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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#381

Heee😆 sry app muje janthi nahi hogi tho phele intro 😉

I am one of a char kadam silent reader 😆 par ajj raha nahi gaya comment karna pada 😆

App ke char kadam story ko padne ke bad i clearly know ki ishu will be happy with raman only in her dreams for now 😆

Asal mai tho sirf takarar hi hogi and ofcorce shagun ke special tadke ke sath 😉 par app ka tho hum sab ko jhatka dena bhoth pasand hai na 😆 ( lights offf curtain close volume mute 😉) tho shayad iss bar hum ko kuch alag jhatka mile 😉 😆

Anyways app ki story and app ki aur jiju fan club ki convo super se bhi upar hai

Plz muje bhi next update se pm karo na 😳

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maanvir

@maanvir

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

Arre main toh bahut simple seedhi saadhi si ladki thi toh main kabhi iss sab main padhi hi nahi but the aura... it was so relatable ... I felt ke I was actually there... standing in the pitch of my school with sweaty boys and girls running behind them (got reminded of those instances)

Hey sorry if I hurt u...I was jus pulling ur leg...

I too relived my school days while writing the updt

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maanvir

@maanvir

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: sahooa

main toh sirf ishita ki thought se blush kar rahi hun nahi kisi ke wajese😊
10th main i also used 2 move in our corridor just 2 get a glimpse of my crush...paani bharne ka bahana banakar😊
isi bahane apne doston ke liye bhi paani bhar deti thi ...un logon ko pata bhi nahi unhe lagta tha main unki help kar rahi😆

i m in 12th...but main apne college main bilkul bhi enjoy nahi kar rahi jitna maine apne skul main kya😔

uhhhu uhhu...ye dekho aaj kal ki ladkiyan 😉

waise maza aya tumhara kissa padke...

school days ko koi replace nhi kar sakta...
clg lif apni jagah achhi joti hai bt school me jo enjoyment hoti hai wo wahan nai ho sakti

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sahooa

@sahooa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: maanvir

uhhhu uhhu...ye dekho aaj kal ki ladkiyan 😉

waise maza aya tumhara kissa padke...

school days ko koi replace nhi kar sakta...
clg lif apni jagah achhi joti hai bt school me jo enjoyment hoti hai wo wahan nai ho sakti

apne skul ke yaado main waapas chali gayi ki update ke baare likhna bhul gayi😊 once i start talking about my skul i keep going on😆

wese cuming 2 d update ...so well written😊

so dat koi was raman...seriously socha nahi tha ki ishita ko itni jaldi pata chal jayega ki rkb hi raman hai

main padh te waqt soch hi rahi ki aage pakka koi twist aayega...den u proved me r8

it was ishita's dream😲

waiting for raman's reaction 😛

toh nxt part jaldi se update karyo😊

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sulochana90

@sulochana90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#385

wow it was wonderful

loved it a lot

was just lost in the update

please update the next part soon

waiting to read more n more

thank u

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#386

awesome update
omg simmi n ishu ka convo was so cute
loved it
n now i want to see their first encounter after knwing abt eachother n specially raman's reaction

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Prayosha

@Prayosha.DivAn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: maanvir

Mujhe tumse kis bat pe naraz hona tha???😲

I dnt remember...

Tu yaad dila phir mai jamke naraz hoti hun😉

Pg 38 last comment padho...aap ne meri comments ko Negative comments kaha...pehle uss bat ka reply karo...phir mai Part 7 ke bare me sochti hoo ki kya comment karu ...

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yaku

@yakutamt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#388

Wow ur char kadam got me hooked on to ur writing...and am so glad I did...

Woo wht was that superb flawless writing only to be jerked back to reality...it was a dream😕

Loved every moment of part 7 simmi was so cute...

Shagun...never appreciated her in yhm nor will do it here...

Wow ishita knws about raman...now wnt to know raman reaction to ishita...😳

Part 8 awaiting u with waited breath...😳

One more thing...hv been commenting since part 1 y with malhotra...and nt with rkb yyy...m😭

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Deep

@rk654

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#389

sab se pahle Congratsss for half century pages🥳

you're such a Devil inte beautiful moments ko dream me convert kar diya poor ishita ko class bahar hona pada😆😆...simmi to sirf 3 saal ki thi toh use ishita kaise yaad hai...kahi uska DIMAG chacha choudhri se bhi toh tez nahi jo sab chiz store kar leta hai🤣🤣...

whole part was written amazingly...its simple yet so beautiful👍🏼

my choice ... DIL toh pagal hai dil deewan hai...

thank you for the pm