Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 34

Originally posted by: Richajin

Too cute... Rkb ko takkar mili jkr se... But when will she realise that rkb is raman actually or have you planned something else.. Little annoying you tease!!!
And what will her reaction be when she will realise that he doesnot remember him or does he... So here is the next question.. When will we get a glimpse into raman's life after he left mumbai... So what about baatein kuch ankahee yahan bhi hai...

Hey Richa!

Finally koi to cmnt bina complaint ka aya...ab jaake tumhare spirirts se chutkara milega 😆

Waise ye idea achha hai...par itni jaldi ye baat pata chal jaye to sara suapense khatam ho jayega...so filhaal no raman's pov

Originally posted by: Divi.C

Its amazing...

Hey Divi! (Ur name?)

Welcome to the thread...

thnx fr the cmnt 😃

Originally posted by: mayraa

That was an awesome update Di...

Like it naaa loved it sooo much...

Ishu u go girl...

Eagerly waiting for next...

thnx Mayraa...
Vl updt soom

Originally posted by: sahooa

awesome update di😛

maja aa gaya dono ka taashan dekhkar

nd ishita ...hayeeluved her attitude...especially d slap😊

<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">"Hey you!"He said blocking my way</font></font>

<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">"Behri ho? Sunayi nahi deta ke mai bula raha hun?"


</font></font>

<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">"Andhe ho? Dikhayi nahi detha ke I am not interested"I retorted</font></font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">i really liked these lines😊</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">di mujhe pakka paap lagega...aapke update ke liye main bahut greedy ban gayi hun😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">so continue soon😛</font>

thnx Ahaana!

Kehte hain an LALACH BURI BALA HAI...

Bt is lalach se mujhe khushi milti hai...
kyunki jab log besabri se apki story ka intezar karein to lagta hai ke apka likhna bekar nahi gaya...
so thnx...

omg raman se pyar karti
aur raman ko mara jab ishita
ko pata chalega ki rkb hi uska
raman toh waiting for that moment
but siersouly yaar ishta raman ki
fight awesome dono bhi ek dusre se
kam nahi hai ab rkb kya karega ye toh
tum hi jano waiting early continue soon

Heyyy nice update .. Read all the parts together ... Beautifully written... I hope they soon come to know about each other... Please continue soon ... Thanks for pm.. Take care.. Love aish :)

Hii...Di...Superb Part...

Yeh hui na...kuch Jhansi ki Rani & Ravan Kumar wali baat...

Par muje to aap ka CK wala Raman jyada pasand hai...kitna loving & Understanding...& yeh RKB ko to attitudes dikha ne se fursat nahi hai...How Rude...par Raman ki yeh haalat Ishita ke jane ke baad hi hui hogi...

& Ishita to hai hi Chennai ki Sherni...Paagal Madrasan...
RKB ko paagal bana diya...puri school ke samne...

Par Ishita ko kya...Raman ka pura naam nahi pata...Raman Kumar Bhalla...

Ishita ne RKB se punga to le liya...ab Aage dekhte hai...RKB thappad ka kya jawab deta hai...

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

res

finally unres

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di sabse pehle toh big wali sorry for this late unres

i was really stuck up and you know the reasons

but phir bhi i am sorry

hope a hug will cover up for the delay🤗i am sending the virtual one please take real one from ur habibi😳😳😳

coming to the update do i even need to say all those things again...it was just beautiful,..you know i was searching for synonyms for the word beautiful on google so that i can use in my comments here😆😆😆

you know if even you will write afdJgfjdGjgdG,g anything random woh bhi sunder hi ho jaega

this update was unexpected because i never thought they would meet again...but yes they did and in a way that they didn't even recognize each other

there is not a single thing that i can specifically point out...each and every part was perfect

and btw as usual i loved the ending

P.S. forgot to mention the song...i really loved it...when you told me the title i thought it was that song zinda rehne ke liye teri kasam ek mulaqat zaruri hai sanam but padha toh dusra nikla and when i heard it finally after reading it here...i totally loved it

P.S.S. aaj toh yeh bhi kehne ki zarurat nahi ki update soon...you have already served it for me...bas i am running to read it...will be back with my next comment soon

hey Pankhu!

A hug will dfntly do...

Looking fr synonyms really??? Well I do dat a lot...as u knw my English is ok ok...and I am often bored by using the same qords again & again...so I usually google fr synonyms... (btw same pinch again)

Are ye to kuch zyada hogaya...u r literally flattering me...

anywys thnx...I love reading ur cmnt...u knw dat ryt?

PS: Hehe...initially I had started writing with the song frm Sirf Tum...I had almost completed the updt...bt I ws nt satisfied...In attempt to incorporate the lyrics I hd to go all melodrama which kind of looked OTT...Den I finally zeroed on dis song & I found it beautiful...Quite surprisingly it sat well with the plot and amazingly fit into what I actually wanted to write...

Originally posted by: divazfankau

omg raman se pyar karti
aur raman ko mara jab ishita
ko pata chalega ki rkb hi uska
raman toh waiting for that moment
but siersouly yaar ishta raman ki
fight awesome dono bhi ek dusre se
kam nahi hai ab rkb kya karega ye toh
tum hi jano waiting early continue soon

Hey Kau!

Hungama hogaya...ab hulchul machno baki hai...
Just wait & watch 😉

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8

Heyyy nice update .. Read all the parts together ... Beautifully written... I hope they soon come to know about each other... Please continue soon ... Thanks for pm.. Take care.. Love aish :)

Hey Aish!
Thnx dear...

they vl soon knw abt each othr...
stay tuned 😃