been waiting for you for so long you know" Simmi spoke]

Ishita moved forward and hugged her.

"Simmi kitni pyaari lag rahi ho tum is Kanjeevaram Saree mein" [Simmi, you are looking so lovely in this Kanjeevaram Saree] Ishita spoke adjusting the gajra on her long plaid.

Simmi: "Dekh sachchi sachchi boliyo..pakki Madrasan lag rahi hoon na! Bol na..Mani ko achchi to lagoongi na main!"

[Simmi:" Be honest ok..Am I looking like a complete Madrasan? Say naa..Mani will like me in this avatar naa"]

Ishita: "Arey haan haan bahut bahut pretty lag rahi ho tum meri dulhan! Ekdum pakki Madrasan, bilkul perfect. Aur hamari Ananya bhi bahut pyaari lag rahi hai!"

[Ishita: " Ofcourse you are looking very very very pretty, my lovely bride! Perfect Madrasan, absolutely perfect. And our Ananya is also looking very pretty!"]

Ishita picked up Ananya and kissed her on her cheek.

Simmi: "I am sorry Ishita, meri wajah se tumhe bhai ko face karna pada..wo bhai bas nikalne hi waala tha..."

[Simmi: "I am sorry Ishita, because of me you had to face bhai.. bhai was about to leave only.."]

Ishita: "Koi baat nahi Simmi, kab tak main unhe ignore kar sakti hoon..aaj ke din to vaise bhi humne aamne saamne aana hi tha"

[Ishita: " no problem Simmi, till when can I ignore him..we anyway had to come face to face today"]

Simmi: "Oye tune saare functions pe aana hain haan..aur aaj dono Madrasi aur Panjabi Style ki shaadiyon pe tu rahegi, theek hai!"

[Simmi:" Hey you gotta be present on all functions..and you will be there in both the Madrasi and Panjabi style weddings, ok!"]

"Hmmm" Ishita nodded.

***

~End of Part 1~

Part 2 in below post

Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago

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Part 2

As the adorable couple of Mani and Simmi took their wedding pheras in the first South-Indian style wedding, Ishita could not escape the memories of her own wedding with Raman. Moreover her man was sitting right opposite to her in the Mandap, his eyes remained unwavered as he stared at her emotionlessly...

Her eyes were watery, both because of the smoke of the fire in front of her eyes and the smoke of the fire with which she had herself burnt her relationship.

She was controlling the hardest to avoid a break down. Still she could not resist looking back into those eyes..the eyes of her beloved..the eyes which encapsulated her entire world...

Karte hain hum aaj qabool kya keeje
Ho gayi thi jo humse bhool kya keeje
Dil keh raha

usse mayassar

kar bhi aao
Wo jo dabi si aas baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si... aanch baaki hai

***

"Suraj, mera haath chodo"

[Suraj, leave my hand]

"Chup chaap..haath pakad ke chalo darling. Sabko pata to chale ki tum THE Suraj Khanna ki biwi ho"

[Shut up..and keep walking holding my hand darling. Everybody should know that you are the wife of THE Suraj Khanna]

Since Raman was the bride's brother, Ishita was sure he would be there on the main entrance to welcome the guests. She made another attempt to pull her hand away, but Suraj grabbed hold of her hand even more tighly.

Raman was standing at the entrance, and Suraj made all the effort to tease him by flashing his hold of Ishita's hand. But Raman did not react, he chose to ignore him and continued welcoming the rest of the guests.

Raman's ignorance was undeniably hurting Ishita.

Ishita went upto the stage to congratulate the couple. Simmi was dressed in a typical red-color punjabi suit, and Mani in a beige Sherwani. Ofcourse the fact that Simmi was getting married again to a lovely man after her a disasterous first experience with the institution, was deeply gladdening for the entire family.

Toshiji was the mother of the bride and hence was surrounded by guests and well- wishers. Ishita wanted to meet her too, she waited for her to be left alone.

"Mummiji"

Toshiji turned on feeling Ishita's touch on her shoulder.

"Ishita.." Toshiji hugged her, and gave her her blessings.

"Jeendi reh Puttar"

Ishita: "Mummyji ye shagun dena tha aapko"

[Ishita: Mummyji I wanted to give you this shagun]

Toshiji: "Oye apno mein shagun kaisa puttar"

[Toshiji: Arey we dont need to give shagun to each other in the family]

Ishiji: " Koi baat nahin mummiji, pls aap rakh lijiye na"

[Ishita: So what mummyji, pls take it]

She handed over the shagun ka lifafa (envelope containing money) to Toshiji.

Toshiji: "Puttar bahut changa laga aaj tujhe itne dino ke baad dekh kar. Chahe

kuch bhi ho jaaye, tera mera pyaar hamesha bana rahega. Chahe to dasse ya na dasse, mainu pata hai tu kabhi koi galat kaam nahin kar sakti. Koi bahut badi vajah rahi hogi jo tune itna bada kadam uthaya. Chahe Raman jo bhi samjhe, mujhe tujhpe pura bharosa hai..tu hamesha humara bhala hi sochegi Ishita"

[Toshiji: I am so happy to see you today Ishita. No matter what happens, I will always love you. You might not tell us the truth, but I know you will never do anything wrong. There must be a very strong reason for you to do this. No matter what Raman thinks, I trust you, you our well wisher]

She kissed Ishita on the forehead.

Ishita: "Mummyji aapko meri koi bhi help chahiye aaj to pls mujhe batayiye naa..aap aaj aise hi itni busy lag rahi hain subah se"

[Ishita: Mummyji in case you need any help pls let me know..U hv been keeping so busy since morning]

"Help sirf apno se li jaati hai, mehmaano se nahin. Aap mehmaan hain to sirf mehmaan banke rahiye"

[ "We take help only from within the family, not guests. You are a guest here, you better remain one"]

It was Raman's voice. Ishita turned to look at him, his feelingless glare made her break into tears.

But suddenly, Suraj came out of nowhere and grabbed Ishita's hand.

Suraj: "Oye Raman Bhalla! khabardar tune meri biwi se battameezi se baat ki to..chodun ka nahi tujhe!"

[Suraj: "Oye Raman Bhalla! Dont you dare talk like that with my wife..I wont leave you"]

"Chalo yahan se darling" [lets go from here darling] Suraj pulled Ishita and took her away from the spot.

The entire wedding Raman seemed to ignore her presence. And after a point he seemed to have vanished.

Her eyes searched for him, but he was nowhere to be seen.

Kya hogaya hai Raman ko..Kya unhe sach me meri koi parwah nahi hai...

[What has happened to Raman..Does he really not care about me anymore?]

Ok she had left him, but the thought of him forgetting her and his love for her vanishing from his heart was shattering. Was there nothing left in his heart for her? Werent dere any feelings left?

And then she noticed him sitting in the drinks corner drowned in alcohol.

She moved upto him.

"Raman"

"Hmmm" he growled.

He looked to be heavily drunk.

Ishita: "Raman please chodo isse. Ye aapke liye theek nahi hai"

[Ishita: "Raman please leave it. Its not good for you"]

Raman: "Tum hoti kaun ho mujhe lecture dene wali. Tum meri biwi nahi ho"

[Raman: " Who are you to lecture me? You are not my wife!]

She tried to pull the glass away from his hand, but he pushed her hand. In the process the wine spilt on Ishita's white saree.

Rinki came running to Ishita.

Rinki: "Bhai aap pls sambhaliye apne aap ko. Aur Ishita bhabhi aap pls mere saath chaliye, humne ek room book kiya hua hai is hotel mein. Main aapko change karne ke liye ek saree de deti hoon. Aap pls aayiye mere saath."

[Rinki: "Bhai pls take charge of yourself. And Ishita bhabhi pls come with me, we have booked a room in this hotel. Let me give you a saree to change. Pls come with me]

Ishita went ahead with Rinki to the hotel room. Rinki gave her the saree and left her inside the room.

Ishita went to the washroom. She cried loud, really loud. The day had been exhausting and painful, she had to face certain realities she had been running away for the longest time. She felt helpless, she felt agonised.

She washed her face, but her sobs were still not controlling. She stayed in the washroom for sometime until she calmed.

As she came out of the washroom, the sight of a male sitting on the sofa made her almost scream.

It was Raman. She noticed he had latched the room door from inside.

"Raman aap yahan kya kar raho ho"

["Raman what are you doing here"]

He got up.

Raman: "Tum aaj subah se yahaan kya kar rahi ho!"

[Raman: "What are you doing here since morning!"]

Ishita: "Main sirf Simmi ke kehne pe aayi thi Raman"

[Ishita: "I came only for Simmi"]

" Aur wo Ashok ka langoor bhai Suraj! Wo kya kar raha tha!" [" And that monkey-like brother of Ashok-Suraj! What was he doing here!]

he shouted.

Raman was moving close to her..

Ishita: "Raman Suraj mera pati hai!"

[Ishita: "Raman Suraj is my husband!"]

That made Raman grab hold of her jaw.

"Us kutte ka naam bhi mat lena apni zubaan se mere saamne!" he growled

["Dont you dare take the name of that dog from you mouth in front of me! he growled]

He let go of his hold on her, but did not increase the distance between them.

"Aur kya kaha tumne? PATI! Arey tumhara pati main tha..kuch yaad hai"

["And what did you say? Husband! I was your husband..remember anything?"]

His eyes were reddening, his sight was scaring her.

"Kitna pyaar kiya maine tumse..aur tumne kya kiya!" he continued

[" How much did I love you..and what did you do!]

He grabbed hold of her shoulders and pulled her close forcefully.

" Kya..kya sochke tumne usse shaadi ki haan! Bolo!" he shouted.

[" Why did you marry him? What were u thinking? Say!]

Ishita looked away.

"Bolti kyun band hai haan! Kyun uske paas zyaada paise hain! [ Why are you dumbstruck! Does he have more money?]

"Or you were disturbed that i did not make an attempt to satisfy your sexual urges!?"

"Raman!" she shouted

She pushed him apart.

He pulled open his white coat and loosened his white tie.

He grabbed hold of her wrists.

" Let me fulfill your wishes now. You are mine Ishita. Infact I will make you mine. Here. Right now!"

(ok this is my challenge pic )

"Raman chodo mujhe..chodo!"

[Raman leave me..leave ME!]

He pushed her on the bed.

He got on top of her and pinned both her arms on the bed mattress.

Ishita struggled to let go of his grip, but he pushed her back with all the force, tightening his grip on her further..

She was breathing very heavily.

He controlled her non-stop movement with his weight and finally pressed his lips against hers.

He broke apart, and looked into her eyes for sometime.

Both their eyes were wet. It was almost unavoidable for her to control the flush of feelings and hormones. It was him afterall. She wanted him to take charge of her, to absorb her in him.. suck out all her pain..

But she knew she could not do it. She couldnt mess it up, it would be wrong for both of them. Plus he wasnt in the right state now.

She somehow gained control on him and pushed him apart.

There was a big glass window on the right side of the room.

She got up from the bed and tried to run to the corner of the room close to the window.

But then before she could reach dere, Raman grabbed hold of her from the back.

She turned and pushed him away with all the force in her.

Her push had been so hard that Raman flew to the glass window, the glass broke, his shirt staining in blood in an instant..

She ran to try grabbing hold of him somehow..but he fell out of the window..

Ishita screamed uncontrollably as she saw him fall from the 10th floor of the hotel ..down..down..down..

RAMAAANNN!!!!...

***

"RAMAAANNN!!..." "RAMAAANNN!!..."

"Kya..kyaa hua Ishita!"

[What..what happened Ishita!]

Raman ran upto Ishita and sat next to her on the bed.

Ishita sat up..she was sweating profusely..

"Ishita..pls pls paani piyo..Kya hua..koi bura sapna dekha? Mera naam kyun chilla rahi thi aise?"

["Ishita..pls pls drink some water..What happened? Why were you shouting my name like that?"]

"Raman wo..Raman wo"

She wrapped her arms around him and started crying.

He ran his hand over her hair to calm her down.

She narrated the entire nightmare to him.

He couldnt control his laughs in between as she narrated.

Raman: " Wo che-foot-Do (Cockroach) ka langoor bhai meri biwi ko bhaga ke le jaayega! Hahahahaha!"

[Raman: "That che-foot-Do (Cockroach) ka monkey-like brother will run away with my wife! Hahahahaha!"]

"Aur tum" he continued.."Ye Ekta Kapoor ke serial dekhna band karo tum! Unhe dekh dekh kar tumhara dimaag kharaab hua pada hai! Especially wo Yeh Hai Mohabbatein..Arey 11 baje wala repeat bhi dekhti ho tum uska! Us serial mein kuch bhi hota rehta hai.. Kisi ki shaadi kissi se bhi..sab aapas mein hi shaadi karte rehte hain! Dekho tumne sapne mein Simmi ki shaadi Mani se aur khudki Suraj se karwa di...Suraj..bandar kahin ka..hahahhahaha!"

["And you" he continued.."You pls stop watching Ekta Kapoor shows! U r loosing ur mind! Especially that Yeh Hai Mohabbatein..Arey u watch even its 11 o clock repeat ! Anything can happen on that show! Anybody can marry anybody else..they keep marrying amongst themselves! See you got Simmi n Mani also yourself and Suraj married in ur dream..Suraj..that monkey..hahahhahaha!"]

" Ek minute ek minute.. Shaadi kyun ki tumne Suraj se vaise? Kahin wi dumbMI (Mihika) ki tarah tum bhi...kya Ashok ka Sir phoda tha kya maine?"

["One minute one minute.. Y did u marry Suraj btw? like DumbMI (Mihika) u also.. did i hit Ashok on the head?]

He laughed clenching his stomach on this one. "Chalo kahin to us kamine ka sir phodne kaa mauka mila! Saala suar ki aulad" [ " Atleast i got the chance to hit that bas***d on his head. Son of a pig!"]

Ishita: " Hass lo hass lo.. vaise mujhe bhi nahin pata ki kyaa reason tha ki maine Suraj se se shaadi ki"

[Ishita: "U can laugh! But i donno for wat reason I married Suraj..]

Raman: " Kya? Kahin sachme tumne mujhe wo na dene ki wajah se to nahin choda? Vaise isme kya hai, hum abhi karte hain na! Kahin tum sach me bhaag gayi to!"

[Raman: " What? Is it bcos I havent done IT so far with you? So what..we can do it now! What if u run away in real too!]

Ishita: "Raman! Aap bhul gaye meri taang tooti hui hai! Aur aise to main bhaag bhi nahin sakti"

["Ishita: Raman I have a broken leg remember? And anyway I cannot run either bcos of that"]

Raman: "Oho! Koi baat nahin. Atleast kiss to kar hi sakte haina..Sapne mein you wanted to kiss me back dint you"

[Raman: "Ok..Not a problem. Atleast we can kiss..In your dream you wanted to kiss me back dint you"]

Ishita gave him a shy look.

He moved closer, cupped her face, closed his eyes..bent forward to capture her lips with his..

"Paaapaa!" Ruhi barged into the room.

***

~End of TS~

And I hope this Part is clear:

Raman guesses that Ishita married suraj bcos suraj fooled Ishita that Ashok went to coma bcos Raman beat him up (Like Mihika marries Ashok bcos he fooled her that Suraj went to coma bcos Mihir beat him up) And so he is happy that atleast he got a chance to beat up Ashok in the dream.

Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago

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